Hii frndss…….i m back with nxt episode…..of my ff…….sry guys for delaying it so mich as i was literally hardcore busy with my exams and then my cousins came and we had a full weekend blast then i was down with chicken-pox………so i was not available to post the ff…..i m literally sry to everyone for not commenting on ur ffs….but i recently commented on ffs posted earlier few days…..i must say that all writers are just perfectionists…..can't match their talent but still try to write a ff with full package of romance and amusement…….
I wanna thank all of u to read and comment on my previous episodes……i m sry i was not able to reply each and everyone……
Now stopping my bakbak and getting on to the ff…….
Precap-marriage date final…….youngsters exhausting shopping……dadi played card by saying youngsters to stay seperate till marriage……
Ab aage…..
In om…..
All youngsters were upset with dadi's decision……
Dadi-so it is final u have today's night….from tomorrow onwards till marriage u all will stay in di
fferent rooms…..girls can share one room and boys can share one room……and no meeting…..
Pinky-mummyji is rghts….
Jhanvi-yaa jitni baatein karni hai aaj raat ko kar lo….
All elders laugh while youngsters just make faces…..
Dadi-now stop making faces it is already late let's have dinner then u all can depart to ur rooms….
All freshen up and settle down on dinning table…….
All the couples are sitting adjacent to each other……
All couples (shivika..ishkara..priveer..rumya) looking at each other …..
And under the table hold hands and just caresses them……
Dadi notice this and smile looking at their love for each other which is making hard for them to even stay away for few days…..she thinks this love shows that they willsupport each other and nvr evr get apart and disrespect or just leave the place beside each other empty and protect each other from evry evil which come their way during their journey of life……
All go back to their rooms resp….
(Couple scenes would be simultaneously)
Shivika's room….
They both are siting beside each other on couch and looking at each other…..
S-anika ek baat bolon…
A-haan bolo….
S-maine tumhari itni baar insult ki ….tumhe itna kuch kha aur mom ne tumhe itna kuch kha tumne fir bhi mujhe ek pal mein maaf kar diya….
A-shivaay main janti thi kabhi na kabhi aap mujhse yeh sawal zaroor puchoge…
S-toh ani batao naa tumne asa kyun kiya…
A-kyunki main janti hoon ki isse stone singh oberoi ke andar ek soft singh oberoi chupa hua hai…..aur maine aapko ise liye maaf kiya kyunki main janti hoon ki aap dil ke bahut saaf hai….aur main aapse bahut pyaar karti hoon…..aur hmsha karti rahungi….
S-i love u anika….i really love u……tumne meri zindegi mein aakar meri zindegi badal di hai….main kuch zyada nhi kah sakta bs itna kah sakta hoon ki main tumhare bina zee nhi sakta……
A-i love you too….
They get engrossed in each other's eyes
Ishkara's room
Both are standing in balcony and reminscing their meets…
Ishana-om…
Om-haan bolo
Ishu- thnk u
Om gives her a questioning look…
Ishu-thnk u for coming in my life…..thnk u for making me feel spl….thnk u for such a sweet family and loving family i got….thnk u om
Om turns towards her and cups her face..
Om-ishu i must thank u for coming in my life…i love you
Ishu-i love u too….
Om grabs ishu by her waist and they have cute and full of passion eyelock..
Priveer…
They were just looking at each other with full passion and intensity….
Rv-prinku…u r so beautiful….u drown me each day in ur beauty…and i just flattered each moment…
Prinku blushes hard…
Rv-u look so cute with this crimson red blush…u r just making me got crazy on u…
Prinku-ranveer…u r no less…u make crazy with ur eyes…with ur look…
They look at each other and smile….
Rv-i love you…
Pri-i love u too…
Rumya….
They were siting beside each other…looking at each other….
Rudy makes cry baby face…
Rudy-sumo u r not going any where….living i can't stay without for a minute now…
Somu just smile at his childishly behaviour…
So-rudy it's just a matter of few days….and even i don't want to but we have to do it as it is the custom….
Rudy is just mesmerised by her ans…
They look at each other and have a cute eye lock…
Rudy-sumo u know….i never thought of spending my whole life with single girl….but u r the one who changed me…my life….my thinking…and all changed for good….
They smile looking at each other….
Rudy-sumo i was thinking something…
So-wat..
Ru-i m thinking to join business with bhaiya…as of now u came in my life and we would be marrying each other …i think i should take the responsibilities now as….
So-rudy u r talking like mature today….i m happy that u r taking responsiblities….
Ru-will you support me…
So-i m always their to support you…always beside you no matter wat comes in our way….we would deal it together….
Ru-sumo thank you…..
Sumo smiles at him…
Ru-i love you…
So-i love you too….
These all couples are witnessed by someone on the other….
Shivika is witnessed by pinky….
Ishkara is witnessed by dadi…
Rumya witnessed by jhanvi …
Priveer witnessed by tej…
Pinky(in mind)-i was so wrong blaming anika…my shivaay got perfect life partner….bas mata rani inki jodi banaye rakhe….(she leaves from their..)
Dadi(in mind)- aaj mein bahut khush hoon mera bachoon ke liye….(she leaves…)
Jhanvi(in mind)- thnk u god for making somuya enter in rudra's life….he have became mature now and responsible….may god bless them….(she leaves)
Tej(in mind)- i regret for misleading myself…but i m happy that i got my family back….my prinku and my all three sons got perfect life partners….i m happy that my princess got someone who loves her more than anything and would keep her safe ever after…..(he leaves)
{Guys all scenes happen simultaneosly…all elders see them from far and leave}
All sleep in each other's embrace
Next day morning….
Today is the day spl for everyone in om….
All are engaged in work..after all it is a grand engagement day…..
Engagement is in the evening….
Shivika room….
Anika is packing her bag as she have to move tothe seperate room…
Shivaay comes in room…
Becomes sad looking at her and back hugs her…
Sh-anu plzz don't go i can't stay without you..
Ani-arrey baba…i m not going for forever it's just a matter of 4 days….
Sh-but…
Ani-shivaay…
They both hug each other as not wanting to leave each other next moment dadi comes….
Dadi-ahem..ahem…
They come out of their moment and looks at door and finds dadi standing their….
She comes in…
Dadi-tum dono toh ase kar rha ho jase mein tum mein se kissi ek ko vanvaas par bhej rhi hoon….todhi dino ki baat hai fir tum hmsha ek saath hi rhoge…anika puttar teri packing ho gyi naa toh chl mera saath…
They look at each other…
Dadi smiles looking at them…
Dadi-arrey kya hua..chl…
Ani turns to leave and takes her bag….
And dadi pulls her and she leaves….
By the time ranveerand ishu has also brought their luggage in om as they were asked to stay in om as per dadi's orders…
So all girls shift to one room in right part of mansion…..
All boys in the left part
In the evening….
The time came for the engagement …
All boys enter…
They all looking mesmerising (imagine dresses of ur choice as i m not good in that)
They all were outstanding….and were finding their resp lady loves when they spotted them coming…..
All eyes were stuck on them when they were coming down the stairs…
All had a charm on their faces which can make anyone flattened on them….
They were just looking like angels just came
now from direct heaven….
They come down and reach their resp. Partner…all boys were so engrossed in checking their ladies that they didn't even noticed that they were standing just in front of them…
All boys at once not being in senses…beautiful….just beautiful….
All girls smile and taps their hands on boys shoulder
They come out of their dreamland…..
All blush looking at each other….
Later all couples do the engagement…..
All are happy for them….
Media click photographs….
Function gets over with full swing…
Precap-elders to tease youngsters…..hidden romance…..pre marriage rituals on full swing…
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I m literally very very sry for getting so much late…..but would surely post it soon now….as i m okay now…..
Plzzz….plzzzz….plzz….do comment….i need ur support….if any suggestion let me knoe regarding scenes or something
Lots of love
Shivika
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31 Comments
Awsm
Tysm dear
its superb !! waiting for the next episode
tysm dear
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tysm dear
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Tysm dear
Welcome back dear…
Aww!! So lovely…. Its awesome!! Post next part soon please….
Take care dear.
Tysm dear…….i m happy that u felt so
Superb… just awesome…
tysm dear
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Tysm dear
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Surely
Nice episode
Tysm dear
Amazing update…
Tysm dear
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Tysm dear
O god…
Look who is back…
Waise toh I won’t have forgiven you for being sooooooooo late…..
But since u were in problem and I understand so….Maaf kiya….
How r u now dear….
And the update was awesome……its just I find it a lil short one……coz it ended soon…….now plz try to post soon….. And take it as an order from ur friend…….. Ok…
And i miss u a lot….so now try to be regular……or at least in touch with me………
Bye..
Tc…
See u…
Thnxx darling for forgiving me and i m good now…..tysm for ur lovely comment….it actually made my heart pounce…..ur order on top my frnd…….would try to post regularly
Shivika di I was so waiting 4 ur post. Its amazing ! Do write more asap…??