A very big hai to my Chutkis,Bros And Didis..?????????How are you all??I missed you all a lott..Thanks a lott for continuously
supporting me…Thanks to all who commented in previous parts and also to the silent readers..For every writer,comments means a lot to
every writer…So please comment in upcoming parts too…From this episode you all must have to comment on Montage of each episode..
Take a Sneak Peak into the 11th Episode if you missed it..Here is the link..??????
HOPE YOU ALL LIKED ASWINI(SHIVANI TOMAR)
Friends I am going to select pair for her by means of voting..Whoever getting maximum vote will be paired with SHIVANI TOMAR.All the readers must vote…
Please help me in this..The nominees are:
1.Ashish Sharma(Acted as ram in Siya Ke Ram,Rudra in Rangrasiya?)
2.Sidhant Gupta(Shirley,even if he i not selected i will include him in my ff for your sake,acted in qubool hai??)
3.Barun Sobti(Acted as Arnav in Iss Pyar Ko season1???)
4.Avinash Sachdev(Acted as Shlok in iss Pyar Ko season2 in Which our Shrenu is his pair????)
5.Paras Kalnawat(Acting as Sanjay Prince in Meri Durga?????)
PLEASE DO VOTE…
RECAP:Rudra also goes with Jhanvi to attend Bhavya’s Birthday party.Omkara also goes to sharma Mansion to meet Gauri.
Anika asks For Shivaay’s help in Cake issue…
Here is the next Episode..
@SHARMA MANSION:
SHARMILA:(seeing happily at entrance)Hey Jaanu???(Sharmila runs to jhanvi and hugs her)How are you?
How is your family?Please come inside…For long we were not able to meet each other..Now only
you thought of visiting my home aa???
JHANVI:I am fine sharmi..All are fine..How are you??And sorry i actually was in london for more than six months regarding some deals..
SHARMILA:I am fine..All are fine here..Is this your sons??
JHANVI:SONS??(jhanvi but rudra only is here,why she is saying sons)??Yes he is my Younger Son ,RUDRA..
SHARMILA:Then what about him??(Sharmila pointed towards Omkara,who was standing back to jhanvi???)
(Jhanvi was little shocked,but she didnt showed it..)
JHANVI:He is my first son,Omkara..Actually when i thought of calling him to attend this party,he was in deep sleep…So i left him in home…But to my
Surprise he came…(Sharmila smiled widely seeing rudra and omkara and asked them to sit)
RUDRA:How did you came here??You hided in the car back or on the top of the car??
OMKARA:Shut up Rudra…I came in Another car..I dont want mom to be disappointed..Thats why i came here…
(Eventhough omkara was talking to rudy,His eyes were wandering towards the stairs,whole hall,each and every corner..His eyes were searching gauri..Thats the only reason for
his arrival to SHARMA MANSION)
RUDRA:Are you talking to me Bhaiya??(Rudra asked with a suspicious look)
OMKARA:Ohhh…Shut up Rudra..
(Jhanvi was hearing their whole convo and smiled at their antics…Then..)
Sharmila:Jhanvi,how is shivaay??
Jhanvi:He is fine sharmi..actually shivaay is always busy.. Where are your Daughters???Where is Prithvi Bhaiya??
(Till that time Rudra was surfing something in his phone…Once he heard the word daughters, his face glowed in happiness like 1000watts Bulb..?????Omkara was smiling
at him)
Sharmila:Oh my God…I forgot to tell them about your arrival…I hope you all know anika..But you dont know Gauri and my last daughter Bhavya..Wait…i will call them here..
Jhanvi,Omkara:Yes…We know anika…
Rudra:Yes sharmila aunty…So you better call other two..????(Omkara signed him to shut up…Rudra made a puppy face)
(Sharmila goes to bhavya’s room and asks her to come down with her friends…She also decides to go to kitchen..)
@KITCHEN:
Gauri:Didi,did you hear that??Somebody is near kitchen window…
ANIKA:Come on..lets see..
(They both see shivaay standing near kitchen window with cake gift wrapped…He gives the cake to anika….Anika’s happiness knew no bounds..
Tears fell down from her eyes…Seeing that tears fell down from gauri’s eyes too)
ANIKA:Thank you sooooo much shivaay…Tq soooo much…This will be the greatest help to me forever…
SHIVAAY:Dont say thanks Anika….No thanks between friends…It will create distance..By the way,is this your sister??(He asked pointing gauri)
ANIKA:Yes…She is gauri..( Shivaay smiled at her and gauri too smiled widely and thanked him)
Anika,Gauri:How you came near kitchen window??
Shivaay:Your security already knows me na…I visited sharma mansion frequently…So i had not faced any problems in entering the mansion…Anika did you forgot??
Anika:Ohhhhh…yeah..I remember shivaay….Shivaay i feel bad to talk with you via kitchen window..Please come inside through main door…
Gauri:Yes bhaiya…please…Comeon…i want to do Favurites with you..(She blabbrered like a child..)
Shivaay:(smiling at gauri’s antics)Ok..i will come for my sister..
(Hearing this anika winks at him)
Shivaay:For you too anika..????
(When shivaay entered sharma mansion, jhanvi,omkara and rudra looked at him shockingly)
Jhanvi,Omkara and Rudra: Shivaay????
Shivaay: Yeah,shivaay..(He came and sat near them)
Rudra:You said you have important meeting today,But what work do you have here??(Rudy asked with a suspicious look)
Shivaay:Ohhh..Shut up Rudra…
Rudra:(with a fake cry)Everybody is shutting my mouth…!!!
Jhanvi:Shivaay,you came to attend party??
Shivaay:Yes badima…also i want to talk to prithvi uncle regarding business..Thats why…
@KITCHEN:
Anika:Gauri go and open the kitchen door…Mom is calling..(She unwrapped the cake and placed in a big plate..)
Gauri:Yes didi..(Gauri opened the door and sharmila came in..)
Sharmila:Both of you come to hall…Jhanvi and her sons want to see you..
Gauri’s P.O.V:
Sons???What will happen if Omkara is also there???I will not react to him in front of everyone….But i will ask him to come upstairs….
(Sharmila sees gauri lost and playfully pinches her ear)
Sharmila:What you are thinking???
Gauri:(Fake cry)Ma..it’s paining…leave..!!!!????
Sharmila:Ok..Come soon anika and gauri…
(Sharmila comes to hall and sees shivaay)
Sharmila:Hey shivu…How are you??Just few minutes ago i enquired about you to your Badimaa…
Shivaay:Hai sharmila aunty…i am fine aunty..Hope you all are fine…Please sit aunt…
(Anika and Gauri came to hall…Omkara didnt notice her as he was reading magazine…Gauri acted like coughing to grab his attention..
But he didnt notice…)
Jhanvi:Hey anika….What’s her name???
Sharmila:She is Gauri…My second daughter jaanu….
(Hearing the name “gauri” omkara turned his head to 360 degree…But,as rudra noticed it he lessened 90degrees…)
Jhanvi:Gauri ia so pretty like anika..Come and sit here puttar…
Sharmila:Say hello to Shivu,omkie,Rudra..Anika you too…(Shivaay acted like he doesnt know anika and gauri)
(Anika and gauri greeted them..When Gauri was about to greet omkara by saying namaste..)
Omkara:Hello gauri(He forwarded his hands)
Gauri:Hello Omkara(With no way she shaken hands with him..Naughty omkara Holded her hands tightly and rubbed it…Gauri struggled to rescue her hand)
(Jhanvi and sharmila were talking….Shivaay was talking with anika…Since rudy havent met his pair till now he noticed Om’s antics..Realising that omkara left
gauri’s hand????)
RUDRA:I am watching everything…Beware of Smart and also clever rudy..(Rudra raised his collar and made puppy face as omkara signed him to shut up)
(Everyone heard the laughing sounds of Bhavya’s friends and looked towards stairs…Rudy was the first to look at stairs????Bhavya surrounded with her friends walked in stairs..
Bhavya was in blue,Golden and white colour lehenga..She looked like an ANGEL in that lehenga..Although there are four girls with her,She was the highlight??????)
(Rudra was not even blinking his eyes….He was staring at bhavya continuously…Whereas Shivaay and anika are talking continuously…Omkara was staring at gauri..He was looking
her like as he is gonna eat Gauri..Gauri was blushing..Sharmila Introduced bhavya to jhanvi and Shiv,Om and rudy)
Jhanvi:Bhavya is also very pretty sharmi..All your three daughters are looking like angels…(Hearing this bhavya blushed and smiled widely..Bhavya greeted jhanvi,Shivaay,omkara)
(She turned towards rudra..He winked at bhavya in the same way gauri winked at Omkara by lowering her cooling glass in Monday’s Precap..Bhavya gets shocked..But she greets him too..Though she greeted others by saying namaste,unknowingly she forwarded her hand to rudra to shake with him..Rudy holded her hands tightly..But gradually left the hold
due to Stare given by Omkara???)
Prithvi reached sharma mansion at that time and he was happy to see oberois..He gladly greeted jhanvi and had a big hug with Shiv,Om and Ru..After that all decided to start the
party..Anika and gauri brought the cake to hall and placed it in Table and lit all the candles…Bhavya cutted the cake and first feeded it to her mom and dad..They also feeded her..
After that she feeded to Gauri and Anika..They feeded to Bhavya in turn..
The cameramen captured all their Happy Moments…After that Bhavya takes piece of cake and was waiting for someone..She looked over the entire hall…But She couldnt find them..At that time Rudra was standing near to her..Sharmila asks Bhavya to feed cake to rudra….Rudra felt like
flying hearing this????All compelled her..So she feeded rudy..Rudy feeded her…While feeding he winked at her again..She bited his nails..Rudra suddenly took his hands
out..Bhavya smiled evilly..
Then Bhavya’s friends went to their home as they have to go to movie…Shivaay and prithvi went to Prithvi’s room to talk about Business..So anika who is also playing great role in
Sharma industries went along with prithvi and Shivaay..
Sharmila:Gauri please Show your childhood pics to Omkara..It looks like he is feeling bored..Bhavya,Show the decorations in your room to rudy..Please Dont make them feel lonely..
I have lot to talk with Jaanu..
Jhanvi:Yes dears…Please take them with you..I want to talk alone with Sharmi..
Omkara P.O.V:
Thank God…I was just waiting for this Moment..????????
Rudra P.O.V:
Are you biting my hand???Wait and see…(rudy smiled Evilly,Bhavya was scared..But she dont want to show it..)
(Gauri took Omkara to her room..Bhavya took rudy to her room…Omkara locked the door leaving gauri shocked..
When rudy went near the door..)
Bhavya:WHERE ARE YOU GOING????(Shouted)
(Rudra shivered in fear..)
Rudra:I was admiring the works in door…
Bhavya:Come and sit here..
Meanwhile at the same time in
@BUHARI HOTEL:
TWIST IN A TALE:
Lavanya,Anshi and Mitali are shocked as One Smart guy laid hands on Gauri’s shoulder..They mistaken Shreya (GAURI’S LOOKALIKE) as gauri..Actually the girl in buhari hotel is not gauri..She is gauri’s lookalike…The trio decided to take a live video and send it to Omkara in Whatsapp…
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That’s it for today dears…Sorry…I know this is crap update…but please bear with me….Sorrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy….!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I will update next part soonnn…Till that byeee…
Logging of..Take care dears….Please leave your comments…I will accept rotten tomatoes and paper balls….????Sorry for disappointing you all with the party celebrations….
PRECAP: Will Omkara and Gauri Figure out the truth????
Please comment on the Montage too from this episode Onwards……..Please vote….
61 Comments
I liked the chapter, now all the couples met each other. For Shivani Tomar s pair i guess you can take Barun as they are doing Iss Pyaar together.
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superb yaar..its not a crap…superb bro..keep going
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Amazing bhai… fantastic… loved it… post nxt soon… n yeah for shivani go with barun…. they look cute n NYC together….
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Awesome bhai…for shivani you take barun
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Awesome chappy.
Loved
Nice Cover Pic.
Barun
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It is awesome dear
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Wonderful epi dr.loved it 2 d core. I’m happy dat 3 brothers met their partners 2gether.n i’m excited 4 dis new twist in ur ff.gauri’s look alike………. wow.tnk god gauri is vth om right nw.so lavanya cnt manipulate om against gauri. Hope they find out about shreya.btw I want barun as aswini’s pair. Plz post d nxt epi asap dr.bye tc
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Awesome….loved it bro
For shivani my choice is barun
Waiting for next part update soon
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It was awesome…..waiting 4 nxt…n i vote 4 barun
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hmm my votes are for barun
and its not ah crap it was amazing no words i laughed whole heartily by redaing this ff
post next asap
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Nice one dear.. Loved it…
And I vote for Barun as I m a big fan of ipkknd season 3.. Their chemistery is amazing..
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Nice one bhai….loved episode….nd i guess barun will suit opp Shivani.. .
Keep it up…post nxt part soon…
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This one was really nice.. waiting for next part.. loved Rikara part
Tqqqqqqqqqq sooooooooooooo much didi….I really loved the Rikara confession in Weekend shots…I thought of really appreciating you in Private message…But sorry i was littlle busy!!!!!Keep rocking didi….Keep reading my ff and keep commenting too…Take care didi…Dont take any stress to your mind…We all are here for you…Dont worry..???????????
Thank u so much Logesh.. u r very kind and caring brother to me. Ur words really means a lot
Really nice…?? twist.
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Superrrrrrrrrrr…… Sry I can’t reply u in previous part….
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Loved it. I vote for barun
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very nice episode…barun is my choice
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sorry for late comment. becaause i have busy here ..onam is going on ..that’s why late reply.. sorry logesh…
by the way how are you… and the episode was fabulous… the way he hold gauri’s hands … and shivika and ruvya has also nailed it,,,,,
.my choice is barun. he is better for shivani…
thankyou
waiting for the next episode post ASAP…
Hey criz…Sorry i dont know that you are keralite….Belated onam wishes…..I am fine…How r u???Tqqqqqqqqqqqq veryyyyyyyyy much dear for the compliments….keep reading…..keep commenting….Plssssssss dont discontinue reading dearr…But i am not satisfied with this episode dear!!!!Take care….Tqqqqqqqqqqq veryyyy much for ur support….love your profile….??????????????????????????????????HAPPY ONAM???
Thankyou very much …..dear logesh….
Sorry for late comment..I have read this ff early..but I didn’t got time to comment.
Logesh…such a wonder full episode yaar
Post next soon..
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Awesome as usual.I just loved it to the core.??????
Om and Rudy were teasing each other.Om andShivaay this is not fair,u always taunt my logic guru by saying shut up.????Hey,i want to know when Jhanvi asked about Gauri’s intro then why Sharmila introduced her.
I know it is the most siliest question,but as i get confused,i just asked it.
And ya from my point of view,Shivani’s pairing with Barun is nice .???
And thank u so much bhaiya forsending me the links.????
I hope i did’t bored u as i m attending a marriage and feeling boring.I don’t like to attend marriages.
Keep writing dear.
Tqqqqqqqqq sooooooo much sanyukta….????????Yes i too feel bored to attend marriages??????Please dont discontinue reading dear…Keep reading….keep commenting….Tqqqq very much for your support…..take care…???????????????????????????????????????????????????
Very nice episode…
I vote for Barun…
The montage is also good…
Tq soooooooo much zaveesha??????????keep reading…..keep commenting….plsssss dont discontinue reading dear…Tqqq veryy much for your support….I posted next part…It willbe out tonight or tomorrow morning….Take care???????
Awesome yaar….. Lovely part… Excited for the next part…
Tqqqqqqqqqq sooooooooo much sagithya????????????I had updated 13th part before evening 5pm…After review it will be out….Keep reading…keep commenting…please dont discontinue reading dear…Take care??????????
It was an awesome chapter.
liked Shivaay’s care for Anika. waiting for RiKara scenes ahead.
Barun Sobti is my choice
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please not barun rest any one u choose..sooo ncie dear naughty omkara i like this side of him sooo much
Really very very sorry deepu…I really like barun….Many people voted for barun….So i selected him????Very sorry….I like barun and shivanitomar chemistry…They both are cute together…??????plssssss dont discontinue reading dear…keep reading..keep commenting…Tqqqqqqq very much for supporting me??????Take care…byeeeee
its ok dear.. i also go with majority no issues i will try to enjoy reading about them also
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Superbbbbbbbb Chappy ???????…montage is cool…???…
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Always like awesome bro ???
This is first comment on modern TU???
My votes for barun because I didn’t see shivani’s chemistry with other actors.
So I think barun is best for shivani
Tqqqqqqqqqqq soooooooo much asana….Keep reading….keep commenting dear….plsssssss dont discontinue reading dear…i have sent you the links for 13th 14th parts too…plsssssss read and comment in both 13 th and 14th parts too….plsssss????????????
Awwww…that’s so sweet of you..❤️❤️
But Sidhant looks best with Jasmin.?.so I have no problem with Barun..?❤️
I vote for Barun…but thank you means a lot to add sidhant..?
Coming to the episode it was amazing and I really loved the scenes..??❤️
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Thank god…you accepted barun????
Plssssssssss dont discontinue reading dear…Take care??????Tqqqqqq very much for your support….?????
I have sent 15th part for review…it will be out by 12am….????????