Haiiiiiii Friends….I am here with the 13th episode…I am updating this soon…As there are many votes for BARUN, he will be paired with SHIVANI TOMAR…???????
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Take a sneak peak into the Previous Episode if you had missed..Here is the link:
Episode 12
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Thank you soooo much readers for your support….
RECAP: Shivaay,Omkara and Rudra reaches Sharma Mansion..Jhanvi and Sharmila met each other after long gap..
Bhavya’s Birthday Celebrations….After celebration, due to jhanvi’s request Gauri takes Omkara to her room
to show her photo albums..Omkara locks the door leaving her shocked…..?????????
Here goes the next Episode…
@GAURI’S ROOM:
Omkara locked the door and turned back facing gauri..
OMKARA’S P.O.V:
How adorable she is looking??????(P.O.V Ends)
(Gauri was shocked but she didnt show it and tries to take Photo album from her wardrobe….She changed to saree after Birthday celebration…
So omkara sees her waist now..???
He couldn’t control himself so he went near her and Held Gauri’s Waist.. ???
Gauri was surprised and stunned by his sudden touch..
GAURI:Om……kara
OMKARA:Shhhhhhhhhhh….
He first twirled Gauri and then kissed her neck..
He then kissed her cheek…
Gauri closed her eyes….Air blows…Silence…
JO NA KEH SAKEY TUM
JO NA KEH SAKEY HUM
JO NA KEH SAKEY TUM
JO NA KEH SAKEY HUM
KEHNE LAGI DONO SE WOH KHAMOSHIYAAN
O SAATHIYA
KEHNE LAGI DONO SE WOH KHAMOSHIYAAN
O SAATHIYA
SAATHIYA SAATHIYA SAATHIYA SAATHIYA SAATHIYA
SAATHIYA SAATHIYA SAATHIYA…
BAADLON MEIN GHUL NA JAYE
HAIN JO LAMHE THEHRE THEHRE
DO DILON MEIN JAZB KAR LEIN
SARE JAZBE GEHRE GEHRE
KAL KYA PATA MILE NA MILE NAZDEEKIYAN
O SAATHIYA
KAL KYA PATA MILE NA MILE NAZDEEKIYAN
O SAATHIYA
SAATHIYA SAATHIYA SAATHIYA SAATHIYA SAATHIYA
SAATHIYA SAATHIYA SAATHIYA…
Plays….???????????????????????
Gauri closed her eyes…As she was melting from inside…
He kissed her forehead..Both were Completely Drenched…
But soon gauri realised and pushed OMKARA….
She tried to run…Om chased her..She stopped at one point..
Om took a step forward towards her…Gauri was moving back..
Again om moved forward..She moved back..
Omkara again moved forward..Now she was pinned to the wall…
GAURI:O…M..KA..RA…no.
He moved forward..
Omkara:What??
He kept both the hands on the wall and was leaning closer.
Gauri:Omkara…Please leave me…We will get caught..
He leaned too closer…
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@BUHARI HOTEL:
That smart guy was now holding Shreya’s waist..They were waiting for their order…
Whereas Anshi,Lavanya and Mitali were keeping Eye on them Like Eagles…
ANSHI:Lavanya,this is the perfect chance..He is holding her waist…Lets soon take live video before they change their gesture..Plssss
MITALI:Yes lavanya..She is right…
Lavanya takes her phone out..And start to take video..Before they started taking video of shreya,they introduced them in front of came and stated where they are and also even the
time(FOOLS, only because of this reason no Misunderstand will crop up between RIKARA)..
After saying the venue and time,they took video of Shreya and that guy…After taking video,
ANSHI,MITALI:Lavanya we took the video without any problem..But how will we send this to omkara?Do u know his number??
LAVANYA:Ofcourse idiots…I have his number already…I asked for his number during the college culturals arrangements as i was the college president last year..
(Saying this Lavanya sent the video to Omkara..)
ANSHI,MITALI,LAVANYA: Mission Gauri is gonna end…The love birds will seperate tomorrow…
(They gave a Hi-Fi…They smiled evilly and left the hotel…)
@GAURI’S ROOM IN SHARMA MANSION:
(When omkara was leaning close to gauri he was disturbed due to message tone..He opens the video in whatsapp..Gauri escapes from him and sits in bed…
Seeing his reactions she felt weird..)
OMKARA: How is this possible??(He asked Shockingly)
GAURI:What happened dear???
(He shows the video to gauri and she also gets shocked)
OMKARA: Gauri you are here..Then who is she??She is perfectly looking like you…
GAURI:I cant understand…The time is same…Come..Lets go to buhari hotel..
OMKARA:Come gauri..Lets go and catch her…
@BHAVYA’S ROOM:
Rudra stands near the door…He was shivering after hearing bhavya’s high pitch voice..????
Seeing that Bhavya gets up and comes near him…
BHAVYA:Can’t you close the door????Lazy…If we dont close the door the servants will keep on watching us…
RUDRA: I…I…I…Vo..Vo..
BHAVYA:Just shut up Rudra…
(She closed the door and locked it)
RUDRA: BHAVYA,You too ha??!!!!!!!!( He made puppy face)
(Bhavya stared at him..Bhavya felt something climbing her legs…She sees her legs…)
(Bhavya screamed…)
BHAVYA: Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww…………Cockroach…..cockroach….
(She rolled her legs and due to the force she fell on rudy…Atlast they both fell on the bed…)
(Bhavya was above Rudra..)
They had an EYELOCK…
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OH SHONA, OH SHONA…
OH SHONDURI..
TOMAR MONTA DIYE JAO
TARA TARI ESHE JAO
TOMAR MONTA DIYE JAO
TARA TARI ESHE JAO
TANG TANG TANG…
TUNE MAAARI ENTRIYAAN RE
DIL MEIN BAJI GHANTIYAAN RE
TANG TANG TANG…
TUNE MAARI ENTRIYAAN RE
DIL MEIN BAJI GHANTIYAAN RE
TANG TANG TANG…
DIL KI SUN COMMENTRIYAAN RE
PYAAR KI GUARANTIYAN RE
TANG TANG TANG…
AREY TAADA TAADI KARNA
NA AB NAHI SUDHARNA
PHOOTNE LAGA HAI
AREY CHAAHATON KA JHARNA
DIL KI NA MARAMMATEIN HO’N
NAA HO KOI WARRANTIYAN RE
TANG TANG TANG…
TUNE MAARI ENTRIYAAN RE
DIL MEIN BAJI GHANTIYAAN RE
TANG TANG TANG…
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The screen freezes with ruvya eyelock….
PRECAP: SUSPENSE…
do you all liked it?????plsssssssssssss commenttttttttt……
BYE TO ALL…..
TAKE CARE…..
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82 Comments
Super anna.. Update next epi ASAP.. Happy tht no MU will crop up between rikara..
TQQQQQQ sòooooòooooooo much Dhwani naidu??????????Neeyum tamil aa???I always read ur comments in written updates…You started reading my ff from this episode or you was reading it already??
Yeah anna tamizh than.. No not from this epi, konjam munnadi la irunthe read panren… Offline la read panven, so cudnt comment..
Keep reading….keep commenting…Sorry…i will not be able to update regularly…It will take two days or three days gap…Is it ok for you??.Please dont discontinue reading dear….Take care….I will update next part before sunday…I will send you the links once its updated..???????
2 days gap ah??!!! If possible, post ASAP bro..
Ok dhwani ?????But plssss comment in upcoming parts…..Naan ippo 4th year poga poren ma..soooo placements aptitude tests nala konjam busy….Adhaan….veryyyy sorry…but naan Saturday update panna try panren??????
Sure bro.. Will surely comment in upcoming chapters… Ohh engineer ah neenga??!!
Yes ma…Electrical and electronics engineering ???????
Ohh.. Engineering la toughest right?? Ok Saturday update pannunga bro..
Aama dhwani???EEE thaan engineering la kadupu???Surely i will update on saturday???
Amazinggggg…. post nxt asap… n loved d cover pic a lot…
Tqqqqqqqqqq sooooooooooo much Lauren….Keep reading…keep commenting….please dont discontinue reading dear ??????Tqqqqqq veryyyyy much for your support ???take care…
Awwwwwwww love is in d air…. loved it 2 d core dr.superb epi.rikara was on fire.u r right. Dat lavanya n her frndz r so stupid. They even mentioned d date time n venue also. So there will be no MU.n bavyaaaaa… she’s bold n mature dan our Rudy jst like in d show. Loved them too.eagerly waiting 4 nxt epi dr.byeeee tc (hope i’m d first one 2 comment. Yayyyyyyy)
Tqqqqqqqqqq soooooooo much dinu…For such a long comment ???????????????????This means a lott to me…Keep reading….keep commenting…Please dont discontinue reading dear ?????Tqqqqqqq very much for your support….Yes they helped Rikara by mentioning date and time…orelse om would have misunderstood gauri??????I will update next part before sunday?????
Awwwwwwww love is in d air…. loved it 2 d core dr.superb epi.rikara was on fire.u r right. Dat lavanya n her frndz r so stupid. They even mentioned d date time n venue also. So there will be no MU.n bavyaaaaa… she’s bold n mature dan our Rudy jst like in d show.loved d scene where she closed d door before rudy. Loved them too.eagerly waiting 4 nxt epi dr.byeeee tc (hope i’m d first one 2 comment. Yayyyyyyy)
Tqqqqqqqqqq dinu for double comment…you increased the number of comments yaar???????????
he heee.no need 2 tnkz.it’s my pleasure. Btw do u love long comments? I thought it will be difficult 4 u 2 read my long boring blabbering. If u like it I will give u long comments hereafter. (Nw u hv 2 beae my long blabbering bro) tc
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yes…..I always love the long comments……..You know i am talkative…..So i like long coments dinu….?????????????
Dat means u also like me.i’m also talkative n i talk nonstop when i started 2 talk. It’s great 2 meet someone like me.hikz.
rikara romance. ??awsm… waiting for ur next update….
Tqqqqqqqqqqq soooooo much rasika??????????keep reading..keep commenting ?????please dont discontinue reading dear ????Take care…byeeee
Rikara Romance was Awesome
Waiting for next…
Post it soon
Tqqqqqqqqqqqq soooooooooooo much fidha????????????keep reading…keep commenting…please dont discontinue reading dear….Take care?????????
Superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr….. Excited for next episode dr…
Tqqqqqqqqqqqqqq sooooooooooooo much maha?????????Keep reading…keep commenting….And please dont kill Gauri in “After marriage life is colourful”….plssssss……Please dont discontinue reading my ff dear?????Take care
Love is in the airrrr???????????????…rikara..???????…loved episode…nd plz just remove that trimurti lavnya nd her frndz frm my rikara’s life…spoiled omie ‘s moment????….
Waiting for nxt part….post soon…
Tqqqqqqqqqqqqq sooooooooooo much saku?????????For such a long comment….Keep reading…keep commenting…please dont discontinue reading dear ?????Take care….Yes i too hate that trimurthi…But what to do….There is scarcity for villains in my story??????
Haha??? bhai…who said there is scarcity of villain..??…u r having so many characters just spoil any one of them like cvs???????…nd ha don’t forget u r hving pinky the great villan as well???….
Anyways waiting for nxt part eagerly…post soon…
???????????Thanks for your idea …Pinky is mainly villain For Aswini….???U will come to know about that soon….CV’s are stupids….Even they will show jhanvi as villain?????I will not make that blunder mistake ?????Tqqqqqq for the Idea….????
Very romantic but 3 idiots spoiled my mood.. hope u give slipper shot to them in next part
Tqqqqqqqqqqqq soooooooooo much verna didi??????????Keep reading…keep commenting….please dont discontinue reading didi….Take care…..Yes u r right…They will get slippershot soon….????????
loved this soooo much <3
Tqqqqqqqqqq soooooooo much apu?????How are you????Long time no chat…!!!!!Keep reading….keep commenting…please dont discontinue reading dear ?????????Take care….Waiting for next episode of Gauri Bhadrakali……Alert me when its updated….
It is lovely dear
Tqqqqqqqqqqqqq sooooooooooooo much niki?????????keep reading….keep commenting….please dont discontinue reading dear ?????Take care…Byeeee
I love this part. Rikara scenes were amazing. Post next part soon.
Tqqqqqqqqqqqq soooooooooooo much karina??????????????Tqqqqqq veryyyyy much for your support dear…keep reading…keep commenting….please dont discontinue reading dear ???????Take care…byeeee
Awesome….lovely update
Tqqqqqqqqqq sooooooooo much niriha??????????keep reading….keep commenting….pleassssss dont discontinue reading dear ??????Take care….byeeee
Awesome bhai…loved rikara scenes…those 3 bandars spoiled rikara’s moments??…thank god no misunderstanding…. Post soon bhaiya
Tqqqqqqqq sooooooooo much vanisha??????keep reading…keep commenting…please dont discontinue reading dear….???Bandars?????I know how angry you are?????Take care….byeee
Awesome….the episode as well as montage…
Tqqqqqqqqqq sooooooooooo much zaveesha???????Keep reading…keep commenting…please dont discontinue reading dear ?????Take care…byeee
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
this is mind blowing one totaly loved it
waiting fo rthe next oneeeeeeeeeeeeee
Tqqqqqqqqqqqq soooooooooo much shabu….Keep reading….keep commenting ????????Please dont discontinue reading dear ?????Take care….Tqqqqq very much for supporting me….Byeee
cover pic is awsome toooooooooooo
Tqqqqqqqqq soooooooooo much shabana??????????????
Awesome yaar!! Loved it!!
Tqqqqqqqqqqqqq sooooooooo much richa????????keep reading….keep commenting dear….please dont discontinue reading dear ??????Take care…byeeee
Hi Logesh dear.I liked ur FF and i just felt magical each and every part was amazing.
Keep writing dear…
Tqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqq sooooooooooooo much dear………Keep reading….Keep commenting…..Plsssssssssssssssss dont discontinue reading dear….I will update next part before sunday……..Take care dear….Byeeeeeee???????????????
Awesome yaar…. Lovely part…. Excited for the next part… post it it soon
Tqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqq soooooooooooooooooooooooo much sagithya….Take care dear…..keep commenting……Keep reading……Please dont discontinue reading dear……i will update next part before sunday…?????????????????????
nice episode…pace is picking up and you are making it exciting for the readers…way to go dear…waiting for the next episode …
Tqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqq sooooooooooooooooooo much didi…Ur appreciation means a lotttt to me…..Keep reading…..keep commenting…..Please dont discontinue reading didi…Take care……I will update next part before sunday….??????????????????
Osm bro…lovely romance scenes
Tqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqq soooooooooooooooo much reihana…….This means a lotttt to me…..Keep reading….keep commenting….Please dont discontinue reading dear….Take care…Byeee….?????????????
Awwwwww.. Its really very awwdorable… Specially, rikara scene… M in love with their chemistery… Post next part soon… And haa, I m so sorry bro for the late comment.. I actually dont check messages regularly.. So sorry one again.. And plz its a request.. Include more rikara scenes as I really love them a lot….. And if u don’t mind can u tell ur age??
Tqqqqqqqqqqqqqq soooooooooo much kashu….Tqqqqqqq very much for such long comment…keep reading…keep commenting..plssssssss dont discontinue reading dear…..Take care…i will update soon…Yeah i will add more rikara scenes in upcoming….i am going to be 21 at September 30….??????????????????
Oh.. Okk… As u are big from me, Can I call u bhai?? I hope u won’t mind….
I never mind…There are many chutkis here for me…you are also one among them?????????
awesome
loved the sweet romance between the two.
glad that the three villians plan failed.
RuAvya romance was super cut.
update soon
Tqqqqqqqqqqqqq soooooooooooo much aashi????????keep reading…keep commenting….pleassss dont discontinue reading dear ????take care….tqqqqq very much for your support…..byeeee
cute and romantic scenes are sooo nice but i request you please include shivika also dear..
Tqqqqqqqqq soooooooo much deepu…..Sorry dear…i will surely include shivika in next part??????I was about to include them in 13th part itself….But i was pretty busy…So i cutted this episode with Rikara and Ruvya…Sorry for that?????Keep reading…keep commenting dear…please dont discontinue reading dear…Take care
Sorry bro for late comment…??
First of all..Banner is totally wow…??
Plus…The episode which was so so funny…
Lavanya…Arshi..Mitali gave their intro on video…????…As u mentioned they fools…i am still laughing…OmRi scene was romantic…???????…RuVya scene was really funny n cute ?????????…With Tantantantan….
Precap: superb…
Soo waiting for barun’s entry for Aswini (shivani)…????
Updt soon…?
Tqqqqqqqqqqq soooooooooooooooo much riana for such a longgg comment ????????????????yeah they are fools??????????But bcoz of their stupidity they indirectly done good…Misunderstanding didnt crop up between my Rikara????Keep reading…keep commenting dear…Please dont discontinue reading dear…Take care…Byeee
Nice episode. Please post next one asap
Tqqqqqqqqqq sooooo much prani?????Keep reading…keep commenting….take care….Please dont discontinue reading dear…???????????
Nice
Tqqqqqqqqq sooooooooo much fenil bro???????keep reading…keep commenting…take care bro????
nice episode logesh.. omkara and gauri was soo adorable and ruvya toooo
waiting for next episode…
when will the entry of barun in the story..
please do telll…
post the next episode asap….
Tqqqqqqqq soooooooo much criz?????????Keep reading…keep commenting dear…plsssssssssss dont discontinue reading dear….Take care….I will update next part mostly tomorrow….Soon barun will enter…Sorry for making you all wait?????But i have to start with aswini first…Thats why i am postponing barun’s entry yaar…plssssssss dont mind??????baruns entry will happen soon????
Sorry for the late comment???
Awwwwwwwww,romantic episode. I like it ?????????
Tqqqqqqqq sooooooo much asana?????keep reading…keep commenting…??????
I have sent 15th part for review…it will also be out today…Pleas comment in upcoming parts too ??????