Haiiiiiiii Readers…I am back with the next part of my Fan Fiction(Gauri Aur Omkara)…
I am very Happy to say this…I am going to start another fan fiction named “OMKARA KI DULHANIA”,which will start airing from next week end only in
tellyupdates….The teaser is out…You can see it in my profile tab…?????After this new ff starts both will run parallel…I will try to start,another ff after this
two ends….
Verna didi,maha,praneetha, i am really loving your fan fictions….Keep rocking….
Verna didi i am angry on you for not informing about your new ff..!!!!!!!
I really loved the first episode…Keep going…
Harika di(VHM) i loved the first part to the core….All my readers please read “Teri meri love story”..This is new ff started by our harika di..(VHM)
The first episode,i experienced the marriage scene almost visually….keep rocking didi..?????
Fenil bhaiya i really loved that Ruvya and Priveer OS….Please write more ff like this….
All of you Please read “SHADES OF LOVE” by our RIANA…I really love the way the story is going…Keep rocking riana dear..
I love your ff to the core…
I got some new readers namely karina,Madhu(dont know why is she angry on me???)Siddhu(sakash),ashwinee,Dhwani naidu,etc…I love them all…
Please read Negisanyuktha’s Fan fiction on savitridevi serial….She is rocking…Eventhough i dont have any idea about that serial,i am really liking her
fan fiction…
Shreyanvi,as i promised i posted teaser..Are you happy now saku??!!!!You and verna di are playful???You two are indirectly blackmailing me?????dont worry!!!!
Om will not be rude…Even i dont like rude om…!!!!!Really you two are like my sister…She is also playful and naughty like you two,dinu,riana,etc….
Dinu,i really love your long comments….dont think you are boring…?????
OK…I BORED YOU ALL…TAKE A SNEAK PEAK INTO THE PREVIOUS EPISODE..HERE IS THE LINK..
http://www.tellyupdates.com/ishqbaaz-gauri-aur-omkara-rikara-ff-episode-15/
HOPE YOU ALL ENJOYED THE PREVIOUS EPISODE…
RECAP: Advay sees Aswini and admires her beauty…RIKARA,SHIVIKA And RUVYA spend some time together…
HERE GOES THE 16TH EPISODE……
SOME TIME BEFORE:
@RAIZADA MANSION: GANGA(Advay’s mother): Advay,please obey me…Please agree to this proposal..I want to finish your marriage soon…!!!!
ADVAY: Ma,i already said you to avoid this topic for few months..(He leaves)
GANGA cries…..??????
@OBEROI MANSION:
SHARMAS arrive to the oberoi mansion….
MISSION PINKY??????
Omkara drops gauri at her home…
OMKARA: Gauri,go inside..I am going to Oberoi Mansion…
GAURI: Why omkara??Jhanvi aunty permitted you to stay here….!!!!!Please stay here…We will together to oberoi mansion tomorrow…I am going to enjoy this
one month holidays in oberoi mansion…
NOTE: Both Gauri and Omkara is on holidays…..Because their semester exams are over and their college will start after 40 or 45 days??????
OMKARA: Gauri,i have to go…Or else you will be in danger…(Gauri was wearing a sky blue lehenga,in which she looked really STUNNING….)
GAURI: What do you mean darling???What danger???I cant understand!!!!!!!!
OMKARA(Smirks): I will rape you if i stay here…Because i am stunned because of your beauty today….Will you still ask me to stay here???
(He asked with a naughty smile followed by some cute antics????????)
GAURI: Chiiii…You better go home…I have to reconsider my decision to spend one month in oberoi mansion with you!!!!!(Gauri worried)
OMKARA: Hey pagli….Dont worry…I can easily control me….Please beleive me…
GAURI(With a cute smile): Omkie,i beleive you more than me…I know about you…I had spent one night with you in library…
Whenever i am with you i feel more secure and safe….?????
(Omkara pulls her cheeks and says..)
OMKARA: Cutiepie Gauri….I love you sooo much…I will never break your hopes…I promise….
GAURI:(Caresses his silky wilky hair??????)I too promise…I too love you dear…Byeeee
(Omkara left…Gauri went to her room..)(Anika and bhavya were sleeping in anika’s room)
@GAURI’S ROOM:
(She lyed on bed and checked her phone..She sees Their selfies and admires the Cute and also innocent face of her Jattadhari hippi(OMKARA))
GAURI’S P.O.V:
How lucky i am!!!To get a charming partner like him….Look at his eyes gauri…
This eyes made you fall for him…How cute he is…??????
P.O.V Ends….
After 30 minutes,Gauri feels lonely…She goes to sleep with anika and bhavya…..But anika locked the room(As anika was lost in shivaays thoughts!!!)
Gauri goes to her room…She stares at her phone…..She decides to text Omkara in whatsapp….
She opens whatsapp…She was happy to see omkara online in whatsapp??????
GAURI’S TEXT: Haiii darling…
OMKARA’S REPLY: Haiii Baby..??
GAURI’S TEXT: I did mistake???
OMKARA’S REPLY: Why???What you did??????
GAURI’S TEXT: I am missing you!!!!I would have allowed you to stay here!!!!!
OMKARA’S REPLY: Gauri,dont worry..We are going to meet tomorrow…
GAURI’S TEXT: Baby, can you do me one favour??
OMKARA’S REPLY: Ofcourse baby..Anything..
GAURI’S TEXT: Come here and cuddle with me until i fall asleep????
(Omkara was shocked and as well as felt happy?????for her love towards him..)
OMKARA’S REPLY: Can i hold you and kiss you?
Can i run my fingers through your hair and tell you how much i love you??
GAURI’S TEXT: Ofcourse baby???????Just come here….
OMKARA’S REPLY: I wish more than anything that i could baby.Just know that one day this distance won’t be here and we can do all of those things
every single day for the rest of our lives…
(Gauri was really attracted by this reply…)
JO NAKEH SAKEY TUM
JO NAKEH SAKEY HUM
JO NAKEH SAKEY TUM
JO NAKEH SAKEY HUM
KEHNE LAGI DONO SE WOH
KHAMOSHIYAAN O SAATHIYA!!
KEHNE LAGI DONO SE WOH
KHAMOSHIYAAN O SAATHIYA…
SAATHIYA SAATHIYA SAATHIYA SAATHIYA SAATHIYA
SAATHIYA SAATHIYA SAATHIYA…
Plays in the background…
GAURI’S TEXT: Only this things!!!!!!!!????
OMKARA: Pagli,you are very naughty…Please dont change my mood…Dont tempt me…Please go and sleep…
GAURI:(Laughs eavily)Okk..Byee baby..Good night…Sweet dreamssszzz…..
OMKARA:Come quick..Let’s chat in dreamszz….
(They both sleep peacefully…)
AT MORNING,
@RAIZADA MANSION:
GANGA(ADVAY’S MOTHER): Okay…I will arrange for this after knowing Advay’s Decision..(She talks in phone)
(She cuts the call..And goesto advay’s room…She gets to know that the door is locked….She called his name..)
(Advay wakes up and without opening his eyes he takes his phone and opens the wallpaper….He opens his eyes and sees aswini’s photo..???)
ADVAY: Good morning beauty…Ma i am coming…
(He weared track suit and shoes and got ready for jogging..After getting ready he opened the door)
GANGA: How long will i call your name dear!!!!!I have to talk something important to you…
ADVAY:What happened ma???
GANGA: Today shall we go to Rathis mansion for proposal?????
(Advay’s face turns red after hearing the word proposal…Ganga noticed it)
ADVAY: Ma,i asked you to avoid this topic for few months…
GANGA: But advay, have to finish your marriage soon…
ADVAY: Please understand me…Dont force me maa….I am going for jogging…Byeee..
GANGA cries….!!!!!
@SHARMA MANSION:
At 12pm:
(Jhanvi departed from SHARMA Mansion after enjoying aloo parotta made by sharmila as “BREAKFAST”….
Gauri,Anika and bhavya finished their packings and placed their bags in cars…Sharmila too got ready…
SHARMILA: Gauri puttar,please lock the main door and come..
(Gauri locked the main door..Handed over the keys to her mom..)
(The sharmas left from there..)
@OBEROI MANSION:
DADI was walking here and there like Cat and she was repeatedly looking towards the open main door…
Pinky noticed this..
PINKY’S P.O.V:
Why mummyji is like this!!!!???She is waiting eagerly for SHARMAS!!!!!!!
P.O.V Ends….
(Jhanvi comes there..)
DADI: What is this jhanvi????Where is Sharmila and my three puttars??!!!!!Why they are taking sooo much time???!!!!
JHANVI: Mummyji,they started from there…They are on the way…
(All of them heard the car sound…)
DADI:Welcome sharmila…My puttars come inside…
(SHARMILA and Three daughters were very happy after receiving such a warm welcome..)
DADI:SHARMILA and ANIKA, how are you???Sharmila wont you atleast call me???!!!!!(Dadi makes puppy face)
SHARMILA: Mummyji,i am fine.Hope you are also fine….This is gauri and she is bhavya..
ANIKA: Dadi,i am fine…
DADI: Both Gauri and Bhavya are looking very pretty like anika..??????
(Pinky was about to go from hall…Dadi stops her..)
DADI: Pinky,what is this????Wont you welcome sharmila and her daughters??????
PINKY: They are already in…Then what is the need to welcome them???(Pinky makes an irritated face)
DADI: Stop this pinky…You dont have manners at all…Its my mistake to expect manners and respect from you..
GAURI’S ,ANIKA’S and BHAVYA’S P.O.V:
Ohhhhh….This much attitude….We three must teach her a lesson…We three will make everything fine…
Wait and watch pinky singh oberoi…You fat donkey….???????????
NOTE: Gauri told everything about pinky to bhavya and anika…So all the three sisters decided to pay for her deeds….
SHARMILA: Pinky,how are you????
PINKY: I was fine till before your arrival…..!!!!!(She leaves from there in anger..)
DADI: Sharmila,just ignore her…
SHARMILA: Mummyji,she is good by heart..I know about pinky…
JHANVI: Look how kind my friend is!!!!!
GAURI: Jhanvi ma, can i go and see om now????Is he busy???
JHANVI: Why are you asking me for permission gauri puttar..This is your home…
DADI’S P.O.V:
Yes…This is your home my puttars….You three are going to become bahus of this home soon….
I will finish your marriages as soon as possible…This is my long term wish…!!!!
I can never get such Selfless,Kind bahus like you three….
P.O.V Ends….
(Gauri goes to omkara’s room..)
DADI: Bhavya, rudra is in his room…I think he might be sleeping….You go and wake him…It will be a surprise for him(Dadi smiles naughtily)
BHAVYA: Sure dadi…Within this one month i will change this lazy rudra to energetic rudra…(She goes to rudra’s room)
DADI: Anika, i think Shivaay is in terrace..
ANIKA: Ok dadi…I will go there…(She goes)
After anika, gauri and bhavya gone from hall,
JHANVI: Mummyji,we must soon make them confess their love…
DADI: Sharmila,i can never think of anyother bahus other than ANIKA,GAURI And BHAVYA even in dreams….
SHARMILA: My wish is also the same mummyji…
DADI,JHANVI And SHARMILA: So MISSION SHIVIKA, RIKARA AND RUVYA KA MILAN GONNA START…..????????????
@RUDRA’S ROOM:
(Bhavya knocks the door continuously..)
RUDRA: Come in(In a sleepy voice)
BHAVYA: What the hell….Am i your PA??Wait and see…
(She goes in..)
BHAVYA: Chiiiii(Rudra was only wearing long shorts….He was shirtless..)
(Bhavya looks around the room…She notices the jug full of water..She pours it on rudra)
RUDRA:Awwwwww…….(He was shocked to see bhavya…He rubbed his eyes and pinched himself to check whether it’s dream..)
BHAVYA: Lazy rudra…It’s 1pm…Still sleeping….
RUDRA:I started sleeping only after 04:00 am…Do you know that…Dont call me lazy(Rudra made puppy face)
BHAVYA:Ohhhhhhhhh….So pity….
RUDRA: Go and bring me one cup of hot coffee…
BHAVYA: Chiiiii…First go and brush your teeths…Also i am not your PA….
RUDRA: Then,why you waked me???Tell me..
BHAVYA: Dadi asked me to do so???
RUDRA: Will you do everything what dadi asks you to do??
BHAVYA:Ofcourse…Because i respect dadi….
RUDRA:(Smiles naughtily)Will you propose me if dadi asks you to do so??????
(Bhavya playfully beats him…He tries to escape from her…She chases him….Finally she catches him…She pinches his ears..)
RUDRA:Awwwww……Bhavya leave my ears…It’s paining!!!!!!
BHAVYA: Dont mess with bhavya…(She raises her shirt collar)
RUDRA: But you had messed my room…
(Bhavya then sees the room…Because of the water she poured and their chasing the whole room turned into mess)
BHAVYA:(Keeps hands in her head)Rudy,what to do now!!!????
RUDRA: Come on…Let’s clean the room together….
(They cleaned the room together..)
RUDRA: Bhavi,can i call you like that??
BHAVYA: Its nice name rudy..My parents and didis call me like that???????No problem..
RUDRA: Thank you bhavi…I will take bath and come…You go to hall…I will meet you there in lunch…
BHAVYA:(With a naughty smile)Rudy,dont forget to brush your teeth??????(She goes)
(Rudra locks the door..)
@TERRACE:
ANIKA: Shivu,haiiiii…
SHIVAAY: Haiiii paanika..I was just talking to my client…Happy that you came soon….
ANIKA:Paanika???You finished talking na??
SHIVAAY:I finished talking…Come lets go to my room..
(Both shivaay and anika goes to shivaay’s room..)
@OMKARA’S ROOM:
Gauri knocks the door continuously….But there was no response…So she tried to open the door…The door opened..
Omkara was wearing headphones and his back was facing gauri..He was sitting in bed…Gauri locks the door…And decides to monitor him..(she hided under the bed)
She puts her phone in silent mode…She texts him in whatsapp..Omkara opened whatsapp to check messages…
GAURI’S TEXT: Haiiii baby…
OMKARA’S REPLY:Haiiiii darling…Why are you taking sooo much time???Please come soon…
GAURI’S TEXT: Sorry baby…I am not coming today…I am not well…So we will be coming tomorrow..
OMKARA’S REPLY:Whatttttt!!!!!!!!!!????Are you not coming today????????
GAURI’S TEXT: Yesss baby…Byeee…I am not well…I talk to you later…
OMKARA’S REPLY:Dear,wait..wait..wait….
(Before seeing his message gauri went offline…She looks at him to see his reactions..)
OMKARA:(Murmurs)I thought that she will come today…Is she not well??Or she is playing with me???I have to check…(He removed the headphones)
I will call prithvi papa…..
GAURI: Noooo…I am well…Dont call papa…(She bites her tongue..??)
(Omkara notices the sound coming under the bed..He sees under bed…There gauri was sitting like a rabbit…)
He pulls her out…Due to his force she hugs him…
GAURI: Omkie,i just..
(He placed his index finger on her mouth signing to keep silent..)
He held her from waist pulled her into his chest his one hand was enough to grab her full waist…
Her face hit on his chest…Her lips touched his shirt which had now mark of her lipstick she lift her head up and looked at his eyes…
They had an eyelock…He tight his grip from waist more that there was no space for air to pass…??????
SAATHIYA Musical song plays in the background…
He picked her up a little and bit her lower lip passionately..she was shocked what he was doing..
He continued kissing her…She put her both hands around his neck pulling him closer to her,they broke kiss to breath but still holding each other
tightly…??????That was the first liplock for RIKARA….
Then he started kissing softly all over her neck whereas she was breathing heavily….
Then he kissed her lower cheeks..
He picked her up in bridal style and took her to bed…
But gauri came to senses…
GAURI’S P.O.V:
Hey Shankarji…What we are doing…If this continues we will go wrong…
She wakes from bed…
GAURI: Omkie,enough we have to stop this…Else it will end wrong..
OMKARA:(made puppy face)Gauri,please….Only kisses..
GAURI: Enough dear…Everyone will be searching for us…Come lets go to hall…
(Omkara becomes sad…Gauri decideto pacify him…To his surprise gauri suddenly kissed his lips?????????
He was shocked…But thoroughly he enjoyed it…After one minute liplock both went to hall..)
@SHIVAAY’S ROOM:
ANIKA: Shivu,we had not yet completed favourites…!!!!!
SHIVAAY: What is this favourites paanika???Can you please explain…
ANIKA: We should know about each other’s favourite hero,heroine,movie,food items,etcc…..
SHIVAAY: Who is gonna start first???
ANIKA: I will..(she jumps in excitement..)I will…
SHIVAAY’S P.O.V:
I always love her cute antics…It’s just beautiful like her…
P.O.V Ends….
SHIVAAY:Ok….Paanika..You start…
ANIKA: Shivu….My Favourite Movie is BAJRANGI BHAIJAN..
SHIVAAY: What???It’s That Grandpa Salman’s movie….(He says with weird expression)
NOTE: Salman khan fans…sorry for this….it’s just for fun…dont bash me…??????
ANIKA:(Fake anger)Shivu, not a word against my salman..He is my favourite hero..(she made puppy face)
SHIVAAY: He is not your Salman…He is single….(Shivaay said in jealous..)
ANIKA’S P.O.V:
I can feel jealous in his eyes….I think he is also in love with me…Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee?????????????
(anika smiles widely by showing her teeth…
I will make him confess soon…I can never find better partner then him..He is supporting me in
cracking every business deals for the past two years..He always supported me…I will not leave you shivu…!!!!!!
P.O.V ends…
SHIVAAY: Anika, for every girl her first hero is HER FATHER..The second hero is HER HUSBAND…(He said this looking at her eyes..)
They both had an eyelock…
O JAANA
KHOYA KHOYA REHTA HAI
DIL TADAP YE KEHTA HAI
TU HAI MERE JEENE KI WAJAH
O JAANA
O JAANA
KHOYA KHOYA REHTA HAI
DIL TADAP YE KEHTA HAI
TU HAI MERE JEENE KI WAJAH
O JAANA
ISHQ HAI AANSU ISHQ HAI NAGHMA
ISHQ SUKOON HAI RAAHAT HAI
ISHQ HAI SEHRA ISHQ HAI DARIYA
ISHQ JUNOON HAI ZAHMAT HAI..
Plays…
ANIKA: I agree with you shivaay…My first hero is my father and second hero is you…(She bites her tongue)
SHIVAAY:(Shivu widened his blue green kaanchi eyes in surprise)Anika,what you said now??
ANIKA: I…..I… i mean you are handling both family and business without any tension..You are soo jkind…I mean you are my second hero because of
all this things….
SHIVAAY:(Gets disappointed)Ufffffff……We will do this favourites later…All will be searching for us…Lets go to hall..I will come..You go…
ANIKA:Ok shivu…
(Anika goes)
SHIVAAY’S P.O.V:
From your words i came to know that you are also in love with me…I will never get a better partner than you anika…
I cant measure my love for you…You are caring for your gauri and bhavya like mother…You will shower your love
on my family after becoming my wife(Bahu)…I am hundred percent sure…..I will make you confess soon…I will not leave you anika…
P.O.V Ends….
@HALL:
Everyone was having lunch except pinky…She doesnt want to face sharmas…She asked servant to bring lunch to her room…
Bhavya goes to kitchen to wash her hands…She notices the plate of food…She called the servant…
SERVANT: Mam,do you need something…
BHAVYA: For whom you are taking this food???
SERVANT: Pinky madam…She asked me to bring this to her room…
(During their conversation anika switches ON the fan…Gauri also comes to kitchen and with the help of JAMMER she jammed all the cameras…Khanna left for shop to
buy groceries…Only khanna will watch through the cameras in oberoi mansion….
Then due to fan,gauri’s shawl slides over the face of servant and it hides servant’s eyes…
At that time bhavya mixes bhaang in that food…Anika mixes it well with spoon..The servant then takes the plate to pinky’s room..)
ANIKA,BHAVYA And GAURI DO HI-FI….
ALL had lunch…Time passed by and it was 07:00pm…
@HALL:
BHAVYA: Dadi…It’s boring…Shall we play musical chair in terrace..
RUDRA: Musical chair…We are not kids bhavi…haha
ANIKA:Then which game you want to play rudy???
RUDRA: We can play hide and seek…
OMKARA and SHIVAAY: Ohhhhhhhh…shut up rudra….it also kids game…
(Everyone laughs)
RUDRA: All are making fun of me sharmila aunty..(He makes puppy face and rested on her lap..)
DADI: Bhavya,anika and gauri is right…We can go to terrace and play musical chair..We can get cool breeze there…
JHANVI And SHARMILA: Where is pinky??We can take her along with us to terrace..
DADI: IF she want she will come…Let’s go now…
(Everyone goes to terrace…Nine chairs were placed….pinky was lying in bed in her room…She suffered because of sever headache due
to the effect of bhaang…She was murmuring continuously….!!!!!!!!)
Gauri winks at bhavya…Bhavya understands her sign and increases the volume of speakers….
They three start to discuss..
ANIKA: Now no one can hear any sounds,phone calls..I had managed to hide everyone’s phone..
GAURI: I used jammer and jammed all cameras…Khanna is not back yet…Main door is locked…Servants are sleeping in guest house…As they had prepared dinner…
BHAVYA:How will we console them to go down????
(Later they discuss something and goes to dadi…They were all playing joyfully…Due to the heavy sound anika had to call dadi for atleast 25 times eventhough
she is near to dadi..
DADI: Anika…Come and join with us…You three only initiated this..Then why you three are not participating???
ANIKA: Dadi, gauri and bhavya are feeling hungry..So we three will join you after having some snacks..
DADI: Yeah…Gauri ate very little during lunch…Please go and have some snacks…..No problem..
JHANVI: ANIKA puttar..Take you own time….Go now…
Sharmila signs her to go…
The trios goes down with evil smiles in their faces…?????????
ANIKA: I will switch off all the lights…Also i will hide all the candles too…
GAURI: Bhavya, i am gonna knock the door of pinky’s room…You wear the payal soon…
(Anika switches off all the lights…Gauri knocks the doors of pinky’s room heavily….Bhavya makes scary sound with her payal..Her payal was making large sound..)
PINKY: Who is knocking the door continuously????I have to open..The door is locked inside…Awwwwwww my head….
(Pinky opened the door…There was noone and total oberoi mansion was looking dark…Hearing the payal sound pinky panics…)
PINKY: Who is that???Who are you???oh my mata!!!!!Dont fear me!!!!??????
(Bhavya runs in stairs and she reaches hall…Pinky follows the payal sound and comes near the stairs…)
GAURI: Get this…???????For troubling my Darling…
(Gauri kicked pinky from back heavily…Pinky rolled down in stairs with heavy scream…)
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That’s it for today friends….Hope you all liked it…..Please drop your comments…
Waiting eagerly for your comments…
Thank you all for your continuous support…
AND I have decided to do something new…Next episode will not be written by me…I will ask someone to write the next part alone…
I dont know how to proceed Advay and aswini story..So i am gonna ask someone to write their part and some rikara,shivika scenes in next episode…Hope
you all will like my decision…
PLEASE SEE THE MONTAGE (PROFILE PIC) OF THIS EPISODE…..COMMENT ON IT TOO…..
Byeee to all….Take care….
-LOGESH.M..
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