Note:- I m making some changes in Ashwini’s character …..nd the proposal for advay is frm SINGHANIA’s…
Also I m adding nani’s character…
KINDLY IGNORE GRAMMATICAL MISTAKES…ND FORGIVE ME FOR TYPING ERRORS…..
@Raizada House…
Ganga:- Advay beta…listen to me…at least meet the girl once…..
Advay:-no mom…i told u many times naa….i m not interested in all this stuff.. ..
G:- but ….
(Cut by advay)
A:- I said no….(lil angry)…no more discussion on this matter….
{Saying this he left for office….leaving Ganga annoyed}…
Nani:- wht happened to chiku..???..y was he this much angry on u???
G:- nothing mom…same drama regarding his marriage ….he is not at all listening to me….i m not getting wht should I do of ur chiku?? .. .
Nani:- don’t worry….leave everything on me….i have a plan…
(She whispers something in her ears….which was obviously muted)
@oberoi mansion…
Our teen tigada kaam bigada….was ready wd their plan of ruining pinky….nd as per plan….Anika nd bhavya started scaring pinky….
Bhavya started moving towards hall…nd pinky stared following payal’s sound…
Pinky:- oh my mata??….whos this..???
Pinky was hell scared …..she was all drenched by sweat….now anika added scary sounds like…sound of running water…opening window….blowing winds sound….
Pinky:- bhoot…bhoot…bachaw…someone save me…
Anika: Plan A successful.. .now it’s time for plan B..(lookin at gauri …gave her Thumbs up..)..
Gauri now smartly made curtains fall on pinky…nd now pinky could not see anything…
Gauri (thinking):- U hv troubled my omiee so much…so this one is for torturing him nd making him cry….nd pushed her down frm stairs…
Pinky felled down…nd started screaming.. .
P:- shivaye …mummyjiii…
(Hearing her scream everyone rushed down….bhavya was standing near entrance of terrace as soon as see saw them coming down she signalled anika…nd anika switched on the lights…nd trio rushed towards their room…)
Ani:- giving hi5 to rivya….finally..dat kdwa karela Karla is lying on floor.. .
Riya:-kdwa karela…???
Ani:- wht shuld I call her or else….whenever she opens her mouth only bitter things comes out…..??..no wait..she is not karela…
Riya:- (confused)??? y…???
Ani:- areee…calling her karela means…insulting karela….nd u knw naa….karela is my fav…
RiYa:- (giving impossible wala look…)…dii…nothing can happen of u…
(Nd trio burst into laughter…started giggling as their plan got successful…their convo was interrupted by sounds which were coming frm hall…)
G:-I think everyone came down…nd we shuld also go…so dat knw one doubts us….
Bha:- di.. u r r8…
(Trimurti left their room…nd started going towards hall…nd stood their as if nothing happened…)
To their surprise pinky was lying on floor….their was slight injuries on her head…also her leg was twisted…aniriya looked towards each other in shock…
Gauri :- di…pinky aunty got severely injured…wht will we do now..??(worried)..??
Ani:-don’t now ri…i just hope she is fine??
Shi:-Mom…mom…r u ok..??? Hw did dis happened…
Pinky :-SHIVAYE.. .save me…their..their ..are ghost in our house…she will…??..she will kill me….
Ru:- ahhh….mummy…jumped on om…his legs was around omkara’s waist…
Om:- wht the hell….???…just get down r8 now…
Ru:- wht the hell…wht the hell..kya..???if that ghost come nd kill me then I will go in real hell o..???..plz save me..
Shi:-stop it rudra…their is nothing like ghost nd all…i think mom might hv watched horror movie…
P:-no…look…i m hearing Payal’s sounds…dont u getting…see door opened nd someone came inside…??
(Everyone confused ….whts wrng wd her..??)
Om:- choti maa…no one is their…no one is harming u…
P:-no..someone is their…nd started laughing nd crying at same time..(I knw u will feel weird…but afterall she was under bhang influence…but still if u don’t feel logic…then…i can’t do anything….u hv to adjust????)
Pinky:- someone wants to kill me….someone pushed me down frm stairs….
Shi:- mom..who pushed u..?? Just tell me…i will not leave that person…
(Hearing this AniRiYa went in dream sequence.. .in which shivaye was throwing their bags out….dadi was scolding their mom…
Anika’s POV..
Shi:- How dare u hurt my mom…???..
Ani:- look shivaye..i m sorry…plz don’t get angry…i didn’t mean to hurt her..???.
Shiv:-.oh just stop ur drama…nd get out of my house r8 now…just get lost..nd don’t show me ur face…???
POV ends..
Gauri’s POV
Om:- Gauri…i thought u will solve this maturely ..but u ended hurting choti maa…??..if anything happens to her shivaye will break…if shivaye does anything stupid…then No one is worst than me…??
G:- no om u r mistaken..i hv done this for u..??..i never thought it will become so serious…???
Om:-just stop it…everything is over between us…nothing is their…just get out…
POV ENDS…
Looking anika nd Gauri’s condition bhavya started thinking…but ended up thinking that in her case it’s diff…rudy can’t shout on me…he is still over om???…their thoughts were disturbed by dadi’s scream)..
Dadi:- (lil angry)… pinky…???
Everyone stood confused…
Shi:-y r u shouting mom…??..already she felled down…her head is bleeding.. .nd she is talking weird nd is scared…nd U r shouting on her…???
Dadi:-what else u want me to do…???….she has done nashaa.. .she took bhang.. .look at her antics.. doest she look drunk..???
Everyone looked at pinky….who was not in her senses nd was murmuring something.. ..
Dadi:-that’s y she is talking this baseless things…get her to room…nd No one pushed her…cz of overdose she might hv herself felled down…
Shi:- No..dadi..u r mistaken..hw can mom do dis..??
Dadi:- SHIVAYE.. just look at her..??..she is not in her senses….pinky always did mistakes but I never told her anything…but whts all this…??..wht example is she setting before u all..??..guests r their in house…nd she is drunk..??..wht they will think abt us..???…let her come to senses I will deal wd her later.. .
(Seeing dadi’s anger…aniriya started sweating nd panicking….gauri was abt any to say something but anika stopped her by holding her hand…om noticed gauri’s expression nd got suspicious…)
Janvi…dadi nd sharmila left place…while shivomru brought pinky to her room…shivaye layed her on bed…
Om:- SHIVAYE.. I hv called doctor..he is on his way…
Shiv:- nodded…
After sometime doctor came…he did dressing of her wound….
Shiv:- is everything fine .. ??
Doc:- yes..head injury is not so deep…she will recover from it within 2 days…but their is hairline fracture in her leg…..so we need to plaster it…
Hearing this AniRiYa was drenched in pool of guilt.. .
G:- it’s cz of me…my stupid plan…i should I thought that this can be dangerous…we must hv thought abt consequences?????
I hope aunty gets fine soon…
A:- no…its not ur fault princess…its my fault…being a elder sister..i should hv explained u…but instead I supported u in this…
Bhavya:- di…nd Dadi is blaming aunty for the thing she didn’t even commited.. .i m feeling so guilty…?
Ani:- don’t worry..i will make everything fine…u trust me naa???
RiYa:- more than our self.. .
Trio shared a hug….nd left for their respective rooms…
@Raizada Office…
Advay was in meeting…giving presentation…
PA:- sir ur phone…
Advay:- Cant u see…i m in meeting..??….tell them to call later…
Pa:- sir..its ur mom…nd she is sounding worried…
Advay:- what…ok guys we will continue tomorrow…u may leave…after everyone left conference room…he answered call…
Ad:- wht what happened mom..????
Mom:- beta…maaa..
Ad:- nani…??..wht happened to nani.. ???
G:-she is not eating anything….not even taking medicines….nd fainted cz of hunger…
Ad:-don’t worry mom…i m coming…nothing will happen to Dadi.. .
G:-ok…
(As soon as Advay diconnected call…ganga winked at nani nd murli…on the othere hand nani was having her fav chole bhatura…???…)
While nani asked murli for one more bhatura…they heard advay’s car sound…nd in tension nani placed her plate under bed…nd layed on bed..acting unconscious ….
Advay rushed nan’s room…
Ad:- tears were rolling through his eyes…nani…whts all this y r’nt u eating anything…
Nani:-Advay beta….i m old soul…i don’t want live anymore…
Ad:-no nani…y r u saying like that…
Nani:- I had many dreams…but looks like they r never gonna fulfil.. .I will die before that only…
Ad:- nani…dont say such things….i m here naa…ur chiku will not let anything happen to u..nd regarding ur dreams..I will fulfill it..just say once…
N:- no u can’t.. .
Ad:- there is nothing which Advay can’t do…
N:- then..i …i want to see u getting married..before I take my last breath..promise me u will do as I say..(winking at ganga????).
Ad:- understanding nani’s drama..ok nani I will do as I say.. .I will meet the girl u want…i promise..
Nani:- (excitedly) really….then she is coming in evening…
Ad:- (shocked??? ) wht…???
N:-yes…
Ad:- waise nani…how was chole bhatura..???
N:- it was so yummy.. .I want more…
(Soon realising wht she said…i mean..ganga u say…)
Advay staring ganga..
Ga:- I hv call to attend…i will b back…(rescued)…now only nani was left…nani was looking down.. like a small child does when he thinks he caught while stealing chocolates frm fridge..???
Ad:- cupping nani’s face…wht is this nani..wht was need..
U can’t even imagine..hw much worried I was…dont do this again…
Nani:-no..i will not do..?..i will do arrangements for evening..dont do any gadbad..u hv promised me…remember dat.. .. .
Ad:- (thinking)..hmmm ..i hv promised u…but wht if girl herself refuse to marry me…(smirking??)
@OBEROI MANSION…
Gauri was passing by omkara’s room cz her room was beside his room…..suddenly someone pulled her inside…
G:- whts this om….??..someone will see us…
O:- holding her more closer…..nahhh…noone is gonna see us…
G:- accha…
Om:-hmmmm.. .
Thinking…wht happened to her….y is she so quite.???…
Om:- (hugging her frm back…his hands were on her belly…)…wht happened.. .?? Y is my chirraiya so lost…???
Ga:- hmmmm…
Om:- just tell baby…
Gauri:- woh ….w..o…h….actually…
Om:- kahi…choti maa.. .
G:- (gulping saliva)….promise me u will not get angry…nd scold me..
O:-promise jaanu…plz tell me..whts bothering u..
Gauri told him everything any their plan…also that she pushed pinky frm stairs…(tears were rolling through eyes)…om I m really very sorry…i never thought that this will get so serious….i m very guilty..
Om:- cupping her face…oh my chiraiya did mistake…??…i knw u did this for me….but if u will hurt choti maa…then wht will b difference between her nd u..???u r my sweet baby…nd babies never harm anyone r8..??
G:- nodding…?..u r not angry ???
O:- hmmm…lil bit..but it’s k..i knw ur intention was not wrng…but don’t do such stupid thing again…ok…
G:- I promise I will not repeat…
O:- Gauri choti maa is not bad by heart….oneday she will surely accept me…nd if u want to win her…then win by love not by hatred.. .??
G:- thanks babu????…i will win her for u…nd it’s a promise…
O:- whos babu..???
G:-uhhh???
O:- no.yaar…dont call me by dat name…atleast give me nick name matching to my standards…(doing his hook step)
G:- ummmm???…wht abt GABBAR.. ?
O:- gabbar…but y..???
G:- arre…its said naa BETA SOOJA WARNA GABBAR AAJAYEGA AUR YEH SUNKE BACCHE SO JAATE HAI…WAISE HI AAPKI SHAYARI SUNKE LOG SOOJATE H..???(giggles for her reply)
O:- very funny…(glared her)…
G:-yaa…nd rushed out…laughing…
O:- this will cost u harder Gauri.. .?????
@Terrace…
SHIVAYE is seen working on lappy…but was lost somewhere…
Ani:- shivu.. ???…r u busy…??
Shi:- (no response…)
Ani:- this tym lil louder….shivaye…
Shi:- yes.. y r u shouting…i can hear…
Ani:- Oh..really..???…u don’t think so…i m calling since 2min but u were lost…
Shi:-hmmmm
Ani: (sitting beside him)…why happened shivu…??.u can share wd me…
Shi:- No…there is no prb…
Ani:- plz tell…i knw there is something…u r lost wd..
Shi:- lil angry…no nothing is their…y r u forcing…if I feel comfortable.. .I will share by myself…???
Ani:- (deeply hurt)….fine…dat means I don’t consider me friend…then whts need/use of sitting here…started leaving weeping…
Shi:- realising wht he said…
Rushed behind her…(holds her by his hand’s.. .)
Shi:- I m sorry…
Ani:- no need…
(Started leaving…shivaye looks on….NAZDEEK HAI DIL K…plays in BG)…
@Raizada house…
G:- Advay….Singhania’s will b coming anytime…dont create any scene infront of them…
A:- yes mom…
(He was busy doing something in his phone…)
G:- here they are…welcome…
(She greets Singhania’s….)
G:- (to girl…u r so pretty..)
Nani:- Advay atleast hv a look…
Ad:- who was not at all interested in seeing her…was forced to look cz Dadi of nani…
(As soon as he looked up…his Jaw drops..lookin girl…)
Ad:- The photograph girl…???
(Yes the girl is Ashwini)…
Screen freezes on Advay blushing but shocked face…
AUTHORS NOTE:- As I have informed u in previous episode dat I won’t b writing nxt part…..so this part is not written by me….but it’s written one of my ff reader SHREYANVI….i hope u guys liked it.. do share ur views in comments section…
P.s:- hello guys this is shreyanvi.. ..i hope u all liked the episode….I don’t know whether it was good enough or not…cz logesh bhai is such an amazing writer nd it was very tough for me to continue frm where he left…i hope I kept up to ur expectations…..if u feel it was bore than.. plz forgive me…..nd nxt part will b written by LOGESH BHAI only…so just tolerate my bakwas chappy for one day….dont discontinue his ff cz of me….dont forget to share ur views…
Lots of love…???
Take care…
Shreyanvi……
63 Comments
Loved his episode???
Shreyanvi if u say that mein tumhe ek jhaanp p deevar satjayenki….
This is so beautiful episode…
Pinky deserves it… But for what she is doing now in ib she deserved more than this…
Adwini ?? icon watch ipkknd but I loved this…nani drama?… I need one more Chile batoora. ?
So funny…. Is this cmplt episode by u.?…. If yes the really u have got the writing style of my rakhi bro by reading his ff …. I couldn’t guess it was someone other than rakhi bro..
Good work….
I don’t mind who writes the story… U both can write … Shreyanvi continue ipkknd part and logu bro in part…
Loved it a lot…waiting to see ashwini getting in love with advay…
Coming to rikara…
Om understands gauricso well … I am glad in this ff their is no their hate love…
I love this ff cause I want to see this caring understanding loving omkie….
Coming to shivika
I hope they express their love…soon…
Anika’s POV is funny ?( even though its not funny I found it funny… Wierd na.. I know I am a little )
Coming to ruvya..
Bhavya thinking how can he shout on me … Duffrer is scared if me I don’t need to worry?
I am not a ruvya fan but I like ruvya in ur ff
I think ur tired reading this long stupid comment… By me… Rakhi bro u should bear this cause u made ur rakhi sis?…..
Shreyanvi u better not read this …? as its so long u might get bored…
Aren’t me stupid to warn u not to read my comment after u finish reading…
( know I am a little weir maybe a little more, cause wouldsomeone choose this pagal logu as rakhi bro? ??Joking yaar carry on….
Wierdy
Aliza
Hi Aliza dear…yes this complete chappy is written by me….
U knw u r so cool…just like me…even I do such things in comments section….????…apni acchi jamegi…friends..????
U too is like… No need to ask… Beware of me… Before making frndship . no escape.. Uwill be trapped ?? .. R U SURE u want to be frnd with ME???…
If yes the OK let’s make a crazy tornade friendship????…
Saku,please read 1st part of my new ff and comment dear???????how are you????
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Awesome update di and Bhai…
U too is like… No need to ask… Beware of me… Before making frndship . no escape.. Uwill be trapped ?? .. R U SURE u want to be frnd with ME???…
If yes the OK let’s make a crazy tornade friendship????
Ashwinee I am so sry I sent the msg to shreyanvi but it was sent to u .. Pls ignore… I am a cute little mischievous kid… Pls do misunderstand me???
That’s absolutely fine aliza…??
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Your profile pic is nice ashwine..I guess its pari holding shivaays finger?????
Thank you Bhai??? and your guess is correct
Superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr…… I loved it to the core bhai… Waiting for next one……
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tqqqqqqqqqqqq sooooooooooooo much maha….all credit goes to shreyanvi…she wrote this part…read 1st part of my new ff and comment…its in my profile…????????????????????????????????
saku dii you rocked the episode i like it very much….i waiting for his messege about this ff i did nt get that.. but i got it from the home page itself thank god…
episode was nice.. keep writing…
tqqqqqqqqqqqqqq soooooooooooooo much criz…..all credit goes to shreyanvi…….take care..byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee……?????????????????????
awesome
Link for 1st part of my new ff…plssss read and comment charitha…????
http://www.tellyupdates.com/ishqbaaz-omkara-ki-dulhania-rikara-fan-fiction-episode-1-rikara-entry/
Happy DURGASHTAMI to you and your family ????
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It is nice one dear
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nice
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logesh bahi i felt little difference in the writting style and i was not wrong it sanother person only ehhe
shreya u just nailed it soo lovely chappy dont calll it boring :)* im waiting for the next part bhai :)*
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Awww my sweet Saku this part was beautifully written…i miss reading your stories, so this is like a treat for me…thank you…and thank you Logesh for letting Saku write this part…take care.
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Awesome fabulous part…loved it waiting 4 next update soon
tqqqqqqqqqqqq sooooooooooooo much niriha….all credit goes to shreyanvi…keep reading..keep commenting dear…byeeeeee….take care…????????????????
nice part.please update next part soon.
Yes…please register in tellyupdates…so that i can send you the link whenever i update?????Tqqqqqqqq veryyyyyy much..i will update mostly on sunday..???take care..
Link for 1st part of my new ff…plssss read and comment….?????
http://www.tellyupdates.com/ishqbaaz-omkara-ki-dulhania-rikara-fan-fiction-episode-1-rikara-entry/
Happy DURGASHTAMI to you and your family ??????
Hiiii bro? oh sry sry hiiii sis?? I forgot dat dis epi was wrote by u shreyanvi dr.?actually u did an amazing job dr??.it must be hard 4 u 2 continue someone’s ff dat too without harming his story?? bt u did it so well dat I couldn’t tnk even 4 a moment dat dis was written by someone else other dan logesh.?? though I knew dis epi was written by u I forgot it coz ur writing style is same as logesh’s.I admit dat there was some mistakes too.bt they r small ones so it cnt be counted??? I loved d scene where aniri imagining d reaction of shivkara’s reaction after knowing d truth. I can imagine their expressions?????? n i’m sooooo happy dat they pushed pinky frm stairs.uski to OMM ho gayi????? she deserved it.??? n i’m happy dat om forgave gauri. He understands her so well.hope he trusts gauri like dis in d show too?☹☹ so congratulations shreyanvi! ?Coz u successfully completed d epi.eagerly waiting 4 nxt epi.bye tc dr
Tqqqqqqqqqqq sooooooo much dinu for such a huge comment…Are you busy????All the credit goes to shreyanvi…Please read 1st part of my new ff and comment ???????????????????
awesome write up Shreyanvi and Kudos Logesh to choose a very good writer to write the episodec in continuity…very nice and lively episode…looking forward for the next update
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Shreyanvi superb episode dr.. Waiting for next epi.. Update ASAP..
aiiiii dhwani….How are you???Plsss enable your wall…I am not able to post the links in your wall…Happy DURGASHTAMI to you and your family..link for 1st part of my new ff…plsssss read and comment dear????????
link for 1st part of my new rikara ff..plsssss read and comment ???
http://www.tellyupdates.com/ishqbaaz-omkara-ki-dulhania-rikara-fan-fiction-episode-1-rikara-entry/
Really nice
Link for 1st part of my new ff dear…plsss read and comment ????
http://www.tellyupdates.com/ishqbaaz-omkara-ki-dulhania-rikara-fan-fiction-episode-1-rikara-entry/
Hpy DURGASHTAMI to you u nd ur family ????????
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u know what you are mad logesh. a really cute and funny and sweet part. very nice and warm shreyanvi?????????????????♥️???
Tqqqqqqqqq soooooo much madhu…all credit goes to shreyanvi???????plssss read 1st part of my new ff and comment ???????
logesh I have read it too and it is really heart warming but I am angry with you for not updating omkara and gauri
Sorry madhu..i will try to update today..Plssss comment in upcoming parts dear??????How was durgashtami for you????
yay bada maza aaya pinky ponky donkey deserved it…..
shreyu di can I call u that , you wrote my dream of punishing that ponky
it was very entertaining hoping to read more of your teamwork
waiting for shivkara’s reaction
love you guys
Tqqqqqqqqq soooooo much aashi chutki…al credit goes to shreyanvi???????read 1st episode of my new ff and comment chutki??????
Shreyanvi you wrote super well !…
It was totally wonderful and i am speechless…
I must say you are a damm grt writer ?
Bro waiting for next part…
Updt soon & Take care…
RiaNa ?
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Awesome yaar…. Loved it to the core…
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It was awesome shreyanvi….. i loved it…..
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Awesome.U just nailed it dear.???
Keep writing dear.
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Sorry for the late comment.
Always like ,nice episode
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.its out???????read and comment
Hi Logesh….its me Parichayhin…..thank u for helping me in registering here……I haven’t read your this post till now but I am going to read it now……thank u once again❤
tqqqqqqqqqqqqqq sooooooooooooooo much dear…actually 17 th part was written by my friend shreyanvi…I will slowly update this in wattpad…In tellyupdates i will update fast…In wattpad i updated only till 9th part…..Tqqqqqqqqqqqq veryyyyyyy much for your comment…post ur stories here soon…All those who commented in this and previous episode will support you….??????????????????????????????????
Welcome dear…..oh,its really nice shreyanvi….ok….welcome again?…..
I am trying to understand this website yet….
awsm saku dear… Lovely epi