Fan Fiction

Ishqbaaz-GAURI Aur OMKARA (Rikara ff) episode 17

Note:- I m making some changes in Ashwini’s character …..nd the proposal for advay is frm SINGHANIA’s…
Also I m adding nani’s character…

KINDLY IGNORE GRAMMATICAL MISTAKES…ND FORGIVE ME FOR TYPING ERRORS…..

@Raizada House…

Ganga:- Advay beta…listen to me…at least meet the girl once…..
Advay:-no mom…i told u many times naa….i m not interested in all this stuff.. ..
G:- but ….
(Cut by advay)
A:- I said no….(lil angry)…no more discussion on this matter….
{Saying this he left for office….leaving Ganga annoyed}…
Nani:- wht happened to chiku..???..y was he this much angry on u???
G:- nothing mom…same drama regarding his marriage ….he is not at all listening to me….i m not getting wht should I do of ur chiku?? .. .
Nani:- don’t worry….leave everything on me….i have a plan…
(She whispers something in her ears….which was obviously muted)

@oberoi mansion…
Our teen tigada kaam bigada….was ready wd their plan of ruining pinky….nd as per plan….Anika nd bhavya started scaring pinky….
Bhavya started moving towards hall…nd pinky stared following payal’s sound…
Pinky:- oh my mata??….whos this..???
Pinky was hell scared …..she was all drenched by sweat….now anika added scary sounds like…sound of running water…opening window….blowing winds sound….
Pinky:- bhoot…bhoot…bachaw…someone save me…
Anika: Plan A successful.. .now it’s time for plan B..(lookin at gauri …gave her Thumbs up..)..
Gauri now smartly made curtains fall on pinky…nd now pinky could not see anything…
Gauri (thinking):- U hv troubled my omiee so much…so this one is for torturing him nd making him cry….nd pushed her down frm stairs…
Pinky felled down…nd started screaming.. .
P:- shivaye …mummyjiii…
(Hearing her scream everyone rushed down….bhavya was standing near entrance of terrace as soon as see saw them coming down she signalled anika…nd anika switched on the lights…nd trio rushed towards their room…)
Ani:- giving hi5 to rivya….finally..dat kdwa karela Karla is lying on floor.. .
Riya:-kdwa karela…???
Ani:- wht shuld I call her or else….whenever she opens her mouth only bitter things comes out…..??..no wait..she is not karela…
Riya:- (confused)??? y…???
Ani:- areee…calling her karela means…insulting karela….nd u knw naa….karela is my fav…
RiYa:- (giving impossible wala look…)…dii…nothing can happen of u…

(Nd trio burst into laughter…started giggling as their plan got successful…their convo was interrupted by sounds which were coming frm hall…)

G:-I think everyone came down…nd we shuld also go…so dat knw one doubts us….
Bha:- di.. u r r8…
(Trimurti left their room…nd started going towards hall…nd stood their as if nothing happened…)
To their surprise pinky was lying on floor….their was slight injuries on her head…also her leg was twisted…aniriya looked towards each other in shock…
Gauri :- di…pinky aunty got severely injured…wht will we do now..??(worried)..??
Ani:-don’t now ri…i just hope she is fine??
Shi:-Mom…mom…r u ok..??? Hw did dis happened…
Pinky :-SHIVAYE.. .save me…their..their ..are ghost in our house…she will…??..she will kill me….
Ru:- ahhh….mummy…jumped on om…his legs was around omkara’s waist…
Om:- wht the hell….???…just get down r8 now…
Ru:- wht the hell…wht the hell..kya..???if that ghost come nd kill me then I will go in real hell o..???..plz save me..
Shi:-stop it rudra…their is nothing like ghost nd all…i think mom might hv watched horror movie…
P:-no…look…i m hearing Payal’s sounds…dont u getting…see door opened nd someone came inside…??

(Everyone confused ….whts wrng wd her..??)

Om:- choti maa…no one is their…no one is harming u…
P:-no..someone is their…nd started laughing nd crying at same time..(I knw u will feel weird…but afterall she was under bhang influence…but still if u don’t feel logic…then…i can’t do anything….u hv to adjust????)
Pinky:- someone wants to kill me….someone pushed me down frm stairs….
Shi:- mom..who pushed u..?? Just tell me…i will not leave that person…
(Hearing this AniRiYa went in dream sequence.. .in which shivaye was throwing their bags out….dadi was scolding their mom…
Anika’s POV..
Shi:- How dare u hurt my mom…???..
Ani:- look shivaye..i m sorry…plz don’t get angry…i didn’t mean to hurt her..???.
Shiv:-.oh just stop ur drama…nd get out of my house r8 now…just get lost..nd don’t show me ur face…???
POV ends..
Gauri’s POV
Om:- Gauri…i thought u will solve this maturely ..but u ended hurting choti maa…??..if anything happens to her shivaye will break…if shivaye does anything stupid…then No one is worst than me…??
G:- no om u r mistaken..i hv done this for u..??..i never thought it will become so serious…???
Om:-just stop it…everything is over between us…nothing is their…just get out…
POV ENDS…
Looking anika nd Gauri’s condition bhavya started thinking…but ended up thinking that in her case it’s diff…rudy can’t shout on me…he is still over om???…their thoughts were disturbed by dadi’s scream)..
Dadi:- (lil angry)… pinky…???
Everyone stood confused…
Shi:-y r u shouting mom…??..already she felled down…her head is bleeding.. .nd she is talking weird nd is scared…nd U r shouting on her…???
Dadi:-what else u want me to do…???….she has done nashaa.. .she took bhang.. .look at her antics.. doest she look drunk..???
Everyone looked at pinky….who was not in her senses nd was murmuring something.. ..

Dadi:-that’s y she is talking this baseless things…get her to room…nd No one pushed her…cz of overdose she might hv herself felled down…
Shi:- No..dadi..u r mistaken..hw can mom do dis..??
Dadi:- SHIVAYE.. just look at her..??..she is not in her senses….pinky always did mistakes but I never told her anything…but whts all this…??..wht example is she setting before u all..??..guests r their in house…nd she is drunk..??..wht they will think abt us..???…let her come to senses I will deal wd her later.. .
(Seeing dadi’s anger…aniriya started sweating nd panicking….gauri was abt any to say something but anika stopped her by holding her hand…om noticed gauri’s expression nd got suspicious…)
Janvi…dadi nd sharmila left place…while shivomru brought pinky to her room…shivaye layed her on bed…
Om:- SHIVAYE.. I hv called doctor..he is on his way…
Shiv:- nodded…
After sometime doctor came…he did dressing of her wound….
Shiv:- is everything fine .. ??
Doc:- yes..head injury is not so deep…she will recover from it within 2 days…but their is hairline fracture in her leg…..so we need to plaster it…
Hearing this AniRiYa was drenched in pool of guilt.. .
G:- it’s cz of me…my stupid plan…i should I thought that this can be dangerous…we must hv thought abt consequences?????
I hope aunty gets fine soon…
A:- no…its not ur fault princess…its my fault…being a elder sister..i should hv explained u…but instead I supported u in this…
Bhavya:- di…nd Dadi is blaming aunty for the thing she didn’t even commited.. .i m feeling so guilty…?
Ani:- don’t worry..i will make everything fine…u trust me naa???
RiYa:- more than our self.. .
Trio shared a hug….nd left for their respective rooms…

@Raizada Office…
Advay was in meeting…giving presentation…
PA:- sir ur phone…
Advay:- Cant u see…i m in meeting..??….tell them to call later…
Pa:- sir..its ur mom…nd she is sounding worried…
Advay:- what…ok guys we will continue tomorrow…u may leave…after everyone left conference room…he answered call…
Ad:- wht what happened mom..????
Mom:- beta…maaa..
Ad:- nani…??..wht happened to nani.. ???
G:-she is not eating anything….not even taking medicines….nd fainted cz of hunger…
Ad:-don’t worry mom…i m coming…nothing will happen to Dadi.. .
G:-ok…
(As soon as Advay diconnected call…ganga winked at nani nd murli…on the othere hand nani was having her fav chole bhatura…???…)
While nani asked murli for one more bhatura…they heard advay’s car sound…nd in tension nani placed her plate under bed…nd layed on bed..acting unconscious ….
Advay rushed nan’s room…
Ad:- tears were rolling through his eyes…nani…whts all this y r’nt u eating anything…
Nani:-Advay beta….i m old soul…i don’t want live anymore…
Ad:-no nani…y r u saying like that…
Nani:- I had many dreams…but looks like they r never gonna fulfil.. .I will die before that only…
Ad:- nani…dont say such things….i m here naa…ur chiku will not let anything happen to u..nd regarding ur dreams..I will fulfill it..just say once…
N:- no u can’t.. .
Ad:- there is nothing which Advay can’t do…
N:- then..i …i want to see u getting married..before I take my last breath..promise me u will do as I say..(winking at ganga????).
Ad:- understanding nani’s drama..ok nani I will do as I say.. .I will meet the girl u want…i promise..
Nani:- (excitedly) really….then she is coming in evening…
Ad:- (shocked??? ) wht…???
N:-yes…
Ad:- waise nani…how was chole bhatura..???
N:- it was so yummy.. .I want more…
(Soon realising wht she said…i mean..ganga u say…)
Advay staring ganga..
Ga:- I hv call to attend…i will b back…(rescued)…now only nani was left…nani was looking down.. like a small child does when he thinks he caught while stealing chocolates frm fridge..???
Ad:- cupping nani’s face…wht is this nani..wht was need..
U can’t even imagine..hw much worried I was…dont do this again…
Nani:-no..i will not do..?..i will do arrangements for evening..dont do any gadbad..u hv promised me…remember dat.. .. .
Ad:- (thinking)..hmmm ..i hv promised u…but wht if girl herself refuse to marry me…(smirking??)

@OBEROI MANSION…
Gauri was passing by omkara’s room cz her room was beside his room…..suddenly someone pulled her inside…
G:- whts this om….??..someone will see us…
O:- holding her more closer…..nahhh…noone is gonna see us…
G:- accha…
Om:-hmmmm.. .
Thinking…wht happened to her….y is she so quite.???…
Om:- (hugging her frm back…his hands were on her belly…)…wht happened.. .?? Y is my chirraiya so lost…???
Ga:- hmmmm…
Om:- just tell baby…
Gauri:- woh ….w..o…h….actually…
Om:- kahi…choti maa.. .
G:- (gulping saliva)….promise me u will not get angry…nd scold me..
O:-promise jaanu…plz tell me..whts bothering u..
Gauri told him everything any their plan…also that she pushed pinky frm stairs…(tears were rolling through eyes)…om I m really very sorry…i never thought that this will get so serious….i m very guilty..
Om:- cupping her face…oh my chiraiya did mistake…??…i knw u did this for me….but if u will hurt choti maa…then wht will b difference between her nd u..???u r my sweet baby…nd babies never harm anyone r8..??
G:- nodding…?..u r not angry ???
O:- hmmm…lil bit..but it’s k..i knw ur intention was not wrng…but don’t do such stupid thing again…ok…
G:- I promise I will not repeat…
O:- Gauri choti maa is not bad by heart….oneday she will surely accept me…nd if u want to win her…then win by love not by hatred.. .??
G:- thanks babu????…i will win her for u…nd it’s a promise…
O:- whos babu..???
G:-uhhh???
O:- no.yaar…dont call me by dat name…atleast give me nick name matching to my standards…(doing his hook step)
G:- ummmm???…wht abt GABBAR.. ?
O:- gabbar…but y..???
G:- arre…its said naa BETA SOOJA WARNA GABBAR AAJAYEGA AUR YEH SUNKE BACCHE SO JAATE HAI…WAISE HI AAPKI SHAYARI SUNKE LOG SOOJATE H..???(giggles for her reply)
O:- very funny…(glared her)…
G:-yaa…nd rushed out…laughing…
O:- this will cost u harder Gauri.. .?????

@Terrace…
SHIVAYE is seen working on lappy…but was lost somewhere…
Ani:- shivu.. ???…r u busy…??
Shi:- (no response…)
Ani:- this tym lil louder….shivaye…
Shi:- yes.. y r u shouting…i can hear…
Ani:- Oh..really..???…u don’t think so…i m calling since 2min but u were lost…
Shi:-hmmmm
Ani: (sitting beside him)…why happened shivu…??.u can share wd me…
Shi:- No…there is no prb…
Ani:- plz tell…i knw there is something…u r lost wd..
Shi:- lil angry…no nothing is their…y r u forcing…if I feel comfortable.. .I will share by myself…???
Ani:- (deeply hurt)….fine…dat means I don’t consider me friend…then whts need/use of sitting here…started leaving weeping…
Shi:- realising wht he said…
Rushed behind her…(holds her by his hand’s.. .)
Shi:- I m sorry…
Ani:- no need…
(Started leaving…shivaye looks on….NAZDEEK HAI DIL K…plays in BG)…

@Raizada house…
G:- Advay….Singhania’s will b coming anytime…dont create any scene infront of them…
A:- yes mom…
(He was busy doing something in his phone…)
G:- here they are…welcome…
(She greets Singhania’s….)
G:- (to girl…u r so pretty..)
Nani:- Advay atleast hv a look…
Ad:- who was not at all interested in seeing her…was forced to look cz Dadi of nani…
(As soon as he looked up…his Jaw drops..lookin girl…)
Ad:- The photograph girl…???
(Yes the girl is Ashwini)…
Screen freezes on Advay blushing but shocked face…

AUTHORS NOTE:- As I have informed u in previous episode dat I won’t b writing nxt part…..so this part is not written by me….but it’s written one of my ff reader SHREYANVI….i hope u guys liked it.. do share ur views in comments section…

P.s:- hello guys this is shreyanvi.. ..i hope u all liked the episode….I don’t know whether it was good enough or not…cz logesh bhai is such an amazing writer nd it was very tough for me to continue frm where he left…i hope I kept up to ur expectations…..if u feel it was bore than.. plz forgive me…..nd nxt part will b written by LOGESH BHAI only…so just tolerate my bakwas chappy for one day….dont discontinue his ff cz of me….dont forget to share ur views…
Lots of love…???
Take care…
Shreyanvi……

Logesh.M

An ardent rikara fan.????

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