Haiiiiiii dear readers…How are you all???Readers for my ff is gradually decreasing!!!!
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So I am not happy…But deepavali went well for me..I thought to post pictures of my deepavali dress,family pics in Tellyupdates…Soon I will post it in my wall..
How you all celebrated deepavali..Please tell in comments…Also in our state(Tamilnadu,south india) reason for deepavali festival is Lord Krishna killed Demonking
Narakasur..What is the reason behind deepavali festival in North India????Please tell this too in comments…I am eager to know about this..
Because in North they are celebrating Dusserah as Lord Ram’s victory over Ravanan..But in south india Dusserah Is for Maa Durga..
We are considering dusserah As victory of Durga over Mahishasur…Like this reason behind the festivals vary between us..
So please tell reason behind the festival deepavali..
I AM REALLY SORRY FOR UPDATING THIS STORY AFTER SUCH A LONGGGGGG DELAY!!!!!!!! I AM NOT CAPABLE OF WRITING TWO
FAN FICTIONS AT THE SAME TIME.I UNDERSTOOD IT!!!!!REALLY VERY SORRY DEARS….
IF YOU HAD MISSED 17TH PART,WHICH WAS WRITTEN BY SHREYANVI,TAKE A SNEAK PEAK IN THIS LINK:
Episode 17
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RECAP: Advay was shocked as the girl whom his parents decided to get married to him is ASWINI..He was at cloud nine..
Small Misunderstanding between Shivika…AniRiVya pushes pinky from Stairs..Dadi scolds pinky for having Bhaang..
Now, lets get into 18th episode…
CREDIT : ParichayHin.
My friend ParichayHin is doing great help to me in writing both ff’s..Please read her story..She is an awesome writer.She is new to TU..pls support her..
RAIZADA MANSION:
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The moment Advay’s eyes fall on Aswini he was not able to take his eyes???????????????❤❤❤❤❤Ganga shakes him a
little to make him bring out of his lost state and then asked..
GANGA: Advay beta, do you like her?
Advay comes out of his dreamland..????
ADVAY: Haan ma, I want To Kiss Her..?????????????
GANGA: Kyaaaaaa??????(She asks in big shock)
Advay realized what he said and bites his tongue..
ADVAY: I mean , I want to marry her…Double OK for this proposal…???????????????
Aswini hears everything and She starts to Blush from the time Advay was looking at her as LOVE SICK PUPPY…He was Looking at her like he is gonna eat her..
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After Advay Agrees for the proposal Nani says that
NANI: I want to Bring My Daughter-in-Law as soon as possible..Let us fix date for Engagement..
So they starts to discuss about engagement date while Advay and Aswini were stealing Glances and blushing too…
After some discussion elders decides Engagement date..(Date is Suspense)
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OBEROI MANSION:
Anika left in tears..Shivaay Goes to Anika’s room…He says Sorry Again,but this time his sound comes out of his mouth just as a Whisper.
Anika Is surprised hearing his sound like this and She looked at his eyes.
Looking at his eyes Anika can easily feel that he is really Sorry.?????
She tries to say something but before that Shivaay starts…
SHIVAAY: I am so Sorry Panika. I didn’t mean to shout at you. I was worried about something else and ended up shouting on you. I am really very sorry.
ANIKA: You have never shouted on me before and it has hurt me. I can’t see your anger on me..!!!
Anika says getting a little emotional…
SHIVAAY: I am so sorry Anika…I promise I will never do this again…
ANIKA: Pinky Promise?(She says bringing her little finger in front of him)
SHIVAAY: Why are you dragging my Mom’s name in this??(He asks confused)?????
ANIKA: Areyyyy Pagal…It’s my unique Language..(She winks)
SHIVAAY: Yeah..You are Unique Darling…(He was mesmerized by her Antics)
ANIKA: What you said now???(Anika asked him)
SHIVAAY: Nothing Anika(He bites his tongue)??????
ANIKA: What about Pinky Promise??(She again brings her little finger)
SHIVAAY: Pinky Promise…I can’t see you sad Anika….So can I get your usual 1000 watts bright smile now???
Anika acted dramatically and says
ANIKA: Hmmmm..let me think ….
But they ended up Laughing and Shivaay Gets his Anika’s bright smile or better say Laugh…????????????????
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BUHARI RESTAURANT:
The three devils Lavanya,Anshi & Mitali as usual sitting in a corner table were discussing how to harm(kill) Gauri.
Luckily Shreya Was sitting beside their table. Seeing them she recognized them and quickly started to record their venomous plan in her mobile.
That too video recording…Unknown to Shreya’s presence they were planning how to kill Gauri.!!!
After successfully recording their plan in her mobile Shreya leaves that place and then sends that video to their mobiles In WhatsApp..
NOTE: SHREYA GOT THE MOBILE NUMBERS OF THREE DEVILS FROM OMKARA..
Along with that video she sends a threatening message also saying that “if they don’t come to Sankarji temple before evening then she will send this
video to Police”…
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THE SCREEN FREEZES WITH SHOCKING FACES OF THREE DEVILS..
APOLOGIES: Sorry Dinu,yashu,dhwani,etc…for no Rikara scenes..Please don’t avoid this episode…In next episode I will give more RIKARA scenes..
Also more Ruvya scenes….Please follow this story till End…….Plssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss?????????????
DO YOU ALL LIKED IT?????PLEASE DROP DOWN YOUR COMMENTS….EPISODE CREDIT GOES TO MY SISTER ParichayHin…
NEXT UPDATE WILL BE 4TH PART OF “Omkara Ki Dulhania”…..Do you all like that ff????Please tell me honestly…..Plsssssssssssssssssss
Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee….I will post Diwali pics in my wall soon….????????????????
SEE THE MONTAGE OF THIS EPISODE..I LOVED THIS PIC TO THE COREEEEEEEEEEEEE…..MY SHIVIKA ❤❤❤????SLAYS..???????????????????????????????????
21 Comments
Amazing part bhai….loved it….coming to AdNi story u can spice it wd twist y always sweet sweet….do think on my view….overall gazab ka epi…
@parichayhin…u did a great job….i knw it’s big task to continue someone else write up as I hv faced it…so no issue over this chappy…u was superb..
Also I m following ur ff…nd it’s really intresting..sorry for not commenting on it..i will surely do on nxt part…bye take care….
Thank you so much sis for reading my story….if u get time pls try to leave a feedback behind….
Yeah it’s really difficult as my and his writing style is totally different and as he has already posted 17 parts so it’s really difficult to continue his story from there….I just hope that I haven’t disappointed any of his readers….I am so glad that u liked it….thank u.
Nice.. Post soon.. I loved Advay’s part in your epi ?…..
Hi bro….how r u?
Thank u so much for giving the honour but real credit goes to u only as it’s your story….main plot solely belongs to u…..You have given me some synopsis of the last chapter and I have just tried to expand that so the real credit is yours only…..but I m feeling so honored because of this gesture of yours….thank you thank you so much…..
About the story it is really awesome…. bonding between the couples are getting strong and lovely day by day….I m curious to know what is going to happen next……
Khidkitod update Bhai and ParichayHin di…good going…loved the update …..Will wait for the next one
Thank you….but the real cradit goes to Logesh only….
Tremendous shot bhai.No more words to pen.
And Parichayhin u did a great job dear.Bye Take care.Keep writing many more…
Thank you….I was worried thinking what if I disappoint any of Logesh’s readers as his and my writing style is totally different but I am glad that u all are giving positive response…. Though still real cradit goes to him only…..
Thank u
Very nice…keep up the good work.
Nice…
very nice update
Awesome update….
It is nice one dear.. In North India also dusheraa is celebrated for both the reason and Diwali is celebrated on the occasion of return of Lord ram to aayodhya after the excil of fourteen years….. Hope I am able to clarify your confusion…
Very Nice updt bro…
Advay looking at Aswini like LSP was Cute ??
From where did u get these kind of names like buhari n all ??…Awesome
Shivika were sweet n funny ??
Lovely Last part lol…Three devils plan going to be FLOPPPP !!! ?????…
Bless SHREYA ?
And the montage was awesome ??
Well…Bro in west bengal…We celebrate diwali during Kali Puja…??
Updt soon
Take care ?
Yeah bro thanks for d links… n dis chappy was a fab one… loved it….. post nxt chap of dis ff soon……
Gauri aur omkara ff la there is no rikara 🙁 🙁 Hope next epi has more intense rikara scenes.. ParichayHin great yaar.. Advashwini and shivika scenes are great.. U have written it well yaar!! But no rikara scenes.. Soo sad 🙁
Haiiii dhwani????link for 4th part of “Omkara Ki Dulhania”..pls read and comment ????
http://www.tellyupdates.com/ishqbaaz-omkara-ki-dulhania-rikara-ff-episode-4-omkaras-funny-antics/
Hiiiiiiii bro! Hw r u? Hw was ur Diwali? Celebrated well? ??? of course u should hv celebrated well? bt no diwali 4 us dr.coz i’m a Sinhalese??bt i’m excite 2 know about ur diwali??? finally d most awaited epi had come. Advini’s engagement date got fixed???? bt our advay is so desperate ?? he said “I want 2 kiss her” ??without fear before his mom????? n loved shivika scene too?? shivay apologized sweetly 2 annika??? bt no rikara scenes? ??????????? bt I forgive u? 4 only dis time? as i’m in a vry gd mood??☺?coz my omki confessed his love in IB???????yayyyy??? d most awaited scene. N dat was d best confession I hv ever seen??????my om/kj nailed it.??bt gauri didn’t forgive him?? i cried seeing om crying n begging 4 forgiveness like a crazy lover boy????????k dr I will stop here. Eagerly waiting 4 nxt epi.plz post it soon?? byeee dr tc??
it was nice but not up to my expectations bhaiyaa
well better luck next time ???????
Amazing episode bhai i am so excited for the next part sorry for this short comment busy with studies
Loved this episode to the core.??????Keep writting bhaiya.