Hello peeps…???? Once again I am up with OS in same day exam ka tnsn, bride swapping news and new promo all have made me crazy may be so only I kept all my book aside and started writing it. Hope you all liked it…
Anika wake up rather to say stand up from her bed like a machine and walk in direction of bathroom and remembering that how she said yes for instant marriage with Daksh just because she can’t tolerate that hate for her Shivay’s eyes with love and care too and this is making her weak more and more and moreover Tia’ve failed her every attempt to expose her and every failed attempt of her to expose Tia in front of Shivay is growing Shivay’s doubt on her about she is obsessed with him and she is gold digger and all…
So finally she felt like she can’t win this battle due to so many reasons and she said yes to Daksh’s proposal and then she felt change in Shivay’s behavior towards her, He become more softer and caring but he failed to express this due to his ego but now she started noticing it but she don’t have guts to ask him about that…
And with all this thoughts running in her mind she take her bath and dressed her self in bridle wear which is gifted by Shivay and Oberois on behalf of Daksh and this once again make her cry but she wiped her tear and make her self ready for big day of her life which will change her destiny.
But in all this thinking she failed to notice that Sahil is chatting with someone over Skype rather to say sawing her on Skype as soon as Anika got ready and come out from her thinking station she fins Sahil there so and she heard him saying
Sahil: Are don’t loose hope. She will be fine and every thing will be alright now be ready for Khidkitod aha na darwaza tod performance of us and our group.
Anika heard this and she asked him
Anika: With whom you are talking??? And which performance??? And which group and all this???
Sahil: Take a chill pill Anika didi me and my friends have prepared a dance for you so I am talking about that…
And he hide his phone screen, an person on call take breath of relief hearing Sahil’s answer but very next second disconnect call hearing Anika’s words
Anika: Then why are you hiding your mobile’s screen…
Sahil: Are, to hide my group from you as its surprise for you.
Anika is not satisfied with his answer but agreed and send him to get ready and soon driver knock door of her home which is send by Shivay and Anika and Sahil settled in car and their drive to Oberoi mansion is silent.
As soon as they enter inside Prinku take her along with her fie final touchup and Sahil signed her that he is fine… And they reach to Prinku’s room and all this while Anika’s eyes are searching for Shivay as her heart wants to talk to him for last time. But she do find him anywhere and silently he let Prinku do her touch up but soon Prinku leave room with excuse that some one is calling her and as soon as Prinku leave from their Anika lost in all the moment of her and Shivay and their nok-jok and their dance and all but this is stopped by loud voice of shutting door and she stand up and looked into direction and find Shivay there she want to run in his arms but she don’t do it and she is looking at him and after closing door Shivay started walking in her direction like pediator walk towards its pray and after coming in front of her he speak
Shivay: Anika, You’ve to marry me and that too without knowledge of Daksh and Tia so you’ve to hide your face by your veil when someone come to take you to altar…
Anika stunned hearing him and her self esteem awake and she speak
Anika: I won’t do such cheap things Mr.Oberoi.
Anika’s word anger him but composing him and his anger he speak
Shivay: You don’t have any choice Anika.
Anika: What???
Shivay: Ohhh yeah I forget to inform you that Sahil have been kidnapped by my men and if you don’t do as I say then… You are wise enough to know rest right???
Anika: What??? How can you do this???
Shivay: You don’t have idea how much and what Shivay Singh Oberoi can do… So now just do as I said else…
Anika feel helpless and at a time she is happy that she is going to marry person whom she love but same time she is sad rather to say angry because this is happening without her proper consent and in the way it have to.
Soon Prinku come to take her to altar and she hide herself under veil and crying on her destiny she went to altar and she sit beside Shivay and lifelessly participate in each ritual and they take phera in front of holy fire and completing it Shivay tie mangalsutra around her neck and finally Pinky take her veil up so Shivay can fill vermilion in her hair partisan and same time Prinku take Daksh’s bride’s veil up so he can fill vermilion too but very next second both Daksh and Tia’s face color changes to red due to anger seeing each other and lose their senses and Daksh shout
Daksh: How dare you take place of my Anika???
Tia who is in shock and anger beyond limit due to this sudden turn of event become more angry with this question and she toonlose her sense and forgetting where she is standing she slpped him and speak
Tia: What the hell you think of your self han??? I am not an Idiot like Anika who is dying to marry a pshyco like you who stalk and attack the girl whom he love…
Now rage of anger blind Daksh and he speak
Daksh: Whatever I did is because I love her and I want her but what are you doing being married to a guy you are marrying another guy for the sake of money and moreover you’re potraiting your own husband as your brother at least I am not cheap like you..
Tia: Just shut the hell up.. And
But before they can continue their blaming game realization drawn them hearing clapping sound and there they find Shivay and Sahil and few girls and two inspectors… Now this shocked each and every one beyond limit. And before any one from TiSha can give any explanation Shivay
Shivay: Well played game by both of you, But sorry to inform when Shivay Singh Oberoi open his cards on ground no one can win so now don’t even dare to open your mouth for any lame explanations of your and save energy it will help you in cooperating with cop.
Ahhh I forgot to introduce special guest I invited for you both and pointing at A girl in his mid 20 and he speak meet Miss Nandini and pointing towards other girls who are standing towards either side of that girl Nandini he speak meet Sanay and Tulsi they are the one who helped me in finding out all the true details of you guys..
And Daksh I must say you are man of computers but let me introduce bestest one meet Rivanah and Naina who have hacked your laptop on my saying and where I found crypted files and they are encrypted by Miss sanchi with help of her team Jayshree, Priyanka, Shivika and Sahkti and I come to know after seeing all vedio of that file that you are Anika’s stalker. And trust me Daksh same day I wanted to send you behind bar but mastermind if this plan OmRu, Prinku and Sahil stopped me from doing so and as they have doubt on your linkup with Tia…
And Tia your new helper Priyali, Mukta and Aarya are my employees and that new best friends of your Akshya and Jaaz also are my employees and they are not keeping eye on me on your saying but they are there to inform about each and every move of yours.
Now Tia and Daksh are shocked beyond limit by this counter move of Shivay and they don’t have any word which they an use for them. And Anika is shocked and stunned hearing all this but giving them one more shocj Shivay speak
Shivay: Daksh and Tia let’s welcome last guest for today who will help you in going out of this mansion with due RESPECT.
And he call inspector Satya( Sat_9492), ARK and lady inspector Miss Fama and Lisaa and they handcuffed both Tia and Daksh and drag them out after having bedded talk with Shivay.
As soon as this all completed ShaNky (Shakti and Pinky) and TeNvi (Tej and Jahnvi) bd bye to each guest and now only Oberois family and Anika and Sahil are there and soon Sahil come to Anika and speak
Sahil: So Anika didi kaisa kaha aapko mera and mere group ka Khidkitod na darwazatod performance???
Anika: Sahil, Means you are aware of each and everything and you were talking to…
Shivay cut her in between and speak
Shivay: Yeah you assume it right he was talking to me today morning and I was not sure that plan will success or not but OmRu and Sahil and Prinku are sure and they are like my strength all the time we planned this because I am becoming weak seeing your helpless face and sad all the time.
Rudra: Waise Anika didi are sorry bhabhi we missed you a lot in this plan and I know how hard it for me to hide this all from you..
Anika become angry and speak
Anika: So you all knowing this all and yet you all hide it from me??? Don’t you all find me trustworthy enough to share this??? (With hurt in her voice along with anger)
And elder Oberois choose to keep quite and enjoy this all though they too have lots of question in their mind. And hearing Anika’s question and sensing her feeling that she is hurt Shivay come near to her and make her sit on recliner and he himself bend down to her night and taking her hand in his hand he speak
Shivay: Anika actually Rudra and Sahil wants to include you at very beginning if plan but that time I refused not because I don’t have trust in you, I trust you more then my ownself but someone have kept a watch on you so I don’t include you so they don’t come to know about plan and meanwhile you said yes to Daksh and I am broken after that I wanted to inform everything and want to confess my feeling to you but champ Sahil, OmRu and Prinku become my strength at that time and later one day I Daksh speak I’ll word about you and I even drag you out of Oberoi Mansion and same night I saw you crying on Daksh’s room wall and first I rush to your home but seeing you in same cloth as I saw on wall of Daksh’s room my doubt in Daksh become stronger and U remember you doubted on him and same time your word Tia being married come in mind and we finally laid all our cards and all this happened and I am really sorry for today morning I don’t want to force you but if I ask you just like that Tadibaaz Anika in you will be awake and everything will be won’t work so I did that and seeing you crying while you are marrying me breaking me too but for sake of our future I tolerate all this but now everything is fine so now I would like to make it special…
And he signalled some thing to Saumya and she and OmRu nodded their head and Shivay bring Anika near stage which is till hidden by red and white clothes and as soon as Shivay take off that cloth Anika see whole stage is beautifully decorated with all the available flower in world and a live size photo of her and Shivay from pool part is kept there where they are holding each other and seeing this Anika blush remembering that moment and Shivay smiled seeing her blushing and he bring her on stage and knees down on her knees and take out a box from his pocket and open it and bring a beautiful solitaire ring and hold it in front of Anika and speak
Shivay: Miss Anika rather to say almost Mrs. anika Shivay Singh Oberoi, I Shivay Singh Obeori who always saw taddi to you, fight with you, never trust you and moreover make you cry with my words and deeds but meanwhile I lost my heart to you but when and how that I don’t know but I realized it very soon before you become some one else and now I want to have peaceful life, happy and romantic married life with you so will you marry me without any force???
Anika’s eyes becomes moist hearing him and Anika the chatterbox is turn out to be a silent person and she just nod her head in approval and this bring wise smile on Shivay’s lips and he make her wear ring and later they married to each other with all ritual done by them with happy faces and content heart and Anika become perfect Anika Shivay Singh Oberoi… And as their marriage gift Shivay gifted Sahil’s adoption paper to her which is prepared by best lawyer of city Avians and Hina…☺☺☺
That’s it… Aaj tak ka sabse lambs OS for me. Hope you all liked it… Please please leave your feedback whether its positive or negative…☺☺☺
134 Comments
Loved it….u always come up with ff which really soothes me…after seeing ishqbaaz’s new promo…this came as a relief…❤❤ .
Thanks Dear for your comment and glad to know that my work sooth you… 🙂
you nailed it! 😀
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Nice update…. really loved it..keep rocking pri
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All the while reading this OS I felt like I am watching IB’s upcoming episode… Actually I am wondering what to write in comment to praise your masterpiece work…
But let me starts with my feeling when I started I was like Reding some novel and pain of Anika make me feel sad, Then Shivay’s word and make me angry and I was like typically Indian soap opera type till unvel face, then Tia and Daksh ka blaming game full to filmy an funny, Later Shivay’s revealing everything is like suspense and then family members light moment and Shivay’s proposal and remarriage like perfect happy ending so inshort perfect story for me…???☺☺☺
And now I don’t have proper words to praised your writing skill for the first time I read your and now I am suffering from love at first reading with your writing skill. ☺☺☺???
PS mail me whenever you update any article of yours… And you are brilliantly an amazing writer and perfect player of words…??? Keep it up… Waiting for your mail and I’ll comment here from now on…☺☺☺?
First all of thanks alot for youe this detailed comment and sorry to say I do not know your mail so I can’t mail you any thing and thank you for compliment too… 🙂
It was awesome superb and beautiful ??????. Thanks ? dear for adding me.
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Wonderful awesome mind blowing am out of words to praise you. Am hoping to see this type of story line in the actually serial
Haha Fama as lady inspector ???? I would have just given Tia and Daksh both one tight ? slap them I would have a perfect peace
Hehe you already gve this in comment Fama and happy to know that you liked it and thanks for comment dear…
Thank u for including me in the os di???… this was another Khidki tod fab os…
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U r rocking superb….. lovely……
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Awww…wooowww….it emded…i wish it never…..i want to read it read it and read it..anyways it was nice..infact aoooppperrr
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Wowwwww…….dimple….i m sry for being late…..suprrrrb…..yeh kidhkithod se bhi upar hain….how culd u write such os baby??? Evn i m.included……?????i m blushng…….totally i luvd it soooooo much…n tia n daksh spoke out d truth…i was like dono pagal hain…????? awesummmmm….
Mene pagal bana diya hai dono ko… 😛 And thanks for comment Tsunami… 🙂
Nice OS
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Nice OS dear.. I wish to see same in IB…
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Nice and relaxing OS and you wisely use Promo k scene…
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Khdkitod OS… Enjoyed it alot and it make me smile…
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Okay this is what which can relax us ShivIkains you write it so well… Emotional and filmy and entertaining OS…
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Intriguing and well written OS…
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Great work dear…
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Wow OS with all the emotion written well… Keep writing… Keep smiling… And take care…
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Amazing work
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Shivay is such a player he played his cards so well and that counter strike rather to say move of him is just wow and Daksh and Tia are just idiot… Are they all going to come in serial too????
And Sahil is just Dhamaka pack… Rudra as usual funny and hilarious…
Family is quite good. Prinku ka part is nice too. And Shivay’s each and every word is just sawing real tadibaaz SSO…
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NICE OS
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This OS come as relief after watching new promo wish to see same in IB…
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Nice OS.
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Nice work but dear action is missing and family moments are required to make it perfect else it is like good.
Who cares abt family and action?? The story is all about three brothers…… So we should concentrate on main leads…!!!
Thanks for supporting Sanu baby… :$
Thanks for comment and suggestion dear and according to me required family moments are there and over dose of it will do not give sam charm to OS so I didn’t use it..
Agree with Ria’s suggestion only action and family moment with lil more romance and this OS can be good one
Actually its lovely the way it is.its a one go one shot.Morever its not necessary na tat evryone emotion has to be there.the way PRI wroted won more than 50 readers.so its true its good the way it is.
Thanks for supporting Nandupie it really means alot to me and lucky to have yo, Sanu baby and Tsunami as my friends… …:)
Thanks for suggestion and comment and I think with this much of family moment and action is enough to entertain as I am not writing script of any blockbuster movie….
I read it long back but could not comment as I had not logged in it was a good one dude very nice I liked it a lotttt
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Nice OS. and other mentioned I too wish to see same in IB too.
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Hey Pri you never told us that you do write nerdy you are amazing writer and you writing on y favorite serial ke favorite couple and after reading this I was shocked coz I never thought that you have this skill and this is rocking OS like me… And thanks Hit for sawing me this And nerdy I am going to saw this to everyone including dean sir…???????
Actually I do not like to saw off my strength just like others and about sawing to everyone thanks for marketing my work And for comment too
You rocked girl…
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Nice OS.
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