Hello peeps…????? sorry for this super late update and already I decided punishment for me for this and this is after request o few readers and I.e. I won’t be completing this in this shot I’ll add one more shot to this and thanks for your comments…☺☺☺☺
Shot Five
As soon as Shivay left from office his mind and heart both are thinking about Tia and her words and his mind went to flashback of half hour
Flashback
Shivay is giving presentation for his most important project which will be first project for company “AnShi Construction” after Oberois and Shekhawats merger but all in sudden door of conference room opened with thud and terribly crying and uncontrollably sobbing Tia entered inside and hugged him and speak
Tia: Shivay baby, How can you atop payment for credit card and due to you I am starving from morning plus from last on week we are not together, just tell me Shivay baby are we together or not????
And next second Shivay switch on light of conference room and Tia pretending to be surprised and she silently went from there to Shivay’s cubicle and next second he have to handle Anika’s father as well as financial supporter and all and after that when he went to his cubicle Tia was not there and a sticky note is there which read
“Shivay baby after your marriage you started behaving differently with me and now I am become like a buggage in that house and this hurt me a lot and I feel alone and lonely so I am giving you time to think of action which will decide future of us till tomorrow morning and till then I’ll not come in front of you.”
And Shivay in his anger tore that sticky note into pieces and he try to take out his anger on all visible and breakable things come in his vision but I didn’t calm his anger and finally he thought to have face to face conversation with his wife due to whim this all mess is happening in his life and next second he move to alivator and when he reached to receptionist’s desk he stop and looking into his receptionist Nandini he is about to speak but before that Nandini stand in her place looking his boss at her place in anger and speak
Nandini: Sir I tried to stop Miss Tia and even I told her that your meeting with Mrs.Oberoi’s father is going on but she didn’t give ear to my words and she come up there, I am sorry..
Shivay: (Controlling his anger) Miss Nandini you don’t need to be sorry as you are not at fault and yeah cancel my meetings if there is any and don’t make any one wait I’ll be at office tomorrow morning.
Nandini: But sir it’s just 4:30 and your meeting with European delegate is at 6:00 sir.
Shivay: Do not you heard me I said cancel them Miss Nandini..
And next secot Shivay left from there leaving Nandini confused because according to her, her boos can never cancel his ordinary meeting but today he is cancelling his meeting with European delegate and next she cancelled meetings watching her angry boss waiting for chauffeur to bring his car at entrance door.
And later Shivay left from there.
Flashback end.
Scene shift to Flat
As soon as agent Rudy heard Tia talking with some Dushyant,he informed this OmNika and they decide to follow her to find out to whim she is meeting and Runika kept spy camera along with microphone in purse as well as somehow Rudy fix spy camera on Tia’s watch and in excuse of praising her ear rings Anika fix microphone on it and after Tia left from there OmRu started following her.
And almost after an hour angry Shivay enter in home and he didn’t find any one and he rush to his room and there he saw his wife cuddling with blanket and reading some romantic novel he went to her and snatch book from her hand Anika raised her eyebrows at his action and speak
Anika: What’s wrong with you????
Shivay: Everything. Ever since you step in my life nothing right is happening ever since you come my life, everything is messed up more and more with each passing moments. Top of that you stopped payment of my credit cards and due to you I ignored Tia we had an argument she left from this for the first time for whole night and root if this all is only and only you… And
But before he can continue his blaming game soft hand if his wife land on his both cheeks one by one and she speak
Anika: This is for all your baseless blame you put on me.
Yet Shivay is not out of slap shock his wife have given to him and Anika give it one more time on each cheeks and this time she slapped both cheeks twice and she speak
Anika: This is for being ciwrd at initially and two timing a girl.
Shivay: What the hell was that??? And Imyblames aren’t baseless this all is happening due to you. Everything is going perfect and if you don’t have said yes for this marriage then anyhiw I’ve make my family agree for my marriage with Tia but you didn’t said no and this all happened due to you If you have said No then hamari companies me merger bhi ho gaye vote and him hamari happy life bhi ji rahe hote. but you spoiled every thing.
One again Anika’s anger raised and she saw his hand to Shivay indicating him to stop and next second she speak
Anika: Not a single word after this, now I’ll speak and you’ll be listening to me..’what do you think of yourself huh? And what did you say your life is messed because of me? you can’t blame me for everything. You know what in simple words you are a coward who couldn’t face own parents and present your opinion and decision to them. If you don’t want to marry me you shouldn’t agree at first but no great SSO can’t say no to their parents as it’ll spoil your good boy image in their eyes but do you have ide a your this live-in have already spoiled your image in their eyes and above that you are blaming me for spoiling our life like a typical boy. If you wanted to marry your girlfriend then you have convinced your parents by being stubborn like how you are stubborn in not letting me into your life but no that time you are worrying for deal and merger so you didn’t be stubborn and marries me and noe easily blaming me. You are just a coward but I wasn’t like you the moment I saw you Ibliked you I informed my parents and they put this deal in front of you on my saying only’ She paused for a second and their room was full of silent.
Do you know how a girl will feel when she gets married and comes to her new home or world happily and finds another girl there claiming herself as her husbands girlfriend and hold his hands infront of her where she was the one to hold his hands forever. do you know how it feels when someone says on your face that they don’t love you and not even like you. When a girl is with her husband in their room in their own world and someone comes inside without your permission.’ Her voice started to shake but she never want to show herself weak so she took a deep breathe.
its just a waste of time to talk to you about this. You will not understand this. But make it one thing clear into your mind that I am not the one who messed your life and I didn’t regret marrying you till now but please don’t make me to regret that one day.’
And she turned and settled on bed and covering herself with blanket she dozzed off leaving Shivay lost in thinking about each and every word of her and same time he is caressing his own cheeks where his wife have slapped tightly and in evening without a word they cokked together and had dinner and return to their room and Shivay is about to sleep on cough but Anika speak
Anika: I am expecting you on bed.
Shivay: But you are
Anika cut him in between and speak
Anika: So what do not you’ve control over your self or you are finding me so tempting that you won’t be able to resist me???
Shivay froze on his place because he didn’t expecting her yo be back on her usual self after that outburst but he skip thinking much and move towards bed and take his side and sit on bed an looking into another side in barely audible voice he speak
Shivay: I m sorry for the words…
Anika: Good waise keep one thing in your mind from now on You are my husband and no girl can snatch you from me and yeah soon you’ll throw your Tia out of this flat.
Shivay: Are you serious??? (in his husky voice and looking into her eyes)
Anika keep her hand in his neck and speak
Anika: Yeah my darling hubby soon you will throw her out from this flat.
Shivay: We’ll see who win this challenge???
Anika: Anika Shivay Singh Oberoi don’t like to loose my darling hubby. And as if now good night.
And she press her lips on his lips for fraction of second and then she turned on another side and drift to deep slumber smilingly.
And Shivay touched his lips and his lips curve into smile unknowingly and he lost in thinking about his wife and he to drift to deep slumber soon..
So done with update.. how it is??? Give me your feedback whether its positive or negative….
Jo bhi anaap sanaap dimag me aaya WO San likh dala hai so hope you all like it.. Waiting eagerly for all your comments.. ☺☺☺☺☺????Solent readers plz do comments re…
39 Comments
pri love it love the confidence of anika post next one asap
Awesome
superb…..this is called “perfect pactical story with love “
Woah!! I am just wondering from where you get all stuff of logics!!
I guess it’s enough to give street to my chota brain as it stops all its functions when the time of work just like how Shivaay did in this episode…
I have to say if Anika is shown in this way in the original track also then the trp must be at some other level…
I just like the way all time Anika giving Shivaay a peck on his lips…
Keep going.. keep rocking.. love you
#chocopie #kidkithodwriter
#akkilassynandhupiecutiepie’schocopie
Awesome……anika was amazing in today’s update….
Superb
Nice…anika Rocks..waiting for next part
Hey, i have read all ur ff parts in one go nd i really loved it……hats off to annika confidence i really love her in this attitude!!!!! nd i wish that she was the same in the real ib too!!! God, i miss the old annika, well ur this part was AWESOME!!!!!!??????? plz do post nxt part soon…. eagerly waiting for it
Omg… Its awesome.. I love this anika… Waiting fr tia truth to be out.. Post d next episode fst
Wow dear awesome update???
Awesomeness to core ……..
Fantastic rey……
I don’t have more words chocopie as u know how much I will like this episode and shivay getting slapped n anika answers toh hut hai.
Love you chocopie????
Anika rocked I loved it
SSO deserved it.. loved the update.. come back soon
Finally saw real anika…. I was missing her badly….. This is our anika….i. Love this anika…. Awesome update pri…. Sory i was always comment late…. ??but loved it
Waiting for next??
Fascinating layer of anika. Anika rocked and shivaay shocked. But in shivaay’s pov anika will look like a possessive wife na. Awesome episode chocopie
Wow…so lovely…hahaha keep going on
Frankly Priya di ye sara anap shnap jo aapne likha hai, I liked it very much or I should sat I loved it!!!!!!! I was waiting for this ff since long!!!!! Kahan busy rehte ho di aap, at least apni is fan k bare me toh socha karo!!!!!!!!
wow awesome epi ……I loved anika’s behaviour
Super
Nice update.
Mind bogling update amazing In love with this Anika
Pri this is khidki darwaza of SSO ki dimag todne wali update… Kya kha me update type karti ho kanha kanha se idea lati ho yaar kitni amazing hai ye Anika and I can bet anything if Gul have showed same Anika I’m actual IB then IB will be top on TRP you are an incredible writer girl plz update next part soon… I am excited to read how Anika win and Shivay loose…
Kya bolu is update k liye ye WO update hai Jo ham IB me dekhna chahate the Gul ka to pata nai kab WO ye wali Anika wapas layegi but you perfectly handle situation love you for giving our Anika back…
Pri, ?????????????????????? this is what I am feeling while I am reading this update. Tia is such a crap she is lair and b*t*h and I just want to slap her hard ????????????? plz give slap her too.
Shivay and his anger oh my mata he is angry bird WO bhi red wala according to me at initially but when Anika come into action mode and slapped Shivay I was like ????????????. Wah bahut khub and her outburst is perfectly written she is amazing in this FF I loved her character in this FF actually I don’t like her bechari wala avtar so this s treat to eye and I am eagerly waiting for next shot and plz don’t end this story this what I love the most…
Amazing and superb update and you are superb writer And you use current situation very well in your FF and I am wondering how you get this idea and I didn’t get this but dear I’ve a suggestion plz add ShivIka scene more I missed ShivIka part and hope this don’t demotivate you. Update next part soon dear.
Superb update and you know after reading this part I searched for its another part and read all together in one sitting without a break and dear you did great job in each update and you’ve perfectly played with word and bring Anika which everyone is waiting and you did perfect justice with current situation actually I am too fed up with this all current drama and this weak Anika so I enjoyed your FF thoroughly and don’t end it if you don’t mind then continue it I love to read it more and more and Rudra is quite funny and childish in your FF but I find it cute and their bind in amazing… All in all I love reading your FF and plz update next part soon.
PS I enjoyed Ania’s tactics, outburst and her slap to Shivay a lot.
Darrwaza tod!!! anika’s confidence was mind boggling… It was awesomely fantastically fab written!!!!
Vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvery nice ? it’s superb lovely ? plzzzzzzzzz ???????? update asap
Superb update…waiting fr the next part
i’m a little confused about the last part… it was just like shivaay to blame everything on anika, but after fighting with him, why did anika be sweet with him?
anyways, your writing style is really good pri 🙂