next day….
om’s room ……gauri comes there..
gauri: omkara ji
om: dont call me that if you want to say some thing first call me om
gauri: ok omkara ji
om: what i cant here you ??
gauri: ok ok om now please listen to me
om: ok tell me
gauri: why you are not allowing rudra into buisness
om: gauri there is a problem…
scene shifts to shivays room
anika: what problem
shivay: you will not understand
anika: why
shivay: i told you na that you will not understand
anika: itni tadibaaz…..so rudeeeee….stone singh oberoi
shivay: will you please shut up i want to concentrate in my job
anika: (in mind) now i want to change this sso to shivay
anika takes a glass of water and pours on shivays face
scene shifts to oms room
we can see a wet om and an angry gauri holding an empty glass
om: what is this ????
gauri: i used to do this when.people makes me angy
om: now what do you want
gauri: tell me why you are not allowing rudra into buisness
scene shifts to shivays room
shivay: panika…..
anika: its anika not panika….. now tell me rudras reason otherwise i will throw water on you again
shivay: not needed i will tell you……actually our buisness.is facing some problems and i dont want rudra to know it…..
anika: but shivay heshould also know everything .
shivay: no anika we should not give him pressure….and he dont have the strength to handle these pressures like om and after all he is the smalle
st among us so not now anika…..i will make him enter after all the problems are solved
scene shifts to oms room
gauri: but thats not good om he should understand the ups and downs of the buisnesss if you give him one chance he will come up
om: ok i will talk to shivay
gauri: you should talk to him now om
om: yes i will……….and i love theway you are calling meee….i hate this omkara jiiii
at the hall…
om: shivay i think we should enter rudra into buisness
shivay: how did your mind changed?????
om: no i just said
shivay: i told you na i will enter him after all the problems are solved you know every thing and why are you reacting like this…. i will not enter rudra now its final….
om: are you sure shivay???
shivay: yes i am i will make every thing fine…..
next day
rudra comes to shivom
rudra: bhayya i also want to join buisnesss
shivay: no rudra
rudra: bhayya i will do it well please give me one chance
om: rudra we will make you join…. but not now…..
rudra: i knew it….. i knew that you both will say like this how could you be so cheap…i am your own brother and not allowing me into buisness… how could you do like this
shivay and om were shoked at rudrs response…..
precap: om scolding rudra…. later om saying to shivay that he dont love om and rudra because they are not his real brothers…. shivay slaps om
so guys how is it please tell me you can also add my defects in the comment box…and thankyou for reading
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nice
Please don’t seperate them from each other.pls elabezetg
Eagerly waiting 4 nxt…
It is awesome dear… Will their bond break????
thankyou for all your comments ……..and your doubts will be solved in the next episode and i think you will love it…..
Hey please don’t let the obros break ,it was a nice episode
oh thankyou for the comment……and if yo really love the o bros i think the next episode will be little difficult for you sorry but o bro brothers hurt us for a big happiness you know that right
Eleza dr ………….u nailed it. …………I just love it………..I too love Obros unity de most. ………..but I have no problem with precap. ………..as I know if u plan something then it really be amazing. …….so no problem. …….nd even I know that this little separation bring them more close in near future. …………thank u so much for this wonderful ff……….but I think I miss de previous part. ……….can u please share it’s link ………..I want 2 read it………….even I suggest u 2 include some bitter moment too……lf u r ……….but whatever de situation is ……….
Please de Oberoi bahus must be with their hubby. ……….nd ya fault is not of Shivay …………but it is only a misunderstanding. ………..I just give u some suggestions. ………….don’t feel bad……….nudist de next part soon. ………..I m eagerly waiting. ………???
thankyou so mucht for the comment…….. i loved the suggestions and i am happy with that too the firzt part was ishqbaazmy story part 1 and the nextpart will come soon i am working on it
http://www.tellyupdates.com/ishqbaaz-story-part-1/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/ishqbaaz-story-part-1/ this is the link
Hai elizabeth it’s me AHSANA. Iam also malayalee from Trivandrum.nee ippol endu cheyunnu njan ini degree 3rd year leka.
And about your Episode I like it.but please oberio brothers NE pirikalle avaranu IB yude strength. avar tammilulla misunderstanding s vegam clear cheyyane.eniku oru doubt undu gaury anika yude long lost sister anennu obero ‘s NE ariyami?
sorry for the mistake.
*avark ariyamo ?
hi chechi njaan 10 th kazhinjatte ullu ellathinum ippo uttaram tannal ente suspance elleam poliyille appo njaan sasi aaville athukondu kaathirunnu kaananam chechiiii…..shama athalle ellam thankyou chechi for the comment
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Amazing pls continue
Awesome
It’s nice dr and don’t seprate obros and Gauri and anikas water treatment superb and superb…….
Loved it
ooh thankyou