I m so happy……guys becoz i m writing my 10th espisode……but I m really disappointed with u guys ……u are not giving ur full support……plz motivate me write……plzz do comments yr……requesting u
So let’s start…….
Two more introduction….
Roop oberoi:she is same as seen in show……negative character……hate oberoi family……and want to…..destroy oberoi family….
Finally tia’s entry…… tia kapoor…..she is desperate to marry shivaye not becoz she wants money…….she just want him at any cost…….she is just friend of shivaye………
So at night…..
Oberoi mansion
Anika and shivaye still in eyelock…….
Again anika’s phn rang…..she break the eye locks…..and picks the call…..
Anika:sid i m on the way…..just reaching….
Sid: okk….waiting….
Shivaye was just starring at her waist……like he want to feel the touch of her waist……then looks at her lips…..they were more glossy….he just wanted to catah her lips with his lips…..he was completely lost…..
Anika:billu ji……..dadi’s health improving…..she is sleeping……my work is complete…..so I m leaving
Shivaye was lost…..he was not in mood to rply her
By speaking……he wanted to rply back with his action…..
Anika shouts billu ji….ap sun rhe hai na
???
shivaye came into his senses
Shi:so u are going……????okk yes u go…..u are getting late. …
Anika goes…….as she was passing shivaye……
Shivaye heart started beating dhak……dhak…..dhak…..
Shivaye was not able to understand…….and a tear came out from his eye(like anika had one tear when shitia’s marrige was fixed in the show)he was feeling something but don’t know wats that…..???
Pinku’s room
She was still confused…….why ranveer says at night I Will come…
And then some one knocks at her window…..she was afraid but goes and ask…
Pinku:kon hai???
ranveer:priyanka it’s me ranveer…….. open it otherwise I Will fall down….
Pinku:why do I come from window…….??ap main gate we no askte the……
ranveer:aree is tym pe muje apse milne kon deta…..plzzz open…..i will fall dowm
Pinku opens the window …..he comes inside…..
Ranveer;ap soyi ni…..that means ap mera wait kr rhi thi…….????
Pinku:aisa kuch bi ni hai…..by the way….itni raat ko ap mujse kyu Milna chate the….
Ranveer thought she is still living in her childhood…..samajhti ni hai ek ladka aur ladki raat ko kyu milte hai…..???pgli??
Ranveer:vo muje apka earing vapis karna tha……it falls when we met last time…
Pinku:apne itni mehnat(struggle )mera earing vapis karne ke liye ki???
He again thought…..in love bhot kuch karna padta hai…
Ranveer:are mehnat kesi…apke liye kuch bi priyanka ji…..
Pinku:okk so give it and go……
He gives…..and someone knocks pinku’door…
Pinku got scared if anyone sees ranveer in my room at this time……???
She ask him hide go and hide somewhere….
He asks where……??she says go in bathroom…
He goes……pinku opens the door……
Janvi was their…..
Janvi:pinku soyi ni abi tak……???
Pinku:vo….mumy…..bs sone ja rhi rhi thi….
Suddenly sound comes froms bathroom……..someone opens the shower…..
Pinku thought aj toh gyee….
Janvi:bathroom mein koi hai kya??
Pinku:vo mumy somya is there……today we are sleeping together. ….so she goes to take shower……
Janvi:okk…..gud nyt pinku……take.care
And she goes…..pinku close the door…
She goes to bathrooms……and she shouts….
Pinku:r u mad…..mumy apko dekh leti toh? ??and ye shower kyu on kr rkha hai…..
Ranveer: vahi toh mai bol rha hu…….shower band ni ho rha hai… (shower is getting closed)
pinku goes to close it but shower point was not turning…..since bathroom was filled with water now…..pinku again tries…..but she fails……she says leave…..I will repair it tmrw…she was going…..but she slips and was about to fall but ranveer catches her…….and shower was on them……water is falling. …….they were lost in each other’s eyes…….ranveer was holding her from waist…..and she holding her shirt……. (I know thoda filmy to gya sorry)
no one was there to disturb them……today seriously they are priveer (pinku&ranveer)
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho…..plays…..
Shivaye’s room
He was sitting…..and thought of their lip lock…..
And anika in saree was roaming around his mind…
Just then pinky comes…
Pinky:tu soya ni abi tk shivaye…….tuje pta hai aj mai bohot sads hu….
Shivaye in his thoughts…..says me too..
Shi:kya the mom….??
pinky:aj pta hai anika apne boyfriend ke sath date
Pe gyi hai(anika has gone for date did his bf….)
Shi:I knw mom…..but he(sid) is not his bf??just friend
Pinky:whatever he is….kam we kam vo friend sath time spend you krti hai (atleast she is spending time wid her friends…)lekin tu toh sirf apne bhaiyo aur bussiness ke sath busy rehte hai (but u are always busy wid ur brothers or business)that y today I called I called tia. …and she is coming tmrw……to meet u….
Shi:but mom…..I should ask me first???
pinky:Muje kuch ni sunna…..tu milega his se. …that’s it…..
Shi:okk…fine. …
Pinky hugs him and goes…..
Shivaye was thinking today she was looking so beautiful……but not for me….for him (sid)
Today she wears a saree but for him……but why I feel like jealous…..???and that tear what does it mean???I need to talk to my brothers…..
At dinner date
Anika and sid were sitting…..
Anika was happy but she too was having a wierd feeling…..still she was thinking about their lip lock……..and then did interrupt….
Sid:anika…..r u okk????any problem? ?
anika:nothing……just work pressure….
Sid:again bagad billa said anything? ???
Anika coughs…..sid gives her water….
Anika:nothing happen sid…..chill….let’s order something…..
And their date goes on………
Somya’s room
She still thinks about wat….rudra has done…..
She don’t no how to digest that thing….she sees the time….and says it’s my pod cast time….
Somya: so guy’s love angel back……but today I will not give suggestion……today I need suggestion.
Rudy too was listening……and thinks About wat he had done…….. (he knws wat suggestion sumo wants today)
Somya:So guys listen carefully……if a boy kiss any girl without her permission…..wat does it mean???
Rudra was still listening….
A person calls
Person:love angel I think he should apologise to that girl…..but if that girl is the first girl he he missed then he seriously loves u. …
Some more peoples gives their suggestion…..
Sumo and rudy were listening to their suggestion….
Then love angel says…….thnkuu so much guys for ur suggestions…..hope it works….
Rudy thinks it was my 1st kiss…..but how can i love sumo….I dont love her. …it was just a kiss ….she instigate me….but i know u flirt with every girl but never kissed……
Sumo thinks…..finally I understands this not love….becoz till now Rudy kisses 100 girls…..and I was one of them…..Rudy in love….it will never happens….???
Rudy :I think I should say Sorry to her….and goes to her room…..
He goes inside the room…
Rudy :sumo I m soory….but u instigate me….!!
sumo:u are saying soorry or blaming????
rudy:ek toh mai sorry bol rha hu……and u are shouting at me…..I was mad to say u soory…..
Sumo:I don’t need ur sorry…..I don’t want to talk to u ……get out…don’t eat my head
Rudy :okk fine….moti byee…
And he goes….he thinks talk to shivom…
Om’room
Wat i had done…..but it was just an attraction….
I loose my control…..but it was wrong……I think i should say Sorry to her….
He calls her….but she disconnects the calls…he again and calls but she swiched off her phone
Isha was thinking that if he was coming close then y not stopped him???atleast I can stop him but i don’t knw way hppened to me…..I loose myself……
So I can’t totally blame him….but whatever happens it was wrong. ……I don’t knw how will face him…it’s awkward…….
Om thought i need to talk to shivru….
And he goes…..
Pinku’sroom….
They were at same position……
They both were not so wet……that now both started shivering from cold and pinku sneezes….
And that both came into their senses….
Pinku:oh shit…..I m feeling so cold….and she shivers and again sneezes…
Ranveer rushed to room…..and takes the towel…
Pinku comes out of washroom…..ranveer puys the towel on his shoulder…..She was still shivering……
And then ranveer finally hugs him…..
No precap:sorry
22 Comments
Sso is jealous…yipeee…i wonder what new twist Tia’s entry will bring….?
Awsmeee yaar
As usual.. amazing.. n dnt wrry.. u r doing great n dnt wry abt comments?
wow sanaya shivika scenes were awesome i just lvt it
Nyc one dear…suprr da
Sabiya anu_Sri thnkuu so much for the comments ??
Thanks suhana dear……and u r seriously motivating to write more and more…..
Thnkuu❤❤
Thnkuu sadiya
Priveer is the highlight..haha i liked it
Di, I really liked it and I totally agree with sahanaa. Don’t worry about the comments and just continue!!!
Thnku……so much priyali…..u made me feel so positive…??
Thnkuu ananya….??
hi , this is balamirra, actuly i am a silent reader, and i am glad to say that u just rocked
it was awesome
post soon..
Nice dear….
Wow so much awkardness for the couples and heart filled with emotions with the new feelings all four couple scenes are awesome
Lovely
Awesome sanaya 🙂
we want one more shivika lip lock :p
Thnkuu so much balmaira……for ur comment….I m happy that silent readers are commenting……??
Vincy nansshuvika thnkuu so much for appreciating❤❤
Priyanka dear yes for sure u will get to read wild romance of shivika……???
Thanks dear for the comment
Awesome dear
Thank uu so much dear…