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Episode-18
(Scene in oberoi mansion all are sitting in the living room….. shivaay and anika comes)
Shivaay:- kya hua dadi achanak family meeting kyun bulayi…..
Dadi:- aree tu baith toh….bata ti hu….
(Shivika sits)
Dadi:- hmmmm….suno Maine yeh meeting Tere aur anika ke honeymoon ki baat Karne ke liye bulayi hai…..
(Shivika blushes omru smirks teasingly)
Rudra:- toh dadi yeh toh personal topic hai…. family meeting kyun…
Dadi:- kyunki main chahti hu ki tum sab bacche bhi Jao inn dono ke Saath…..
(Shivaay gets shock hearing this and is gng to say no but….)
Anika:- accha idea hai dadi…..hum sab Saath mein ghum bhi Lenge…..
Rudra:- Haan mazza aayega….
Om:- shut up rudra…..nahi dadi hum nahi jaa sakte….yeh shivaay aur bhabhi ka honeymoon hai….vaise bhi hum kebab mein haddi bante hi hai abhi toh poore skeleton ho jaayenge…..
Shivaay:-ab tu aise mat bata ki tum dono humein torcher karte ho…. it’s OK….hum sab Saath jaayenge….. that’s final….
(All smile and get happy)
Dadi:- chalo yeh toh hogaya….
Rudra:- kya hogaya dadi yeh toh batao humlog sab jaa Kahan Rahe hai…..
Dadi:- Maine tumahara honeymoon………..
Rudra:- dadi jaldi….itna bada pause mat lo….
(All are excited to listen the place )
Pinky:- vaishnov devi mein….
(All are shocked….even dadi…)
All:- vaishnov devi….
Pinky:- Haan -ji…. vaishnov devi….Maine naa mannat rakhi thi agar mere shivaay ki shaadi ho jaayegi toh sab vaishnov devi jaayenge….
Dadi:- oye pinky…..yeh log honeymoon mana ne jaa Rahe hai…..pyaar karenge yaa bhakti….???
Pinky:- toh mummy -ji mata ki bhakti aur jagarate mein bhi mata ka pyaar hota hai…
Om:- choti maa…. abhi Na shivaay ko mata ki bhakti nahi bhabhi ki bhakti karni chahiye….
Rudra:- aur jagarate mata ke Saath nahi….. bhabhi ke Saath room mein hone chahiye….
(Shivika gets embarrassed….)
Dadi:- pinky….yeh log vaishnov devi nahi jaayenge Maine Jo jagah pasand ki hai vahan jaayenge…….
Pinky:-(getting sad) thik hai mummyji…..
Rudra:- jaldi batao Na dadi…..hum Kahan jaayenge….
Dadi:- tumlog jaaoge….. Maldives…..
(All get happy hearing the place….)
Shivaay:- wow dadi….nyc choice …..
Dadi:- toh tujhe kya laga main pinky jaise koi buddhi si jagah pe bhejungi tum sab ko…..
Anika:- nahi dadi….aisa nahi….vaise thanku dadi….lekin humein jaana kab hai….
Dadi:- do din baad….
Shivru:- what….???
Dadi:- kya hua…???
Shivaay:- dadi….offc mein kitna kaam hai…Mishra ko bhi sab batana padega sab kaise hoga….
Dadi:- toh tu Mishra se shaadi kyun nahi Kar leta….
Rudra:- wow yaane meri do do bhabhi hongi….magar main Mishra ko kya bulaunga….bhabhi yaa bhabha….nahi kya hai Na vo…thode gents hai Na…..
(All laugh at rudra’s joke)
Shivaay:- shut up rudra…..
Dadi:(laughing) oho…billu….tu chinta Na Kar….yahan tej aur Shakti hai Na….tu bas anika ka dhyaan rakh….
(Shivika see each other and blush)
Rudra:- but dadi Mera kya hoga….
Soumya:- tumhe kya problem hai….
Rudra:- mere pass kapde nahi hai trip pe le jaane ke liye….
Om:- tu kapde pehanta hai….!!!!
(Om and soumya laugh)
Rudra:- O please…..this is a serious topic….
Anika:- oye nautanki….chill Kar….Kal jaayenge hum shopping….thik hai…
Rudra:- bhabhi….bas ek aap hi ho….Jo meri bhavna ko samjhti ho…..
Anika:- kaunsi bhavna rudra…..bhavna Sharma yaa bhavna shukla….
Rudra:- kya bhabhi….main bhavna Matlab feelings ki baat Kar raha Hoon…
Soumya:- aur vaise bhi dono isko chodd ke chali gayi hai……
(All laugh on this)
Jhanvi:- chalo guys dinner time….
Shivaay:- Haan chalo…..
(They all go for dinner)
(Scene in shivika’s room…. anika is removing all her jewellery….. shivaay comes in the room and locks the room)
Anika:- kya baat hai mr. Oberoi aaj bade romantic ho Rahe ho….
Shivaay:- romantic toh main bahot pehle se tha….aapne
dikhane ka mauka nahi mila….
Anika:- accha -ji…..
Shivaay:-(comes closer to anika and keep his hands around her shoulder)ek baar Haan bol do…. lifetime experience de dunga…..
Anika:- shut up shivaay….mujhe sone do….Kal shopping pe bhi jaana hai…
Shivaay:- kya yaar tum toh Ghar valo ke peeche hi rehti ho….kabhi patidev pe bhi dhyaan Diya karo…(he acts angry and turns….)
Anika:- aww……rooth gaye….accha baba sorry……
Shivaay:- hmmmm……chalo maan gaye…..
Anika:- accha toh mr. Shivaay singh oberoi….ab batao aap honeymoon pe kaise romance karoge…..
Shivaay:- vo aise mrs. Anika shivaay singh oberoi….ki pehle main aapko aise gol ghumaunga phir pass launga…..(he brings anika closer) phir aur pass….(he brings anika more closer) phir aur pass….(he brings anika so much close that only a inch gap is there between their lips…)and then….aise tightly pakdunga….(he tightly hugs anika from the waist….)
And then……
(He just stares at anika and slowly brings his lips closer to anika…..both their heartbeats were fast…. anika closes her eyes….and their lips met with so much passion and love……)
Anika:-(opening her eyes)….hmmmm….not bad mr. Oberoi….
Shivaay:- really…..
Anika:- haan u can improve more…..
Shivaay:- accha……(but before he could catch anika… anika pushes shivaay and runs….they have a chase in their room…and they fell down on each other on the bed due to which bed gets break…… anika and shivaay laugh at this…..)
(Scene in the morning…. shivika’s room….they both slept on their broken bed when there is knock on the door….)
Rudra:- bhaiya….darwaza kholo……subah ho gayi….. bhaiya….
(Shivika gets up and realise the situation…..they get shock)
Shivaay:- ab kya Kare…..
Anika:- ek kaam karo….jaldi bed ko balance Karne ke liye neeche suitcase daal do…phir baad mein main carpenter ko bula ke sab thik karva dungi….
(Anika and shivaay hurriedly arranges the bag under the bed whereas omru are knocking on the door…..)
Om:- guys….open the door……are u fine….
Anika:-(opening the door) aree tum dono…..good morning…
Omru:-(surprised) good morning….
Shivaay:-(acting as he just got up from sleep) hi guys…. itni subah subah….yahan pe….any problem…..
Rudra:- nahi….just remind Karne aaya tha shopping ka vaise…(he enters shivika’s room shivika gets tensed)aap dono ko itna time kyun laga darwaza kholne mein….hmmmm kahin romance toh nahi chalu tha….
(And in this excitement he jumps to sit on bed but bed breaks…..Om stands in shock and shivika closes each other eyes….)
Rudra:-aaa bhaiya….yeh kya hai….
Om:-(realising and laughing) rudra yeh Na shivaay ke pyaar ka result hai….
Rudra:- kitna zordaar result hai….aah…..(he gets up….)
(Dadi comes)
Dadi:- yeh itna shor kyun ho Raha hai….(seeing the bed)yeh kya hai….
Om:-(controlling his laughter) dadi….yeh aapke billu ke pyaar ka result hai…..
Rudra:- bhaiya ka pyaar bada hi palang tod hai….
(Shivika stands their embarrassed and omru and dadi laugh on the situation….)
Rudra:- iss baat par ek Sher….
” Log kehte hai ke fevicol ka jod hota hai
Bada majboot…..
Magar shivaay bhaiya ka pyaar hai itna
Zordaar ke palang bhi ho gaye toot…..”
Om:- wah wah wah wah……
Dadi:-(laughing) chalo….bas abhi….mat pareshaan karo inn dono ko….Jao neeche Jao nashte ke liye….aur billu tu bhi jaldi aa Jana…..
Om:- Haan aur kuch todna mat…..
(Omru laughs and they go downstairs with dadi….. shivika are blushing but at the same time are embarrassed too….)
(Screen freezes)…..
Precap:- masti during breakfast with oberois….. youngsters go for shopping…. shivika’s romance in mall……plans for the trip….
Hope u like it guys as some had demanded shivika’s scene more….I have added it…hope I have done Justice to it……keep commenting and supporting me….. sorry for any spelling mistake….love u all…????
51 Comments
Palang tod update????
Thanks dear….
amazing episode
Thank u Anjaly
Hey guys I don’t know why but I m posting my 18 episode but it is coming as 15 and it has been done two or three times….so guys I just request not to get confused as old episode it’s new one only….hope u will understand….
Oh this is such an awesome episode…pls add these kind of romantic funny moments in all your episodes…you are a very great writer…i am so happy after reading this…..keep it up!!!!!
Thank u so much dear….I will try my best to meet all ur expectations….. keep reading….???
So awesome yar…. Palang tod wale scene se tw Zain Aliya ki yad aa gyi?????
Thank u mukta….
Romantic Singh oberoi ?? loved this palang tod episode ???????
Thank u Nidhi dear…..
Nishi*
Nice episode samaira ??? update soon
Thanks dear…..would update…
Wonderful update…..this episode was plethora of shivikas romance……loved it!
Thank u dear……
Hahahahahaha your shayri .. its ? ??????????????????? your ff is really great
Thank u so much dear…..
Amazing. I loved that bed scene & the way Omru tease Shivika. Next part ASAP
Thanks dear…..
Samaira everything is good but you are showing om wrongly. Actual Om is very quite.
Thanks…. actually in my ff Om is not that intense character….he is caring,somewhat naughty and normal guy…..
Awesome romantic n funny samaira 😀
Worth reading 😀
Breaking bed 😛
Update soon
Thanks prinku dear….
Fantastic story I like it so much
Thanks dear
Awsm…. Mind blowing episode…. Waiting for next episode…..
Thanks u sat dear….
Loved it. ❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️ Bed broke ????. Omru teasing shivika ?????
Thank u jazz dear….
oh my mata apne to bed todh dala see i m becoming rudra but jokes apart it wS dhinchak
Thank u so much dear….
Today’s update was the best… I was laughing through out the episode… just love omru teasing shivika, last part was hilarious… waiting for next
Thank u so much dear…will update next soon
Bed broke?? Shivika romance was awesome yaar.
Thank u priyali dear…..
M wondered with Shivaay’s gesture towards Anika..its amazing..Awsome episode with great celebrations..
Thanks dear….
Hahahhaahah..funny rimance….its awesime….like shivaay ka pyaar ka result ????
Thank u dear
U rocked as usually….Just loved it to core..lLove u loads darling…keep Rocking like this
Thank u so much dear….!!!!
its awesome samaira what line u wrote i am blusing now also imaging shivika expressions its pyaar ka result vo super yar pls post asap
Thank u so much dear….
😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀
that’s the only reaction from me 😛 ;P
Thanks dear…..
More than romantic, it was comical..vaishno Devi.. bhabha..bhavna..rudra’s shayri..palang tod..all were hilarious
Thank u so much dear…..
Hello girl……shivika r awesummmmmmmmmmmm their kiss their romance….❤?❤?❤????❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ abb shivaay baby mall mein bhi romance karna shuru kar diyaa….wah wah….
Thank you girl…..so long…..good to see u back…..
u know dear
i was like ROFL… after reading this one
i am a regular reader of ur ff but i commented for first time… sorry for that…
but trust me u r such a great writer i loved each and every scene of today’s epi…
love u dear…..