Hi guys….so so so sorry couldn’t update my ff….i had an accident my leg is factured so was admitted in hospital and my mobile got damage and due to factured leg I can’t type it on laptop also…..…..Now that I got my new phone….i would update my ff and to compensate for late update there is a surprise for u all….i will reveal it in the end….lets start with the update….!!!!
(Scene in the oberoi mansion where the couples come inside arguing with each other except priveer as ranveer left from outside the mansion but Priyanka is still annoyed with him and rest of the boys….Due to argument all the elders come downstairs to know the reason of the chaos….our couples tell them the whole situation but not without the tantrums thrown on each other)
Jhanvi:- o come on girls u know boys how they are….so why are u wasting ur energy in this stupid argument….
Tej:- yes it’s totally pointless…u know boys tumlog hi Kya…poore duniya ko pata hai…ki whatever we do women never get satisfied….
Jhanvi:- excuse me….what did u say…we never get satisfied…aree jab aaplog Kuch accha karoge toh hum Khush honge and aapki taarif karenge na….
Pinky:- exactly jethaniji…..Yeh menslog na…khud toh dhang ke hote nahi hai but unke saamne Kisi aur Mens ki sacchi tariff KAR lo toh jealous ho jaate hai…..
Shakti:- what jealous….when did I got jealous…..
Pinky:- rehne dijiye Shakti ji aapke jitna koi jealous nahi hua hoga….
Anika:- maa dad also….
Pinky:- Haan Tere dads na is ek nos ke jalkukde….he was very helpful of chotu…..
All:- chotu….????
Pinky:- Haan chotu was a pehelwan in my village….he was very handsomes….he na…
(Pinky just starts her story but Shakti cuts her out)
Shakti:- oh just stop it pinky….what are telling all the old silly stuff……
Anika:- no dad…its not at all silly….i want to hear it maa…..
Pinky:- rehene de beta…I will tell u this story some time or the other…..But it is true that all men’s are same jealous…..
Tej:- we are not at all jealous…we are just concern….but that u women’s can’tunderstand because u guys never get satisfied with whatever we do…but an outsider comes and says some cheesy lines u all get impressed….
Om:- dad….today I m so proud of u…..U just told my feelings…..
Tej:- thanks beta…..
Jhanvi:- oh please…that lines were not at all cheesy….u guys only find romantic lines cheesy….
Ishana:- wow aunty….what a point…..Superb one…
Om:- oh please just shut up OK….
Ishana:- u shut up mr. Zulfi shut up Singh oberoi..
(And like this all the oberois women vs men argument start…all keeping their own point and opinions….hearing so much of chaos dadi came downstairs….)
Dadi:- what happen puttar…..
(They tell the matter…..)
Dadi:- (smiling) oho puttar….. Marriage and love is all about trust and satisfaction…..U should not let this stupid things like jealousy and unsatisfactory take place in ur love life…..Samjhe….
(All nod from above but from inside all of them have decided not to end this topic so easily….suddenly anika’s phone gets a message….)
Anika:- (after reading the message) dadi tomorrow we are gonna have guests for the lunch….
Dadi:- who anika beta….???
Anika:- daksh and his dad…
(Our obros gets super angry and jealous hearing daksh’s name while girls stand there dreamily….)
Soumya:- wow daksh is gonna come tomorrow…I m so excited….
Rudra:- oh hello what is daksh and all Haan….he is elder to u call him bhaiya….
Soumya:- what is ur problem cry baby…..He only told me to not to call him Bhaiya…and he doesn’t that old OK like u….
Rudra:- sumo u….
Dadi:- oye bas abhi….now go and sleep every body….all must be tired now na….chalo everyone disperse into their rooms….
(Each couple go to their respective room but miffed with each other whereas ishana also stayed there as dadi told her to as it was too late to go….after so much of request she agreed….)
(Shivika’s room….anika had changed into night clothes and was teaching Sahil when shivaay come inside the room….they both were see each other but turn their heads on opposite sides in anger….. Shivaay comes and sits on the bed)
Shivaay:- so Sahil hw was ur day…..???
Sahil:- superb jiju…(he says excitedly)
Shivaay:- why are u so excited and smiling….???
Sahil:- actually jiju….there is a project competition to be held in my school and guess what teacher made me and Arpita as partners….
Shivaay:- oh wow…that’s great news champ….
Sahil:- but jiju this is just a great news super great news is that she is gonna come tomorrow here in the mansion for project…..(he said blushingly)
Shivaay:- oho….champ that’s why u are excited and blushing……
Sahil:- yes…that’s why I want that u and Didi behave well in front of her….
Shivaay:- oh hello don’t tell me all this thing tell ur didi…
Anika:- excuse me what do u mean I don’t behave well…..
Sahil:- no not like that….i was like uske samne mujhe daatna mat….after all she is ur hone Vali future bahu….u have to make a good image in front of her na….else she would prefer aakash over me….right jiju….
Shivaay:- right…..
Anika:- what right…..U also are like ur jiju only….jealous of boys better than u…..Get up u both….
(She make them get up and throw them out of the room with blankets and pillows and shut the door in anger and sleep…they both knock the door requesting her to open it but she doesn’t respond)
Sahil:- (confused) what happened to her….why did she reacted like this….
Shivaay:- long story champ…
Sahil:- OK…so Meri sofa time story ka jugaad ho gaya….chalo let’s go to sleep……
(They both enter the living room just to see all oberoi men…sitting on the sofa trying to sleep…..)
Shivaay:- what are u all guys doing here….???
Om:- bhabhi thrown u also out of the room….
Shivaay:- u also means……u all are also thrown out of the room….
All:-yes…
Tej:- jhanvi toh just threw me out without any blanket or pillows….
Shakti:- what bhaisaab u are crying over pillow and blanket….pinky toh didn’t let me enter the room also…see I m sitting here without changing…..
Rudra:- sumo has teared off my assignment and not giving me hers to copy and took my bedroom also…locking her room….
Om:- ishana toh destroyed my painting and locked my room and sleeping peacefully in guest room….
Tej:- what about u shivaay…
Sahil:- nothing much tej uncle…he also has same condition…..But Didi threw him out with more respect….
Shivaay:- I won’t leave that cheesy daksh….due to him all this is happening……
Om:- yaa true shivaay…….
Tej:- now lets stop this topic and sleep….
(All men try to sleep on the sofa….junior oberois try to sleep on the three seater sofa with Sahil on them whereas the seniors sleep on the two seater sofa….after so many struggling they all shift into deep sleep in jigsaw manner….)
(In the morning…..Shivaay comes to his room to get freshen up…..)
Shivaay:- (murmuring) oh god Meri peeth akad gayi….uff….(he sees anika sleeping peacefully) oh god she looks like an angel while sleeping but who will tell that this angel sachmein you ek sherni hai……
(He goes and sits near anika….carresses her face and kisses her forehead….he then goes near her belly and kisses her belly)
Good morning my jaan….hope so u slept well….(he caresses her belly and then go to get freshen up…anika gets up and looks at him gng in the bathroom smilingly…she then caresses her belly and gets up for doing daily chores….)
(In the afternoon…..All the girls and ladies are excited for daksh to come while boys are irked by knowing about him…suddenly two handsome men wearing flares enter oberoi mansion one is of 20s while other was of 40’s…..Yes they are none other than daksh and his father…..Well girls got happy seeing daksh while boys made faces……but…..)
Daksh’s father:- (removing his glares) pinku
Pinky:- (getting shocked and surprised) chotu….
(All are looking at both of them surprised while Shakti is shocked and angry at daksh’s father…as he is chotu)
Chotu:- pinku…
Pinky:- chotu
Chotu:- pinku
Pinky:- chotu….
(They run towards each other and hug each other and do their childhood hook step while the girls are in aww boys had given fhat-the-wuck-look)
Chotu:- where were u pinku…I searched for u so much….
Pinky:- oh chotu u didn’t changed only….u are like that only like u were in ur younger days….. Handsome and beautifuls….
Anika:- who is this maa…..
Pinky:- aree I forgot to introduce….. he is chotu I mean Rajesh khurrana …..My best friend….chotu…she is my bahu anika….my Heera beta shivaay…my jhethaniji…(and like this she introduce each and everyone to chotu….while Shakti was irked by his presence…..And like this daksh was also introduced which made shivaay irked…..While the ladies went with their respective “best friend” to chat their husbands were just staring at those two men like they would kill them anytime for taking away their attention….)
Shivaay:- now I got to know why this daksh is so flirtous….first his dad was with my maa and now his son is with my wife….
Om:- and this dad son don’t flirt with only one girl na…they flirt with others lovers also na…
Tej:- exactly beta….
Rudra:- see bhaiya how they are feeding them like they are maharaja and these are beautiful apsaras…..
(They all imagine daksh and Rajesh as maharaja and all oberois women dressed in beautiful s**y apsaras attire luring them with dance and they are enjoying……)
All men:- (coming out of the dream) no……
Shivaay:- it’s a very bad dream….
Tej:- yess…..
Rudra:- bhaiya we have to do something to show these girls that hum bhi in khuranas se Kam nahi hai romance mein….
Shakti:- yes…sach bola rudra ne….
Om:- but what can we do…
(Dadi comes there hearing their discussion)
Dadi:- what happen puttar….u all are looking tensed….
(They tell her their problem…)
Oho…yeh problem hai…..Idhar aao mere pass ek plan hai…..
(Plan discussed)
Shivaay:- wow dadi that’s superb…..
Tej:- yes ma’am it’s awesome plan….
Rudra:- so let’s start mission jalaofy ladies…..
Precap:- suprises..masti and fun…..
So sorry guys for late update….as I told u above about my problem….hope u all understand my problem and forgive me for delayed update….also guys so sorry for others for not commenting on ur ffs….I would try if I could comment on it or not…But u all guys are doing awesome with ur ffs….i read some with help of my sis….ur surprise would be reveal in some time…..Till them hope u all like my update…keep commenting and loving my ff…love u all…..?????
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Awesome yaar
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Fantastic… fabulous….. awesome….I would waiting for the next part
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Fantastic
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Wow.. That. Was. Awesome…….!! Please post the next episode faster…. ????????
Thank you dear….Would post next soon….
Oh… God…. Oberoi males’ jealousy….
I couldn’t stop my laugh while reading night part. Poor them….
Waiting to see what they r going to do?
Thanks dear…Keep reading to know about it…
Awesome dear…. Hope you will be fine…… Waiting for the next update… Take care… With lots of love.
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Awesome epi…
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Wow today i can’t control laugh because of this lovely episode
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get well soon dear 🙂 and nice episode. waiting for the next 🙂
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Oh god Di. Suspense. Best episode. ??
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Such a fun episode. Was wondering what happened to your ff!
Don’t be sorry hun! Get well soon and keep writing if you can since you are really good at it??
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Long time Samaira !!! It’s OK..get well soon !!! And yes your ff was just supeebbbb!!!!
Loved it. Keep writing ..
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Thank u dear….
I dont know whether i should start off by showering praises on you or telling you to take care … well since your writing was simply fantabulously amazingly awesome i cant stop myself from showering the praises first! To start off with my favourite favourite part was of Sahil ??. He is soooo adorable and hilllarious ? *please behave or else arpita will choose aakash over me* ??? really cracked me up! Next was the *oh so romantic* Chotu Pinku scene ?? wow! BUT the line tht left me in laughing fits was “oh god meri pet akad gaee uff” ???? and “dekho sote tine kaisi angel lag rahi hai” ??? i seriously reallly loved todays episode! Uk i was wondering for so many days why my favourite daily dose of laughter (your writing) hasnt been uploaded yet and welll WOW you returned with a bang! ?
And im very sorry to hear about your accident, please take care. I know my words wont make much of a difference (ik as i have been though it too ive fractured my hand twice) but i will still say it in the hope it makes you feel better… please take care, you have many people *including me* who want you to be fit and fine jumping all over the place soon.
It is okay uf you dont want to share, but how did the accident happen?
Take care!
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Thank u so much dear for commenting….Well I m fine actually I was riding my scooty when a puppy came in between and to save it I lost my balance and fell with scooty on me…..But I m fine now….Still in hospital….But comments and praises from u guys made my day….Never think that ur word don’t make a difference ur each and every word make difference…Not only u… People here who comment on my ff whether it’s just a word it makes a difference and make my day….So I suggest u that u should keep commenting… Don’t think about words much…..Keep reading…???
Awesome
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Tc dear…..hope you recover asap….and as evrytime….u nailed it dear….lovd itt
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Awesome… Maza ayegya ???
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Oh god! Accident, get well soon dear take care.
& about the update it was supb dear just loved it..
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Amazing update loved it jealous boys were so funny.
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as usual fantastic episode dear…
hope u r fine now…
plzzzz take care dear….
get well soon….
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Fab waiting for nxt episode …..
Get well soon…
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oh!!!!!!!! my god i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee u for this .it was like i was smiling and laughing like idiots and stupids while imagining this and specially the dream sequence . I am a silent reader and i didn’t even commented on ur last post but i am sorry now i am regretting for it.But , u r suuuuppppeeeerrrr awwwweeeessssooommmmeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. i mean the way u write is awesome, fantabulous and what not. I wish that I would have been able to watch ur posts as videos and my last comment that the writers of Ishqbaaz should surely take inspiration from ur ff and telecast these episodes to the high voltage drama serial these days into a light hearted one
Thank you dear for commenting..Keep reading…??