Hey guys Trisha here ! Glad to see you guys again !
Thanku so much for liking my previous part of this ff.
If anyone left that by mistake or unable to read than here is the first part….!
A very happy birthday to my inspiration friend sister…ANNIE !
As friends go, you’re not one of the best. You’re THE best! May this year’s birthday be the best ever for you.
So let’s persuade to the second part!
***ISHQE THE ROG SEYANA**
(Disease of love is intelligent)
Part -2
It was late evening when Kabeer returned back home ….he stepped towards stairs but before that found his mom sitting in front of TV nd laughing wholeheartedly !
Kabeer- mom !
Kusum- very good shravan ! Keep going by beta !
Kabeer-(little loudly)- maaa !
Kusum(coming back to senses)- haan Kabeer ; you came !
Kabeer- I think so it’s your son in front of here ; but I guess u were lost somewhere else !
Kusum- oh yeah Kabeer ; you must see , how shravan proposed his going love !
Kabeer- really mom lemme see !
His sudden behaviour got the attention of kusum !
Kusum- ahm ahm !
Kabeer- I mean just if u r asking ! Nothing else !
Kusum- me teri maa hu !
(I am ur mom)
Few hours skipped !
It was morning Kabeer woke up with much irritating alarm; nd at first took her diary still sitting in bed !
It was written ;
“1-love letter
2- card
3- propose with surprise
4- with rose
5- kuch kuch Hota haj style !
6- all r impossible for u Kabeer beta”
So the day started !
Everything we’re going usual in sdch when prasha were peeping onto kabeer !
Kabeer in his cabin !
Oh phone;
Kabeer- yes bouquet and one large card !
After few hours when the delivery man came prasha somehow took the parcel …..
They signed as Saachi … at the place of recieved by !!!
Pragya-what the hell ! Who gifts valentine card to propose ?
Isha- ofcourse nd lilies? Kuch nhi hoskta jiju ka !
Pragya- umm so …!
Isha- so ….!
Few more hours later it was late evening ….!
Dr Kabeer got a parcel just inside his door ….he opened that nd was super surprised to find a card from Saachi …. the same card he ordered for her …!
It was written
“These won’t work …. keep trying !
Dr Saachi ”
Kabeer- she got the letter nd …. that delivery man is gone today ….!
It means she too wants me to propose her … yes ! Omg ! Yes !
Saachi was going outside towards her hostel as prasha had left already so Kabeer was behind her walking in corridor of SDCH !
Kabeer- so….
Saachi- yes sir
Kabeer- did you liked boquets !
Saachi- yeah ofcourse infact if we’ll add three more ; conference hall will look superb !
Kabeer-(mind) what ? Hall ? What abt my lilies !
Kabeer-Hm I agree wd you ! Nd what abt lilies !
Saachi- no way sir who idiot used lilies !
Kabeer- what ?
Saachi- I mean for big decorations !
Kabeer- oh !
Saachi- nd did u received the card sir ?
Kabeer- yeah nd ur msg too !
Saachi- one second …. the sample of invitation card that dr Malhotra told us to prepare for coming farewell party !
Kabeer- oho nd what abt love letter ? (He said in one go )
She was looking at him with unbelievable expressions nd deadly glares !
Kabeer- I mean long letter for special guests ?
(Mind- oh Kabeer either you r mad or she’s going to make you mad….shaadi se pehle ye haal hai to shaadi ke baad kya ..)
Hours skipped !
Kabeer reached back home . Kusum was again watching tv !
Kusum- haay how rude these wife’s are I mean see how does house chores by their husbands ….cooking ; washing clothes !
Kabeer lost in his own imaginary world upon listening this ….where Saachi was ordering him nd he was doing house chores !
He came back to senses by punching of kusum !
Kusum- she’s isn’t like that !
Kabeer- I didn’t said anything !
Kusum- maa hu teri!
(I am ur mom)
Kabeer- Jai Mata Di !
So it was morning …. someone knocked saachis apartment nd she went outside to see leaving prasha inside….just to find a tiny box..there !
She took that in nd saw a letter taped folded on that !
It read…”I don’t care if u go …. after all u are also twin of someone in the box ….
from someOne u r waiting for to propose u”
She opened the box nd left that shouting at once …..after all she was super afraid of frogs even if it was a mini frog ?!
Saachi- how dare that hitler ….. ab manugi bhi nhi!
(I won’t agree) huh !
On the other hand in kabeers house ; in his room…!
Kabeer- finally everything done !
Precap: final dhamakedar proposal!
So this was in this part guys hope u like this part pls pls drop a comment that means so much to me ! After this just one more part nd last !
Regards
Trisha
38 Comments
Superb ? ? ? update asap
Thanku nd sure
Haha very naughty prasha yaar.
Cute update yet short.
Plz post next shot ASAP
Thanku dear nd sure
Superbbbbb. It’s amazing . Kabeer imagining himself doing household chores and kabeer mom saying, She isn’t like this. Was amazing part. How u get such ideas dear. Ure amazing .
I can’t wait for another chapter plzzz update soon. I can’t wait now . Eagerly waiting for kabeer to propose Sanchi
AwwThanku dear sure sure sweetie love uh loads
Super se uper wala episode it was… poor kabir!
AwwThanku dear
Haha super cute
Thanku
Amazing
Thanku
Just lv it soo much dear.. Poor kabir..
Thanku
Hi Trishu this was amazing dear………Aur tum mujh se narraz ho kiya? Tell me dear.
No never
Nd thanku anee
Just a bit busy nowads
Nowadays
Ok nevermind..
Thanks for understanding me
Three words ” fadoo, fatafati, fabulous “..may God bless you dear… Aise hi likhte rehna… Tumhari stories mein jaan hai… I loved it from the bottom ( uske bhi andar se) of my heart..
Awwww omg thanku so so much anu
Ur cmmnt made my day yr
U r welcome Trisha dear… Please don’t say thanks yaar…. Dosto k beech thanks aani hi nahi chahiye sirf pyaar rehna chahiye…
I totally agree wd u anu ?
In real life I don’t have any friends or you can say is m a very introvert type nd here I feel free being frnds wd such amazing people like you ?
Awesome.I just loved it to the core.???
Keep writing dear.
Thanku so much sweetie
It was so holarious trisha.. the imagination of Sanchi as Ruling Wife was superb..and JAI MATA DI part was fab.. love u dear.. aise hi kabir ki band bajati raho..its very entertaining..
And 2 to go…so after that we want a party ?? hume kisi article main hi shamil kar lena party sequence main…hum uss main bhi khush ho jayenge ?? just kidding
Thanku so much mitali
I am glad u liked it !
Hnji sure sure party
Are you from delhi? Or north part of india?
superb superb ekdam khidkitod…
jai mata di wala scene was so fabulous …
and sanchi as ruling wife kabir imagination was superb he he he…
after 2 more ff/os … so we want party…party to…party to…party to banti he …
update next one soon…
Thanku dear
Nd party to banti hai sweetie obviously sure
Jai mata di hahhaa..best dialogue yaar…amaz mindblowing sweetie…poor kabir…superb tikdambaaz ishgya bechare kabir ki band baja rakhi h….waitting for purposal part…post nxt asap tc
Thanku so much niyaa
too good Trisha………can’t wait for the nxt one……plz update nxt part asap…………luv u cutie pie……..
Thanku riya
Love you loads chocopie !
Haha???very naughty yaar poor kabir
Thanku
Superb trishu dear and that jai mata Di part…he he…..really excited!!
Mind blowing Trishaa…. Amazing… Ossm… Jai mata di wala part was Superb.. Loved it..