So guys let’s start… I’m really happy nd touched by ur comments …u can call me by my real name also….. Thnk u ….first I thought its getting boring nd i thought to end it after three episodes but after seeing ur comments I changed my mind…..I will continue it maybe till twentieth episode….
Recap- ishra go for shopping…..ishu feeling something for raman…and raman too….ishu is not able to cook…she spoils everything…mrs bhalla and raman bang their hand on their heads……mrs and mr bhalla plan ishra honeymoon……raman fells from stairs….ishu puts balm……raman feels he has fell in love with ishu….
Episode–
Six moths have passed…..
Raman and ishita have developed feelings for each other…but r not able to expresss…..
A girl is shown talking to a boy……..she is none other….she is shruti…talking to her bf rohan
S- thanks baby u took me out from jail…
R- why will i not…..my sweetheart was inside…..i missed u so much…
Shruti smiles…then says
S- but now i want to take revenge from that ishita…..what she thinks of herself….i want to make her feel the same pain which i felt when i was inside the jail…that stick…i used to be beaten….i will make her feel the same
R- but how….
S(with wicked smile)- by kidnapping her…
Rohan also smiles wickedly…….-
R- tomorrow only we will kidnap her…..i will call some goons ….
S – and ya tell them to see that no bhallas are around…..especially raman…..
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Ishra room…
Ishita is standing in front of mirror wearing green middi….
Raman is taking bath….
I(to herself)-i cant wait to express my feel….but is he having the same feeling for me…..how will he react ….
Ishita gets tensed..
Raman comes out…
He sees her tensed
Raman’s POV
Why is she tensed….but she looks beautiful even when she is tensed…..i want to just express my feelings…but if she doesnt accepts it….
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Ishu sees raman staring her…
I- what happened am I not looking gud..
R- no…no…u always look beautiful…
Ishita blushes
Raman smiles…
Ramans POV
awwwwwww ……see her she is blushing which means she ……..
Raman shouts yes
Ishu stares
I- what yes
R- nothing…….
I- come to the dining table breakfast is ready…….
R- ok…
Dining table….
All r tensed as ishu has cooked for tbe first time…mrs bhalla taught her many times but everytime ….everything gets spoiled…
Ishu serves food to everyone…
R(tensed)- u have cooked….
I- yes
R( slowly)- o god today I will die
I- him..u said something..
R- no..
All make faces and eat one bite…but get happy as its tasty….raman eats 5 parathas…ishu gets happy seeing everyone enjoying ……
The day passes
Night….
Ishita( thinking)-why am i feeling something wrong is gonna happen
R- what happened u r looking tensed…
I- no …nothing
Raman bends…
R- tell me….I can understand u more than myself…now tell
I- raman …I am feeling something wrong is going to happen…I m not feeling well from inside
R- nothing will happen …don’t take tension….u look like a angry lioness when u r tensed
Ishu takes pillow and throws on him
He laughs….and enjoys it….
Next day ..
Ishu is going to meet her friend
But suddenly a van comes from behind…a goon comes out and pulls ishu …he ties her hands…
I- who r u all….where r u taking me…
He ties cloth around her mouth…
He says ……to take revenge…….
Ishu gets shocked
Ishu’s Pov
What revenge….who wants to revenge from me…raman ..please save me….
Raman wakes uo with a shock…..
Yeh hai mohabbatein sad version plays……
Raman gets up and searches for ishu…
R- maa have u seen Ishita…
Mrs b- she had gone to meet her friend shreya….
Raman tries calling ishu …
Ishita’s phone rings …it was on vibrate…so she took out from her side bag very difficulty……. Raman calls her again…she takes the call…
R- hello ishita…..
He hears goons voice saying …..we caught this ishita bhalla easily …ishu’s hmmm hmmn voice comes bcoz her mouth was tied with cloth…goon shouts just keep quit can’t u keep kr mouth shut…
Raman gets shocked….
Tears roll out from his eyes….
Mrs b- what happened why r u crying…
R- maa Ishita..
Mrs b- what happened to ishita…
R- maa she is kidnapped …
Mrs bhalla gets shocked……
I will have to call police
Mrs b- no puttar they can harm her …
R- maa so….what will i do…i will die without her i cant live without her
Mrs b consoles him….
Mrs b- we will have to wait for kidnappers call….
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Ishita is tied to a chair ….she shouts….a girl comes out …laughing wickedly…..so ishita bhalla
..ishita recognises shruti’s voice ….
S- y shocked na….BTW u should be shocked… What do u think urself……first u spoiled my plan…then u sent me behind the bars….now ill take revenge of each wound
She takes out a hunter ….ishu gets shocked…..shruti unties the cloth tied around ishu’s mouth…
I- leave me plzz…..but who took u out from jail…….u cant harm me….raman will save me….i know him well he will not let anything happen to me
S- hmmm…wait wait i will answer ur questions one by one….first thing i will not leave u so easily….and my bf took me out…and now i will call raman and tell about u …..she laughs…ishu cries
Shruti calls raman….
Raman sees unknown number….and at once takes the call
R- hello…
S- so mr raman….
He recognises her voice..
S- ur wife is with me….and now i will take revenge from u by harming ur this…ishita…
I- raman ….raman ….save me…
R- ishita….plz dont do anything with ishita plzzz i beg…
S- sorry i will harm her and now listen ur wife’s cry…
She beats ishita with hunter badly…
Ishita shouts in pain…
Raman cries and gets broken down …he says..plzz dont do it….i beg u plzz dont….
She cuts the call
R- hello hello….
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He cries….
Ishu gets hurt …her has got many wounds …she gets unconscious….
S- so for just now this much only
She laughs wickedly….
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So guys did u all liked it…tell me ur take…comment below….ur comments mean alot to me….i tried making it long tell me is it long or not…
Bye bye
Ta ta
Love u all
9 Comments
Hii dear vidushi, yes its long to be frank much longer than what I write,
it is very well written
amazing twist I liked it yes dear u must continue for many many episodes n whenever u need suggestion u may ask me, I will try my level best to help u
so ishu learnt cooking good
u have shown Ishita modern her get up n dress up I mean good good keep going dear
It was very nice.and comparing to other episodes its lengthy?.But try to make it more longer.waiting for ur next update.
Nice and touching very emotional wen raman received a call from shurti
Nice
Nice put fast nrext episode I m waiting to read
Nice story yrr please don’t stop in between.
superb yaar…last part was very emotional….waiting for next update….
Yes this one is long and very nice part..
Very nice part but bit sad of Shruti beating Ishu while Raman hear Ishu scream with pain. Raman knows that he can’t live without Ishu.
Raman will ask friend and families to help him to find Ishu and will captured Shurti and follow where Shurti keep Ishu and will beat goons and slap Shurti and free Ishu. Raman see Ishu weak and rush her to hospital. Police arrest Shurti and goons and Rohan.
Raman then informed families and families ger worried.