Hi friends
I am creating my ff if you like please comments & give you’re opinions & saggesion
Characters are
Rv &
Amba & kailash his parents . rv is a biggest business man
Ishani , her parents harshad & janki
Also her there is baa & her elder sister Rita
Ishani & riya was studying in medical college
In the morning ishani get up in early at 5 am & take a bath then go to temple for praying . she is praying about her & riya to get full marks in exam . baa is get up & taunte the ishani for tum yaha pe kya kar rahi ho? Aur tumny breakfast ready kiya ke nahi ? Aaj riya ka exam he pata he na.( Aur aaj ishu ka bhi exam he .Friends baa’ s character is negative in my ff & baa only like riya not ishani.) Ishu’s mother is not felling well so ishu had to make breakfast.
8 Comments
Nice one.pls continue and mariya pls add shikhar in ur ff.it’s my request.
My request also..and add rhitika slso…
Nice
Its really nice yaar. And i don’t much like that baa badmouthing my isha. And bring shikar charecter in ur ff.
Nice
Nice start…bt pls try to write ur ff in english…..
agree with u priya . and a little lengthy one too . .
Thank you friends for your opinions & supporting me.