I am writing a fanfiction. Well my article will have advay and chandini as themselves. It is nothing but an extension. A shoot.
The scene opens on karvachauth day.
Advay is sitting in his room. It was occupied by chandini as well.The room looks like room now.To be frank chandini changed it a lot.He tried to avoid her in room but adis zid saying i have seen husband and wife live in same room and nanis saying that whatever it might be but adi should not get upset because of family atleast at this age.So he had to give up. She occupied the room. No just she occupied a part but she took the whole authority of room. For it he had to face sasha abd masi wrath but what to do.
But she had cute ways of doing things, she is artistic in arranging things. He secreatly admired her ways. It always looked like she could read his mind and arrange things as he feels like to be arranged.
“Really,afterall she is my childhood friend” he thought. Sasha never understood him and in heart he always felt did she ever care for me.Her ideas and thoughts are always something else never suited him. He always felt am i loving her or just to deceiving myself that I dont love chandini I am using her as a pawn.
Advay is seriously in thought that he was startled by a voice.”chiku” said nani. Advay said” yes nani”
She said “do u know tomorrow’s specialty “. He said rather indulged in thoughts”no what is it” she said “it is karvachauth”.
Suddenly he came back to senses. He thought another chance for chandini to make me go weak,and fell for her…
Nani said “chiku tomorrow chandini is keeping her vrath for first time. So u stay at home don’t go anywhere.U must break her fast. U know naa she will fell unconscious if she stays starved. He said ‘ok nani then ask her not to keep vrath.’Just then chandini entered. She said’ aye ji, why are u saying so. Its my first karvachauth with my loving and caring husband. How should not I keep vrath. And also do u feel that u will fell for me doing all this. “. He said “whatsoever i dont care”. She said ok and went.
Mausi came she said”advay are u going to do all those rituals with her.” he said”masi i need to prove i dont care her . she said if are not effected by me why do u worry to do the rituals.” masi said” advay don’t be foolish she is doing all this to drag u in.”
Be careful not to fell’. He said ok
Shoot two
Advay was busy in his office. Morning itself he left the house. Chandini, nani and pooja reminded him to come early. But masi said dont. He got a telephone buzz.Saw it. It was sasha.She asked him how he is? And felt sad for no able to keep vrath for him. Also got angry for allowing chandini to keep vrath.She told him dont break her vrath.
Its evening advay was busy with work but he still remember that he need to go early. Afterall chandini is keeping vrath for him and he knows she cannot keep starved for long. She fells unconscious. The dev in him is persuding him to go and break chandinis vrath. But the advay in him is saying if he goes it will prove that he cares for chandini.
He is just waiting for an opportunity to go home so that his ego do not come down. Nor masi and sasha do not think the other way.Just then he got a phone call.
It was adi . He did not take milk or meals since he came from school. Pooja was worried. Doctor said not to keep him empty stomach for long time. But adi is admant. He want advay to come home for celebration.Pooja called him.He said yes pooja i am comming. Really he felt relied especially the dev in him.He just needed a reason to go home and break chandinis fast. Now he got it.
Just then he got a phone call that the people with whom they are going to sign a deal are comming . He really felt worried. Because not only for adi but also chandinu. He called home and explained the thing to pooja and asked to feed adi first.
Advay reached home.The meeting was hectic but fruitful. When he parked car he saw it is very late. In between meeting he enquired whether adi had food and answer is positive. He felt a little relieved but chandini he dont know and he cant ask also.
He went inside all are in hall except adi. He wished all.Nani said chiku is this the time to reach home and know without wasting time break chandinis fast. He was startled. He said” did she not break it up till now?” pooja said “how can she. U did not come known.” He said “what is this . i did not ask her to do all this” nani said” now stop arguing and break her fast”. Chandini was sitting in the room. Pooja called her.
She came. She is wearing a cream coloured lahanga and blouse. With uncut diamond ordiamond. She is really looking gorgeous. He felt like drop dead.Really he forgot everything around. He was actually gazing at her in admiration. Everyone there could sense it.
He completed the ritual.Made her drink water. Just then she fell down. Her fragile figure cannot sustain fast any longer..
Nani got worried and mausi said advay don’t worry she might be acting. On this nani got anger. She said” leela be human for atleast sometimes. Don’t think that i don’t aurge against u means that u can do and talk ur maan mani.Now keep quite and don’t utter a word.”she shouted angrily. Mausi was taken aback. Nani said “leela now go to ur room”. Masui was worried at nanis anger. She left silently.
Nani said”chikku u take chandini into the room till she get conscious. Pooja call the doctor”.
Advay and chandini are in room.She is sleeping. The doctor came and made chandini conscious. After that she had little meal and slept. She once looked at him. There was a feeling of betrayed sort of look in her eyes.He couldn’t hold it. Really her eyes questioned him dev dont u care for u childhood sweetheart.Can’t u do atleast this for ur wife.He could not bear her stare so bowed his head. After that shd came into the room and slept.
She is sleeping he assured that. Really he felt he did something bad he wanted to confess.
He slept beside her and said in her ear. “Chandini really i did not intend to keep u starved. Really i wanted to come home early but that stupid meeting kept me still.I felt sad then. Only my mind was there but my heart was roming here. I wasreally worried about u.” After saying this he slept besides her. But he did not see tears rolling from her closed eyes. Yes she listened him and felt happy for his confession
27 Comments
A good attempt, Harshaa! Liked it. Do continue with more episodes! ????
Thank u
Well done nice part hope in show this happens
Thank u. It takes great heart to appreciate. Read ur fan fiction. Mine is just extension but urs is innovation
u r welcome
Thank u
Hai harshaa nice fan fiction felt as if watching the show itself. Very good description of scene
Thank u anita
Hai harsha nice fiction man.Really good. Felt like dramtising the scene. Keep it up
Thank u
Thank u. It takes great heart to appreciate. Read ur fan fiction. Mine is just extension but urs is innovation
AWESOME FANTASTIC INTERSTING MIND BLOWING PERFECT SUPERB??????
Dear Harsha
The Story Is Awesome And Very Intersting??????Please Continue The Story?Waiting For Next Update
Keep It Up?
Take Care And Stay Safe?
Thank u sure i will bring the next update as soon as possible
Thank u sure i will bring the next update as soon as possible
Sorry everyone my comments are appearing twice today. Don’t know what went wrong
Interesting episode Harsha, keep it up
Thank u lata
Thanku lata
Fantastic!! Hope this happen in show too. Very well narration and Nani with mausi was too good. She deserves this.
Lots of love
Keep writing
Thank u pragyasree
Aww… Advay pakada gaya by his kattu gilheri…a love accepted from deep and denied from cover. I was waiting for your story from last week after reading that day in wu page what you wrote. Well…falling in love is easy but accepting it openly is too difficult specially for a character like ASR who thinks he is strong but is emotionally too weak, and as expected he accepted it to a sleeping Chandni, which was not reality.
Thanku astha
Thanku astha
Bahut bahut bahut acha ff likha hai aapne….. plzz do cont and plzz if u can.. plzz send me links of epi
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Wow soooo nice.Advaay ki halat dekhi ………aap ke liye ye ???
Thank u