Hello friends.
The new year stands before us like a chapter in a book , waiting to be written. We can help write that by setting goals.
HAPPY NEW YEAR ? TO ALL MY READERS ☺☺☺☺
Hope you remember me. No…. last time I posted my ffs last shot (love or trust) on 25th December. I think now u remember. Thank u everyone for commenting and silent readers pls do give comments.
Ok so I’m back again with a crap. And for this I’m ready to accept tomatoes sleepers and shoes.
And so sorry to my ig queens , I couldn’t write for new year. Actually I wrote but only half. The whole story got messed up so I left that.
So without wasting more time let’s move to this bakwas written by one and only me. But don’t worry after this if you get angry you will get to tead my nonsense at the end to make you feel light.
Please do ignore typing and grammatical mistakes ??
It’s 6:30 P.M.
At railway station ,
Announcement – passengers , have an attention please. the train for lucknow has arrived at platform no.3.
Saanchi was taking ticket and she heard the announcement she ran as fast as she could.
Veer – all the best bro. (And he shows thumps up?)
Kabir – veer this is not right. I will see u later.
Veer (grins ) – we will see later. ??First u go see the train is moving.
Kabir runs to catch the train.
Garv (to veer ) – why r u making him do so. After this he will not leave us. Couldn’t u give him another dare. You remember last time u made him propose a girl , after that what he did. He tortured both of us for 1 week. Oh god why did u made me their roommates. (And makes a crying face)
(Kabir, veer , and garv are besties like SanPraSha in the show . They r in college in final year and share same room )
Veer (wraps his arm around his shoulder and smiles ) – jo hoga dekha jayega mere bhai. Bohot dino baad oot pahad ke niche aaya h , thoda maza to karne de.
Garv – tu nahi sudhrega, khud bhi pitega or saath me mujhe bhi pitwaegi.
Saanchi and kabir both were coming from opposite sides and both enters the same coach.
After searching a lot both’s eyes goes on an empty seat at the same time . Both see each other and runs to capture first but their bad luck (or say their good luck ??). Both reached at same time and started to fight. Saanchi sat while kabir pushed and he too sat. Both started struggling on the single seat.
Finally they made a settlement. (It was almost evening so everyone were busy in their own so no one bothered much)
Saanchi shifted a little bit forward and kabir turned facing backside saanchi.
Now no arguments but still they were struggling.
Saanchi took out her phone and started playing subway sufers . and while playing she slept on kabir’s back. Kabir turned back and a smile crept on his face. But the very next moment he recalled what happened .
Kabir (shouted ) – O hello Ms. I’m not your pillow. Few minutes before u troubled me a lot and now again u are doing. Just get up.
Saanchi at once changed her position.
Saanchi – I’m so sorry.
Kabir – bak bak machine kahi ki. (And made a teasing face to her )
In return saanchi too showed him tounge.
As saanchi was keeping her phone in her bag she saw her ticket missing. She searched her bag twice and thrice but didn’t got.
Saanchi (kept her hand on her head and thought ) – hey bhagwaan, why only with me.
She recalls while taking ticket she gave the money but forgot to take the ticket from the counter.
Saanchi started sweating. Suddenly kabir got up from the seat.
Kabir – sit comfortably for sometime , I’m going for a walk and he went away.
Saanchi saw the TT coming. She started to sweat more .
She also got up and went behind kabir.
Kabir saw her coming behind him.
Kabir – hey why are you following me.
Saanchi(still sweating ) – listen I’m not following you. I just want to use washroom. Any problem…… just leave my way.
Actually both were going to washroom only. When they reached there one was occupied only one was empty.
They saw TT was approaching near and near. They both got tensed. Again they started fighting.
Saanchi – I came first so I will go first.
Kabir – u came after me. So u will also use after me or wait till the other one gets empty.
Saanchi sees the TT was coming finally she spoke .
Saanchi – why don’t you understand I don’t have ticket . If that TT sees me without ticket it will create problem for me.
Kabir (surprised) – this means you too are stowing.
Saanchi – listen I had taken the ticket but by mistake I left it on the counter only …. wait a second ?what do mean by you too (giving a confused look )
Kabir – I’m travelling too without ticket. Actually my friends dared me to travel without ticket .
Their conversation stopped when they heard TT shouting on a person who was also without ticket. Saanchi and kabir both gulped their saliva?
They both were at wit’s end so both entered in the same washroom. And saanchi quickly locked the door.
Inside
Kabir and saanchi both were standing opposite facing each other. Saanchi was still sweating?. Finally kabir broke the silence.
Kabir – hyy, I’m kabir kapoor (forwards his hand for handshake)
Saanchi – I…. I’m saanchi. ….Saanchi Mishra.( huffing)
Kabir (tried to calm her) – don’t worry nothing will happen. See u r not alone .we both are stowing. And everyday a no. Of people stows.
Saanchi gave “u won’t understand wala” look ?
It was hot inside . Saanchi started to cool herself with her hanky. While kabir was staring her. When saanchi’s eyes met his they both shared an eyelock.
Unknowingly kabir started to move towards saanchi. When he reached to her he grabbed her wrist and started to decrease between their lips. Saanchi closed her eyes. Finally they both were kissing each other forgetting everything. Where they were, who were they (as they met few only minutes before ) , what were they doing. …… everything.
While they were snogging passionately the train stopped with a jolt making them break their kiss.
Kabir moved back while saanchi blushed heavily.
After that they both slightly opened the door to see whether the TT has gone or not. When they saw the TT stepped out of the train on the platform they took a sign of relief.
After that they both went to their seat.
Kabir – saanchi you sit comfortably, I will look for another one .
He was going while saanchi holded his wrist.
Saanchi – kabir you sit.
Kabir – but saanchi will you stand for so long. (While saanchi made him sit )
Saanchi – who said I’m gonna stand.
Kabir gave a confused look
Then saanchi sat on his lap. And then faced him smiling.
Kabir too smiled and wrapped his hand around her waist. While saanchi kept her hands on his.
And they both smiled.
An old couple saw them and smiled .
Old lady to her husband – such a lovely couple
Who knew that they were newly made couple. ??
Saanchi – kabir again if TT comes then.
Kabir (teasingly) – then ….. then again we will hid in washroom together. And you look so cute when you blush .Giving her a wink
Saanchi elbowed him on his stomach
Kabir – ouch(dramatically ). Don’t worry sweetheart, I have friend who lives in Bareilly. Next station is Bareilly . I have told him to bring two tickets.
When the train entered the tunnel and it was completely dark kabir quickly pecked on saanchi’s cheek leaving her completely shocked ??.
THE END
So now let me tell you how this crap came to my mind. Yesterday I was flipping the pages of my dictionary and I saw this word “STOW”. So writing this is not my fault . All the blame goes to my dictionary. So I hope u won’t be angry on me now but then also if you want to throw ??? on me u can do.
Readers please do comment down and if no then pls do hit ? or ?.
An important announcement
Friends this is my last article on TU. After this I’m not going to write anymore.
Till now I have written 20 articles before this including ff , fs and 4 5 os. Or ab shagun ke 21 bhi pure ho gaye ?? If u have ever liked any one also then pls do comment here as this is last one. Here I’m giving the link of all the articles ??
http://www.tellyupdates.com/user/15497/?profiletab=posts
I have made a fanpage for our beloved kaanchi on instagram.
Userid – vikramswarda_obsessed
If u want u can follow ☺☺
In last few weeks I have seen many of u calling me “di”. So let me make clear I’m in class 11th and I think 10th 11th students are in the youngest category. So I request pls don’t call me di. If anyone younger than me then also no need.
And from now I will only be reader so writers pls do keep writing. I’m leaving due to my studies. One more thing I won’t let you easily forget me ?. I will try to comment on all the articles. And if I don’t comment then pls do forgive me because I read and write articles here is top secret of mine. In last few days I have been caught 4 times by my sister reading ffs, but thank God by making excuses she forgave me. Most of times I have to close the page in between typing comment because my sister is around me. And now I have found a solution to this problem whenever a new article is published I copy paste it in wordpad. There my sister doesn’t investigate ??. So I don’t comment after I read. Whenever I get time I try to comment on all. I shared this because if anyone having same problem like me can use this trick ?
I’m very thankful to telly updates for giving me a large no. of friends. Especially my TU ig queens.
I talk so much na…. this is very less only my TU group of ig knows when I start it doesn’t have any break…. what say girls ??.
Ok so let me stop my bullet train here itself otherwise more than os it will become my talk article.
At last I’m sorry if unknowingly I have ever hurt you ? ?
Luv u all and a big hug to all
Bye ?
Take care
Your crazy friend/sister
Priyanshi
40 Comments
It was nice…… Hope u return soon
Thank u so much dear. U have always supported and encouraged me whenever I wrote. Lots of love and take care ☺??❤
This is soo lovely….i wish it was a many epi vala ff…this one shot is really very cute
Thank u so much Divi. Lots of love and take care ??❤
fantastic fabulous amazing …love you dear..this is not at all crap…subah subah itni achi os padh li ab smile is not stopping after reading this…
Thnk u so much dear . Chalo kisi ko to padh ke acha laga . Thank u so much dear. U have always supported and encouraged me in my every article. Lots of love and take care ???❤
Nice update dear. Waiting for the next.
Thank u so much shanaya. Dear it’s one shot so the story ends here itself . Lots of love and take care ☺?❤
awesome
but why will u not write anymore
please keep writing we love your writings
Thnk u so much dear. These days I’m feeling my studies are not up to the mark. So I’m leaving. And thank u so much for giving me love and liking my articles. Lots of love and take care ☺?❤
Priyu……..!!!! It was soooooooo awesome!!! How dare you call this bakwaas ???. Do your studies well but if you get free time, write something too ???.
Thank u so much ru. I’m glad u liked it. I will try dear and 2nd reason is shortage of ideas too. And dear u post ur soon too I’m eagerly waiting for urs. Luv u loads and take care ??❤
It’s lovely. Best of luck for your studies.
But if got time please write something we will wait for you agar time mile to please chota sa os jarur likhati rehana. Take care
Thank you so much dear. I will definitely try but what to do these days I didn’t have ideas so I’m leaving and most important reason are my studies. Lots of love and take care ☺?❤
Hey,dn’t do this.. Dn’t leave us
Thank u so much dear for ur love and support. Take care ☺?❤
Its soooo good fantastic fabulous.
Perfectly awesome
Thank u so much rishu. Luv u loads and take care ☺?❤
DEA it waz o7m mindblowing…dis os made my day…come soon vid a ff or os…luv u dheer sara n sry 4 cmentng at last.
Sana
Thank u so much dear. Luv u too and why r u saying sorry. U commented that’s enough for me. Lots of love and take care ☺?❤
So so amazing and outstanding and superb and mind blowing story………I am speechless reading this story………and the story title is rock?????????…………love u dear…….tc sweety…..and one order don’t call your writing bakwas agar firse bola toh hum log tujko dekhlungi………….love u sweety……..
Thank uu so much anu dear. Or pata h mai humesa se ye title dena cahti thi or dekho jaate jaate match kar gya story se to yhi de diya. Aapka hukum sarakho pe ?? lots of love and take care dear . And post soon I love ur ff ☺?❤
wowwwww!!!!! this was soooo cute!
Thank u so much miya. Lots of love and take care ☺?❤
Super fabulous fantastic canow u make part 2 because I love this story
Thank u so much divya but dear this was one shot only ?. Lots of love and take care ☺?❤
Nice.. Awesome.
Thank uu so much aafiya. U have always supported and encouraged me for all my articles. Lots of love and take care ☺?❤
first of all sorry for late comment…………….superb os but not kyu writing chhod rahi he? we all love your writing please possible ho to os likha karna please varna tuje bhoot or chudel banke darayenge me or IG or TU’s queen samjina……………………..love you dherrrrr saraaaaaaa…………….tc……………….
Ye kya yaar sab sorry kyu bol rhe ho …. comment kiya na that’s enough for me. Thank u so much dear u have always supported and encouraged me for all my articles. Or mai kisi chudail se nhi drne wali . Jinny betal hoon darti nhi darati hoon ???. Lots of love and take care ☺?❤
Os is amazing as always dear Priyu….But Tu kahi nahi jaa rahi …samjhi…..Dekh jab time mile toh post kar dena …..Warna main tujhse baat nahi karungi…Waiting for next….All the best for ur exams….lots of love to u …? ?
Thank u so much dear. Haye ye kya baat hui. Mai sirf likhungi nhi but padhna thode chod doongi. Ab to haalat aisi ho gyi h ki bin TU padhe din nhi nikalta. Mai yhi rahungi. And thank u for always supporting and encouraging me .lots of love and take care ☺?❤
Haye haye kya baat hai!!!
Taali!!!??????
Ab sequel likhegi ya maar khilane aaoon?Ab jaldi next part likhde phir hi lambi comment likhoongi..nhi toh iss chotu se hi kaam chalana padega!
Sequel tu likh de waise b tujhe bohot din ho gye likhe hue ??. Luv u loads meri bibu ??❤
Beautifully written and it was funny and love at only first sight that too in train perfect and awesome and I have read ur few articles and u write it perfectly and above all I also hide from my family and u read tu so don’t comment and ya sorry for the super late comment but wanted to appreciate u best of luck for ur studies hope u can reply to my comment
Thank uu so much dear. M glad u liked my articles and thank u for ur wishes. Lots of love and take care ☺ ? ❤
kameeni jinny……aaj main tujhse baat nhi karne waali……….bilkul nhi……….teri himmat kaise hui isko last bolne ki………mujhe ye lagta hai, ki thappad ki bohut zyaada zaroorat hai tujhe……..jab time mile, chup chaap likhna padega……….of course, BJ se bachke……….hehe………..os………ek dum faadoo tha……….khidkitod, darwaazatod, mohallatod, universetod………..dekh………kitna kuch tod diya tune…….ab iski bharpaayi karni hai tujhe samjhi………..apne agle post mein………..hehe…………luv u jinny……….milte hain ig pe
????ye sab mujhe nhi RS ko zaroorat h. Haye itna sab todwa diya par ye sab maine nhi toda tune toda h . Tu h brahmarakshas mai kaha nanhi si kamjor si jinny betal ?? luv u too brahmu ? ? ❤
Late comment kr rhi hu kyuki tjse gussa thi…vrna 2 din phle hi di k mobile se padh liya tha but gussa aa rha tha???…..last post keh kse liya tune?…mein kuch nhi janti jab tym mile tab krna….ab mra gussa shaant h thoda….abhi luvvv u lotsss priyanshi???
?? wahi mai soch rhi thi jo sabse pehle krti h is baar usi ne nhi kiya …. chal koi nhi aaj tera bday h enjoy kar… I hope aaj happy wale ffs or os aaye or tera dil khush ho jaye or aage mera kya hoga dekhte h kyuki time na gussa ho gye h mujhse. …. soti hoon 30 minute ke liye nikal jaate h 3 ghante????. Luv u tooo dayan ☺?? ❤