Hello, IB and DBO lovers! Your Neha-17 is back with another update. Sorry, for being so late. So, Sorry! Also I have a question for you at the end. I am extremely sorry for being this late and I promise this won’t happen again. My, exams are going on but I have got a long vacation between papers hence this update.
Sincere apologies! (Holding ears with hand)
For earlier episodes:
All Parts here
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Here is a short precap so that all your memories turn live and for new readers too.
Precap- Shivaay and Anika are pursuing their higher studies in US. Shivaay is doing MBA from Harvard and Anika is doing MS. She is lovely girl, with a deep buried feeling inside her. Their meet was destined by Destiny itself. They meet on a beach in Boston and for two years now their life is intertwined in Boston-the city of hopes! Shivaay teases Anika and then when Anika’s turn comes she punctures Shivaay’s car when he had an important assignment to submit. That is in Mandir scene . Here in US, she has a friend Clarie who is a sweet heart! Then they meet again at a hotel where he introduces Anika as his girlfriend …just to make her angry which leads for water on his face and then with anger throws her in pool. But, Anika is water loving person hence it’s a chop for Shivaay. Now currently they are in a party organised by Tia and her fiancé. Tia is Anika’s childhood friend their friendship was faded when Tia’s father transferred but due to social media they meet again!
(Note: Anika lovingly calls Tia as Chameli and she calls Anika as Champa. I am trying to use each element of IB hence this names.)
Tia: You still remember it? We used to wear flower on our head during childhood hence our English teacher kept our names. Haha!
Anika: And, Hindi ma’am she used to say Champa, Chameli chup raho as we were so talkative. Indeed! Those days were golden.
Tia: Even, I miss them. But you have totally transformed. I still remember choti Anika- the girl with spectacles. Chasmish, right? Bubbly. You were so healthy and chubby.
And now it seems you are maintaining your figure. See, you are so thin, cute and without specks.
A person- Really she was healthy and chashmish (having glasses/spectacles)?
It’s hard to believe. He was laughing aloud.
Anika: Shivaay, What are you doing here? Don’t laugh!
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Shivaay: Is this your patented place? I came as my friend called me.
Anika: Who let me know….?
Tia: Wait a min guys. First tell me how you know each other? I am puzzled.
Before Anika could speak…
Shivaay: Oh! This girl. Maybe, I met her at a beach. She was dying to have photo with me. (Smirking)
Anika was eyeing him with rage!
Anika: Oh! Hello nothing like that. Don’t bluff the story.
Tia, we had a brief meet few times. He has so many attitudes. Bagad Billa kabhi ka.We met just by coincidence,now.
You, said you wanna show something special to me. What is it?
Now, Shivaay was eyeing with furious look. But, he went as someone called him.
( Anika carefully changed the topic as she knew, none of them will keep quiet and gradually reveal their fight details. Tia, was surprised studying expressions on their face. She felt an unknown unsaid connection.She knew khichadi was cooking. But, it’s wise to be silent and let others spill the beans.)
Tia: Ya, Ani.
(Then, she came with holding someone and their arms held closely.)
Tia to Anika : Anika, meet my fiancé, Robin. Well, Robin She is my bestie and lively person. I am glad to be her friend.
Anika: O bête ki! So, you have found enchanting love, at this young age? Great going, I will be happy to be a part of your marriage.
Tia: Hehe, thanks Ani. He is a great person to be with. We will spend our lives till eternity . Also, he is a business partner of Shivaay’s family.
Robin: Hello, Anika. Welcome here. Nice to meet you. ‘Tia was chirping about you the entire day. Enjoy the party.
To Tia: Ya, darling till my last breath, I will live for you and YOU.
Anika: Glad to meet you too.
(Anika was happy to see their love chemistry. )
Then, Tia went to the centre area and started announcing.
Tia: Thank you all, by gracing us with your presence.The prime motive of organising this party was to have have a small get together. As me and Robin are here for a week and hence it was our idea to make this stay a special one, by calling all dear friends and acquaintances.
Well, now here is the most delighting parts- Games!
Rule- Everyone has to participate as majha sab ke sath ata hai. Kindly, form pairs then, I will explain the game play.
Soon, all pairs were formed except Shivaay and Anika. They gave a baffled look to each other. Tia,asked them to form a pair. As,no option left she blackmailed Anika that after long time she is asking a request. Finally! she agreed and Shivaay felt butterflies in his stomach.
Tia: Well, here is a sheet of scrap book paper. Both of the pair should stand on it balancing each other dance when the music is on. When the music stops, fold the paper in half. Again, music will start and resume dancing. This will continue till the last couple manages to stay on it. So, every time music starts fold your paper . Also, during the game none of the couple should lift up their partner. Mr. Soumil the food organiser will monitor everyone.
Hint: Balancing is the key!
Note, it is mandatory that your feet should lie on the paper only. That’s like a defined boundary. If someone fails to it, loses balance and stops dancing then disqualified.
Come on! Let’s rock the Game.
The game starts with music,
/*
You’re the light, you’re the night
You’re the color of my blood
You’re the cure, you’re the pain
You’re the only thing I wanna touch
Never knew that it could mean so much, so much */
#Music-1
POV: Shivaay and Anika- Shivika. They had just settled on the A4 sized paper and felt weird to dance on music with confined space. Yet, Shivaay had held her on her waist and she had kept hand on his shoulder. Their legs touched each other, so they could not dance freely. Moving, a bit they were never breaking the eye lock and swinging alternate sides with music. Also, each one had a cutish smile on their face.
The music stopped and almost all the couples (6in total) had managed to clear this round. And the paper was folded into half.
#Music-2
/*
You’re the fear, I don’t care
Cause I’ve never been so high
Follow me to the dark
Let me take you past our satellites
You can see the world you brought to life, to life
So love me like you do, la-la-love me like you do
Love me like you do, la-la-love me like you do
Touch me like you do, ta-ta-touch me like you do
What are you waiting for?
*/
POV: This time Shivika had managed tiptoed taking care that they weren’t going beyond the boundary. Anika was flustered, for the first time she was dancing with any man. That too, with comfort and delight. Never had ever she imagined she will blush dancing with someone whom she fights always. He was so dilligently managing her, as he was a trained in acrobatics due to his younger brother Rudra. Shivaay was thanking
for this opportunity, thought teasing her, he always loved to be in her company. Then, this was a golden oppurtunity. Both of them were matching steps, hand moments and waving their body with the flow of tunes.
Again, the music haunted, 2 couples were disqualified as they had stepped out of paper frontier line. Again paper was folded and it was 1/4th of the original now.
#Music-3
/*
Fading in, fading out
On the edge of paradise
Every inch of your skin is a holy grail I’ve got to find
Only you can set my heart on fire, on fire
Yeah, I’ll let you set the pace
Cause I’m not thinking straight
My head spinning around I can’t see clear no more
What are you waiting for?
Love me like you do, la-la-love me like you do (like you do)
Love me like you do, la-la-love me like you do
Touch me like you do, ta-ta-touch me like you do
What are you waiting for?
*/
POV: Tia and Robin were managing effortlessly as if this was a cake walk for them. Their glare into the eyes was like –
Love me like you do, la-la-love me like you do
Touch me like you do, ta-ta-touch me like you do
Also, they were smiling looking at Anika who were too managing with ease yet strangers to each other. Shivika were dancing listening to the lyrics. When the tune was -On the edge of paradise. then, Shivaay caught hold of Anika, and in the nick of time, managed her refraining from crossing boundary. Still, tiptoed the space was not so much to dance with glee. They were closer to each other and the touch brought intimaidating waves for them. Surely, they were enjoying each other’s presence.
Music stopped, one of the couple was eliminated due to imbalance. Paper was now reduced to 1/8th of its original one and only one person could manage standing tiptoed on it. But, as rule both should have their feet on the paper. Anika came up with an idea, and whispered into Shivaay’s ear.
Music resumed
#Music-4:
I’ll let you set the pace
Cause I’m not thinking straight
My head spinning around I can’t see clear no more
What are you waiting for?
Love me like you do, la-la-love me like you do (like you do)
Love me like you do, la-la-love me like you do (yeah)
Touch me like you do, ta-ta-touch me like you do
What are you waiting for? (ahhh)
POV: Anika and Shivaay has put their feel diagonally to occupy maximum space a foot can occupy still tip toed but this time balancing was difficult . The leg was hanging in the air making a contemporary balancing move like an ARABESQUE but not that professional.It is a posture in which one leg is extended backwards at right angles, the torso bent forwards, and the arms outstretched, one forwards and one backwards. Anika had basic dance training could manage and Shivaay due to acrobatics. Their bodies were barely and inch away from each other. The air around them had turned sparking. Lightning up their moves. This shocked everyone and cheered for both the couples ( Shivika and TiRo) as one of them could not balance.
Robin was tiptoed and Tia was standing on toes. But, surely that was awkward position, still Robin was managing her as her was light weight.
Anika (whispered in Shivaay’s ear) : Do you know winning is my passion since childhood ? So, don’t lose your hold. I will fight back till, I don’t acquire my WIN.
Then, she gave a grinning look to Shivaay.
Shivaay was beaming and Anika could notice twinkle in his eyes. The harmony of rhythm and notes made the atmosphere charged up, swinging gradually with tones…..
Love me like you do, la-la-love me like you do (like you do)
Love me like you do, la-la-love me like you do (ohh, ahh)
Touch me like you do, ta-ta-touch me like you do (ahh)
What are you waiting for? (ahh)
Shivaay: Even, I have a bad habit which never lets things go out of my hold, once I have declared my right on it. Be it a person, thing or a game. I pounce back and get the work done!
(Anika was shocked and her mouth made an perfect O)
Soon, Robin could not hold Tia and gave in. But, Tia was happy with the support he provided and the deserving team won! She went near Shivika and congratulated them and gave a winking look. Both of them were overwhelmed.
Tia: The one was restraining to participate won. Ha, Ani ? (Nudging her)
Robin: Shivaay you are multi talented! Every day you surprise me with one.
Shivaay: But today, I am surprised by someone else….
(Looking beamingly at Anika and Anika could not imagine they had won, her life was on surprise mode since she came in US. Unexpected things, visits and a meeting a charming guy who was believe not believe was more or less like her)
Tia: Shivaay, I had a rugged opinion about you as my sister left you. I thought you never paid her any heed, but maybe that decision was good for you both. You weren’t meant to you. Life has something else for you.
Shivaay: Hold on! What?
Tia: Shivaay, I am Tia Kapoor, sister of Malika Kapoor, you’re ex girlfriend.
Shivaay: What the wuck? You never told me since we met, you are telling me now?
Robin: What?
Shivaay: Yes, but Malika left me and ran away like her usual habit and never contacted me again. How is she and where?
Tia: She is in London. Doing internships and will start a architectural firm in India.
Shivaay: Okay, kindly give me her contact number.
Anika POV:
Anika was applalled, she never imagined this conversation will lead this way. She, assumed Shivaay to be single like her. Is he still taken? Does, he still like her now? Why was she imagining this and being affected? She never wanted anyone in her life ever. But, meeting Shivaay her beliefs were changed. She had met Malika once and admired her as being Tia’s step sister she had stood by Tia. Malika acepted Tia’s mom and was a perfect sibling. She is a gem of a person. Maybe, that’s why Shivaay likes her! Then, she went to have water.
Precap- Anika was crying.
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Sorry, guys. I posted after a long time. Was busy with submissions, exams, project, thesis, days etc .To make up with this I am starting an opinion column Food for thought where I want you all to discuss with me the topics IB and DBO left unanswered and any of your opinion!
FOOD FOR THOUGHT -1:
Why do they repeat Anika’s clothes? I was fine when she was not Shivaay’s wife. But now being an Oberoi they should good clothes. On the other hand, I love Shivaay’s suit everytime they are new and expensive.
Also, IB is famous for DNA test. Instead of Anika making an hungama over not meeting her mother. Can’t they confirm using a DNA test? Like Anika performed secreately SHivaay also can do that, isn’t it? Afterall he is Shivaay Singh Oberoi!
Do let me know your opinions about this channel should I continue? And the about the story update too.
Best Regards,
Neha-17
44 Comments
So nice and innovative just loved it. Superb update! You are right about Anika’s clothes they should show new. DNA test also true.Continue Food for thought.
Amazing dii…
Continue the channel… I have a question bank on ib and dbo
Neha di , after a long time . Really missed ur ff a lot .
As usual, this part was amazing ??????? . U nailed it once again .
Now , post soon ha . and all the best for ur exams ..
Hey Neha!!!! Finally u update this…. I miss it too much yr…. Nd this one was Awesome dr….. Plzz post ASAP…
Awesome epi
Awesome…. Waiting for the next part ?
Heyyyyyy nehu….(maine nehu h lkha h;-) 😉 )
Again a khidki tod episode,,,i can actuallly imagine all the dancing scenes ,,,,ur writing just make the fictional characters live….
Waiting to know how mallika enters in the episode..
Waiting for nextt…
N dont be sorry wo be itttttaaa saaaraaa,,,i can understand afterall studies r the frst priority,,,,
Alll the best for your left over exams..
Food for thought 1
*this ques is revolving in my head for sooo long,,,,why they repeat annika’s dress,,,,n about anika being oberoi still not dressed upto the mark,,,i think she already had told,she is only anika n,,thats whyy..
*i also love shivaay’s dress n look
*i was also thinkin,,,itna jhnjhat q krna h,,sidha DNA test krao….audience k b time waste horha h…
—-hn continue this,,i m liking this..
Lovee uuu
Fantastic episode ?? plzz post the next update ASAP, really they should do a dna test
Finally!!! My anticipation has come to an end.. Sadly it wasn’t daksh???
Nd this one is just fantabulously fantastic… Stupendously beautiful… Loved it!!!!
Nd about the channel, amazing thought..
About the clothes I really dont have any idea.. Lets just hope that they are taking time in designing annika’s clothes, as people are not always happy with her dresses… Nd the DNA test… From yesterday’s epi its proved that annika dont believe that nayantara is her muumeehhh, maybe she’ll get to the roots of it… Lets give them some time..
Anyways, I shall be looking forward to the nxt chapter, probably sooner this time…?
thank god u wrote recap otherwise i jad to read all ur previous episodes.. but ur storyline is really amazing yarr…
Hi Neha di , this is mind-blowing , awesome , amazing and many more. I really thought that the fiance is Shown Shivaye but you surprised us by giving Robin. The game was fun , when two tadibaz get-together ofcourse they won’t let anyone win. Waiting eagerly for next part di and yeah I read it around 2am but I was sleepyhead so I couldn’t comment , sorry di .
Love you ??
Welcome Back!!!!
Awesome Update…Loved it…
post d nxt asap… 🙂
Hey Neha..!! How’s uhh..??? Finally u hav posted this part..i was eagerly wating for ur ff.!! thank you so soo sooo muchhh..for updating such nice ff’s..i can’t express how muchhh..i loveddd it..!! it was amazing , awsome even words are less to describe how beautiful it was… Bt i thought it would be better if anika had any bf or some story like ur going to describe of shivayy..idk wht r u going to describe bt still i thought..ok..anyways..let it be ur doing best..nd my imagination is not good as urs..! So why would u chang ur trak for somebody else.!! Ok..anyways can’t u post ur ff atleast once or twice a week..?? sooo please please..i request u to update the nxt part asap..love u to the infinity..!!
Hiii Neha di …. That was amazing di n abt the dance I had a thought that u r a professional is it so .. N the way u described it was phenomenal di.????I’m captivated by ur writing skills di ??..
N a big tnks 4 posting it considering the state of the readers (lol) ..Actually I wanna tnq 4 taking time in ur busy schedule to write these wonderful stories.. Di I tnk Shiv bhaiyaa would be tnkfull to u to give such a wonderful oppor to him ???..love you di.??
Chotu sissy..
N yaa di I missed it .. Continue this channel.. I have no idea abt Ani di ‘s dress but I have the same q in mind why this Bhaiyaa’s SSO brain not working in this case ..
Hey Neha di !! How are you ! So finally you posted. Hope your exams went well. The episode was awesome. Loved it. Truly fantastic. And the song is mine favorite. Will wait eagerly for the next update di. Love you shooo much??
At last u post I’m so happy di. …….episode was spectacular……..all the best for coming xam di………about anika dress I also think the same
Awesome awesome awesome ??????? Loved Tia’s and Anika ‘s Chemistry at starting…loved it..keep writing??????
Love ya????
All the besy for your exams?????????
Awesome awesome awesome ??????? Loved Tia’s and Anika ‘s Chemistry at starting…loved it..keep writing??????
Love ya????
All the best for your exams?????????
thats mindblowing di its really very good im waiting fr the next part di
That was just an amazing episode di?…
Loved it ?….
Eagerly waiting for the next update….
And yeah All the best for your exams… ?
Post soon….
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Awesomeeeeeeeeeee bookieeeee???????? n the question are correct we can make book bank of questions on IB.superbbbbbb mind blowinggggggg
Di u just rocked it, it was so amazing loved it keep it up ur work
Awesome and thank u for the summary
Mind blowing!!!!!!!!! Loved it ya! Just awesome!!! No words to describe!! Just speechless ???
Aweso.e awesome awesome episode di. It was just mindblowinggggggg. Shivika’s game was awesome. Yeahhhh!! As i thought shivika wohhh!! Aur aapko na bahut time laga eh episode post karne ke liyeee. But mujhe pata h meri padhaku di padh rhi thi??. Sry sry. Mazak kar rhi thi. All the best for rest of ur exams. And i hope in the next Epi shivu convinces ani. I m eagerly waiting for the next part.
Food thoughtt
Ummmm……. first wala question mere dimag mein aaya tha. Par iska answer mere paas nhi h. Pata nhi. Haaaaaaa… shivay hamari ani ko koi dress lake hi nhi deta h. Isliye toh. Aur hamari ani itni sweet h ki kisi aur dresses leti nhi h. Upar se hamari ani ki saas bhi toh dekho. Saas nhi dushman h, dushman. Issi wajah se jo ani ke paas pehle se clothes the wahi pehnne padte h. Dekha mil gaya na answer. Main kitni smart hu??????
Aur second queation toh mere dimag mein aaya hi nhi. Neha di aap toh genious ho. Jo mere dimag mein question nhi aaya woh aapke dimag mein aa gaya??????. Waise mujhe lagta h IB ka shauk ho gaya h track ko lamba chinchne ka. Har track ko rubber band ki tarah lamba chinch raha h. Isliye DNA test ka idea reject kar diya. Pata nhi kab tak chalega eh drama. But jis tarike se ani nayantra ke saath behave kar rhi h. Mujhe lagta h jald hi iss track ko khatam kar denge. Par eh saas-bahu (pinky-ani) ka drama kab khatam hoga. Aur shivay kuch bhi kar sakta h par uske andar hamari ani jitna dimag nhi h??. Aur ani ka dimag chal nhi raha apni jhooti maa ko dekhke.
Waise main bhi apne ff mein daily IB se related baate bolna aur questions likhna chahti thi. But ab jab aap yeh kaam kar rhi toh meri kya jaroorat.
BTW hats of to you neha di. And your mind blowing ff. Jab bhi time mille jaroor likhna aur post karna. I will be eagerly waiting for the next part.
Love u Diiiii???
Ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes??. Aur itna bada comment type kar diya pata hi nhi chala??
Awesome
Amazing
Sry for short
Love u
Take care
Byee
Awesome dii it’s OK too good I just love the game dii but concentrate on your exams too love u diii ???
Wow Wow Wow…..You know the smile when you are expecting something and you get more than that… that’s the smile which was adorning my face…I totally loved it …every bit of it.The song,Yes I’m humming it right now…. I don’t know much about dance positions or acrobatics but I really loved your description.The POVs were perfect.In short, everything was perfect ???
Food for thought (that’s a good initiative)
1)I read the question and I was like- “EXACTLY”…Why don’t they have clothes for Annika? There’s no serial where there is a repetition of clothes(maybe once in a month) and that’s the only thing most of them concentrate on(because most of them have a poor story line).The new entries are given all the jewelleries and the clothes.For eg. Take Nayanthara-Dosen’t she look like a walking jewelry shop? That’s too much of jewelry.Now take Swetlana, Everytime I watch DBO(not much),she gets something new . They give new clothes to everyone excluding Annika and I really fail to understand the reason for it….
2)I don’t think anyone goes so often to the hospital for DNA test as the Oberoi’s. When they really need to apply their brain and go for it then no they won’t…Why?… Indian serial logic… Shivaay jumps to a conclusion that Om is illegitimate by just listening to Daima and that too not fully….and now he is trying to explain Annika that he can’t do anything without any proof or prior knowledge about it….
And this Nayanthara case-they can simply end it by a DNA test but no….again there comes serial logic….It’s really sometimes so irritating to watch….
You should continue with both and All the best for next exams???
Nice
nice dear!!
which music you have written that is my fav song..