Hello every one sorry for the delay…i got held up in work….so i could post the episode…………….
So till now
Shivay and anika are in mall shivay gets hurt saving ansh….omkara and Ishana are sharing their spaces unkowningly….
So here we go to jab thak jai jaan episode 16
Mall
Episode starts with anika leaving the boutique and ansh along with her….
Ansh turns to see him all the while he is leaving…..shivay looks at ansh and anika …
They leave the mall…..
Carparking….
Om comes running and stops anika
Om: wo anika ….
Arpita : yes…kya hua mr oberoi….
Om: wo …actually….actually ….
Arpita: kya ..actually….
Om: kyat hum shivay ko drop karsakthey ho….actually he needs to attend a meeting which is quite important…so …
Arpita: unke pass tho badi kadi hai na…mein kyun…
Om: actually we are leaving to some other place so …its just a help ….and shivay cannot drive …….sok if u dont wish then we will manage….
Arpita: ok manage ur self …bye…..
Om : kya…. anika goes….
Ishana signs him……om signs back with a sad face……
Ishana: didi….ho sorry …arpita …..actually bhaiyya cant drive so ….and we both are planning to spent some time alone…so …ok …we will manage…..
Om just cancel the ticket ..we will leave with bhaiyya….krithika will join us…
Saying which ishnaa turns towards arpita and gives a sad look and leaves….
Arpita thinks …..and calls out Ishana…ok i will drop him….
Ishana: no we will leave…..
Arpita: no i will drop him…..
Om and Ishana see each other…..they head towards krithika and manipulate her and take her with them…..
Shivay comes and ask shall i….
He sits in the rear seat…..
Ansh wo was sitting next to arpita gets down and goes and sits next to shivay….
Arpita starts driving….
Arpita: place ..:?
Shivay: place …matlab
Arpita: app ko kaha chod nah hai….
Shivay: muje laga puri zindagi sath chalogi…..
Arpita: hogaya film dialogue…. boliye kahan mein appko drop karun…..
Shivay says some place……arpita says fine….all the way they both see each other through rear view mirror……..
Ansh touches shivays hands and keeps sad face
Shivay: kya hua..
Ansh smiles and hugs shiva…he sits leaning over him…..with in his arms…..
Arpita sees this and hides her tears…..
Ansh takes some food stuff and which is hot…..he starts eating…he speaks to his mama and shivay all the while….. by which the stuff fell over the cut…and shivay shouts out of pain…
Arpita stops the car and turns…..
Arpita takes some watter and pours over it…she sees ansh who was afraid already…shviay hugs ansh…and arpita too pats him….
Arpita starts driving…
Arpita: we are going to hospital
Shivay: no…leave its just just…small leave…
Arpita stops the car and turns to shivay…they both look each other….arpita: i said we are going to hospital ….so thats it…
Shivay sees her and says ok….
Scene shift to hospital….
Doctor comes and exameines the wound
As he starts cleaning…. shivay holds arpita and closes his eyes….he start shouting out of pain……
Ansh comes and sees shivay and shivay to see him……he keeps on diverting shivays concentrationg by pulling his nose or doing someing mad funny stuff…..
By then shivay shouts more…and arpita holds him almost close… they see each other
Oh jaana plays…………………
She holds his hand tighltly so that he doesn’t shake. …..
Ansh sees them and smile…..
Arpita: app itna dharthi ho.. u shouldn’t have shown heroism……ho gaya…..its finished…
Shivay: u cant see me in pain…..and still ur life revolves around me …y dont u accept…this….
Arpita turns to see doctor…………..
By then shivay takes is hand …and arpita holds it and makes him sit comfortably…they both see each other……
Doctor noitice this and gives some sound so that they come out of the moment….
Arpita leaves shivay…shivay too…..arpita leaves with doctor…
Ansh sit next to shivay and touches his dressing…
Ansh: darath ho raha hai kya….he keeps sad face….
Shivay with teary eyed says no….
Ansh pats the area…shows his wound….and says meri mama muje itna data itna data……mein sad hogaya app ko patha hai…..he says how the wound happened and how arpita shouts at him…and how he teases her back…..at last…he says aur meri mama jab kusa ho jathi hai na muje jr billu bulatthi hai…..
Shivay: jr billu…shivay tries to hug him but he fails pain…..but ansh goes and hugs him…..
Nurse comes and pokes ansh…ansh sees her and turns face…..
Nurse ask his name and that this…..ansh to replies… at last
Nurse: appka papa ka nam kya hai.(shivay sits straightly and waithing for ansh answer desperatly)..
Ansh: papa….kaun papa…..
Nurse….ur father name….sab bachho ko tho papa hotha hai..so what ur father s name…
Ansh: papa…papa…..he sees arpita coming and goes to her….
Ansh: mama hey papa kya hotha hai….aur meri papa kaha hai…..
Arpita who was about to say the instructions to shivay…gets shocked hearing this…
Arpita: who told u this
Ansh:wo aunty…
Arpita: no papa papa kuch nahi hai…u keep quite…..
Ansh: muje papa …chaiye…papa aur papa nam chahiye…
Nurse: gets awk ward seeing arrpita …she says sorry…i ask him casually…
Arpita:( gives a plain look to shivay) no problem…actualy i am a single mother….
Nurse leaves with a smile….
Ansh comes and ask shivay appka papa kya hai….
Shivay sees arpita…
Arpita: with a angry face…. its enough ansh..i said u to stop this….else u wil pay…just keep quite…and come with me….and i dont want u to probe this more….
Ansh makes the crying face and sits next to shivay…
Shivay holds him and says: y cant u say his surname is oberoi….kyn anika…oopps sorry arpita…thu hamesha sach bolthi hai na…kun nahi bathat thi ki ansh ka pura nam ansh singh oberoi…hai…..
Arpita hearing this gets shocked…and looks at him…
Shivay: kya hua…yeh hi tho sach hai….he turns ansh towards him and make hims say oberoi….
Arpita: sach yeh hai ki mein arpita hoon…aur ansh ka surname oberoi nahi hhai……and how soon u accept it u will feel better……
They start to leave…..
Car parking
Shivay holds arpita hands and says thanks….
Arpita: i need to thank u for doing this for ansh……any way thank you….can u do me a favour….
Shivay looks her with smile : sure….
Arpita: ajj se ansh se door rehana…..
Shivay narrows his eye brows and gives a wicked smile and says ok…on one condition
Arpita turns back to see him….she says condition
Shivay: its not that big…u just come with me. Then i will do what i say……….plz anika…man jao na….mein there bina rahi nahi saktha ..plz..kn nahi sam parahi ho……
Arpita gives a sarcastic look and says: mr oberoi…yeh dialouse app bachakar rakiye… app ki shaddi ke bath use hoga….so dont waste that by saying to me…
By then the a person takes their photo…..arpita senses this and sees here and there……
The person takes shivay and ansh photo in particular………………….
They leave from hospital
Scene shift to oberoi mansion
Om in phone
Om: thank you with out u we couldn’t done this….thank you for doing this to us….
Poc; and after all this is for arpitas life….so dont say thanks …even i want arpita to get move on from her past….
Om: age kya hai
Poc: even i dont know i will say soon
The call gets dropped and om see Ishana smiling there….
Om: thanks Ishana …thu ne sambaliya….
Ishnaa: mm…wo didi ko kudse zyada doosro ki kushi ki padi rehathi hai…so i used that…
They smile together…..
Janavi and dadi sees this……….
Villa
Arpita ask kelash is he fine now…. we are going to shift tomo….and vinay will be joing us….as i said to him already…..
Kelash: are u serious arpita…..i knew u are strong but istara bagna achhi nahi hai….
Arpita: mein bag nahi rahi hon…mein sirf unse door rehena chathi hoon….aur ansh ko bi door rakna chathi hoon……
Kun ki mein risk nahi le sakthi…..
Kelash: ok ..its ur life …u are resposibilityy…i am not interfering
Arpita calls vinay and say about the leaving Mumbai tomo….and vinay to accepts her decision
O
beroi mansion
Om on call
Om: kya …kal jarahi hai….teeke mein dek lunga…..
Om reaches to dadi room…and conference starts…..janavi …dadi ..rumya and ishkara…
Om anika kal shehar jodkar jarahi hai….hume kuch karrna chahi hai….
Dadi: i knew what to do…..she smiles….everyy one see her
Beside the window …..shivay sees them
Shivay in mind: no more hide and seek anika…. u wont leave Mumbai…..thu ab tahi muje pura nahi janthi…jo shivay chatha hai wahi hoga.. he smirks
Precap
Arpita sees the lease papers and says yeh nahi ho saktha………………………..
Vinay shouts ansh is not in the villa i searched all the way……………arpita looks him with shock…………
Hello every one ..i knew i am bit late…but sorry….hope u enjoy the track……thanks for ur beloved comments…………………..
Thank you
Regards
maya
19 Comments
Awesome pragya loved shivika and ansh scenes
Good going
Wow its great fiction yaar.I feel it going better than real episode.Post it daily and thanks for bringing Shivika’s softmoments..I loved it
Nice
suprr episode pragya diii….@pohar ne jo kaha woh right hai..this ff is better than real series…
and i think that paper will be for anshs custody…..waiting for tomorrows episode…and plz update it asap…
Nyc one….
nice
superb…. but with english translation plz
After…long time ur ff…It s really nice….frm tomo can v get it regularly?
?supr happy dat i am readin ur ff aftr so many days …shivansh bondin growin stongr day by day … good epi dr …Can i say somthing if u dont mind ..i feel its time dat r stubborn annika starts 2 melt a bit ..i am not sayin nxt epi Shivika together r somthing but a lil change can b seen ri8 ? Juz a suggestion ..i still luv ur ff e1 if u dont agree … coming 2 precap interestin..shivaay’s gonna do somthing which is gonna shock+angry annika(guess) r is it dadi? …waitin fr da nxt epi n vl keep guessin too?
Nice I am waiting for your ff….Post next ASAP
Hey maya….its suprbb again…i luvd all d scenes n shivansh scenes r particularly awesummmm…….but i have a doubt..actually frm many days…..i thnk in oh jana i nver read of shivika gettng intimate…..??? Did i miss tht ??? Plzz let me know…..i mean kab hua ??
Maya di sorry for not commenting on your previous episodes
But this epi is rocking
Thank God at least annika aka arpita cared for her billuji
And ansh and shivaay’s bond is fantastic to the core
And Shivaay confidently telling that he would not let annika go away from him.
That was perfect on his part
And I loved the epi
The way you write is awesome and heart touching
Waiting for the next epi
Please post it ASAP
Wow dear awesome update dear.???
Interesting precap??
Super Dr I really loved it .emotional and touchy .shivika and ansh scene made my heart cry
Hi I’m a silent reader its an awesum f.f really enjoy it can u please post in English coz it very difficult to understand Hindi thanks
WOW ? another lovely epi Maya di you just nailed it so well. Superb especially all the Ansh scenes with his parents and pls update the next part asap.
You are going amazingly good dear.
Keep writing
Lovely…di….superb
Hey Pragyaa …ur just Awesome dear…so sry ..for late comment….but dear after reading ur episode….I felt very happy…U Rocked my dear
..hattsoff .. plz continue..Keep Rocking dear