hiiiiiiiiiiiiiii………..bak again..!!…to eat ur brains…
yay….
i m so so so happy dat u all r liking my bakwas ffs..
THANK U SOOOOOOOOOOO SOOOOOO SOOOOO MUCH:::
u all r d best thing ever happened to me…
thank u again..
i know i had said 11 date dats bcos i thought 11 as sunday but 9 is sunday so here i m….
so as u all know..
so lets go to d shot…
wait…..!
here is d link to my ff
junoon wala ishq
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n here for janam janam kaa pyaar
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hope it work….
n yaa on 10 it will end…
SHOT:8
the epi starts with..twinj was in d car..tw was so much happy wid d news..n was enjoying outsides cold wind..she dont know dat she had to bear dis cold wind how much….while kunj was in thinking..
kunj:(thinking)wat is happening to me..? y i m not able to do acc. to d plan..something is stopping me..but wat..no no..i cant stop..i hav to do it…for my sis..for my mahi..ya i hav to do it…cmmon kunj..
kunj:STOP:::!
he shouted his lungs out…driver get scare n stop d car..while tw was boggled…
tw:wat happen kunj anything wrong…
kunj holds her hand tightly n open d door n pull her n throw her on d foot path…
tw:kunj..! wat happen…
kunj starts to leave …he was about to sit in d car…but
tw:for mahi sake tell me wat is dis..pls
n she starts to cry…
kunj:i was not going to tell u…but u know mahi is my life…she is my evrything..so hav to tell u…miss whoever..watever
tw:kunj…y r u talking like dis..n u love me na..! den y whoever..pls tell me..
kunj:oooooo miss taneja..i dont love u..n dis all was for revenge…
tw:revenge..? which revenge
kunj:dont try to b so innocent…i hav done dat only wat ur brother had done with my sister…
tw:my brother..? ur sister..?.kunj i m not getting anything..pls tell clearly
kunj:i had done watever ur brother had done with my sister…he act to love her..wen she cme to london…n got succeded..n den leave her…leave her wen she need him..wen she was pregnant of his BABY….n i do d same with u only…i m leaving u pregnant…wen u need me d most…
tw:wat…? means u dint love me..n wat u will get from dis…
kunj:wat i will get…? i will get peace..as i have took d revenge..i know ur brother love u very much n by dis he will b shattered….he will repent…i had done all d thing which he had done…but difference is dat..i had giv u pain in interest…he had make out with my sis…on d day of cnfession only…but i dint…as u r his sis na…u dint let me do…so i gave u uncomfortableness first with cloths u dint like..den make out wid u…n n n n i make out with u 2 tyms …
n he leave in d car
tw was crying vigorously on d footpaath only n just repeating”i loved u kunj..! pls dont leave me…except u noone is der for me in d world..”
n kunj was in d car …he was sad..his heart was crying…he is like a lifeless body.. he donno anything….just tears r cming from his eyes he also donno y..!…his brain n heart both had stop working…he was thinking of tw n his moment…
(ps read d song…or listen while reading..)
yaadan teriyaan aundiyaa haju lele ke
rona aa assi kalle
rati oss chan thalle beh beh ke
rati oss chan thalle beh beh ke
yaadan teriyaan aundiyaa haju lele ke
tere bina dil eh dadhakda nai….
tere baajo dil eh lagda nahi..
roi jaave sine de vich beh ke…
sohn teri dil sokkda nai
(both were remincing der initimate moments…tw keep crying…n rain starts …with a stormy weather..kunj cms to sense n clean his tears..n saw outside…)
aaye…tujhe bhi pata a
mujhe bhi pata
yeh jo hai dil ki hain galtiyaan
tujhe bhi pata …mujhe b pata
yeh jo bhi hai…dil ki galtiyaan
hum hai bekusoor…ho gaye dooor door
mar na jaayein vicchode seh seh ke
yaadan teriyaan aundiyaa haju lele ke
(he open d door immidiately n comes out of d car…n starts running towards d direction tw was…he was too far…atlast falls on d ground crying..)
humein jo mile
yeh jo faasle
marzi nahi hamaari
rab ke hai faisle
haathon ki lakeer
jo mod deti heer
raanjha aata nai khayalon me reh reh ke
yaadan teriyaan aundiyaa haju lele ke
tere bina dil eh dadhakda nai….
tere baajo dil eh lagda nahi..
roi jaave sine de vich beh ke…
sohn teri dil sokkda nai
hanju le le ke………..
kunj stands up…
kunj:y m i going to dat girl again….y..she is just too much…bcos of her i lost d taxi also n flight also…i m going mad…i also donno wat is going on………..
he goes n sat under d tree…n again lost…
he came to sense wen d crow do toilet on him(sorry forget d word…hope u understand….)
kunj:chiii…..ewwww…
n starts to rub his cheeks
kunj:ooooo my god its going to b morning….its 5:00 am..it means whole night i was here…leave it now i hav to go…my phone battery had also dead…
he goes to d hotel through taxi….
in hotel:
he cms out of d bathroom…n saw many misscalls of mahi from night…
he calls her
mahi:helloo…
kunj:gm..mahi y did u call me dat much times…
mahi:to tell u truth
kunj:which truth..?
mahi:whuch i came to know yesterday night…tw bhabhi was………
kunj:shut ur mouth mahi…dont take d name of dat girl on ur tongue..n yaa congratulations our plan succeded…
mahi:wat…….d…dat means..u..u left her…
kunj:yaa…y
mahi:omg..bhai..!
kunj:wat happen mahi
she says something by listening which kunj got shocked n phone falls from his hand..n he run…
he falll down but again stands…up..
paas aaye…
dooriyaan fir bhi kam naa hui..
ek adhuri si hamaari kahani…rahi..
aasman ko zameen…yeh zaroori nahi..
jaa mile…jaa mile
ishq sachcha wahi…
jisko milti nahi…manzilein..manzilein
hamari adhuri kahanni
hamari adhuri kahanni
(he runs n comes out of d hotel…some workers were carrying a rice bags…n many other jute bags..he bangs wid dem..n all d rice fall on him..d workers started to scold him he take out his pocket n hand to dem..n leave …..he was running n running…)
khushbuon se teri..yunhi takra gaye
chalte chalte dekho na hum kahaan aa gaye
jannatein agar yahin
tu dikhe kyun nahi…
chaand suraj sabhi hai yahaan
intezar tera sadiyon se kar raha
pyaasi bethi hai kab se yahaan..
hamari adhuri kahanni
hamari adhuri kahanni
(he was like anything….wen some ppl were fighting with eo…he runs in btwn dem…dey beat him…he fall on his knees…his clothes gets torned..he gets some feeling he turns n saw evrywhere..he again stands up n runs to dat direction)
pyaas ka yeh safar khatam ho jaayega
kuch adhura sa jo tha pura ho jaayega
jhuk gaya aasman
mil gaye do jahaan
har taraf hai milan kaa
doliyaan hai saji.. khusbuein har kahin..
hamari adhuri kahanni
hamari adhuri kahanni
(he reaches d place…no one was der…he falls on dat place only where he left tw…some blood was der…he touches it..wen he listen “i love u” he turns n saw a couple hugging…he smiles..n den see d blood n cries…)
***************flashback end*****************
kunj:after dat day..i lost evrything…wen i come back to hotel n boarded to mumbai…i came to know mahi was in hospital..she had complication in her pregnancy which she dint tell me…n left me FOREVER n hand u 3(girls) to me…from den i m ur father….
manav:but papa… i dont understand wat mahi chachi said u on phone
shravan:me too
(i know u all also dont know)
kunj:mahi said dat..tw was innocent…tw had came to know about uv cheap things so she told evrything to her dad but he instead of uv…threten her bcoz uv was handeling der business…so tw came to india she donno dat mahi was dat girl…but she had came india to find dat girl n take her again to uv…n make her bhabhi..in all dis tw was innocent…
dev:u know u had done a vry bad with mom
evry1:yaa right
kunj:i know but hav to make her understand now..will u all help me..!
n he forward his hands..one by one evry1 put derr hand on him in acceptation…
screen freezes on der happy face….
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so finally end…
hope u r not cnfused…
it take 3 hour to write yaar….
i know revealation was so bad…sorry for dat….
n i know dis one was painful n sad epi sorry…next will b full of fun……..
sorry i dint reply to ur cmnt…i dint get time…
n yaa kyaa dhamki thi…i salute u all
i was writing dis from friday
1 hour friday
1 hour saturday
1 hour sunday
precap:mission tw manao……..n few funny things
15 Comments
Mindblowing
Hayeeeeeeee meri jaan kuch baaki nai hai mere paas ye epi describe kar ne k liye bechari Twi bura phas gayi n kunj I know wo use mana hi lega sooo epi was soo cute amazing awesome n emotional too loved it to the core……
Do cont soon ????
Awwwww meri aamu aj to rulla diya tune…
Yadana teriyan song is one of my fav. Yr…
Loved today’s epi allt and lost the other ff also na…
And han I love u
Aamu dear miss u yaar… Superb.. Thanks 4 the update… U r a darling … Tc
Update soon
Aamu missed this ff alot dear…the revelation is fab…felt bad for twinkle…damn excited for precap…try to post next soon…
Sooo finally u r back…. Very much happy to see u again… Btw superb epi…
Hii aamu I’m so happy dat u r back episode was awesome n also sad bt amazing loved it
Awesome
Lovely
Waiting for next episode ❤️
Hey ammu I missed this ff very badly love it…….
revelation was mindblowing your episode was muuuahh
thanks for update
love u
Oh m g ………what a fabulous episode Ammu………..it was fantastic
Aamuuu, missed u n ur ffs alott.. glad ur back again ??.. the epi was amazing n emotional one.. the revelation was awesome.. poor twinkle got trapped in all this??.. aww next epi gonna b funn.. hehe waiting for it 🙂
Aamu jaan plzzzzzz sabse pehle tu mujhe maaf krde for not commenting on ur previous episodes….I wasn’t getting time to check TU….coz of extra busy schedule…..but today when I got time I checked TU nd found ur ff …
I was sooooo happy to see it….
Amazing episode yrr….how do u manage to express emotions so beautifully….. Kunj’s pain …. Twinkle’s heartbreak….. Kunj’s regret…. revelation…. everything was sooooo perfectly described….. awesome yrr…….
Loved it to the core…..
Love you…. missed u..????
awesome amazing fabulous emotional sad epi
I know I m late…so sorry yaar….but this epi is really really emotional…I cried infront of my cousins….bahana patha hai kya hai ….mob dekh kar…hehehe..lekin seriously yaar it was so Painful….I loved it…
love u…
Wow Loved it 🙂 Sorry for the late comment 🙂 Awesome The part was so emotional and the song selection was too good 🙂
The part actually made me cry but it was so sweet 🙂 Post soon 🙂