Hi guyzzz…….. So sorry for not posting epi for 2 days. coz I was confused on how to take the story forward. Its the first time I am writing an ff so pls forgive the mistakes. As my exams are starting I wont be able to post epi for some days. So plzz enjoy Jndsd on tv for time being.
Atharv after tying the sacred thread on the tree goes inside the temple and stands infront of the idol.
Atharvs POV(point of view)
You know everything. Pls help me. Let me know my past. I am getting flashes of someone. Someone very special. Pls make us meet. There is some problem in my past and I know that is the reason why Maa is hiding it from me. But I am ready to face it. I don’t want to live a life with unclear memories. Pls help me. And pls make my Maa stay happy always. She is my world.
The pandit gives Prasad to Atharv. He takes it and leaves
The ladies sprinkle water on Vividhas face who is lying unconscious. Vividha wakes up. They give her water.
Lady1; Are you feeling better now?
Viv: Yaa…Im fyn. Thank you.
The ladies leave
Vividha: Why am I feeling that I have seen Atharv? Was he the one who holded me?
Vividha sees the lady who gave her water.
Viv: didi….who holded me when I faintd? I wanted to say thank you.
Lady: A boy holded you. He was here all the while. Don’t know where he went.
Viv; Its ok.. Thank you di
Vividhas POV
Was it Atharv?….No…It cant be…..If it was Atharv he wouldn’t have gone away seeing me…that too after 5 yrs…We have so much to talk…so much to share…I miss u Atharv….where r you?
Jaana naa(sad)plays………………………………………
Its night
Atharv is in his room. He is thinking about how he holded the GIRL today. He is lost in thoughts. Suddenly he realizes something.
Ath: Why am I thinking about her?…I don’t know her. I haven’t even seen her face…But why is she bothering me.? Why did I feel strange when I touched her?….Music plays………….
Is she related to me?….No..No…All this is filmy…No way….
Suddenly his phone rings and he comes back from his self talks.
Ath: Hello maa…
Suj: Beta…..how r u? when did u reach? u didn’t even call me? You…
Ath: Maa…maa…relax… Im all ryt…Pls don’t take stress….
Suj: How cant I take stress….you r there alone…that too in this condition…Did you have food?
Ath: Maa….. I had my food…and if u take so much stress how can I sit here peacefully?…Did you have food?
Suj; Yes
Ath: And tablets?
Suj: Yaa…
Ath: Now go and sleep peacefully…No stress…. Ok
Suj: Ok..Beta take care
Ath: Maa…U want to see me ryt…Lets video chat.
Atharv on the camera
Ath: Maa….See me…I am perfect….
Sujata smiles seeing Atharv.
Ath: Now u r happy….Ok..Now its late..you have to take rest… good night
Suj: Ok good night.
Ath: Wait Maa…
Atharv thinks to tell about the temple incident but stops as it can put Sujata in tension.
Suj: What happened?
Ath: Mmmm…nothing…I miss you…
Suj: I miss you….Now you also go nd sleep.
Atharv smiles nd disconnects the call.
Its morning
Vividha gets ready. She wears a beautiful navy blue saree with a navy blue blouse which has golden circles design.
Viv; Bhagvaanji…Today is my first day in this city. First day in the school. I need ur blessings. Pls bless me. Pls help me. Take care of my family. Dadi, Maa, Guddi, Ankit.
Vividha suddenly notices the time and is shocked.
Viv: Oh nooo…Its 8:40….How can I be late…that too the first day..Bhagvaanji…bye….I have to go now…
Vividha rushes out of her house.
Atharv is sleeping. The sunlight falls on his face. He wakes up. He sees the time and is shocked.
Ath; Noooooooooooooo………………..8:45..Oh no meeting is at 9;15.
Atharv jumps from the bed and runs to the bathroom. He takes shower and brush simultaneously. Main Pareshaan plays………….
He dressus up. He looks at the clock. its 8;55. He rushes out of his room but stops midway.
Ath: p..pu..Purse…(he looks at his wrist) watch…..Files….
He runs back. He takes the things and gets in the car. He leaves but gets stuck in traffic.
Ath: Oh no….now this was left.
Vividha is in auto and is stuck in traffic. She is near Atharvs car.
Viv: Bhaiyya….how long will this traffic stay….
Autowala; Don’t know…..
Atharv and Vividha are tensed. They don’t see each other. Jaana Na……
Precap: Vividha reaches the school. Atharv is talking with someone nd is near the school.
4 Comments
Really nice …
Nice.interesting precap
Plz continue to do ur work gud story narration
Waiting for the next…. keep writing…. vitharvians are here to support u…..