Jndsd- hamari adhoori kahani/soulmates- ep 7
Atharv agrees to stay with aashi… He calls sujata …..
Atharv(on phone call): sorry, I won’t be coming home … I have got some important work… It will take some time…. Don’t worry I will be back soon…. I’ll miss you …..see you soon…
Vividha assumes that he was talking to her wife/girlfriend
Atharv: I don’t have any right but can I ask you one thing…
Vividha: yeah… Go on…
Atharv: where is ravish and why are you at someone else’s house?
Vividha: (in mind: I was right you did assume that I love ravish…you left me….. You doubted on me… Love is trust… And our love lacked trust that is why we got separated by fate….. You have moved on Atharv So have I… So there is no need of me to clear your doubt……Jaana dil se door…..plays) (to atharv) he is on his duty so I came here to stay with my friend for sometime… I am really happy…
Atharv: (pretend that he is happy for her) I am really happy for both of you.. You did right…( in mind: I have moved on too Vividha I don’t know why the heck I was hopping a miracle to happen….. It’s my fate that I am not with you.. It’s was written by fate that we will get separated… But I had no idea that the one who will come between us will be my step brother . I was not meant to be with you that’s why I am not……I am not lucky enough to have you in my live……)….( Jaana na dil se door …Jaana na dil se door…..)
They kept looking in each other’s eyes for a long time without even saying anything… Their eyes were complaining each other… Asking the reason why????(Aashi interrupts)
Aashi: what happened to both of you??? Why are you staring each other???
Atharv: nothing…. Why what happened???
Aashi: let’s go in… Uncle…. (Vividha and Atharv enters the house) weird…
Atharv: what’s weird???
Aashi: (in mind: you two who else??? ) oh… Nothing…I was just talking to myself… Let’s go in…
(At night: Inside the house…. In aashi’s room)
Atharv: why are you not sleeping???
Aashi: I don’t want to…
Atharv: then we should play…
Aashi: yes… I will get my toys…. Wait a minute
(Aashi came back with her toys)
Atharv: let’s play… Yay…. I love toys…
Aashi : but you are a big man… How can you play with toys…you will look weird…
Atharv: you don’t know I am kid too…. Should I show you???
Aashi: yes (in excitement)
(Atharv acts like baby Atharv)
Atharv: YE LO!!! Chalo khele… Yay…
Aashi and atharv starts to play with toys…
… Vividha wakes up and notices that aashi’s room light is open… She went to her room in order to close the lights…. But then she sees atharv and Aashi playing… She stands behind the door and kept looking at them… She looks at atharv and remembers… the moment they spend together… When they first met… Their first cute fight… Their bike ride…their fight for love… Their pain… Their hugs… Their love…. Their painful separation.. Cuteness and innocence of baby atharv…
Jana na dil se door
Jana na dil se door
Jana na dil se door
Jana na dil se door
Oh..
Tere khayalon se mehke hum chadan se
Tujhse mili hai zindagi jeeva mein
Kabhi chhod ke mujhko jana na nahi
Apne liye tadpana nahi
Jo bhi hai teri arzoo
Chahat meri wahi
Mar jaun re tere naam pe
Tere naam leke aara jiye jaun re
Ho mar jaun re, mar jao re, tere naam pe
Tere naam leke aaraun main jiye jaun re
Jo tu na toh sab hai paraaya
Banke rahun tere saaya
Ye vaada ye vaada main nibhaun re
Kam na ho ek pal pyaar ka ae suroor
Jana na dil se door
Jana na dil se door
Jana na dil se door
Jana na dil se door
Unintentionally smile came on her face… She smiles looking at them… She looks toward the mirror and notices she was smiling… Her face expressions changed…
Vividha: how can I smile??? I don’t care or like him anymore… She remembers all the pain she went through when atharv left her without even saying something… She gets tearful eyes and she went from there….
Atharv: (to Aashi) are you hungry?? kela Khao gi… Waise to main apna kela kabhi share nahi Kerta… But only this time… I will go and get some… Wait for me…
Atharv went to get bananas… He took water bottle out of the fridge… He was putting water in the glass but it slips from his hand and water spills all over the floor…
Atharv: oh no!!! I should quickly clean it or someone might trip due to this….
He went to get mop to clean it…
Vividha: I should go and give them too something to eat… They will be hungry till now…
She enters the kitchen and slips because of the water on the floor… Atharv holds her hand to save her from falling but end up falling himself too….. Vividha falls and atharv falls over her… Just like happened in tabela when vividha put her feet in cows waste… They both got the flashback of that scene…. Jaana na dil se door…. Plays….
Precap: someone calls on landline… A person says preeti is with us…. if you want her bring 1 crore to this address…. Vividha looks at atharv…. Vividha says “1 crore”….
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Note:
I know I am late but I am busy with my studies…. So you know I can’t be fast…. Also, I am really disappointed with the fact that I only got 6-7 comments…. I know you don’t like to comment but please do comment… I want more people to read my ff because I put lots of efforts in it… Hopefully you will understand…
O yes…. I want to ask you something which place you want Vitharv to go??? Other than manali and Kashmir… What about goa??? Tell me your favorite place…..
Plzzzzzzzzz comment!!!
5 Comments
Hloo…nice stry…carry on…???..try to update soon…our support is with you..your way of writing is too good…i like vitharv starring scene and falling scene…both??…i think goa is good…as ur wish..u can choose some other romantic place…nice move yaar..keep writing
nice keep writing more and nore and yes plsssssss try to update fast
Tell me a nice place… I don’t know many places so please tell me… Goa is just another option because I can’t think of any other place… Plz tell me …. It will be nice if the place is like manali…. Comment please
don’t disappoint man……. keep writing ya we need support but four to 6-7 comments are good I also get only 7-8 or 9 comments in my FF yr dso just chill.
Take them to Amritser that golden temple seen or my ranikhet(Uk,india) im my go man…. keep it up.
This is very interesting.. Update sooner