Hello guys I am kiara again with another OS on rikara. Let’s start.
Introduction
Omkara: a very decent rich man and lives with his mother in Mumbai
Gauri: a very poor girl who lives in a silent area near Mumbai in a very tiny house
Jhanvi: omkara’s mom and is very humble and kind lady
The story starts and the camera rolls on a girl with open hair….she is wearing a simple white colored salwar suit. She is coming from the mosque. The dupatta is set around her neck and on her head. She opens a door and looks around for a while and then starts cleaning. Its early morning and she makes food and gets ready and walks towards the noisy area of Mumbai to sell the floral bracelets which is her job. She lived with her loving mother and father but they died in an accident 3 years ago. She now lives alone in her tiny home. She sells bracelets and teaches some kids of her town.
She is alone… she has a habit that whenever she gets time she goes to the mosque to pray. People see her and get furious as to what she is always praying for so deeply and for who. She locks the door and walks ahead
On the other hand omkara is a decent boy. The camera rolls on his hair. He is fixing them. He is smiling and then goes downstairs. He is wearing a white shirt with a brown blazer and blank pants, no doubt he is looking absolutely handsome.
Jhanvi: arrey omkara beta you came. Okay come have food
Omkara: okay maa. He then kisses her forehead in a busy way
Jhanvi: okay beta look actually….here are some pictures….
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Omkara: look at the photos and select a beautiful girl right? Maa aren’t you tired by saying the same thing over and over again and hearing my “no” all the time. I don’t want to get married. I just don’t like getting married I don’t maa.
Jhanvi: then what about my dua (prayers)? The “dua” I keep saying all night and all day then what about that? Someday at least some of my dua will be fulfilled na. You just keep saying whatever you want but you see one day my dua’s will be fulfilled.
Omkara: okay maa but now I’m going. We will talk later.
@on the way
Omkara on phone: what? But Mr. Agarwal that far? I don’t know the way. Where will I ask? Here I don’t even see anyone. You are calling me at such a place…okay I’ll try finding it. He hangs up then says Mr. Agarwal says such far places. Now who do I ask? Where do I look for it?
The car is going and omkara is getting stressed out. He don’t know where to go but while driving he just reached a silent area. He is driving the car in a rough way and suddenly he sees a girl coming from the side of the road. He tries stopping the car and the car stops but the girl met with a minor injury on her hand due to the sudden break. He didn’t see the girls face yet. He just runs to her and suddenly holds her arm and she suddenly looks at him with wider eyes.
Both rikara get lost into each other
Takte rehte tujhko sanjh savere (I was looking at you from dawn to dusk)
Nainon mein basya jaise nain yeh tere (your eyes have been united with mine)
Tere mast mast do nain mere dil ka le gaye chain (your pretty eyes have stolen the serenity of my heart)
Mera dil ka le gaye chain tere mast mast do nain (my heart’s serenity has been stolen by your pretty eyes)
They both come back to reality
Gauri: my hand she says softly and bends her head
Omkara looks at her hand in his grip and leaves it immediately
Omkara: actually I’m sorry. I have a meeting and its somewhere far from here and I don’t know the place and I don’t know where I was looking I didn’t see you and I came here and you were walking ahead and I by mistake just by mistake. You..you please try to understand I am very sorry. I don’t have any bad intentions I’m just lost oh god
Gauri slowly looks at him and looks right into omkara’s eyes and says don’t say sorry, I can understand
There was something in her words that got omkara mesmerized hearing gauri
Tere mast mast do nain tune plays
Gauri: what happened? Please don’t stare at me like this please and how did you forget the way? You don’t just lose your way. You. Yes you probably didn’t ask for dua (prayers) from god
Omkara: dua? (Prayers)
Gauri: you probably didn’t ask for dua
Omkara: yes..yes I mean no… no I don’t believe in all this
Gauri: that is very wrong. Just ask for dua and one day it will definitely be fulfilled
Omkara: all that is fine…oh god your arm is getting red. You are bleeding I am so sorry I really am even your suit got dirty
Gauri: even your white shirt got dirty na
Omkara looks at his shirt and his buttons are open and somehow gauri’s blood got on omkara’s chest by accident
Omkara: oh god meeting. I mean its okay you come with me to the doctor
Gauri: I will go but first let me show you the way. Actually the thing is this place is always silent and never really crowded. Besides me you will find no one really here
Omkara: you know the way?
Gauri: yes. Wherever you want to go tell me I will tell you
Omkara: thank you…thank you so much. If you weren’t here then I don’t know what would’ve happened. Okay you sit in the car first your bandage then my way and then I will drop you till your home
Gauri: no please listen to me and first finish your meeting for my sake
Omkara gets shocked hearing her. He has no words to say
Omkara: okay…okay that’s fine
They go for meeting…omkara gets the project and he calls some workers and they put a bandage around her injury.
After sometime omkara says here you go now there’s no pain na
Gauri: I wasn’t in pain before either
Omkara: but if there was no dressing then later it would pain for sure anyways I’ll drop you to your home
Gauri: no…no I don’t want to go home. When a traveler leaves home then they shouldn’t leave without finishing the work. I will do my work and you don’t worry I will do it I am from here only.
Omkara: but…okay fine as you wish
Gauri: thank you
She is about to go when omkara holds her wrist unknowingly. Gauri gets nervous and turns her face towards omkara again and her deep eyes are enough to make omkara senseless.
Tere mast mast do nain plays again
Gauri: do you have something to say? She says it softly and nervously
Omkara: ye…yes what’s your name?
Gauri looks at him and after a lot of thinking says gauri and then leaves
Omkara repeats her name three times gauri, gauri, gauri and looks at his hands and thinks about gauri’s hand in his hands. He thinks I want to see her again. I don’t know why I didn’t want her to leave from me????
@after 3 days
Omkara is searching for his shirts and he didn’t see anything white. He thinks arrey that white shirt…and then stops and says arrey that day gauri….3 days ago who I met…..I’m just not able to forget her….what is wrong with me???? No…no..no its nothing omkara. Your head is just overthinking things. That shirt is probably not dirty but then stops again and says I didn’t put that shirt for washing it….oh god what’s happening to me??? I forgot to give that shirt!! Oh nooo ugh just forget it and comes downstairs
@downstairs
Jhanvi: beta preeti came she is calling you. She’s sitting in the car outside. Look omkara you can marry any girl I don’t really like preeti but yes it’s true that she likes you a lot okay so whatever you wish
Omkara kisses on her forehead and says oh my beautiful maa. Why do you worry so much?? I said na I don’t want to get married besides she doesn’t really like me. She is just my friend and then he goes
@office
Omkara is sitting on the table and he gets up and tries hard to forget gauri but her innocent face and beautiful eyes are spinning in his mind. He gets up and starts walking here and there but suddenly by a jerk to the glass his arm gets injured. He says ouchhhh this glass… he is about to throw the glass but then remembers how gauri reacted when she got hurt in fact there was no reaction just her innocent face and he again gets lost in her eyes
SONG CHANGE
Gulabi aankhen jo teri dekhi (when I saw your rosy eyes)
Sharaabi yeh dil ho gaya (my heart became drunk)
Sambhaalo mujhko oh mere yaaron (my friends, hold me)
Sambhalna mushkil ho gaya (it is now difficult to balance myself)
Bura yeh jaadu teri aankhon ka (the magic of your eyes is bad)
Yeh mera kaatil ho gaya (it is my murder)
Gulabi aankhen jo teri dekhi (when I saw your eyes)
Sharaabi yeh dil ho gaya (my heart became drunk)
Maine sada chaha yehi daaman bacha loon haseenon se main (I always wanted to stay away from beauties)
Teri kasam khwaabon mein bhi (I swear on you, I keep myself at distance from)
Bachta phira naazneenon se main (such delicate thing even in my dreams)
Zara sa hanske jo dekha tune (when you smiled a bit and looked at me)
Main tera bismil ho gaya (I became your lover)
Suddenly preeti enters and sees omkara’s injury
Preeti: ohhh my omkara baby you got hurt. She hugs him and holds his hands and he gets irritated
Omkara: preeti just stop calling me baby…I’ve told you before don’t try I don’t love you in fact I don’t love anyone
Preeti: but I love you my sweetheart and I will gain you just see
Omkara: really?? And how are you so sure about it that you will gain me? He thinks for a while and then says okay tell me did you ever wish for me? I mean I’m just asking but have you ever said a dua that I should also love you back?
Preeti: yes omkara I have ummm when I went one day to the mosque then I did yes and she smiles and omkara laughs with no voice.
Omkara: this is what dua is right “gauri”
Somewhere gauri feels like someone called her and omkara looks at his injury
Jo bheji thi duaa, woh jaake aasmaan se yoon takra gayi ke aa gayi hai laut ke sadaa (the wish I had sent, that collided with the sky such that a call has come back)
Omkara loses control and he starts driving the car towards the road where he met with gauri that day. He reaches there and he starts searching and he looks around. It’s silent with no noise and no voice. Peace and quiet just like the peace of her deep eyes. He closes his eyes and merge his head towards the seat
SONG CHANGE
Aasman zard hai (the sky is pale)
Aahein bhi sard hai (breath is frigid)
Tan se saaya juda ho gaya (shadows are separated from bodies)
Pal bhar mein jaane kya kho gaya (in an instant something is lost)
Saans ruk si gayi (breath flows haltingly)
Jism chhil sa gaya (body feels like it’s been skinned)
Toote khwabon ke manzar pe (on broken dreams)
Tera jahan chal diya (your world survives)
Noor e khuda (light of god)
Noor e khuda (light of god)
Tu kahan chupa hai humein yeh bata (tell us where you’re hiding)
Noor e khuda (light of god)
Noor e khuda (light of god)
Yun naa humse nazarein phira (please don’t turn away from us)
After sometime he thinks gauri is calling him….he smiles with closed eyes
Gauri: you wake up na please
Omkara opens his eyes and to his shock he was not dreaming but in actual gauri was calling him. He smiled with wider eyes with shock and with happiness.
Omkara: yo..you here?? What are you doing here?
Gauri: yes? But I should be the one asking you this question. This is my place, my road, my way. I come and go from here every day. What are you doing here?
Omkara looks around and he is seen sleeping in the middle of the road like some crazy person and realizes his mistake and flows his fingers through his hair and says I’m sorry I actually fell asleep I mean I got tired so I fell asleep.
Gauri smiles deeply seeing omkara’s innocent face and seeing her smile omkara also smiles and they look at each other.
Itti si hasi (just a little smile)
Itti si khushi (just a little happiness)
Itta sa tukda chand ka (just a small piece of moon)
Khwab ke tinkon se (with the straws of dreams)
Chal banayen aashiyaan (let’s make a home)
Omkara didn’t want to miss this moment so he immediately started pretending to have a very bad headache and he held his head with both of his arms
Gauri: what happened? Are you okay? Yo..your health doesn’t seem fine please come with me to my home I’ll give you tea omkara get up please
Omkara suddenly looks at gauri and the fear for him in her eyes is clear and gets furious and asks how do you know my name? (Just so you all know omkara asked gauri her name in the beginning but she never asked for omkara’s name which is why he is a bit shocked)
Gauri gets tensed and says actually your offi..office yes your office I heard them say your name in the office. I was going through a newspaper and your picture was there with your name so that’s how I know. She breaths nervously
Omkara: ohhh and then looks at her and again holds his head and says ahhhh its paining a lot
@gauri’s home
Omkara enters and the house was very tiny. Omkara had to bend to enter from the short gate and they go inside. For a change her room is decorated very beautifully but it’s just that one room. There is complete peace, quietness, and relaxing and he just sits on the cute bed and soon lays down.
Gauri: you lay down I will go get some tea for you with ginger
Omkara closes his eyes and realizes he is very happy at this moment he is happy like he has never felt what happiness is. After sometime omkara is seen sleeping and gauri enters and she gets nervous but tea is necessary for his health. She came closer to him and softly placed her soft hands on his rough shoulder and rubbed it. Omkara opened his eyes and felt something so so soft and then looks at gauri and they both get lost in each other’s eyes again.
Omkara: I am so sorry my shoulders but did you have any work?
Gauri gets really shy and nervous and left his shoulder and omkara smiles clearly.
Gauri: actually you were sleeping and I needed to give you your tea so please drink your t..tea
Omkara laughs and drinks the tea and it was so amazing…the taste was so out of the world and he was lavishly drinking it
Omkara: the tea was really good I had fun drinking it. There is no name left for the pain I had and suddenly he says in his head arrey you are gone omkara you could’ve sat for some more time here but no nothing stays in your stomach na you just say everything that comes in your mind. You drank the tea? Your headache is gone na anyways the headache that wasn’t even there in the first place but now I don’t feel like leaving gauri and then looks at her and smiles then says aloud okay then I’ll leave now
Gauri: okay bye and smiles
Omkara also smiles and is about to go with no mood of going when suddenly gauri calls him
Gauri: omkara
Omkara: yes gauri and turns towards her
She came closer to him and gave him his wallet…omkara was so lost in her eyes
Gauri: your wallet om…omk…omkara
Omkara: yes thanks okay bye
Gauri: bye
He goes and he himself doesn’t know how many times he has turned back before leaving all the way outside
@night in his room
Omkara is lying on the bed and thinks I just can’t forget even an expression of that girl….gauri there is some magic in calling her name…he starts thinking again why? Why is it that whenever I try going far from her than there is some restlessness feeling going on inside me? What is wrong with me? The person whom I haven’t even known for so long whenever I go close to her why do I keep feeling her always around me? I feel at peace after going to a new place. What is that girl? What magic does she know? Is this magic?
That girl…that girl is my intoxication. Magic or love? He then stops and his eyes get wider and says to himself am I…? Am I in love with gauri? Am I..??? He closes his eyes and remembers her words, her expressions, her care, her home, her blood, and her fragrance and suddenly he opens his eyes and says lightly first then shouts in joy I’m in loveeeeeee I LOVE GAURI!! I LOVE YOU!!! I LOVE MY GAURI!!! MY GAURI!!! MY GAURI!!!! MY PIECE OF HEART!!! I LOVE GAURIIIIII!!!
@next morning on a Sunday
He reaches near her home again but gets nervous and thinks will you knock the door omkara? But what will you say? What excuse will you give? What do I do? What do I do? Then he remembers her words again….he suddenly looks in the sky and prays if my love today is true then get me out of this problem god please do something that gives me a reason to go inside.
Today I want to tell her….today please listen to my dua….a tear falls from his eyes and suddenly clouds covered the sky
Inside gauri gets furious and thinks this unexpected monsoon….definitely someone asked for it with a genuine heart and it starts raining heavily.
Omkara shouts with happiness….he just can’t believe what happened and thinks thunders, rains what else can be a better excuse than this. God listened to my dua and then knocks the door peacefully and gauri opens the door
Omkara gets mesmerized seeing her wet in the rains water….gauri is just looking at him and omkara thinks my crazy heart has fallen in so much love with this innocent face…how do I tell her this. I myself don’t even know how to tell her. Omkara comes inside of course with permission and holds gauri’s hands. He was lost in her eyes and gauri gets nervous and shy….she is shocked.
Omkara removes her hair from her face and holds her face and looks at it with so much love then holds her belly….gauri is just looking at him and her eyes get wider…she looks tensed…she hugs omkara tightly and omkara isn’t even in his senses after seeing a beautiful gauri in front of him that he loses control and gauri loses her state of mind seeing omkara after all he is so charming…gauri kisses omkara’s cheeks and omkara gets stunned seeing this act of gauri so he goes with the flow and kisses gauri’s eyes and then goes to her neck behind her and kisses it while from the back he slowly moves his hands to gauri’s belly and pulls her where gauri’s back is touching omkara’s chest.
Gauri is really nervous and turns and kisses omkara’s forehead and then his eyes and omkara is holding onto gauri’s waist from both sides and omkara starts dancing with her in the rain lightly.
Kabhi jo baadal barse (sometime, when the clouds rain)
Main dekhoon tujhe aankhein bharke (I see you with my eyes full of water like clouds)
Tu lage mujhe pehli baarish ki duaa (you look like a wish for the first rain of season)
Tere pehloo mein reh loon (I wish to live in your shadow)
Main khud ko pagal keh loon (I wish to be called mad for you)
Tu gham de ya khushiyaan sah loon saathiyaa (whether you give me sadness or joy, I’ll bear, o beloved)
Koi nahi, tere siva mera yahan (there is nobody other than you who is mine)
Manzilein, hain meri to sab yahaan (all my destinations are here in you alone)
Mita de sabhi aaja faasle (come, end all distances)
Main chahoon mujhe mujhse baant le (I wish you to share me with myself)
Zara sa mujh mein tu jhaank le (peek into me a little bit)
Main hoon kya (what I am?)
Gauri: omkara….
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Omkara: I love you gauri…I love you not from today but ever since I saw you for the very first time from then…I love you so much. I know it hasn’t been a long time for you but for me it has. Ever since I’ve seen you my every moment is yours. Every moment has turned into your memory. When you are here it’s still like a dream. It feels like I am in heaven but why?
Why do I love you this much even I don’t know but I just do. You are my rain you are my sun you are my everything. You are my “dua” (prayer)
When gauri hears all this she cries heavily but with no voice…she runs a bit away and turns her face against him….omkara came closer
Omkara: ga…gau….gauri
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Gauri: even you are my love…not from now but from the first time I saw you omkara….I love you endlessly…this much that the sky and ground would still be less…..this much that the sun and shade even become less in front of my love….this much that all my dua’s all turn into your name.
She says all this softly and is looking right in omkara’s eyes….omkara gets shocked hearing her and after sometime says g…gau…gauri actually umm but she interrupts again and says shhhh let me talk omkara….first time when I saw you that day I saw you for the first time from then I’ve asked for “dua”
Omkara: that day??
Gauri: no..that day you saw me for the first time….I saw you from today 7 years ago…when you were going to college…I think it was your first day….and a baba passed by your bike that day…you saw his condition and gave him your wallet in his hand and he was giving you his dua and you were taking it…then I was looking at you….that’s when I fell in love with you and your face got captured in my eyes. I told you na omkara that dua will someday get accepted if you ask from your heart….today do you believe me? My 7 years of dua would get fulfilled in this manner I never knew….7 years omkara…whatever time I found I only asked for you….and look now I have you and I got your love too.
My life is complete omkara…I’m complete now…my dua is fulfilled
Omkara was touched with her words and thinks that’s why preeti’s that wish didn’t get fulfilled? She only liked me but never asked for the dua from her heart…true lovers can sometimes not meet each other because maybe somewhere far away they are being asked for with a true and genuine heart….maybe someone else’s dua leaves a greater impact then someone’s dua who doesn’t ask with a true and clean heart.
Omkara and gauri hug and are lost in each other and continue their romance….<3<3<3
THE ENDDDDD
Remember guys all dua’s (prayers) are fulfilled but some just take time and some don’t really get fulfilled easily because someone else is asking for a dua with a pure and genuine heart and their dua is probably stronger than yours but eventually god will fulfill everyone’s dua’s.
Guys how’s it?? It was my first OS on a Muslim backdrop. I hope it was good. Please leave your good and bad comments below. I would be happy to read them!!!!