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Jo Tu Mera Humdard Hai… a Devakshi ff… part 9

Sorry guys for making you wait so long. I am very busy these days.
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This was the best day in Sona’s life. When the day started they were fighting, then she bunked, then Dev stood up for her, she made everyone own up, she took her first detention. Ideally she should be sad but no there is a wide smile on her face which refuses to cease. Sona enters her room and opens her drawer & takes out her diary. Here I am presenting excerpts directly from Sona’s diary ….
“ What a day! I really don’t know why I feel so elated. I was detained, I have bunked I should be crying but no I am smiling. What has happened to me? Is it because that I’ve finally made friends? Or is it a side effect of that walk?”
Sona stops writing for a while & takes out a yellow rose from her pocket & places it in between the pages

“This rose is very special, given by someone who is becoming special. When Dev dropped me home I didn’t wanted him to leave but he came back just to give a prefect … just perfect ending to the best day
of my life. He gave this rose to me. He forgot about it & had kept it in his pocket. The rose is so crushed. A petal fell off while he was giving it to me. The fragrance is also diminishing but still this is the best gift that I have received. While giving it he said “I friend you Ms. Bose” and I said “I friend you too Mr. Obhodro”. I wish he would have said something else & the colour of the rose would have been red. I don’t know what is this happening to me… attraction, infatuation or is it love … but whatever it is … it is mine & l love this feeling.
Devrath Dixit see what have you done to me

Rang rahi hu ye kaise rang me
Mai nahi hu khud apne hi bas me

Kuch Rang Pyar ke aise bhi
Kuch Rang Pyar ke aise bhi”
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After a few days Elena went to the market to buy some grocery and what she saw was a funny nightmare.
In the grocery store she saw Bijoy Bose & Ishwari indulging in the stupidest chat she has ever heard. It so happened that Ishwari Nd Bijoy again collided at the store & the conversation is as follows
Bijoy: Ishu

Ishwari: Mera naam Ishwari hai ab mai aapke liye Ishu nahi hu ( My name is Ishwari you can’t call me Ishu)
Bijoy: But why

IShwari: Kyuki aapne mere halwe ka mazak udaya. Mere halwe ka? Aap kuch aur keh lete par mere halwe ka mazak udaya ( Because you made fun of my halwa)
Ek bowl halwa ki kimat tum kya jaano Bijoy babu
Bijoy: Dekho Ishwari … why do you want to create melodrama over here hum bahar chal ke baat karte hai
Ishwari: Melodrama ye sunne se pehle mai mar kyu nahi gayi.
Kya aapko pata hai
Ishwari ka aashirwaad hota hai ek bowl halwa
Mere Dev ke sar ka taaj hota hai ek bowl halwa

Jo khata hai mera ye ek bowl halwa
Wo sirf “Ishu … Ishu … “ karta hai
Aur aapne mere is ek bowl halwa ka mazak udaya
Bijoy: If you cannot make anything else then I’ll gift you a book 10001 dishes except halwa
Ishwari again got offended and went out of the store. Bijoy followed Ishwari . Ishwari sat near a tree. Bijoy went after her singing

O meri bholi Ishu
O meri pyari Ishu
Mera jeewan tere bina hai wo halwa jisme ghee na ho Ishu ghee na ho
Mera jeewan tere bina hai wo halwa jisse Dev hat hat guzre door se guzre
Mere prem ki naiya beech dagar mein gud gud gote khaye O ishu paar lagade
Mujhe Halwa khila de
Chahe karele ka khila de
Par halwa khila de
Mohe apna bana le

Ishwari was flattered. She became happy.
Bijoy: Ab to tum naaraz nahi ho na Ishu (You are not angry now Ishu. )
Ishwari held a corner of her saree nodded & said no
Bijoy: I knew it. Ladies can’t be angry for a long time. They are soft hearted
Ishwari: Lady kisko kaha? Mai aurat nahi hu ( Who did you call a lady? I am not a woman)
Bijoy: What should I call you then?
Ishwari: Call me maa …
Bijoy: But why?
Ishwari: Kisi ne mere bachpan me meri maa ke haath pe likh dia tha ki tumhari beti maa hai. That’s why I am not a lady I am maa.
Bijoy was confused but he was getting late & he bid her goodbye. Just at that time he stepped over a banana peel & slipped. He fell straight into Ishu’s arms. All his groceries fell as if coming directly from the sky.

Oh la la … Oh la la … Tu hai meri fantasy
Chuna na Chuna na ab mai jawan sorry sorry
Ab mai budhi ho gaiiii.
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The session ended & the school was planning to organize a trip for Agra for the 11thies who were going in class 12th. Dev,Sona,Jatin,Vicky & Elena are discussing about the same sitting at Vicky’s place
Jatin: Excited for the trip?
Elena: Super excited
Sona: I won’t be able to come
Dev: Why so?
Sona: Kaka won’t agree
Dev: If you won’t go I won’t go either.

Vicky: What is this Dev?
Jatin: This may be our last school trip & the first one of ours with Sona. Sona you’ll have to come
Dev: Don’t force her Jatin. The three of you go
Vicky: Why aren’t you coming?

Dev: Because Sona isn’t coming
Everyone looked at Dev for a while. He realized that he had said too much.
Dev: There should be someone to give her company.
Jatin : I’ll stay back then.
Dev: Why … why will you stay back?
Jatin: Someone has to ‘give her company’ so I’ll stay back
Dev: No Joti you go I’ll stay
Jatin: No Dev you go… I’ve been to Agra before
Elena: Relax guys! Relax … All of us will go
Sona: Kaka won’t agree.
Elena: & If I fix your Kaka somewhere else then?
Elena was giving a mischievous smile.
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That night Bijoy got a call from some Ele travel company offering him 2 tickets of a bus going to Haridwar along with a package of a three days two nights stay at Hotel Alaknanda, haridwar with free fooding & lodging. Bijoy was about to say no when he remembered that his Ishu wants to go to Haridwar & he said yes. He was dancing with happiness. That was when Sona received a call from Elena

Elena: Agent Gold Agent Travel reporting. The rod is hot I repeat the rod is hot. Strike now. Over.
Sona: What is this nonsense Elena. Can’t you talk normally & I know Kaka… he won’t agree. He is not into Tirth Yatra & stuff
Elena: He is not into all of this but Dev’s Bua maa is.
Sona: Dev’s Bua maa? Where does she come in between?

Elena: Agent Gold. Do as I command. Over & out
Sona: Hello… Hello Ele… he..
Sona finally plucked up the guts to approach Bijoy & asked him whether she could go on Agra trip with school. Sona was anticipating that Bijoy would shout but Bijoy gave her joy.
Bijoy: Shona Beta! It’s your life. If you will not enjoy when will you have fun. Go … you go to Agra & I’ll go to Haridwar …. Ahan Ahan
Bijoy didn’t realize that he had started dancing in front of Sona. Sona was shocked . He covered up

Bijoy: Uhhhh …aaa … Jao Shona Beta …. Go nd study.
Sona left the room. Bijoy locked his room & jumped on his bed & started dancing to the tunes of Disco Dancer, Jumma Chumma, Chahe koi mujhe junglee kahe.
I leave the reader with this obnoxious spectacle. You are free to imagine him dance in whatever way you want
There were too many scenes to add in one episode hope it has not gone confusing. Writing an ff is not as easy as I thought. I had thought of this Agra trip from the time I started writing finally I have reached this part.

PRECAP: Dev sits in the bus with Sona. Everyone looks at this unbelievable scene.
Dev: What? I need to sit near the window seat…otherwise I’ll vomit when the bus starts.
Jatin: Aaj kal zyaada hi beemariya nahi ho rahi tujhe
Ishwari & Bijoy’s bus breaks down. They ask a truck for lift.
Guess who is the truck driver.

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