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EPISODE 13
AT THE TEMPLE
Om and anika were sitting under a tree in the temple.
Om :anika why are you silent?
Anika : temple is where we get peace….
Om : there is something wrong with you I can sense that….
Anika : no om I am totally fine….
Om : that smile on your face tells me that there is something…
Anika : smile is a good thing…
Om : I know sometimes the prettiest smile hide the deepest secrets and your smile is one such….anika it’s me you can share your problem with me.
Anika : om I don’t know what to tell…you are one who understands me as my sahil…
Om : it’s about Shivaay…am I right?
Anika : om…
Om : I know anika…he is your strength and weakness….What happened tell me…I will be happy if I could help you…
Anika : no om…I don’t want you to take any stress.
Om : doctors will tell like that only….it does not take any stress to solve my bhabi’s problem.
Anika : om…you know what billuji hasn’t changed a bit…still he is believing in blood, family lineage and status….
Om : did he insult you again?
Anika : no om…..when he talks about those stuff somewhere inside me I feel hurt by his talks…
Om : anika….you just know Shivaay for two years but for many years me and rudra are trying to change his belief….but it did not happen but after he saw you his thoughts changed atleast he tried to change and he is in that phase…
Sometimes as you say tadibazz Shivaay can come out but that doesn’t mean he hasn’t change….he loves you from his bottom of heart.
Don’t think that I am saying this as he is my brother….but the fact is that once a person finds place in shivaay’s heart he will never leave them till he dies….two years ago his heart beat for me and duffer but now you and saumya are also part of it….and anika you have the highest position in his heart . You are his pride….don’t be angry on him for his silly mistakes….
Anika(with a bright smile) : you are really a relationship guru….I will never leave my billuji…
Om : that’s my anika….
Anika : okay come…it’s late.
Suddenly om was feeling uneasy….his heartbeat increased his eyes searched for ishana…he knew she is somewhere near him.
Anika : come om….
She turned and looked at om who was lost somewhere and he was sweating like anything…anika went and shook om…
Anika (tensed) : om are you okay….
Om : ishana…
Anika was confused…
Om : anika….ishana is somewhere near….
Anika : no om….she is not here….I think you are not well…
Om didn’t even hear what anika was talking as his full concentration was in searching ishana….he ran like a mad man searching her.
Just then Shivaay and rumya came there…they noticed a car coming in full speed towards om…anika on the other side also noticed it…all four at a time shouted om….
A girl pulled om towards the corner thus saving him from the car….
Om saw the eyes which was looking at him with immense pain…he uttered ishana and touched her cheeks….he crushed her with his hug and words were not coming from both….tears where flowing conveying the love for each other….
Shivika and rumya were standing in shock seeing ishkara….
Om kissed ishana’s cheeks , forehead and hands….
Ishana touched om’s face with trembling hands…..
Everything in the world is still for them…..they are the happiest people on earth…..om who couldn’t bare the over excitement fainted on ishana….shivika and rumya rushed to his rescue….
Shivaay : rudra take him home…..and make him rest….I have some other work and if he wake up don’t speak anything….said Shivaay eyeing ishana.
Anika : I will also be here….saumya take care…
Rumya left with om….
Shivaay who got so furious got hold of ishana and pushed her inside his car and took her to a deserted place….
He dragged her out and pushed her on the road…..
Shivaay : how dare you show your face to me again?
Anika : billuji control yourself…
Ishana : I can say that it another way too….
Shivaay : you made a huge mistake and is showing attitude….
Ishana : bhaiya….
Shivaay : don’t call me that you lost that place of my behen long before…..
Anika(in tears) : ishana….it’s been a year since I saw you…get up…
Shivaay(shouting) : anika….if you touch her then forget me….
Ishana : didi…don’t come near me….I don’t want any misunderstanding to be created between you and bhaiya….I mean Mr. Shivaay because of me….
She turned towards shivaay….
You wanted to know why I came to Mumbai….right. I didn’t come here to see om….
Shivaay : then why the hell are you here?
Ishana : Mr. Shivaay singh oberoi…..you are not the only one who love your business….I love my dance and I came here for a workshop which I couldn’t resist.
Shivaay : what big dance….is that a profession….I know you came here to torture my brother…
Ishana : wow Mr. Shivaay….see how much you love your brother….go and ask your brother whether dance is as cheap as you think….he will burry you because your so called brother love art and dance is also a art form.
One more thing….don’t ever try to behave with me so rudely because I expect respect from others as I give it to others….but if your not ready don’t expect me to give any respect to you….bhaiya has become
Mr. Shivaay…don’t lower it to Shivaay….
Shivaay in full rage….how dare you can talk to me like this…..I will kill you…
Anika : billuji….stop it. Ishana I am sorry for what happened here….you can leave now.
Ishana : anika didi you don’t need to be sorry….I will leave this city once the workshop is done….
She was about to leave….but turned and saw shivika…..take care of om….he is so precious. She left crying….
Anika : billuji…why are you doing this….om needs ishana can’t you see that the way he reacted on seeing ishana…he loves her billuji.
Shivaay : but she doesn’t…..I want to protect my brother from that cheap girl….
Anika : who is cheap? Ishana….no . Your thoughts are cheap….you think that you are protecting om….have you ever read his eyes….it always says a lot but now a days his eyes are only longing for ishana….you are making him vulnerable by not letting ishana near him…
Shivaay : anika….enough I know what should I do….and you don’t have any rights to interfere in my brother’s life…..
Anika : I knew you will say something like this…..ya you are right who am I to om….who am I to decide his life….who am I to you….I don’t have any right on anyone in that house not even you….
Shivaay : see anika it’s about om and ishana not about us and I didn’t mean to hurt you….ishana betrayed om and he hates betrayal and she is not the perfect match for om.
Anika : okay may be you are right….but answer this question…. I am not the perfect match for you then why you accepted me…
Shivaay : because you were always honest towards me but ishana is not….
Anika : really……think well Shivaay you thought I betrayed you by sleeping with daksh for money but also you married me….
Shivaay : anika….how many times I will say sorry for that….
Anika : sorry should be said for the mistakes that can be repaired not for the one which is irreparable….your mistake is such….you will always be the one who pointed my character and I won’t forgive you for that….never….
Shivaay with tears in his eyes….but when I proposed you….you accepted me….now you are telling that you are not….
Anika cuts him and says….that is love Shivaay…..my love for you covered my hurt but that doesn’t mean there is no trace of it….all I wanted to say is….my love for you made me to accept you and the same can happen with om also…he can also forgive ishana….we can’t decide anything….think Shivaay….
Anika walked past Shivaay with straight head and Shivaay for the first time is standing with his head down in shame…
Shivaay (mind): anika is right….it’s om who has to decide his life….I now know that a girl can’t forgive someone who pointed her character….all these days I was a fool thinking that you forgave me….but I am wrong….now I promise you anika I will try my level best to heal the wound I have created….panika….I am coming you will see a whole new billuji who is madly in love with you…
He smiles seeing anika who now almost went out of sight.
PRECAP
Anika ignores om…..saumya doubts rudra…
That’s it for the day….plzz do comment guys.
19 Comments
Its awesome ishkara moment,om advice to anika,shivika fight was emotional.
Beautiful update…last part was really nice…
i liked om advice
Awsm..dear..
Loved om’ s advice….ishkara meet & last bt nt the least shivika….it was so nyc…….post nxt episode asap….
nice,,
osm Ishkara and Shivika scenes…..good one yaar…
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Awesome chandini dear ishkaara part was mind-blowing
Osum dear waiting fr d nxt
superb. loved the convo between om and anika. they share amazing bonding. and ishkara.. awwhh.. loved it from the bottom of my heat. om loves ishana so so much.. ishana was awsome. the way she replied to shivay, and also asked them to take care of om.. she was so in love with om. and last but not least, shivika part was super. anika did the right thing that she shouted on shivay. at least he realized that ishana was not at fault. loved it. waiting eagerly for the next one.
Superb update???
superb… I liked om’s advice, ishkara moment and convo b/w shivika… Waiting for the next update…
I am so in love with your ff. Anikara bonding, Shivaay-Ishana convo everything was so great…..And Ishkara…what can I say… you nailed it again. Om and Ishana’s love for eachother was expressed so beautifully. Waiting for the next one.
what to say yr i m speechless after toady epi..
it was awesome se b awesome…
every part ,every convo was damn good whether it was between omika or shivika or shivana..
ishkara were to like cherry on th cake..
thanks chandni for such a beautiful epi..
keep rocking dear.. ☺☺
Nice
Hmmmmm
God why do I fall short of words at time.
Om’s advice was amazing he is such a genuine person.
The intensity in each and every thing was mind blowing.
Ishu bursting out at Shivaay was great I think this baagad billa needs more such outbursts.
Well I am desperately waiting for Om’s reaction and you nailed it princess, you are a splendid and an outstanding writer.
Love you princess ?
Take care ?
And post next one super soon.
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nice article
home https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ToRxHWeyVIk
om is really relationship guru…
how simply he explained it….
loved ishkara’s remeet…
ishana’s reply was amazing….
& above that annika’s ans was like muh tod jawab to tadibaaz billu….
means overall i want to say.
u rocked it dear…
love u a lot……?
Thanks mrunal