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EPISODE 29
Anika ishana and saumya where surprised to see the new person….
Soon the elders also joined and was giving a confused look….
Pinky : Shivaay….who is this little girl….
Saumya : kiara…..
Janvi : saumya how you know her…is she your relation….
Om : ma…she is our relation….
Dadi : om…..Shivaay who is this girl and how he is related to her….
The elders were busy questioning shivomru…meanwhile….kiara went and took blessings from dadi….
Dadi was overwhelmed by her behaviour….she blessed kiara and asked her who is she…..
Kiara : I am your little grand daughter…
Dadi : how….
When kiara was about to tell she saw Pinky staring at her….she ran towards Pinky….oh my maata choti ma…you look so cute as rudra bhaiya said…
Pinky was looking like an owl at that little girl….
Oh my maata….she copied my lines…shakthiji….
As soon as she called Shakti….he backed off…
Shakti : Pinky…this not dream….don’t pinch me and check….
Kiara went to anika and hugged her….anika bhabi…you are very beautiful….
She went near ishana……you you…Rudy you didn’t tell me who is she….
Rudra bent his head down….ishana smiled in pain that her doings made rudra to hate her…..
Rudra : ishana…didi…sorry….
Kiara : oh your name is ishana…..sorry ishana didi….
Saumya : kiara….not ishana didi….it’s ishana bhabi…
Kiara was confused but the smart girl soon understood….hooooo so you are my second bhabi…..om bhaiya you didn’t show her pic to me….said kiara looking at om with twinkling eyes…..
Dadi : anyone tell me what’s going on…
Shivaay : dadi…wait…I will tell you…saumya take kiara in….
Saumya nodded in agreement and took kiara inside….
Om : maa…dadi….she is kiara…she was the one who was told to be the child of papa and Svetlana…but she is not…she is an orphan….
Pinky : why did you bring her here?
Rudra : because she doesn’t have a family….for her we are our family….
Shakti : rudra what should we do for it….
Shivaay : okay….we three wanted her to stay with us forever….
Dadi : billu…how can it happen….I mean how can we keep her we don’t know who she is….and who her real parents her then how….
Rudra : dadi….if her parents come after then it’s well good…it’s her decision to go with them or not….but now I am her legal guardian so it’s my duty to take care of her….
Saumya : first time rudra has spoken with some sense….so I am with him in this situation….
Anika and ishana: we are also in…
Janvi : you all can’t understand the real problem…think about that innocent girl…she thinks we are her own family…but when she comes to know about the truth…
Om : she already knows who she is…
All were surprised including Shivaay and rudra…
Shivaay : om….did you show that you are satyavadi to that little girl….
Om : yes…
Rudra : om…she is a little girl…how can you tell the truth to her….
Om : rudra relax….I said that Svetlana is not her mom….and our mom is her mom…
Rudra breathed a sigh of relief….
Shivaay : what did she told for that?
Om : kiara told me that a year back…Svetlana found her in an adoption centre and told her that she is her mother…poor kiara she believed it and went with her….by showing all our photos Svetlana have been teaching her that it is her family….so as I told that it’s all a drama….kiara understood the truth…
Rudra : she hasn’t told me anything like that…how come she told to you…
Shivaay : that’s why you are called a duffer….you didn’t even know to handle a child…
Anika was giving a deadly look as if he knows to handle a kid….
Shivaay distracted himself from seeing her went inside….
Dadi : I am so happy that you three took the right decision to bring her here…
Om : mom…are you okay with this?
Janvi : why will I tell no….
Om and rudra went and hugged janvi…
Janvi : I think my first son is not willing to hug me….
Shivaay : badi ma….om is hugging you only….
Ishana : bhaiya…being with rudra 24×7 I think you have become duffer….she is calling you…
Shivaay Pinky and Shakti had tears in their eyes….Shivaay also hugged janvi….
After sometime all were sitting in hall…kiara felt boring so our rudy came up with the idea of playing hide and seek….
Kiara was the catcher….as soon as she started counting by closing her eyes all (shivika , ishkara and rumya) ran to hide…
Anika went and hid herself in bathroom….Shivaay didn’t know where to go and he too went inside the bathroom…..
Anika : billuji….why did you came here..
Shivaay : to take oil bath….anika what is this question…I came here to hide…
Anika : but I am hiding here na….
Shivaay : what can I do for that??…this is a big restroom and even 10 more people can hide here…..
Anika was adoring Shivaay…
Anika : Shivaay…..first and all you seemed liked a bagad billa to me but now you have become a kharkosh….you are too cute…
Shivaay : anika….you know na I am always cute….
Anika : it will be good if you cut down your attitude.
Shivaay : it’s a manufacture defect anika…
Anika : where do you get words like this…I tried all means to learn words…but you…you…na…impossible…
Shivaay : this is also my words anika…
Anika : billuji…
In a rage she pushed Shivaay into bath tub and opened the tap….
Shivaay (shouted): panika…what is this?
Anika : this is my way of romance….bath tub romance not like your pool romance…
Before Shivaay could speak anything….
Anika kept her index finger on his lips…
Shhhhhh…….we are playing hide and seek…..Shivaay….
Shivaay : crazy ladki you really know how to make me silent….when I hear Shivaay from you….
Anika : Mr. Cat you had already said this….do change your dialogues…
Shivaay opens the shower….and both get drenched…and Shivaay came near to kiss anika on her lips….
At the same time ishana was running her and there not knowing where to hide…finally she found a cupboard which she thought as a perfect place to hide and that cupboard was in om’s room….
The cupboard was very large and it can accommodate two human beings of average height…
As ishana went inside the cupboard and kept slight gap on door….
Ishana : oh my god….see the dresses of Zulfi Singh Oberoi…all are full sleeves…fully covered…she touched all the sleeves…and pulled one by one…
As she pulled one sleeve she heard a voice…..”stop it “
Ishana : ah….artist’s sleeves too talk…
Am I dreaming…
Om was also hiding there….drama queen shut up…what are you doing here?
Ishana : I came here to try your dress….on…you have brains na…I found this place a perfect place to hide but all I could see a Zulfi Singh oberoi standing close to me without even giving a space to breath….
Om and ishana realised that they were standing very close to each other….
Ishana remembered the moment when om kissed her for a second…..
Om : ishana where are you lost?
Ishana : in you….
Om: what???
Ishana : I said I had lost myself a long time before but there came an angel who changed my life added his colours in my dark heart….and turned me into a human being….but I again spoiled it…and this time I don’t know what my angel is thinking about me….
Om : Angel…??? Who that person ?
He asked this thinking that there is some other person in ishana’s life more important than him….the tension on his face was evident to that fact…..
Ishana : when did you became duffer…my Angel is you idiot….
Om : ishana….you are scolding me always….
He came very close to her that even air can’t separate them….
This time also Angel thinks the same as first…..
Ishana : what do you mean?
Om : I mean…I love you….will you marry me?
I am not commitment phobic now…so you can trust me….give me an answer ishu….
Ishana was surprised with om’s proposal….she knows that this day will come in their life but didn’t expect om will be the one to propose…..
@Rumya
Rudra and saumya at the same time rolled under their bed to hide….
Rudra was trying hard to find a place…
Sumo….move…my leg is outside…
Saumya : what should I do for that….
Rudra : sumo….we will loose…
Saumya : then come near me….
Rudra rolled himself close to saumya…
Sumo….I have a doubt…
Saumya : wow….my rudra is having brain so that only doubt is coming….
Rudra : sumo…now bhaiya and bhabi will be having a cute little replica of theirs within months….
Saumya : what doubt do you have in this?
Rudra : when will have ours….
Saumya was taken aback by his question….
Rudra….do you know what are speaking….
Rudra put his hands on saumya’s shoulders…..sumo I want a baby…
Saumya : am I selling babies ? Rudra do you know the seriousness of having a baby of our own….do you really think we are in that stage to think about it….do you know how many husband and wives have parted ways after having babies due to their immaturity…..if you want more explanation….take the case of om bhaiya….papa and maa had him when they were in the early stages of establishing business…and they both didn’t think about him and started fighting infront of him….which ultimately made him vulnerable…
On hearing saumya’s talks rudra’s eyes widened….and he himself forgot what he asked her….
Saumya after finishing all her talks which is most of the time got muted for rudra….
She turned towards him….
Rudra….do you understand the problems….but you know what we are ready for it….
Rudra : you are a mixture of bagad billa and Zulfi oberoi and that makes you really complicated…..you could have told this first itself….why these many advices…
Saumya : because 90 %……
Before saumya could talk further rudra stuffed some cloth which was nearby to them in her mouth….sumo….enough of your talks…I want little saumya…he kissed her forehead….sumo…I want to be a hero in front of my daughter….
Saumya took the cloth from her mouth….you are my hero rudy…I won’t share that with anyone in this world….
She was expecting more romance from rudra…but all she got is a screaming rudra…..
Hearing his screaming shivika and ishkara ran towards his room…..
Ishana : om…sound is only coming but where is rudra….
Shivaay : saumya….
After few seconds saumya ventured herself out…..
Anika : saumu what are doing under the bed…..
Saumya : we were hiding…
Om : rudra…come out…why are you screaming…
Rudra (under bed): bhaiya and you come in….then only I will come out…
Shivaay : what is this nonsense….rudra have you gone out of brains…
Rudy in cry baby tone….ya I am rudra and I don’t have brains…
Om : Shivaay…he will lot of acting so there is only one way to get him out..
Shivkara rolled themselves under the bed…
Rudra was in the middle…Shivaay to his right and om to his left…
Om: rudra….I am not small like Shivaay it’s very difficult for me to stay here…so tell me what happened….
Shivaay was giving a deadly glare towards him….
Rudra : see this…..
Shivaay and om were shocked….
Anika : saumya what happened…why rudra shouted?
Saumya : now we all are going to die due an earthquake named OBROS QUAKE…
Ishana : and may I know why….
Saumya : the painting and cloth which you both told me to hide….
Anika : you hid it right….
Saumya : ya di….but I hid it under the bed and rudra saw it…
Ishana : so what….you didn’t tell him that we only did it right….
Saumya : I am afraid I did….
Anika : saumya…..someone bend down and see what’s going on….
Saumya and ishana : no I can’t……
Under bed….
Om was laughing uncontrollably seeing the shirt that rudra gifted saumya….
Om : Shivaay see how colourful your short has become…..now if you walk on road all the stray dogs will chase you…
I really like that three girls….they are awesome…
Now Shivaay’s face too turned like a cry baby…
Rudra smirked seeing om…
Om : duffer why are you giving that look…
Rudra : you know what I love the three more than you do…do you want to know why…..
Rudra showed the painting….and he tagged it has monkey omkara….
Shivaay couldn’t resist himself from laughing aloud….
Anika : this is billuji’s voice…why is he laughing like this….
Saumya giggling….I think he would have seen the master piece of ishana di….
Anika too started laughing…
Ishana : I am finished…..
After sometime….om rudra and shivaay stood up….anika ishana and saumya were on otherside of the bed…..
As shivomru walked forward with stern faces….the three girls walked backwards and finally reached the om’s room…
Suddenly from nowhere they got drenched not by water but by paints…
As the three girls regained themselves and looked at the boys….only to see them holding a bucket full of paints….
Shivomru broke into laughter seeing their lovebirds in unique colours….
Rudra…the selfie king took his phone out and clicked a wonderful picture…..bright faces of shivomru at front and three coloured wall like creatures at their back….
Anishya….in a rage ran and hugged their respective partners thus making them coloured boys…..soon a fight broke up between the Obros and their love birds and they turned the whole room into a place of holy celebration……
All six stopped suddenly and was shocked…..
The whole family including kiara was standing near door and was giving a deadly glare seeing the mess they have made……
Finally…..done with the update…I am really sorry for being late to compensate that I have typed this long episode….I will try to be regular guys….keep providing your valuable comments…
Bye bye…see you all with the next update…
45 Comments
Loved..it..now its time for…ib…so im giving short wala comment
Thanks nithu?
Very nice ….fab
Thanks tiara
It was osum……loved it…
Thanks shivika…I am now only reading your ff after reading fully I will comment on your next update?
Its mastifull n all couple moments are superb …….kaira is so adorable kid??
Thanks nans?
Awesome
Thanks charitha?
Aww awesome and pakka romcom
Thanks akshaya
Hi Chandini..and once again a big big sorry for not being able to comment before. and your ff, well I will again say, that you are the best. It’s so cute. Kiara in the oberoi,mansion and the couples scenes…awww that was just so entertaining. Loved it a lot
Don’t tell sorry once again….read it whenever you get time but update your ff soon…don’t go missing for weeks okay…deal?????
It’s super awesome…. plzzzzzzzzz update next one soon. I have been waiting for ur epi since long…..it’s fantastic…
Thanks aam will update by today?
Amaaazinggg
Thanks mukta
Very good lovely plzz update next..
Wow..amazing !!! ???it was awesome ..
Awesome ep plz post asap
Excellent episode… loved it to the core… shirt n painting wala part n reactions of all was too good.. ?? Eagerly waiting for the next episode… plz post asap…
Awesome one I m still laughing at the last part really awesome one Yar ???
Thanks dheemahee
Awesome dear I loved it to core
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Awesome episode….
Thanks sat
Wow!!!! Loved it waiting for nxt
Thanks sweetheart
Superb
Thanks inu
I imagined the way shivay and om rolled into the bed to findout why rudra cried. <3 <3
i can’t stop laughing! 😀 😀 😀 superb episode chandni 🙂
Thanks samm
Hello chandini! Loved the bathtub romance, cupboard proposal, rudy’s underbed demand for daughter was so cute. Omru teasing shivaye ,shivru teasing om..:-D 😀 ,Shivkara rolled under bed to see why rudy was crying was so hìlarious ha ha ha . Loved those colourful creatures. :-*
Thanks jaya….I am really really happy that you liked it…and I saw your comment on last part….you can call me chandu…all my frnds do that…we are frnds right??
Hello dear I am late once again….but what to do I was having a 3hrs continuous class for statistics beside other subjects…..and I was completely bored…but after reading ur all’s ff I am feeling recharged…
Anyways this part was mind-blowing….amazing…and now I spellbound….u r so humorous….if I would be on ur place then it would took ages for me to be like that….
The most beautiful scene was shivom rolling down the bed…. Its fantastic dear….great job…
And plz post the next one soon….
Yaaye I am very happy that I recharged you????thank you for your lovely words…it really means a lot to me dear.
Really! Thankyou thankyou. I reajy love your thoughts. Now…i will call you chandu. Ofcourse! We are friends…
Your dp is awesome???
Loved it totally ????
Thanks ruksy
I’m speechless…
superb epi loved it to the core….
u r amazing dear…
hat’s off…
it’s much much better than the serial…
loved it 🙂