hello peeps , this is my new story as my friends requested me to write so again am here to eat your brains
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Prologue ;
a beautiful girls was shown sleeping hugging her teddy.whole room was darked as the windows were covered by the curtains .her sleep got disturbed by the alarm clock which were placed on drawer beside. she wakes up in a jerk murmuring something .
Swara (murmurs) : oh !! no I won’t get late plz God plz.
she hurries to her bathroom not before kissing her teddy .
after 10 minutes she came out wearing her bathrobe .on not finding her dress on the bed she angrily called the maid
Swara ( frustrated): kakiii!!!!! kaki !! where are you ???
her room door knocked and a beautiful girl came inside smiling
Swara (surprised ): you got up early today .
girl ( smiling): your shouting started early today so I wake early.
Swara (again frustrated) : Ragu actually my dress is not there where it should be
Ragini: I know actually Kaki forgot to press yesterday so she is pressing now.she send me to tell. you
Swara; ohh you know I want everything on time it’s just that I can’t have time to lose
Ragini : I know shona you are a robot sometime .
Swara: I’m only like this ..
Ragini: you can’t change until ….
Swara (one brow up ): until..
Ragini : until your …
Swara : mine..
Ragini (naughtily): soulmate come and make you human again.
Swara (lightly hitting her): I’m a human .
Ragini (sadly ) :you were Shona when our parents were with us you were …but not now…
Swara: you know what ladoo I really missed them …
Ragini : me too (taking a deep breathe ) after their departure you indulge your self completely in work .you don’t have time for me… time for yourself also…
Swara :I know ladoo and am sorry for that but I assure you that someday I will like your old shona and that day is very near ( kissing her )
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other side a big mantion is shown and a handsome man was getting ready wearing a perfectly fitted black suit showing his well toned muscles .
the boy face is shown and he is none other than Sanskar (what he can be yaar other than him)
his phone rang and he instructing someone on phone cane down at dining Hall .
as soon as he take his first bite he spit in a second and made faces called his chef .
Sanskar : baba !!! baba !!!
a man in forties came running
man (breathing heavely) : ji Sahab
Sanskar ( making bad faces ) : Yuck baba it’s so tasteless .I can’t even had proper house food .
man : sorry sahab
Sanskar : no sorry baba just do one thing (calling some other servant ) Ram prasad ..
another man in his old fifties came slowly
Sanskar ( softly ) : give him all the CDs of Swara’s cooking show .
Ram : OK
Sanskar ( to chef ): check all the CDs and make good food in evening . I can’t understand you are the best chef of the city but make tasteless food .and look at her she makes food thousand times better than you
chef (in mind ) : itna acha pakati hy to usshi se pakwaain naa only TV per acha cooking show chalane sw nhi hoga aesy keh rahen hain jese taste kiya ho usky hath ka khaana .
Sanskar ( seeing him lost ): Now what ??? go
chef ( coming out of thoughts): ji Sahab
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Character sketch
Swara : she is a chef and a part time teacher at an orphanage .she was bubbly ,chirpy and jolly before but after her parents death in a car accident .she forgot to smile .now she works like a robot .she have to change for her as well as her lil sister Ragini which were too small to face the cruel world .she is bold now .and she never get tired also Cz she have to be strong not for herself but also for her lil sister whio were the last hope for her.
Sanskar: he is a lawyer by profession and an easy going and most wanted bachelor of the city .he madly loves Swara .and watches her cooking shows in the evening along with the chef .
Ragini : a jolly, shy but really sensitive girl .she worries for her shona very much as she knows she is really in so much pain inside and wants her to be settled in her life .
Laksh : a chef by profession and best friend of Swara and knows her all secrets and worries for her as he knows also that she is only laughing and trying to show herself bold but she is really hurt inside .he has a secret crush on Ragini
swar
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so let’s see how was it ????
do you really want me to continue
plz tell me through your reviews
33 Comments
Good start suma dear.Best part was Sanskar is madly in love with Swara. Will be looking for swasan story and their scenes. Continue soon….. Will be waiting.
Thanks Marsuu dear
I will posting tomorrow or day after tomorrow hopefullu
link of my os here
http://www.tellyupdates.com/tangled-swasan-os-sumayyah/
Awesome dear
thanks
Interesting and Waiting for Raglak scenes
thanks Ammu
ohhhhhoooooooooooooooooo not bad sumu dear your speed is quite nice….. kal bola aur aaj os taiyaar……….
well i loved the story line and will be waiting eagerly for you to continue it……
chal ab zyaada wait mat karvana jaldi post karna….
thanks Nepuu
jldi post karoongi PR to Jo khud wait kerwati hy WO kuch nhi ????
ab to tujhy bhi kerna hoga dear (sticking my tongue to u )
ha ha try karungi….
Awsm suma…..post next part asap
thanks Harshuu
I will be posting as soon as possible
Loved it dear
thanks dear
Awesome
thanks
Hey …http://www.tellyupdates.com/playboy-prabhas-ff-intro/
Pls read my ff too
Can we be frnds ..loved your writing
With love
Sanskriti
Ofcource dear so friends
Thank u so much
superb starting and really fab intro
waiting eagerly for the next part
thank you so much Iqra dear
will be posting asap
interesting..continue soon..tc..
thanks kumu
nice
thanks dear
Loved it dear
thanks Simi dear
awesome dear..
i am waiting for the next one..
this is really very nice..
Thank u so much Rainuu!!!
Next one is already posted
Nice
Thank u so much dear
Part 1 is already posted
Check it on my profile
Loved it
Thanks dear
Nice start.
I’m going to read your story…can i ?:P:P:P