Hello lovely readers here v go with the 14th episode… this one is something different hope ull like it.
Scene 1.
Kunj and Twinkle are in exam hall writing their papers…Kunj finishes his paper 15 minutes early…he submits the paper and signs twinkle that he is waiting outside near the bike parking slot…twinkle nods and signs him to go she will come.
Kunj is waiting outside near the parking stand and speeking on phone with usha.
Twinkle comes out of the college and is extremely happy as her exam was superb…she happily runs towards kunj…kunj doesn’t see her and is talking to usha…Just then he hears a noise and turns to see…he is shoked…twinkle gets hit by a car…people gather arround twinkle… kunj rushes to her and see her bleeding badly through her head… he is shocked too see that state of her.
Kunj: Ye kya hogaya…kaise hogaya ye sab…(he falls on his knees and holds twinkles face) I won’t let anything happen to you. Today even if god comes down to take you I won’t let u go…I won’t let u go far from me ever…and thats a promise.
He rushes her to the hospital.
Scene 2
In the hospital the receptionist asks him to fill the consent form first…he gets extremely angry and screams.
Kunj: (holding twinkle in his arms)What nonsense is this…cant u see her condition…its worsening every second…and all that matters to u is this consent form…if any thing happens to twinkle i swear to god i will get ur hospital closed and not leave anyone of you.
Receptionist: But Sirrr…
Listening to the noise the doctor comes there and asks whats going on
Kunj: Doctor.. doctor she is my fiance…she got hit by a car…she is bleeding badly doctor…plzzz save her doc plzzz save her…plzzz don’t let anything happen to her.
Doc: Nures..ward boy take her to the OT(operation theatre) right now.
They put twinkle on the stretcher and take her to the OT…kunj is holding twinkles hand and doesn’t want to leave it..he requests doc to let him come inside the OT but he refuses…they take twinkle inside and kunj hesitantly leaves twinkle’s hand…He falls on his knees and cries bitterly.
Kunj: Twinkleeee….plzzzz jaldi se thik hoja meri Siyappa Queen…plzzzz
Sarna and taneja family come there.
Kunj: Maa…papa aap log yaha.
A flash back is shown.
Looking at twinkle’s accident mobile falls from kunjs hands. Usha was still talking to him but she was not getting any response.. so she cut the phone and tried calling him again…at first no one answered but later a man from the crowd saw the phone ringing and picked it up and told Usha everything what had happened…usha gets shocked she asks the man if he knows which hospital they r taking twinkle to..the man says there is only one hospital close by ie city hospital so they might take her there only…usha informs leela about it and all of them rush to the hospital.
Flashback ends.
Kunj hugs usha and cries bitterly… usha bebe and leela console him.
Bebe: Kunj puttar Rab per bherosa rakh…rab sab thik kerega…teri twinkle ko kuch nahi hoga.
Leela: (Sits on the chair and starts crying)Babaji plzzz keep my twinkle safe…if anything happens to her even I will die.
Rt and bebe console leela.
Rt: Leela don’t take tension nothing will happen to our twinkle…she is a fighter… she will fight this situation also and will become totally fine.
Mahi can’t control her tears any more…she cries and runs from there…yuvi goes behind her.
Mahi:(in front of ganesh ji’s idol)Bappa everyone calls u vigna harta as u don’t let anything bad ever happen with good people. Then why are u making twinkle suffer like this…bappa plzz plzzz dont let anything happen to her…plzzz save her bappa plzzz.
Yuvi comes there and keeps hand on her shoulder. She turns back and hugs him and cries…yuvi consoles her and says my saali is a fighter as rt uncle rightly said…she will show her tigress avtaar and even death will fear and runaway.
Mahi smiles a little and yuvi takes her with him.
Outside the OT everyone is waiting for the doctor to come out.
Doc comes out and kunj holds his hand and asks him if twinkle is fine.
Doc: She is out of danger partly as we hav removed all the blood clots from her head but she is still in danger as she has slipped into coma.
Everyone get shocked.
“She has slipped into coma” these words echo in kunjs ears…he runs to the OT and this time looking at his state the doc doesn’t stop him.
Kunj goes near twinkle and takes her hand in his hand.
Kunj: Twinkle mujhey pata hey tu na sirf drama ker rahi hai…tujhe na mujhe pareshan kerne mai maza aata hai…dekh ho gaya mai pareshan vo bhi bohot pareshan…. ab to tera maqsad pura ho gaya na…ab to uth jaa siyappa queen..dekh agar to abhi bhi nahi uthi na to mai tujhse kabhi baat nahi karunga…aur…aur maine vo jo teri favorite waali chocolate laai hai na tere liye vo bhi mai bhabi ko de dunga…uth ja na twinkle plzz.Tears fall from his eyes…he shakes twinkle and says…mai tere bina nahi jee sakta twinkle…plzzz mujhe chod ker mat ja plzzz…he keeps his head on her hand and cries(Agar tum saath ho plays)
He comes out and asks doctors as to how much time will twinkle take to recover.
Doc: I can’t give any definite answer… it may take days..weeks..months or in worst cases even years.
Everyone cry.
Kunj says I’m fine with it…i will take care of her till she gets up and speaks to me…fights with me…doc I will take twinkle home…u send whatever things are required and a nurse for medical assistance… all other care will be taken by me.
Doctor agrees.
Kunj: Tujhe thik hona hoga twinkle mere liye sirf mere liye…jab tak tu thik nahi hojati mai chain ki saans nahi lunga…zameen aasman ek kerdunga but mai apni siyappa queen ko kuch nahi honey dung…ye mera wada hai khud se.
Screen freezes on kunjs face.
Precap: Twinkle is shifted from hospital to kunjs room…kunj takes immense care of her.
Hope ull liked the episode guys…plzzz share ur views via ur comments… and let me know if it was boring as there were no twinj scenes.
95 Comments
Emotional kardiya aakansha tune….twinkle theek kab hogi.???
thanx rashi yaar…very soon twinkle will be perfectly fine
such heart touching episode aakanksha well done
tysm sanam…im glad u liked it
Nice one . continue <3
thanx smiley…and im really happy as u want me to continue
So touching..nice yaar
thanx harna
boring???what r u talking abt??it’s awwwwwsomee…luv it??
thankyou sooo much prapti…actually there are no twinj scenes so I thought ppl might find it boring
Awww so sweet akanksha.. cntnue nd update asap dear…
tysm tara I promise my next update will be by tomorrow night or….day after tomorrow in the early morning
I’m lara not tara!!
I m soo sry lara I read ur name right but I dk how I wrote tara in my comment sry dear…I hope u didn’t feel bad
It’s ok akanksha?
Aakanksha it was really heart touching n plz update fast… Can’t wait for it:-)
thankyou soo much shatakshi for commenting….I promise to update it asap
Emotional epi… Nice one…
thanx ruchi….I hope u didn’t find it boring
Welcum…No yr the epi was not at all boring… I thnk i should take tutions frm u to write ff…
Ohh god plzzz don’t say like that ruchi u too write amazing FFs yaar
Akansha u r a superb writer keep writing like dis nd give back to back episodes
OMG komal thankyou soo much….that’s soo sweet of u…plzz wait till 4th march after that ill promise ull get atleast 2 episodes a day or maybe more…luv ya
Oh dats so sweet of u m feeling like m un heaven rght now.. luv yaa too ?
emotional kar diya na muje it was written very nice
thanx a lot tammana im glad I cud deliver the feelings in the epi to ur hearts.
THANKYOU SOOOO MUCH GUYS I HAV NEVER RECIEVED SUCH A QUICK AND AWESOME RESPONSE ON ANY OTHER FF…I GOT SUPERB RESPONSES EARLIER ALSO BUT NOT SO QUICK…THANKS AGAIN IM REALLY VERY HAPPY TODAY
I am a slient reader but I couldn’t resist myself from commenting awesome episode so emotional
thanx a lot twinkle….ur so lucky ur name is twinkle its a bful name
Nice Aakanksha di…As u already know u r a good writer . And yes . I m a girl . And call me Chandra . My nick name . U r just like my lovely elder cousin .Love u .
thanx a lot Chandra…im glad to get 1 more younger sibling….I already hav one on this page her name is simi
Di . What is ur name . I will send u friend request .
my full name is Aakanksha Singh…im wearing a goggle and black shrug in my profile pic on fb
Please post the next one soon
yesss gauri pakka….by tomorrow evening or 1st march early morning…im glad and extremely happy that u…the great writer gauri is commenting on my ff
Honey I am not that G8 …but blessed to have you for appreciating me so much
gauri that’s just how talented people are they are unaware of their greatness…and so r u…for me u r my fav writer that’s all I know
Akanksha you are very nice your ff are mind blowing I m very happy to have a friend like you thanx ……
Why there is no written update of nagin plzz update nagin serial kl ka bhi update nhi hua aaj ka bhi nhi hua plzzzzz update I want to read…..
thanx a lot sonal im glad u consider me as ur friend…are u there on any of the social networking sites..if yess plzz tell me we can connect through that
Akanksha! Your FF’s are Amazing!!
This episode was kinda emotional! ?
heyyy shanay I realy love ur name it 1 of my fav names…and thanx a lot….luv u…I know it was emotional…but I hope u liked it
Thanks a lot Akanksha! Well your name is no less! ?
I love your FF!
Love you too! ❤
tysm wud u like becoming my friend on any of the social networking sites….if ur not comfortable im perfectly fine….I just asked casually hope u don’t mind
I would love to become your friend! 🙂 But i’m not there in any of the social networking sites 🙁
My mum has an FB account but then she only allows me to read the FF’s and see my friends’ posts
I would love to know you more! We can chat in TU!
cool I don’t mind we can chat on my ffs
Yeah sure! 🙂
heyyy how did ur icon change…????
I don’t know. I guess because I wrote the comment from my Computer or maybe because my changed my email.
Wow! It’s amazing aakanksha aj tunea mar he dala merea dil ko..,… Make fine twinkle and marraige is also their na…..
tysm aarush….twinkle will get fine very soon and marriage functions will also start in no time
do u know arundhati ?
no I don’t think so…I don’t remember knowing any1 named arundhati
Awwww kunj is sooooo imotional . di I think u should be a dialogue writer . I love d dialogues in dis episode. N. M eagerly waiting for the next episode. R u post in it tomorrow?
thankyou sooo muchhh simi that’s a really big complement for me dear…I will post it by tomorrow evening or 1st march early morning
di the request is not going . i thinl u ll have to send request . in my profile pic there are some pebbles and colourful insects
Aakanksha……what a fabulous,outstanding,awesum,mind blowing,superb,beautiful, and amazing episode…it has touched my heart what an episode Aakansha..hats off to u..????
and there u go once again u hav put me on cloud 9…..smc u make me feel blessed yar I srsly don’t hav words to thank u…al I can say is luve u from the core of my heart
omg aakanksha..what an epi..so heart wrenching..the way u described kunj’s behaviour was out of the world….btw sorry for late comment i was bit busy..bt u r superb..love u muahh!!
no regrets tara yaar plzz don’t say sry….ur such a good friend of mine and what matters is ur comment and not how quick or late…im glad u liked it…luv u tara
Wow aakansha superb episode it was heart touching episode rlly awesome….
And yes aakansha u also agreed fr watsapp …….. But how ??? I think u understood my doubt
see rakshit has told us to send her our name and contact number on her gmail account…and then she will make a group but as she is busy with her exams she said she will be making it after 18th march..su either u email ur number to her or u giv us ur email id and we will email it to u
Aakanksha u’re superbbbbbbbb….. Vry heart touchingg epii.. Bored not at all. Everytime when i read ur ff i love it more nd more nd i becomemore big fan of u nd ur ff.. Really luv u yaar…
sunaina thankyou sooo sooo sooo much….im srsly extremely happy that all of ull liked my ff…thanx for all the support….luv u….btw wud u mind me calling u SUU…sry han if u don’t like it actualy I hav a frnd of this name and that’s what I call her…plzz don’t mind
Plzz don’t say sorry . U re my frnd nd u can call me what u want ☺???
hey aakansha…i m a silent reader bt ur episode forced me to comment…u r such an amazing writer…plz update soon…waiting eagerly….n plz make twinkle fine soon…
yaayyy u know what I always wanted a friend having the same name as mine but I never got 1…soo wud u mind being my friend akansha….and btw thanx a lot for the amazing comment
No akanksha I’m not in any one of them my mother doesn’t allow me to use them even whatsupp bhi nhi she doesn’t allow me but I m in imo you are there and if you are not there then also please start imo so that I can talk to you plzzzzz anyways ..how old are you n where you leave
what is imo idk about it im 17 years old and I stay in mumbai
Akansha i couldn’t find ur fb account so u plse snd me frnd request my profile pic is of kunj wearing white shirt and blue coat
ohk sanu actually my netpack is over so as soon as I recharge it I will send you a request
Ooo akanksha mujhe toh rona aagaya..its realy a hrt touching epi..i jst hop twinkle is fine..kunj ki siyappa ko jaldi se thik kar do akanksha..
Btw i lyk it..
tysm preety…and don’t worry our twinkle will get fine very soon