Today no blabbering…..directly start of with the 26th episode… Hope u guys will like it.
Scene 1 (taneja house)
All return home and are very sad.
Leela and Rt go to twinkle and Mahi’s room…Rt picks up twinkle and Mahi’s pic kept besides the bed and cries bitterly…leela hugs him from side and cries too…they remice twinkle and Mahi’s childhood and all the lovely moments spent with them.
Leela wipes hers as well as Rt’s tears.
Leela: Ohk now that’s enough we won’t cry anymore… we must be happy that both our daughters have got such loving husbands and family…they will always be happy there.
Rt: Yess u r right leela…I am thankful to Babaji for giving both our dolls their prince charmings…I hope they get all the happiness in life.
Both of them smile.
Scene 2(sarna house)
Yuvi’s room (from now yuhi’s room)
Yuvi goes and sits besides Mahi…she is shy…yuvi lifts her head up and cups her face…he first gives a gentle kiss on her forehead… Mahi hugs him….kabi Jo baadal barse plays in the background.
Yuvi then kisses her cheeks…neck…and finally moves towards her lips…mahi closes her eyes…they have a deep lip lock….yuvi then makes her lie down and they consummate their marriage.
Kunj’s room(from now twinj’s room)
Twinj enter the room and find it all decorated…just the way a first night room shud be… With all rose petals every where.
Both of them feel awkward.
Kunj: Aaaa…ummm…twinkle u go and change first…I’ll go after u.
Twinkle simply nods…she opens her suitcase and the top most dress is a 4 piece night gown…she get pinni’s note saying “for ur first night…enjoy”
Kunj sees it but acts like he didn’t and looks here and there… Twinkle quickly hides it and takes out a night dress(which she usually wears in the real show) and goes to change.
Till then kunj cleans up all the rose petals and flowers from the bed.
Twinkle changes and comes out kunj takes his clothes and moves towards the bathroom twinkle doesn’t see him they collide and bang their heads with each other.
Kunj: Aaaauuuccchhh…ufff can’t u see and walk.
Twinkle: Acchaa…don’t u have eyes to see…even u cud have seen na.
Kunj holds her arm and pulls her close to him.
Twinkle feels butterflies in her stomach.
They are very close…. kunj leans towards her face…sajnave plays.
Twinkle closes her eyes.
Twinkle: Kkk..kuuunnn…kunjjj tum…
Kunj slowly touches his head with hers.
Kunj: Ummm…voo..actually bebe says that banging of head once is a bad sign…so u must bang it once again… and I don’t want anything bad to happen in our new life.
Twinkle: Ohhhh ohk….but cud u leave me now.
Kunj quickly leaves her.
Kunj: Ohhh…umm…I’m sry…I’ll change and come
He leaves… Twinkle smiles.
After some time kunj comes out wearing a stylo west and gray sweatpants.
Twinkle looks at him
Twinkle in her mind: Haayyy Babaji…kitna hot lag raha hai….omg what am I thinking… Ho kya gaya hai mujhe…mujhe ye sadu sarna hot lag raha hai….waise hot to sach mai lag raha hai…no twinkle aisey galat khayal mat laa apne dimag mai plzzz.
Kunj looks at her staring at him and lost in her thoughts.
He claps and calls out her name.
Twinkle: (Suddenly) no no I was not thinking anything like that…I swear.
Kunj: What u were not thinking..?? Are u fine…were are u lost.
Twinkle: Nothing… I’m just tired…come let’s sleep.
Kunj gives her his most famous 1 eyebrow up look.
Twinkle: I mean let me sleep.
She goes and sleeps on the bed…kunj takes a blanket from the cupboard and goes to sleep on the couch.
Twinkle gets up and holds his hand…they share an eye lock…sajnave plays.
Kunj: Now what….??
Twinkle: Ummm…kkkuuu…kunjjj…see…actually.
Kunj: Ummm…actually mat ker…bol kya bolna hai.
Twinkle: Actually kunj….u remember in Kashmir wen there was just a single bed…we had shared the bed right so u can….
Kunj: No its fine twinkle u go and sleep.
Twinkle: See kunj…I’m saying this as I will feel guilty if bcoz of me u will be troubled…and that too in ur own room….and I trust u…I know u won’t…
Kunj: But I don’t trust u….mujhey tere iraade think nahi lag rahe…kyun itna piche padi hai bed share kerne k liye…??
Twinkle: (annoyed) ohhh plzzz…let it be…tumsey to baat hi kerna bekaar hai…jaao jahan sona hai sojao.
She angrily turns to go to the bed.
Kunj holds her arm and pulls her towards him.
They come really close…due to the sudden jerk twinkle’s hair come on her face…kunj gently moves his fingers on her cheeks to move the hair off her face…she looks at him lovingly and enjoys his touch…tum Jo aaye zindagi mai baat ban gayi…plays in the background.
Kunj: Offffooo siyappa queen gussa kyun ho rahi hai….mazak ker raha tha…chal border banate hain….ya border bhi…
Twinkle moves.and turns her face and blushes.
Twinkle: Shut up…mai bas apne guilt ki wajah se tumhe soney de rahi hun bed per….koi doubt mat rakhna(still blushing)
They make the border and go to sleep.
They face opp sides and have a broad smile on their face…they go to sleep.
Its morning.
Usha is knocking twinj’s rooms door.
Usha: Twinkle…kunj puttar open the door…twinkle its ur first rasooi today come down fast.
Twinj are still sleeping.
Kunj gets up hearing the noize….he quickly gets up and goes to open the door…then realizes that if maa sees the border we will be in trouble.
Kunj is about to go and remove to border wen usha knocks harder.
Usha: Tum dono thik to ho na…I guess I sud call everyone… Y are they not opening the door.
Kunj gets tensed and quickly rushes to open the door.
He opens the door only a bit and asks usha what happened.
Usha: Ohhh thank god u opened the door…I got tensed.
She tries entering in the room asking about twinkle
Kunj stops her.
Kunj: Uummm…maa..voo… twinkle bathroom mai hai….jaise hi aati hai mai use taiyar ker ke…I mean taiyar ho ker nichey janey bolta hun.
Usha smiles naughtily and leaves from there.
Kunj thinks : Aaj to ye border ke wajah se maare jatey….haasssshhh.
He goes in and wakes twinkle up.
Twinj get ready and come down.
Maya pulls their leg.
Maya: Itna late kyun ho gaya….raat bhar soye nahi kya…she laughs.
Twinkle puts her head down and feels very awkward.
Kunj: Ummm….I guess rasam ke liye late ho raha hai….twinkle tu ja maa ne kitchen mai bulaya hai…I have some work I’ll just come.
Twinkle goes to kitchen… Mahi is already there.
Mahi: Aaa gayi to finally…. Aisa kya kiya raat bhar Jo subha neend hi nahi khuli…she teases her.
Twinkle: Diii I’m already late let’s start cooking.
Twinkle prepares kheer and Mahi prepares halwa.
They off the burners….usha calls them as guruji has come to meet them…they go.
Behind them after some time Anita enters the kitchen… She sees two vessels kept on the burner….she purposely puts on the burners so that all the food gets burnt….she smirks.
Anita: Poor twinkle and mahi….all their hard work will go in the dust bin….now what will they serve their family members….sooo saddd.
She laughs.
The screen freezes on her laughing face.
PRECAP- Bebe and Maya plan twinj and yuhi’s honeymoon….twinj cute nokjhok.
Heyy guys thanx for all ur comments,love and support… luv u guys to the moon and back….plzzzz do share ur views via ur comments… All sorts of comments are welcome…. Stay blessed.
86 Comments
this one’s 4 u
this is wt is called as an ff
u know dialogue really v well .. isn’t it 😉
Yes I do dear….ty ty ty solo much…luv ya
Ops sry
d dialogue goes this way
now that’s wt I call as an ff!!!
very nice epi
Thanx vidushi
omg akku..every bit of the epi was fantastic..how well u describe romantic scenes man..even i was blushing reading the epi..it was sweet,cute,mischievous,naughty..and of course ROMANTIC….aww cant even describe how much i loved it…u knw although i said i wont comment but after reading ur ff couldn’t resist my self….i just love u so much dear…muah muah nd lots of muah…..
btw m happy that m nt late today..lol…..actually bit relieved ..my xams are coming towards end…okk enough of bak bak..u plzz try to update asap…nd once more love you..!!
Omg Tara…I will get diabetes by such sweet comment… I can’t thank u in words…I just wanna give u a tight hug…luv u loads dear
superbb….awesome akanksha
Tysm snehal
Awesome one akku how to think u for such a gr8 epi but Plss bring some twist na….as Twinj married life can’t be so easy inspire of Anita and cherry…!!! Btw its very awesome and entertaining!!!
Sure Rakshita the twist is coming soon… Though I don’t really appreciate getting very big twist but yup a twist is coming soon
Niiiiicccceeeee..superbbbbb
Thanx a lot aarti
very nice epii akanksha and keep going
Thanx ramya Dii… Luv u
Oo god aakansha I loved it
Ohhh m so glad…thanx a lot Ritzi
Aakansha amaaaazzzziinngggg stooooryy line….loved it….?????
Thank u so much rashi for all the luv…luv u dear
Very nice epi & eagerly waitting 4 ur next epi
Thanx a lot…ull get to read next 1 soon
wow honeymoon!!! yaay
Can’t wait update soon!!!
Sure phycho I’ll try my level best but it can’t be b4 tomorrow… Sry dear
Hawww ok…di
I’ll be waiting but hah!!! 2moro is 2moro di!!!
I want it early in the morning!!! lol just kidding di!!!
sure I promise
oh wow a great storyline aakansha
Thanx Tina….I’m glad u like my story line
superb story line …. loved it a lot …. u r jst superb dear……. love u yaar…..
Awwww thank u soooooo veryyyy muchhh Pancho…luv u loads dear
I am a silent reader but I like your ff very much keep it up
Thanx a lot dheemahee…I don’t mind if u r a silent reader at all….but thanx a lot for commenting dear…means a ton to me
Aakanksha di it is simply amazing.Simply Loved it??????
Srry but I wanted 2 ask In which class u r??
Anu dear I have just given my 12th std board exam…BTW thanx for all the love
I hope u don’t mind me calling u that..??
Oh but I’m 9th
Anu is my nickname and love it di ????
oh wow that means v both r in d same class
M having my 12th std board exams now
well wt entrance èxams r u planning to write?
medical and engineering both…wbu ??? sanam
me too
all the very best 4 ur entrance xms
score well in physics
it’s fascinating to know that that ur cet rank is mainly based on ur physics performance cse many ppl fail to do well in it
so wish u all very best again
I totally agree with u
nice one Aakansha…by the way how is you health take a good care of yourself. tc
Thanx gauri…I’m much much much better now…and that coz of all the luv I hav received from u and my other friends here…thanx a ton
Good one aakansha keep it up the good work
Tysm salma
As always u were superb di…love ur ff.
Tysm muskaan dear…u luv my ff and I luv u
Nice one love it……
Thanx esha
One question
How do you write so well?
Its amazing cant wait for next episode Aakanksha
Tysm harshi…ummm I’m glad u like my writing and how do I write… I guess its my passion and luv for tei that Im able to write and entertain ull
awesome episode again…
tysm dear
may I know ur real name ???
Wowww Akku yr how u descibe every single thingg just luv it, ur writing skills re amazing. U re jst lik ur ff amazing, awesome, brilliant,wonderful,lovely,mindblowing m lacking of words yaar. I just can say tht i luv ur ff how i luv TEI.. nd i m big fan of ur ff yaar…Luv u loads????
Omg suu…idk how to thank u…ur comment just made my day…u have made me feel so special… Thank u is a very small word….but thanx a lot… Srsly…luv u tons suu
Superb akku… Your ff was soooo niceeeee……..real tei should be like that…… Nice storyline luv you…♥♥
Thanks for advice……..
Ohhh god….sonal…itni taarif…mai khushi se pagal na ho jaun yaar….thanx a lot dear…luv u too the moon and back
such a good mixture of everything… seems lyk it all is happening b4 eyes…sooooooo good yaar…luv it & muahhhh…?
Tysm Prapti…luv u loads
awsm episode Akanksha ? TwiNj ??❤❤❤❤❤
thanx a lot vidisha
Hey di m late . awesome awesome n purely clearly awesome . I loved twinj scenes I feel ki real tei mein twinj ki first nyt esi hi hoti to kitna maza ata , although twinj were not friends at DAT tym . love ya di . muah . now Anita ki band bajte dekhni hai next episode mein . love u dear didi . ????
than u dear sissy…I am extremely happy that u liked it so much…luv u dear
Same here dear big sissy love u loads n loads n loads . ???
D comments r overflowing di . wat to do ur ff is only soooo gud n u too r soooo sweet . ☺
thanx simi…I am feeling so so so happy with the response on my ff…but I guess the number of comments increases as I reply to each comment…but what ever it may be I really luv u all for giving me so much luv
awesome episode waiting for next
thanx mia…ull get the next 1 soon
Hi di ur ff is awesome.u said u ll bring twist BT don’t bring it in the name of Maya.don’t make her negative .she is so cute and let her b positive and help twinj bcome closer.and ur dialogues r really awesome.luv u a lot di.I’m sorry Im in lack of words.keep going and post the next one soon.can’t wait for it.nd di plzzz say something abt u.wat ur dng,wat r ur hobbies,just like tat.waiting to know abt such a beautiful person like u.
heyyy anchali let me assure u that maya will be positive forever…btw the twists in my ff are always short term and the only villains in my ff are anita and cherry…so just don’t worry dear…and thanx for all the complements
now coming to me…I am 17 and just finished with my 12th board exams…I luv dancing,cooking.making new frnds,roaming,learning new languages,writing stories and poetries and acting too…I don’t hav any bf…I liv in Mumbai and wud luv to be either a doctor or a lawyer…let me know if u wanna know anything else
btw wud u mind telling me something about urself ???
Superb ……. N u r from which board i m also 12th TN board
Maharashtra board…btw thanx for commenting sita
Awesome Aakansha…
thanx a lot sanu…btw I hav downloaded fb 1ce agn..ill send u a request soon…ur name is sana sana right..???