Hello guys in my last upload I didn’t received much respond so I just wanna know that are you guys enjoying it or not if not then I think I should discontinue it…do comment if you are liking it!
It was still raining,sansakar was still sitting and crying…he could not understand her last word….
Sanskar’s Pov
She loves me or not.Is it the matter that she hates me or is it something else…is she hidding something…why I felt an emptiness in her eyes as if she felt incomplete ya I know she is hidding something I can feel that I have to tell her that there is nothing bigger than love…love is supreme….love is everything….love heals all the wounds….and my love will remove her emptiness…she has to understand my love she is everything to me….
Tera ishq hai
Meri saltanat
Tu hai zid meri
Tu junooniyat…..
Next evening
All were chatting…some making love….some talking through eyes….
They all have started practicing when….
Laksh:Ummm….ragini
Ragini(slighty nervous):Haan laksh
Laksh:umm…I wanted to talk to you…are you free after the class
Ragini(now slighty blushing):Ya sure meet you after the class at the coffee shop
Laksh:Ok
Sir:Come on start come swara and sanskar you start today with the lesson which I have just taught to you
Swara and sanskar both avoided their eye contact but now they had no choice
Bg song:Bol do na zara
Itni mohabbat karo na
Main doob na jaaun kahin
Waapas kinaare pe aana
Main bhool na jaaun kahin
Dekha jabse chehra tera
Main toh hafton se soya nahin
Sanskar was trying to express his love but swara was not even looking at him
Bol do na zara
Dil mein jo hai chhipa
Main kisi se kahunga nahi
Main kisi se kahunga nahi
Sanskar was asking her through the song that please tell what are you hiding….trust me I really love you
Mujhe neend aati nahi hai akele
Khawabon mein aaya karo
Nahi chal sakunga tumhare bina main
Mera tum sahara bano
Ik tumhe chahne ke alaawa
Aur kuch humse hoga nahi
I cannot live without you pls
Bol do na zara
Dil mein jo hai chhipa
Main kisi se kahunga nahi
Main kisi se kahunga nahi
Hamari kami tumko mehsoos hogi
Bhiga dengi jab baarishein
Main bhar kar ke laaya hoon
Aankhon mein apni
Adhuri si kuch khwahishein
Rooh se chahne wale aashiq
Baatein jismon ki karte nahin
Bol do na zara
Dil mein jo hai chhipa
Main kisi se kahunga nahi
Bol do na zara
Dil mein jo hai chhipa
Main kisi se kahunga nahi
Main kisi se kahunga nahi
Finally swara looked at him…tears welled up in her eyes she could not believe that how can someone love a person like her madly….s he composed herself but her tear were noticed by sanskar which made his conscious believe that she is hiding something and somewhere deep inside her heart she has feelings for you…
Class got over sanskar couldn’t talk to swara as she left as soon as the class got over….they are were unable to complete their love story…but someone has planned to propose his love today….
7:30pm at Café coffee Day
Laksh was waiting eagerly for ragini….wait has someone noticed him that how handsome he was looking in his black leather jacket…blue denims and white t-shirt…oh gosh the temperature was increasing….
Laksh’s Pov
Ohh god when will she come I want to tell her that I really like her…no no now I actually love her….will she say yes…what if she said no…no….the way she accepted my request I think she too likes me or may be more than like….urgh…fingers crossed …god help me…
Pov ends
He kept murmuring to himself when he saw his princess entering the café in a white knee length frock…hair were touching her waist…he felt quite jealous at that point of time…stupid right…
Laksh(completely lost in her beauty):Gorgeous
Ragini(blushing):Thanks laksh…umm close you mouth at least
Laksh(quite embarrassed):Hhaha….sorry come sit…what will you like to have
Ragini:Cold coffee
Laksh:Ok…waiter..two cold coffee please
Ragini:You too like cold coffee…well our few likes are similar
Laksh:Ya..wait…what do you mean by few you don’t know me well right?
Ragini(caught):Umm.no actually I overheard your talks with virat
Laksh(smirking):ok….so you notice me all the time
Ragini(blushing hard):Umm…you still didn’t understood what I am trying to say..
Laksh(holding her hand tightly which was resting on the table):I love you too ragu
Ragini turned crimson red.. laksh paid the bill and they went outside hand in hand
As its july going on so rains are often….today it gave life to their lovely moments
Tujh pe meri hai daave dariyaan
Tujhse hai dil ki saajhe dariyaan
Saajhe dariyan..
Tujh pe meri hai daave dariyaan
Tujhse hai dil ki saajhe dariyaan
Teri bin sanse loon
Toh jee na sakun
Ab tu hi bata kya main karu
Kya karu, kya karu
Girl I need you
Girl I need you
Girl I need you
Never leave you (x2)
They danced hand in hand as if no one is watching
Subah se sham tak lamhe
Baahon mein teri guzaron
Chehra tera saamne rakh ke
Iss dil mein aanch utaaroon
Aaa.. Ho..
Ankhon ka nasha gulabi
Ab raha na jaaye zara bhi
Tu de permission pee loon
Tere naam ka banu sharabi
Utre na teri khumari
Bhulun main duniya saari
Oh girl every time I see you
Badhti jaaye betaabi
Girl I need you
Girl I need you
Girl I need you
Never leave you (x2)
Romancing…hovering over the streets
Pehli dafa
Ankhon se hai ye neende khafa
Ke teri ore chal pada
Yeh dil ka raasta (x2)
Ab teri dhadkan se meri dhadkan
Ab judne lagi kya main karoon
Kya karoon, kya karoon
Girl I need you
Girl I need you
Girl I need you
Never leave you (x2)
Lamhein maine tere liye
Hain rakh diye
Dil ye tujhko de diya hai
Bin kuch liye (x2)
Teri nazron ki taraf nazre
Ab mudne lagi kya main karu
Kya karu, kya karu
Girl I need you
Girl I need you
Girl I need you
Never leave you (x2)
After spending three hours with each other laksh dropped ragini
Laksh:Bye take care
Ragini:Bye you too take care
As she was going laksh felt it extremely necessary to kiss her
Laksh:Umm..ragini
Ragini turned as if she was waiting for him to call her
Ragini:Yes laksh
Laksh(slowly moving towards her…whispering in her ears in a husky voice):Will you say a dry bye to your boyfriend
Ragini blushed hard which encouraged laksh and he slowly lifted her head and…..kissed her…they had a passionate kiss….they parted breathing heavily
Laksh(Placing a soft kiss on her cheeks):Love you bye
Ragini(blushing):Bye…
So here you go I am not sure that I will upload it tomorrow but can promise that will try to upload on Tuesday…happy independence day in advance do comment as I am feeling that no body is now interested in my ss but pls read mybe you like the end….love you sorry if you feel that it’s a short upload will try to give long ones…?
33 Comments
Amazing one
Thanks teja
Amazing ss dear …….. love u ????????keep writing
Love u too babu….sure will continue
love raglak
Thanks Lisa…this one I have especially written for Raglak fans..
Loved d episode dear…raglak scenes were amazngggg …keep rockng grl..waitng for nxt part 😉 😉 🙂
Thank fairy…will surly give u more
Raglak scenes are nice
Thanks dear
loved raglak scene
Yaar…thank akshata
Fantastic
Thanks shana
noo, diva, don’t end it soon,..
keep writing dear… because you love to write..
poor swasan huhuhuhu
luv it ty
Hahahah…..thank God someone is thete…..Sure now I will not stop it….and yes I love to write but if no one is there to appreciate my writing then what’s the use…..love u??
LOVELY EPI… YAAR PLANNING TO END IT SO SOON…………
aTLEAST WRITE 100 EPIS….
Oh my god 100episodes……no no it’s a SS so maximum 20-25 episodes…. anyway thanks dear
Awesome sista…show some swasan scenes also as u know I’m a die-hard fan of swasan but loved raglak too….upload soon will be waiting luv u…????
Thanks sis love you….right there is problem so soon will add swasan too don’t worry it a swasan as?
Raglak scenes are superb dear
Thanks ammu glad you loved it
hey dear new reader actually i love this part and will surely continurle reading
What’s a coincidence yaar I just read your os and commented on it…..wow and ya welcome to the page of madness junooniyat and love….lol love you loads???
awesome
Thanks hemalattha have posted the next part too do read that??
Nice Divya keep writing
Thanku ganjana????
Actually u commented on my os nd told me to read this ss. But i thought ur going to post freashly. I waited for this.. but later saw u hav written 6 parts.. im sorry for being vry late divya. I promised u i wil comment nd read ur ss.. but nw i hav fulfilled nd hapie by reading ur ss.. its awesom dr. Being in 8th grade ur rocking it along with ur studies.. i love ur ss its different nd full of dance nd partner selection suprb.. im eager toknw swara past nd y she afraid.. nd growing lovly couples in evry episode.. do post nxt part fast divya.. im waiting..
Oh god navi yaar don’t be sorry I am glad that you remember it and thank-you so much for reading it with so much enthusiasm and interest i so glad to have you as my reader love you loads dear thanks again will surely upload soon?????
And yes I have uploaded the next part also will soon upload the 8th part
First of im vry sorry . They din post my msg. So typing it again… ur rocking divu being in 8th grade nd writing ss is amazing.. and i love ur ss.. its all about dance nd care love.. pairs are also awesome.. i knw nly raglak manan swasan.. these three are amazing.. and i promised u dat i wil comment read ur ss.. bt im vry late.. forgive me kiddoo.. i thought ur going to post new bt later i sw part 6 nd read all in one go… ur doing grt wrk.. continue kidoo..ur sis is there to support u
Awwwwww love you sis thanks for your support really glad to have sis like you who truly co sider my work….it doesn’t mean that else don’t consider but yaar you’re so his now will sure upload it and especially for you love you loads and pls don’t be sorry koi apni choti behen ko sorry bolta hai kya.?? Love you?????