K.R.I.Y.A.M •BeNaam Rishta•
|PART TWENTY EIGHT|??
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-Episode begins-
Suddenly the door of the stall opens and saiyyam steps in,Krishna’s heart rests in peace,she hugs him tight,melting into his warm,safe arm,even saiyyam hugs her back..
Krishna-I was so scared saiyyam..
Saiyyam-Nothing will happen,we need to get out of here
Saiyyam takes his jacket off and offers it to Krishna
Saiyyam-Take this
Kriyam quickly gets out the stalk and finds a way out,suddenly Krishna hears another gunshot,this time it was more louder than before,she tied her grip on saiyyam
Man-You think it’s that easy for you to leave
Kriyam turned around,a man in a black as hell mask was standing with a gun in his left hand,he was quite tall,muscular, looked somewhat familiar,Behind him was a lot of innocents crying for help.
Saiyyam-Look,let her go and I’ll stay here
Man-Oh really,(he turns around and look at the crying faces) You guys wanna leave right,then my want is THEM (pointing towards kriyam)
Saiyyam-I’ll stay,just let her go
Man-Never
The man points his gun towards Krishna;however,Saiyyam moved Krishna towards him,as the gun point moves and faces towards him.
The man faces the gun point towards saiyyam head first,then his body,slowly moves his head negatively
Man-NAANAAA,I know a perfect place
The man points the gun straight to saiyyam’s heart
Krishna knew she had to something,she couldn’t just stand and watch her whole world collapse
Krishna watches as the death,gun shot,comes closer and closer to Saiyyam.
She closes her eyes and runs
Krishna-SAIYYAM
She moves him and “BOOOM”
Blood shattered everywhere
The man leaves his gun and runs out the door as people gather around kriyam,saiyyam falls down his knees
Saiyyam-KRISHNA!!
Krishna was laying on the floor of death wounded,Seeing Krishna like that saiyyam had a ugly feeling
Saiyyam POV
it felt like the hole in my gum when a tooth falls out. I could chew, I could eat, I had plenty of other teeth, but my tongue keeps going back to that empty place, where all the nerves are still a little raw (lol I know this is a ugly description but I didn’t knew how to describe it properly and I remembered this line from my teacher)
Saiyyam-SO.SOMEONE..PLEASE CALL THE DOCTOR NOW…(Shaking)
Scene shifts to the hospital
Blood was all over Saiyyam’s shirt as he hold Krishna’s hand..
Saiyyam-DOCTOR PLEASE HURRY UP
Scene fades as shown is shown crying and Krishna is taken to the emergency room
-In the emergency room-
Doctor-Pass the scissors
Nurse-Doctor,do you think the patient will make it?
Doctor-We can only give hope and try our best
{Scene shifts}
Yuvaan-SAIYYAM
Saiyyam-What happened?
Yuvaan-Krishna..
Saiyyam ran to emergency room,where he saw Krishna slowly opened her eyes,it felt as though saiyyam could breath now
Scene shifts back to birla mansion/KriYam room
-SORRY GUYS I SKIPPED SOME SCENES FOR SOME REASON-??
Saiyyam-You stay here I’ll bring you some water
Krishna-(while Holding saiyyam’s hand) I have to tell you something
Saiyyam-I have to tell you something you too (he held Krishna’s hand and took her to the main hall)
Saiyyam-MA,YUVAANI,BHAI
Everyone gather in the hall..
Saiyyam-You’ll wanted to know why I married Krishna,right? Not because I like or something but because…..
•PRECAP•
Priya-You need tell saiyyam the truth and your feelings or I’ll be too late
Krishna-It is already too late,di
-Sorry guys Ik this one is short and all but a really big twist is coming up-
Take you seats and rest back,get ready to be amazed ???
33 Comments
Thank u soo much for mentioning my name Hafsaa. It means a lot..
And about the episodes. I loved it. And more fascinating is the precap. It looks like I am surely going to die of suspense. U rock as always and I knw something splendid is waiting. U r really great at writing and u never fail to amaze me with ur creative brain. Really it sooo good. Now I know u updated a lot but still I can’t wait for the next one becoz its soo addictive. Really love it…?
Aww thanks and I don’t have time to type the next one but I’ll be posted soon today ??
It’ll*^
it was a really nyc epi…y did he married krishna??? really wanna knw..n ya pls update soon
Hahaa ? I will ❣️❣️
This episode was too suspenseful and full of love. The way in which you describe sayyam’s emotions is purely fantastic. Your choice of words and sentences is just extraordinary.
The story is fantabulous and truly thrilling. I really cant wait for the mystery to be unfolded..
Wanna know what enforced sayyam to marry krishna and how will krishna confess….
Okay thanks first and even kriyam confession will take time for now I would say ???
Awesome one…and now we will finally get known why Saiyyam marry Krishna
Please update soon
Well you might know few parts only ☺️?
Hey great job very well done superb ff.
Thanks?
Now u again come with a bang episode… .. Waiting to know why …. precap…… love it… plzzz update soon….
“Why” will be explained step by step ☺️?
Love love love… The way you are keeping the readers in suspense like seriously no one can predict what will happen the very next moment you are a great writer moreover you are giving us those kriyam moments which we were longing for past 2-3 months… Ahhh what to say more.. Eagerly waiting for the next part!!! ??????????
Awww suspense is the key to writing and kriyam? Well there’s a change
any idea if srishti returned from trip
Yes she did
Thankx for mentioning my name… Episode was great as always..waiting for the next episode.
You’re amazing ?
Nice episode dear
Eagerly waiting for next update
Plz asap
I will?❤️
Sooo good please upload next part soon
I just love your ff u r an amazing writer ??
Thank you and yeah I have submitted it
Omg you’re such a great writer and thank you for mentioning my name
Thanks ?
THANKSSSSS HAFSA FOR MENTIONING MY NAME BABE?❤️?
Ayyye?
I am so in love with your ff
Aww ??
Beautiful yaar
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Finnally he is going to tell why he married her… precap is making me confused..anyways the gum description was a little funny but we always u know do that… 🙂 superb epi
Hehe?❤️