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KAATIL~(A Revengeful love) shot 40 suprise#2 (last episode)

Hellloooooo hiiiii assalamualaikum nasmatey and and ?? don’t know so how are you all guys ??? …
Well I am back again with the last of my kaatilana journey …???✌?
Excitedd ????? …
Obviously hoge ????
To shall we begin ????? …
Note : sweetness overloaded so if u are diabetic then ?? do what ever you want too ???haha joking ??…
Let’s start with a smile …
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Shot 40 …

The episode starts with kunj lifting twinkle and took her towards ward he call the doctor and placed twinkle on bed ..
Doctor see what happened to her she has fainted suddenly he said panicking … Looking at twinkle …
Mr sarna you go out nothing will happen to her said the doctor assuring her and he moved out …
After sometime Rohan too came there and got to know about twinkle shanaya was shifted to normal ward …soon doctor came and they both burst out in her with questions …
Relax relax nothing happen to her and bdw what realtion you both have with the patient doctor said and looked at rohan and kunj …
I am her husband kunj said and I am brother Rohan to said and again they asked what happen to twinkle …
Congratulations Mr sarna your wife is expecting said doctor and kunj got hell shocked he looked at rohan who nods in yesss and then an there his happiness turned double…..he hugged doctor in happiness while she looks at him wide eyes ….
Woh…I am sorry he said and looked at rohan who smiled sheepishly too …
without thinking for a second he went inside the ward …and saw twinkle sitting resting her head he came and hugged her tightly …suprise#2
I don’t have words twinkle to describe what I am feelings now it’s feels like I have got my life again twinkle this is not dream na twinkle if it is then I’ll .. …he said fastly while she rubbed her back consoling …she broke the hug and bites his cheek hardly leaving her teeth marks …
This is not dream devil it’s reality u are going to become father again she shouted happily while he was shocked and touched his cheek and they hugged again all the while smiling …
Kunj was very very very very happy now this time he can …enjoy the moments he missed out in his life …while twinkle was too happy seeing her sadu sarna happy ..
Soon Rohan came there with the kids and look at them and then congratulated twinkle …after sometime shanaya and twinkle check ups were done and they were discharged ..

@ twihan mansion :::
Twinkle shanaya was sitting in the sofas with the devil’s while kunj and rohan was moving to and fro …
What’s happening kuch batao bhi to hame twinklee n shanaya said and they looked at them …
So yes it’s time for rules lovely ladies ..u will not do any household chores u will rest and twinkle u don’t u dare think about even taking water by yourself I am warning you kunj ended and Rohan too nodded …devils laughed seeing their fathers rocked and their mothers shocked …
Ohh okay Baba we will take rest complete rest achaaa now …twinkle said trying to get up ..she gets dizzy kunj holds her …
Take care twinkle …he said and took her with him to his room while ronaya went Mandir wth the devil’s and thanked God for returning back the happiness in their life …

Days were passing by kunj was taking care of twinkle in each n every manner and was handling his cute devils too ..
They started going to school it was daily duty of kunj first he make them ready for their school then after seeing twinkle had took her bf ….he went to drop them n then whole day he will be with twinkle as he knows his lovely wifey is a big siyappa queen …he used to work from home itself only sometimes went to office during emergencies only ….twinkle was getting irritated seeing him ..as he didn’t let her do even small things …she was in 6th month and was having a cute baby bump …she was sitting on the bed kunj came there with fruits …
Twinkle eat this it’s very healthy for you and baby he said and smiled at twinkle but she was just staring at him without even blinking her eyes …
Wait what now ?? He asked mistakenly only to be gets a outburst on him …
What’s this kunj no I don’t want this anything from past 6 months you kept me in cage devil huh ??? you don’t let me do even small things and made me have this yuckk food I don’t want anything now …your baby wants something spicy she said while kunj was shocked seeing her outburst …
He touches her forehead slightly and said what happen to you ??? You had fever ? He said making her more irritated while she jerks off his hand …huh she said ..
Acha achaaa I am sorry he said holding his ears …u want spicy okay go and get ready we will go outside to have something spicy he said ..while she gets happy and kissed him …
Pakka twinkle ??? Only my baby wants spicy nah ? You don’t want right he said teasing her while she hits him with pillow ..
First I am your baby samjhe tum devil sarna ..she said while he nodded cutely and she went to get ready …

3 months more babaji this siyappa queen and her tantrums hushh he sighed and went to make his devils ready too …
Soon they all went twinkle kunj kush tani ..ronaya went somewhere with adee and kiara so they were not with them ..
Kunj was on driving seat while twinkle beside him and devils on the back … suddenly twinkle shouted ..
Pani Puri kunj ??? she shouted and kunj stopped car and looks at her …
So much excitement twinkle he said while she nodded like baby and kuni kept hand their mouth laughing and giggling seeing their parents …
No this place is not hygenic we will eat in restaurant he said while twinkle nodded in no …
No I want of here only she said and kunj signed having no option as he knew argument with her is baseless as she always uses her emotional tactics and win over him ..they came out of car and stand in front of stall …

Theeekha bhaiya with more spices twinkle said and ignored kunj as he was constantly staring at her …
Bhaiya give her spicy and for us showing him and kuni normal one he said while kuni shouted and said we want spicy too …kunj looked at them with unbelievable look …
Jaise maa waise bache he murmured and twinkle pinched him soon they all have it happily ..twinkle and kuni were poking their tongues out as it was hell spicy while kunj was laughing on them soon he saw ice cream stall and took them and they had ice cream …
One more twinkle said and kunj looked at her …
You had it just now na twinkle ? ?? He aksed …
Wo that was my fav now baby wants her fav too she said keeping hand on her belly …
Putting blame of everything on my baby and fulfilling your demands kunj said gritting her teeths while she showed her 32 teeth smile and took another ice cream and had it …
Soon they roam in garden and had their dinner outside only and left for their house …

Again sadu sarna was on her devil mode giving her …her necessary medicines again taking care of her …shanaya too gave a news of expecting again their happiness got tripled?? rest 3 months passed like that only with kunj and rohan over possesive about Thier lovely ladies ..
Haan finally the day arrived when twinklee was inside the icu while kunj was hell worried …?? Rohan piya and Abhay too was with kunj and devils were with shanaya at her home ..
Bhai ?? Why it is taking so much time ??? She will be fine na ?this doctor why she is not coming from inside ??what’s happening …??? Kunj was asking repeated questions and Rohan was calling him down but he wasn’t stopping even for a second what stopped him was the crying voice of baby …
He looked at rohan who nods in yes ..kunj was hell happy soon doctor came out and congratulated him …
Congo Mr sarna you are blessed with a cute angel she said and smiled at kunj ..
Can we meet her doctor he asked while she replied yess we will shift her to normal ward then you can meet her she said and left …
While the nurse came out with the baby kunj looked at her and got freezed at the moment …he took her in his arms and smiled …

She is really an angel …look her she her eyes nose she is soo cute kunj said and Rohan too looked at her while they fight to take her in their arms …
Rohan went and came back with shanaya and devils by the time twinkle was already shifted to general ward ..she was resting and the baby is in cradle she hasn’t seen her angel still kunj came inside saw his ladies he smiled and went towards twinkle and pecked her forehead feelings his touch she opened his eyes slowly ….
K.unj ba..by ?? She said while kunj signed her towards the cradle …
There she is our angel he said ..while Twinkle smiled and kunj took her out of cradle and gave her to twinkle …
Wow she is soo cute …you know kunj kush and tani were like this too she said and they both smiled soon the baby slightly opened their eyes …and look at her parents ..twinj smiled at her devils came inside with ronaya ..they went towards them …
Mumma she is soo cute so soft kush said touching the baby twinj smiled ..
Kush you wanted brother right twinkle said while kush looked at her yess mumma but she is more cute and I’ll have one more girl to protect he said while all laughed …

Soon they were playing with the baby after some days twinkle gets fully discharged …and came home with baby ..
Shanaya did Aarti of them and let them inside ..twinj came with baby the whole house was decorated with ballons and all devils did that for their cute sister ..
Twinj was with baby only their new toy for everyone as they everyone used to fight for her ..mostly the devil’s saying my sister my sister ???…

Soon the day of her naming ceremony came …the house was beautifully decorated …kunj got ready fully and sees twinkle struggling with baby he took her and aksed twinkle to get ready while he will handle her she nodded while devils came and was playing with her ..soon twinkle came kunj got mesmerised seeing her …and they all went downstairs and sat taking her …
Priest : so what name you all thought about her ??? ..
Twinj thought for a while …rest the others were fighting for Name ..
Shu …Shu so we thought her name ..they whispered in her ear while the baby smiled …
Ab hame bata do ?? Ronaya and abhiya said while devils nodded ..
Kunj took her in his arms “JASMINE” she is sunshine of my life she has became reason of everyone smiles he said and kissed her while everyone claps ..the function ended ronaya with adee and kiara went to their room while twinj with their kids …

The sleepless nights the playful morning has made their life going on soo smooth ..twinj happy with their kids ..soon jasmine was 11 months old ..
Ronaya were sitting in the hall along with abhiya with their cute 5 months baby “Ahaan” in shanaya lap kush wish of having a brother got fulfill with the arrival of ahaan while abhiya too blessed with a angel who they named “ahana”they both were 5 months old and was in their mothers lap while tani adee was playing with ahana and kush aur Kiara with ahaan …ronaya abhiya was seeing twinj who was bzy with jasmine actually thy were fighting …
Say papa ..say papa jas my baby you are Papa’s doll rytt baby say papa kunj said Jas was on sofa while twinj was on floor convincing her to speak mumma or papa ..
No Jas no papa first mumma you are my cutipie na so plzz mumma first say twinkle while kunj passed a death glare to her …
Bilkul bache ban Gaye hai he dono shanaya said while Rohan nodded …
Jasmine is exact copy of twinkle he said and smiled ???…
No kunj she will say mumma first …twinkle shouted …
In your dreams baby she will say papa first hai na Jas he said while Jas looked at them with her wide eyes (aww so cute ?????) …
Mumma …I said ..
No.papa …
Mumma …
Papa …
Off she will neither say mumma nor papa she will say kush tani first said kuni and hifi while all laughs …
Acha bachu twinkle said and pulled kuni and tickled them …and again they started fighting …looking at them fighting jas started crying …
Kunj looked at twinkle shocked and picked up Jas in his arms ..no no Jas rote nai see mumma papa was not fighting hai na twinkle …she cried harder ..
Yes jas we were not fighting baby they said consoling sudden jas spoke something making them smile widely ..
“PAA” was the word she spoke kunj looked at twinkle while she smiled while he was hell happy she said paa her first word kunj said happily …Jas say it again he said while she kept quiet ..
Ahh kunj she will speak slowly slowly twinkle said and pecked jas …

Next scene :::
Twinkle and shanaya was preparing lunch as it was Sunday and everyone was at home abhiya went back to Thier house ..ahaan was with rohan and devils were with jasmine in hall ..
Kunj was speaking to the client on call when he saw jasmine slowly taking the support of sofa she stand up he looked at her ..
Di twinkle come here he shouted and they came and asked him what happen ..
See there he pointed towards jasmine who was standing taking support of sofa she tried to walk ..but eventually falls ..kunj went towards her and holds her hands with his he bend on his knees and made Jas walk with him she was giggling and kunj was smiling seeing her twinkle took their pics ..
Again the time passed the days passed with the little little happiness increasing in twinj and ronaya life …

Kunj was shown standing talking on phone call …when someone’s taking her cute baby steps came and hugged his legs he turned and smiled to see jasmine ..she was 2 years old now …
What happen baby he aksed ?? Pecking her cheeks …hiding from mumma haan he said while she nodded her head cutely..chocolate was smeared on her face fully …
Jasmine Jas …ahh where she went said twinkle coming Jas looks at kunj asking him to hide her ..he took her behind him so that she may not be visible to twinkle ..
Kunj ? You saw jas ??twinkle asked while he nodded in no…no I didn’t saw her kyu what happen ?? He aksed ? ..she did anything ..??
Yes she has eaten chocolate when I said her no …you know na kunj she has slight cold ..she said while kunj nodded ..I don’t know who gave her chocolate ..uhmm wait aur kon desakta hai kuni ..these devils are spoiling her …
Yeah carbon Coby siyappa queen kunj said while jasmine giggled …
Wait ? Who giggled ?? She said and saw shadow behind kunj …she went slowly and catched her …
Pakad liya twinkle said and holds her …she sat on sofa taking jasmine in her lap …chocolate khayi ? She aksed while jasmine nodded in no ..
No mumma I hadn’t eaten…no she said and nodded in no …while kunj smiled and sat beside her ..
Pakka nahi khaya Jas ?? Twinkle aksed and she again nodded in no ..while kuni was standing far and tap their foreheads siyappa ..she has chocolate smeared on her face and she is saying no ..mumma is gonna kill us kush said while tani nodded ..
They were slowly escaping from there ..
Stop rytt there twinkle said and kuni looked at each other with helpless look ..while kunj laughed ….hahah aaj to these trio gone this vamp is not gonna leave them kunj murmurs slowly only to get death glare and pinched by twinkle ..
Come here twinkle said and kuni slowly took baby steps and came towards her and stands having puppy face ..
You both gave her chocolate ? She aksed ..while kuni looks at each other don’t know what to say …as they had only given her …
Nahi mumma meine chocolate khayi hi Nahi mujhe bhaiyu aur Di ne bhi nai Di jasmine said while kuni looked at her ..
Abey oye siyappa queen stay quiet for 2 mins kush and tani said together …
Hahahhaaha she is exactly like twinkle Rohan said coming from behind controlling his laugh …
Bhai twinkle said …
What Bhai hahah leave my innocent babies how much you are gonna scare them hai na kunj Rohan said …while kunj nodded …
But bhai see she is Ill.she will.get more Ill then..Twinkle said checking jasmine forehead …
Arey nothing will happen to her hai na my doll kunj lifted jasmine and wipes her face with his cursive …she hugged kunj showing tongue to twinkle ..haww twinkle said ….
All smiled soon they all have a family hug …adee Kiara shanaya and ahaan too joined them …and they went for the preparation of jasmine 2 birthday …

Soon the evening came ..devils got ready and took out the things they bought to gift Jas …ronaya were in Thier room making ahaan ready …and they went downstairs and checked for the preparations soon abhiya came there with ahana and they all were playing ..

In twinj room ::
No more drama Jas you are gonna wear this twinkle said while she nodded in no ….no no no I will wear this only pointing towards jeans and top while twinkle was asking her to wear blue coloured gown which she bought for her but Jas being Jas ?? carbon Coby she was too stubborn …kunj was laughing seeing them ..
Kunj tell her na twinkle said ..
No ways boss I am not gonna say anything it’s you and your daughter now he said and laughed …after so much of convincing finally Jas wored twinkle gown and ran downstairs …
Twinkle looked at Herself she was in same blue saree looking hot she stands infront of mirror in order to make bunch of her hairs ..kunj came from behind ..
Let your hairs opens only you look more hot in that he said while she smiled .. listening hot ..he saw her smirking and moved towards her …kept his hand on her bare waist backhugging her …
Why u are smiling so broadly haan ? He said and moved her hairs with his other hand and kissed her on neck ..she shivers at his touch …
Nothing just thinking about how our journey started she said and they both smiled ..recalling from beginning everything twinkle dream kunj revenge then revelation twinj separation then kuni …then twinkle forgiving kunj ..then jasmine in Thier small life …
Yeah twinkle I couldn’t wish for more you kush tani jasmine everything is so perfect he said while she turned and they looked at each other twinkle wraps her arms around his neck …soon they moved closer and joined them lips ..moving them passionately they broke it and smiled at each other …
Let’s go down now angel..??if I starts then we wouldn’t be able to attend today’s bday party kunj said winking at twinkle ..
Devil ? don’t u dare even think of it or else your little angels and your superman will murder you today …
Tumhàre KAATIL ban jayengay Woh she said and laughed when kunj too smiled biting her cheeks ..
Soon they went downstairs and met everyone and then the cake comes ..
They cut the cake along with jaskuni adeeiarahan (ade Kiara ahaan) and ahana with ronaya and abhiya …then took the family picture …and lived a happily ever after ????
The end :::::::
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So how was the last episode ??? ..
Hope u all liked it ??? ….
Pretty long took nearly 4-5 hours ??and half of the charging ????
So here I end the beautiful journey of this revengeful love KAATIL ????
It’s had been a great journey with you all as it was action romance emotional Wala ff ?????…
Well thanks to all who commented on last one ..not just on last one …on the whole journey who supported me through thanks to all ??? without you guys I wouldn’t be able to come up till here …
Had great memories writing this story ???scaring you ppl giving u all mini heart attacks with the shocks ..???
Plzz guys I request you today plzz comment if u had read single epi also plzzz I’ll be glad …
Chalooooooo ba byee ….will be back soon ???abhi Rab Miliya baaki hai boss ?????
Love u all ✌✌✌✌✌✌

Sameera

Secret admirer ???? lover of SIDMIN ..and many more like akdha mehbeer.. Cute si writer love to write and read ... Love my tei family ?????????...

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