hii…tu friends.Iam back with my 2nd episode.If any one feels that the story is boring you all are free to share ur views.thank you all so much for liking my story first episode.
recap:introduction of ADITYA,SLOKA and DHATRI…
In college canteen:
Sloka is waiting for Dhatri and Aditya.Adi reaches first and greets her.
Sloka:meri behen kaha hai?
Adi:vo kaha jayegi.meri sweet padaku friend hai,ofcourse she’ll go to library.
Sloka:ya i know she is sweet but tumare liye sirf sweet friend..aur kuch nahi.
Adi:Aur kuch matlab?
Sloka:very funny..mere samne tho acting math kar.I know what you feel about her.kab tu apna relation ko age badayega.
Adi:uske liye abhi bahut time hai.pahle mere bare me uska feelings kya hai ye to patha karna hai.
Dhatri comes from back.They both don’t see her
Dhatri:kiska feelings patha karna hai tum dono ko..
They both get tensed by seeing dhatri and thinks whether she heard everything
Sloka:Dhatri tum.Tum kab ayi.
Dhatri:me abhi ayi thi.Kya baath kar rahe ho app dono
Sloka:o..oo..hum ye baath kar rahe ki..
Adi:hum..hum..ha..we are talking about movie dialogues
Dhatri:oh..
They both feel relaxed..
Dhatri:Adi hum kab ja rahehe airport ko
Sloka:hum matlab.even you also going with him.
Dhatri:Ofcourse Dii even you are coming right.Nirupam is our friend.
Adi:We’ll start in 10min
Sloka:You guys go,but don’t force me to come.
Dhatri was going to say something but Adi signs her not to say anything.They bid bye to Sloka and leave from there.
Sloka to herself:Sloka you have to be strong.You could not get affected because of anyone.
She leaves to her home in her car.But she is sad.She went straightly to her room and sat on her bed.She was thinking about someone with whom she is happily playing,laughing every thing.
Then some words are disturbing her.They are clearly echoing in her ears.
“I HATE YOU NIRUPAM.”said by Sloka, and “EVEN I HATE YOU SLOKA.GOOD BYE FOREVER” said by Nirupam.They both went far from each other.
The whole situation is visualised by Sloka but not clearly.(nirupam face is not shown).She stood up and went near the window.Tear drops are falling from her eyes.She wipes her tears and says to herself that I should not feel weak.I should not let anyone know about this.
Dhatri and Aditya don’t know what happened between Nirupam and Sloka.Why they hate each other.They both didn’t say anything about it to Adi.Dhatri was not with them in their child hood.
Dhatri and Aditya in car
Dhatri:Why Dii hates Nirupam so much. jaha tak mujhe pata hai Nirupam is so good and he will never hurt anyone.Then what happened between them.
Adi:Even I don’t know about it.O dono best friends the.kisi ko bhi unke beech me nahi aane dete hai.But suddenly they stopped talking to each other.I asked them about it so many times.but they never told me about it.
Dhatri:Patha nahi ab tho unki dushmani katam hogi ki bhi nahi..
Adi:Let’s hope for the best…
They reach airport..They hear about the flight announcement and eagerly waits for Nirupam.
Adi sees Nirupam and shows To Dhatri.Nirupam is shown slowly.His smile,eyes and finally his face.He comes and hugs both of them.They welcome him and they all leave to home.They drop Dhatri at her home and leave towards their house.
mk, That’s it for today guys..I will update next episode soon.And sorry to say it takes some time for me to update manmarziyan story..Please forgive me..so sorry….loads of love to all..
15 Comments
So they knew each other from their childhood .Nice episode see.Hw r u?
Heyyyy I love this story a lot…it was awesome…pls pls pls next time update manmarziyan one…plssssss I’m just waiting for manmarziyan….update that one sOOn….luv u ???
thnk u so much ameena
Hiiii how r u….. story was awesome dr but try to update regularly
thnk u hayathi
Awesome episode sree dear, slokan n nirupam have bitter past…hope for the best…lovely story. …keep it up…waiting for the next episode, love you loads
thnk u so much roma and miss u
interesting pls update regularly dear
thnk u swara
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dear actually I forget the name of the story and I remember the cover page but I think the part get missed because I check daily some pages of fanfic and don’t know how it got missed . Plz inform whenever updated somehow when we met I ask u dear if I see ur name next time or if I forget u make me remember .
now reach to the story its fab actually fabulous.
I love the dialogues yaar and love the convo of shloka and adi and what a suspense yaar
what happened between dhatri and nirupam its actually a mystery very much excitingly waiting for this raaz to be unfold .
wow they reached airport finally the moment reached when nirupam came I love the character dear.
and yes hey give a face to nirupam actually share the characteristics of the boy so that ur fans by itself suggest u a face what they like really loved ur story characters each and every dear
waiting for next eagerly.
luv u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much dear
waiting eagerly for next
luv u keep smiling
Once a friend always a friend
its k nishu..it happens sme times…thank u so much dear
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hey guys its me nisha urs nishu I thing the colour changed by ru team from green to yellow .
I hope u recognize me luv u dear
Hey sree hw r u ??
Nice yaar !!
I nvr new dat u rite such lovely stories !
Jus love it !!
N ya billeted sankranthi subhakanshalu !!
hii…mansi..mising u so much dear..please come back soon…thnks for liking the story………sankranthi subhakanshalu
@lakshmi thnk u..iam fine dear