Hello ppl….this is epi 10…I m gonna end it in 15 epis…I don’t want to drag it…so plz comment… Last few epis r remaining….!
Its morning….Shravan wakes up nd sees Suman sleeping wid her head resting on d couch nd her hand in his..which he has still held….he just looks at her face… Relieved….that she is back to him….he looks at their hands….how tightly he has held her’s….fearing that if he leaves it….it might never return to him…nd he will slip into d darkness once again…d difference would be…that this time he would loose himself in d darkness….. Nd never come back….
Some time passes….Suman wakes up…nd she sees that she slept on d floor…she recalls whatever happened last night…she looks up at d couch…but doesn’t find Shravan….
She gets up…nd freshens up….she goes out in d hall…..to look for Shravan…. She doesn’t find him…suddenly she hears some sounds coming from d kitchen….she moves towards it…only to find Shravan standing there..wearing an apron… Nd cooking something….
Shravan sees her standing there and smiles at her….she gives him a surprised look….
Shravan: Good morning….what happened y r u looking at me like that?
Suman: What r u doing here….!
Shravan: actually I thought of playing badminton…so I came here… Will u play?
Suman: Shravan! Will u play badminton in d kitchen… Y do u give so stupid answers…
Shravan: Coz u ask such senseless questions…
He mimicks her: what r u doing here…!
Shravan: What do ppl do in kitchen…normal ppl cook…I don’t know wat do u do…
Suman frowns at him….
Suman: Oh god..I was just surprised to c u cooking…I never knew that u could cook also….
Shravan: U still don’t know many things abt me Ms. Suman kashyap….
Suman rolls her eyes
Suman: Whatever…. I m leaving…
Shravan: for whom do u think…I m doing all this….for judge at d court or wat!
Suman: Oho…but I hve to go home…freshen up…change…
Shravan: Oh Yaah I forgot… U r a lady…
Suman looks at him furiously…
Shravan continues: How can u compromise ur looks….OK wait…I hve n idea…I will pack d food…then let’s go to ur house…till d time u will freshen up…nd get ready…I will set everything….for breakfast..
Suman thinks for a while nd then says OK…
Suman: Ok then let’s go….
Shravan: Oh…hello…u want me go like this only..wearing an apron… Let me change at least…
Suman mutters to herself…: Now look who’s talking….!
Shravan: What?
Suman: Nothing u go nd change…I will pack everything till then…
Shravan comes after a few minutes…looking dashing in blue jeans…light pink shirt nd dark blue blazer…..hair looking as perfect as ever…he is running his fingers through his hair….
Suman: Leave ur hair for sometime….it is looking fine….
Shravan: Fine…!!! don’t insult my hair by calling it fine….
Suman: OK ok ….ur hair is looking amazing….u r so self obsessed…. Learn something frm me…
Shravan: From u…?
Shravan starts laughing….
Suman starts running behind him…..they both run in d whole house….finally after a few minutes Suman says: OK let’s stop it..we r getting late…
Shravan: Tell that u can’t run anymore..u r tired…
Suman: Yes I m…happy…?….now let’s go…
Shravan: Don’t u want to c my house or wat…come I will show it to u…
They both move around in d house….Suman finds various pictures of Shravan wid his mom…nd a few childhood pics wid his dad….she can now understand how he got his handsome features…nd charming physique….he has gone on his dad…
After seeing the whole house….
They both leave for Suman’s place…
When they enter….Shravan sees that it is as it was last time…not a thing moved from its place….
Shravan: OK then…u go freshen up…till then..I will set everything for breakfast….
Suman goes to her room…for a while Shravan moves around d house…finding that her scent is everywhere..her feeling is everywhere….Shravan comes out of his thoughts… Nd goes to get d breakfast ready…..
After a while….Suman comes out …looking as fresh as a daisy….looking beautiful in a lemon yellow dress….her hair is left open….they r wavy…coming down till her shoulders….they match perfectly wid those dark eyes….which hve their beauty back….her lips r curled into a beautiful smile as ever…
Shravan is so just lost… not into her beauty….but in that feeling….of seeing her…as she was….when those dark eyes would say everything…..when her smile never left her lips….when he was never tired looking at her….looking deep into those eyes….
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No my sis not end it btw it was amazinggggg and wonderfulllllll loved it and post next part fast
Thank you so much preeti ..will try to post soon!
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Awesome episode please don’t end it sis
Thanx shramansangel….it won’t look good if I drag d story…
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You won’t drag it you will just continue
it was amazing as ever.. but write long pls.. it was amazing.. i lvoe the way you describe everything.. 🙂
Thank you Nikita…I will try to write long…!
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Gud…a very nice ff…which I would like to more..☺☺☺
Thank you sona…!
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awesome….plss itni jaldi end mt krna…aur agr end krna jayda jruri h to plssss ek new ff or fresh story k sath dobara likhna start krna pdega…its my humble request…. plssssss….n thank u dear… 🙂
Thank you ankita…I will try to come up wid a new story….!
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Loved it…
Thanx lily
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I knw I can’t stop u fr ending dis but I can say 1 thing ” plzzzz come Bck soon with another 1 ok ” n abt d ep it WS wonderful u rocked as evrrrr!!
Plzzzz post nxt 1 soooon !!!! 😀
Thank you so much maria..!
I will try to come up wid a story…
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Loved your way of writing.
Thnx nandu…
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Ahhhh is their any need to say something??? U were amazing as alwayzzzz they way u describe thngs is out of the world yar loved it….. Ohhhh its gng to end?? But u should write another one plzzz
Thank you so much angel….I will try to write a new story….
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Wow yar u r outstanding…..i wanna give u a title….u r feelings expert…..u express the feelings so well that i can even imagine each n everything shr and sumo are feeling
Thank you so much naina…u write such lovely comments…! ??
Luv u loads nd loads….!
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Woah WS….u r amazing the episode was rocking…. It was so cute I loved it totally I really like the caring shravan in ur ff and funny also which we rarely c in the show….. Oh no u r ending it???
Plz plz come back soon with a new one…
And post the next one soon….loved it yr..
I want to kiss ur hands WS and give u a big hug…love u
Oh khushi…so sweet of u….love u lots nd lots sweetheart…plz read my epi 11..it will be published in an hour or so…
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Superb ep ??
Thnx Fatima…plz read my next epi nd comment..
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Yeahhhhh sure ???