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Shravan and Suman r at d doctor’s place
Doctor: How did u get hurt so badly…?
Anyway I will treat ur wounds…but make sure u change ur bandages on time….
Before Suman could say anything
Shravan said: Yes she will doctor…nd if she doesn’t…I will make sure she does….
Suman stares at him as he says this but shravan pays no heed to it..
After d doctor has treated her wounds…
Shravan said: Come get in my car…I will drop u at ur house….
Suman: No need Mr. Malhotra….I m fine I will go on my own..
Shravan: I m not asking u Ms. Kashyap…I m telling u… Just get in d car…u can’t even walk properly nd u want me to let u go alone…and morever I want to know how all this happened….nd I m very sure…u don’t want to discuss it here standing on d road..so get in d car…
Suman was left wid no option but to oblige…she sat in d car…
D whole way Suman kept thinking abt Shravan….they finally reached her house…
Suman’s flat was not very big… But whatever it was it was a perfect blend of beauty nd boldness….Shravan notices a picture hanging on d wall of her bedroom…there was a small cute girl in d picture..definetly suman…nd her parents…they were looking adorable together…so after showing Shravan her house.. They both sit on d sofa…
Shravan: So now Ms. Kashyap…tell me how did this happen?
Suman: Actually …I was just coming to d court for some work….
Flashback is shown…
Suman is driving her car…when suddenly she sees a girl running…d girl looks very scared…. Then suddenly she trips over a stone nd falls down… In front of suman’s car….Suman gets out of d car nd goes to help her…
Suman: Hey y r u running nd y do u look scared?
That girl was none other than Jia…
Jia: My name is Jia…. there r some goons following me…they r having knives…they tried to attack me…..
She shows her cuts to Suman ….Suman is shocked….
Suman: But y did they do this…?
Jia: I m a prime witness in a murder case….these goons r sent by that murderer….he murdered that girl….he will murder me also…plz save me …save me plz…
Suman: Don’t worry… Nothing will happen to u…come wid me….
Suman helps her to get up…. Nd is about to go…when she sees d goons standing right there….there were four of them… They had knives…Suman was tensed…
Suman: Look…don’t u dare touch this girl…if u do anything to her…it won’t be good for u….
Goon: Girl just leave her nd go away frm here…..otherwise it would be a prblm for u….
He shows his knife to Suman…nd he moves towards them….
Suman stands in front of Jia…. Nd asks d goon not to come forward…goon keeps coming towards them…when d goon moves his hand towards Jia… Suman slaps him hard on his face…
Suman: I told u not to try to touch her..
Goon looks angry….
Goon: How dare u slap me…u just wait nd c what I do wid u….
Suman nd Jia try to run towards suman’s car…but Suman gets a cut on her hand….it starts bleeding…Suman shouts in pain nd holds her hand…they again move towards her car…but d goons surround them…
Goon: I told u not to interfere in this….but u didn’t listen..now get ready to pay d price….
He tries to drag Jia away from Suman…nd Suman tries to save her…nd d other goons pull her away nd hurt her….Suman is in a lot of pain… But she knows that she has to save Jia anyhow…she suddenly gets nd idea..
She is fallen on d road…nd pretends to be unconscious …while d goons try to take Jia away….she slowly moves towards her car…nd opens d door slightly…she knows she has a bottle of pepper spray in there..in d car…she always used to keep a bottle for occasions like these…she takes d bottle…d goons notice her missing…they try to look for her…then suddenly they c somebody’s sandals near d car….they move to look behind d car…while one of d goon holds Jia…as they reach near d booty…Suman sprays d pepper spray in there eyes….they shout in pain…Suman pushes them down wid all her might….they fall down…she suddenly sees a gun in one of d goon’s pocket….she goes to take it…as she takes it nd moves to go…one of goons…hit her wid d knife on her leg….she shouts in pain nd falls down….nd hurts her head from d booty..blood trickles down her face…again she gets up wid all might she can find nd moves towards d goon holding Jia….she shows him d gun…nd asks him to leave Jia nd move aside….goon puts his hands up in d air..nd leaves Jia…Jia runs over to Suman…nd they both run nd get in d car…goons slowly try to get up nd stop them…but Suman drives away wid Jia… Flashback ends
Suman: …..nd then I took her nd reached d court…
Shravan was listening through this quietly…when she finished then also…he was all quiet…
Suman: Is everything fine Mr. Malhotra?
Shravan: Ms. Kashyap can I just ask u one thing..?
Suman: yaah sure
Shravan: How can u be so foolish…I mean…what was d need to jump in d situation…u could hve just left her nd hve gone to a police station nd complained…instead of risking ur own life..tell me Ms. Kashyap what was d need to do all this…?
Suman: Mr. Malhotra what guarantee did I hve that…by d time I reached d police station..they wouldn’t hve killed d girl…nd if I would hve left her ….nd something would hve happened to her…then wat abt ur client…even his life was at stake… I would not have been able to forgive myself all my life..if I would hve let that happen…watching d crime nd staying silent …I can never do that….I m sure Mr. Malhotra..even u would hve done d same thing…
Shravan: No Ms. Kashyap I wouldn’t hve…I do not hve as much courage as u hve…I respect wat u did…but wat would if anything would hve happened to u…
Suman: Its OK Mr. Malhotra…y r worrying so much…
Shravan thinks…: I m trying to find d answer for that question myself..
Suman: Did u say something Mr. Malhotra..
Shravan:ummm…no…I was just telling Y shouldn’t I worry..after all…I m ur friend…
Suman: Friend??… When did we become friends…?
Shravan: We r not friends..? I m so sorry….I shouldn’t hve said that then…
Shravan looks upset
Suman: Mr. Malhotra.. Will u be my friend?
Suman moves her hand forward smilingly….
Shravan: of course… Ms. Kashyap…but on one condition…
Suman: And wat is that?
Shravan: U will call me Shravan..
Shravan gives his most charming smile as he says this…
Suman: OK Mr. Malhotra… I mean Shravan…
Shravan: now we r friends Ms. Kashyap!
Suman: Not Ms. Kashyap…Suman….
Shravan repeats… Suman
They talk for a while…when Shravan says…
Shravan: Hey Suman….I saw a picture of u nd ur parents….u were all looking so adorable together…..
Suman: yaah that picture was taken just a week bfr my parents died in an accident…that picture matters to me a lot…..that’s a soveniour of some of d last moments spent wid my parents..
Shravan: I m so sorry Suman….I really had no idea abt it…
Suman: Its OK Shravan….no need to be sorry…anyway tell me about ur family….
Shravan: My dad left me and my mom..when I was just a kid….my mom raised me all by herself..if she wouldn’t hve been so selfless nd would hve given up..I don’t know wat would hve happened to me…she gave me all I hve today….she died when I was in collage….now since I was a pretty good law student…I got scholarship nd completed my education..nd so u c me …how I m now…
Suman: Yeah I c how u r now…ur mom has definetly given u a wonderful upbringing…it shows in ur behaviour…nd attitude towards others…
Shravan: thank you so much Suman…I m sure we would very good friends…we both hve almost same stories….
Suman: bcoz we hve same stories… Our story would be a very great
17 Comments
its was pleasure reading this dear i like last 2 lines most 🙂
its awesome weirdsister !! i love it !!! 🙂 🙂 🙂
Nice
do I have to tell u dat u r brilliant wid d dialogues… no! u r amazing wid ur to d point concept.. it was pleasure reading dis…. thanks!
it was awwwesome 🙂 …luv ittt …
It was fantastic. Keep writing.
vry nyc story…… n so was this epi….. lots of lv to u….. post nxt part sooonnnn
Thank you so much ppl….keep showing ur love nd support! 🙂
??A smooth..simple..and ?peaceful..story..?with..action..drama..?..I’m getting..in this ff..nice..one continue
Thank you…sona…I m glad u liked it! 🙂
It is amazing weirdsister eagerly waiting for next epi
Thank you madhuri…will try to post soon! <3
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Its ok khushi.. Nd thank you so much :-)….even I read ur ff…nd its amazing!!<3
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This is soo amazing!!!! read all the parts in one go and i dont believe it!!!! u are sooooooo talented!!!! waiting for the nxt part………
Thank you so much dear!! M glad u liked it..!!