Heyyyyyy…. I am backkkkkkkkk…. With a bang…. Hehe… Anyways guys thank u sooo much for commenting on my ff… I thank u too profusely for commenting that my OS is one of the best…. I am really happy…. Today I will end the OS but I will try to write another soon….
Precap:Naira broke her marriage and went forth to pursue her dreams of dancing….
Dadi gets angry on Naira and thinks what will happen of Kartik now……
Kartik comes home and Dadi tells him what happened. Kartik doesnt listen to her and goes to his room. He shuts the door and cries loudly. He breaksdown… He remembers in flash back he had witnessed all the tortures that Dadi did on Naira. He decided to let her go and fulfill her dreams…
Kartik:If I had stopped U Naira… U wouldnt have been able to go…Thats why I wanted u to go by ur own and not by my support…. I regret that I made u married me and got u in this house and ruined ur life…..
He calls Akshara and tells her that he freed Naira… Akshara is shocked and asks how? Kartik tells that her daughter is going to pursue her dreams on her own…
Akshara cries and calls Naira…
Naira is at the Airport and crying ?…. She thinks of Kartik and their lovely moments together… She wonders where had she gone wrong that Kartik didnt support her… She doesnt see Akshara’s call.. She takes the phone and calls Kartik.. Kartik picks up but they dont speak… They cry silently..chukar gayi….plays….Naira informs Kartik that she is pregnant and cuts the call cryingly. Kartik is shocked and rushes to the Airport… She them calls Akshara…
Naira:Mumma… I followed ur words.. I did not let them take away my dignity my swaabhiman… Self respect… I am proud of myself mumma… I did not lose my identity…
Akshara cries and asks her to go and fulfill her dream.. They both cry and cut the call… Naira gets shocked seeing Dadi there…
Dadi:U r pregnant with my Kartik’s child… And now u r making it away from us… This child is ours…
Naira smiles :u r soo unbelievable Dadi!!!! This child is in my womb then how can it be urs… This is my child only… Not Kartiks…
Dadi:But this child will be know as heir of Goenka Family because u r daughter in law of this house…
Naira:I think u ur forgetful…I have not changed my surname and this child will be know as Singhania and not Goenka…
Dadi:But when u will go and become famous because of ur dancing… U will be known as Goenka only…
Naira turns to go and says not Naira Goenka but its Naira Singhania who is going to fulfill her dreams..
Dadi is shocked at her attitude… Naira goes and cries walking… Kartik reaches thr airprort and rushes to Dadi… He asks where is Naira.. He sees her and shouts Nairaa… Naira stops… Bolna mahi bolna… Plays… She closes her eyes and doesnt stop… She continues walking and goes to board the plane.. Kartik cries…. He continues shouting Naira… Dadi consoles him and cries seeing him…
1 year later…. In London…
A baby girl of about less than 1 year js seen playing… Naira comes and smiles seeing the baby.. She takes the baby in her hand and plays with it.. She gets a call and gets shocked…
Naira:Do I have to go back to my past?
She gets ready and dances in a show……all clap for her… She then board a plane with her baby and comes back India.. She goes to Singhania Mansion and cries seeing Bhabhimaa ill.. She goes and hugs her..
Naira:Bhabhimaa.. I heard u got an attack… R u fine?
Bhabhimaa:Now that I have seen u… I am perfectly fine now… I saw this house’s happpiness again…
Naitik:Now that our princess is back… We would be absolutely fine..
Naira cries and hugs them.. Akshara and Naitik play with the baby…..
Dadi takes food for Kartik in his room and sees his room broken.. She takes the food plate and gives him.. She feeds him.. He acts like mad and cries seeing Naira’s photo…Dadi asks him to take her to temple.. She wants to do puja for him.. He agrees and takes her…
Naira comes to the same temple. She gives her baby in her assistant’s hands and asks her to take the baby to the temple..she will wait here…Assistant asks why maam.. Naira looks at the temple and says she has old enmity with him…
The assistant takes the baby to the templr and prays… She gets a call and gets shocked. She leaves the baby with the priest and goes… She informs Naira about an emergency in her house and that she left the baby with the priest.. Naira is shocked and thinks how will she go in the temple now…
Kartik with family pray there.. The priest gives the baby in Kartik’s hand and does pooja… Kartik sees the baby and gets emotional..Dadi sees the baby and asks whose baby it is.. Naira says from behind it is mine.. They all turn and look at her… Naira is seen climbing the steps of the temple… Om Mangalam… Plays…. They all get shocked seeing her.. Naira takes the baby in Kartik’s hand angrily… Naira says its my child Kaira… Kartik is shocked and remembers proposing to Naira and asking her to become Kaira… He cries happily seeing her… Dadi smiles seeing the baby and says my granddaughter…. Naira goes from there and cries arriving in the car… She drives off…kartik reaches the car but Naira had already gone… He smiles and thinks she is back…
He reaches Singhania Mansion… Dadi reaches there and falls in Naira’s feet.. Naira gives servant the baby and gets shocked… She makes her get up… Dadi cries and apologizes to her for the mistakes that she did…
Dadi:I never regarded u my daughter in law… I never gave u importance. But u always tried to unite my family.. I am sorry Naira… When u went away then I got to know ur importance… Ur absence made my realise that without u… My family will be ruined… Please… Now I understood that u will always be this house respect and this house’s Laxmi… I disrespected Laxmi… Please punish me..
She brings a bucket of cold water and pours in on herself… She burns her hand with agarbatti…
Bhabhimaa:U tortured the girl who we have nurtured with love and care… We always pampered her and did not let her get even a scratch.. Nobody ever slapped her..
Akshara:If in school a teacher beat her… We would make him lose his job and u made her burnt her hand… She regards ghungroos her GOD and u burnt that god… R u not ashamed… I would have complained about domestic violence against u all… U would have been rot in jail till now but Naira took my promise and stopped me….
Goenka family cries happily and looks at Naira and feels proud of her.. Kartik goes to Naira and tells her that how he sacrificed their relation for her dream.
Kartik:U remember I told u that under any cost I will let u fulfill ur dream…
Naira:And u did that!!!
They hug and cry… Chukar gayi…plays…
Dadi folds her hand and says that u have right to do any career u want…ur family has more right to decide on u than we… And I am proud that u changed my thinking and I am also proud that u chose ur mayka first than ur sasural… It shows u r grateful to ur parents…
She apologizes to Akshara and Naitik and says please give ur treasure to us once again and we will keep her as Laxmi…
Naira holds her hand and forgives her… They hug…
Dadi:U will wear anything u like..do anything u like… And live like a princess…
They all hug… Akshara smiles and hugs Naira…
Naira and Kartik come back to Goenka Mansion… Naira comes downstairs and smiles seeing baby playing with the members… Dadi smiles and says Kaira.. My granddaughter.. My pride…. Dadi sees Naira and stops her… Naira looks on…
Dadi:What kind of dress r u wearing?
She smiles.. I told u to wear anything u like… Go and dress whatever u want to…
Naira smiles and comes back wearing her blouse and jeans… They all take a family picture… Naira and Kartik take photo with Kaira… Chukar gayi… Plays… They have an eyelock and smile….
*The end*…..
Credit goes to:Heera
Hey guys this was the end of the OS.. And I hope u liked it… I will write another soon guys…. Plzzz keep updated… And plzz comment how it was… Ur comments will encourage me a lot to write otherwise I will not be encouraged to write…plzzz silent readers pleaseeeee comment…. ?…..
4 Comments
Wow what a wonderful os very well written I repeat my self one of the best I have read totally loved it you have great writing skill continue never stop eagerly waiting from more work from you
Osam.
Loved it to the core.
U again made me speechless.
Wonderful Job.
Airport moment was so PERFECT.
Akshara an Naira talks,Temple scene was so awesome.
Nice
It was just awesome…loved it to the core…read the whole OS today itself great work…hats off to you….it was a very different plot… I hope you come with other awesome works also… will be waiting for it ?