Kaise Mujhe Tum Mil Gaye- How a doctor got his true love
Hi guys. I am RandomfANCreationZ and I am back with my third one shot on Savitri Devi College and Hospital. And after this one shot I won’t be writing for a few days due to my exams.
And I am so so sorry for the mess up done by me in the previous one shot. Actually what happened was I added some parts in another draft but I accidentally posted the unedited draft where that part wasn’t added and it was too long also so I couldn’t even post it.
Anyways for this one shot, it will be based on Dr Kabir. Just like Veer and Saanchi had their own love story with different aspect , Kabir will also have his own love story with another aspect.
Veer’s love story conveyed one sided love, Saanchi’s conveyed first love and now Kabir’s story will convey about true love and soulmate.
I hope you all will like this one shot and give support like you all did for Veer’s story and Saanchi’s story. Now it’s time for Kabir’s story.
Here is the one shot.
The one shot begins with Kabir driving a car in a silent street, at the night time. He is really happy today. The smile on his face says it all. There was a time, where it wasn’t at all easy for him to smile for a long period of time. It was just natural. The only thing that used to made him smile was his mom. But today, he has many reasons to smile.
Kabir: Thank you! Thank you so much for coming to my life.
He got into a flashback. The day when he saw her. And once she entered his life, he never expected that due to her entry in his life everything will change one day.
It was around 3-4 years ago.
He was working in Savitri Devi college and Hospital as per normal. It was just a normal day for him nothing special. Just that like every year, this year a new batch of interns will come for the interview and he will take their interview. He just hopes that the interns this year will be cooperative enough and doesn’t give him headaches.
This year the interns are totally different compared to the last year ones. But there was one thing same between them. That they are just carefree. He remembered the time when he got chance for his internship in this hospital he and his classmates were so happy for it and for the interns now , it didn’t even make any difference at all! Unbelievable! It’s not easy to be an intern in such a big hospital. And they didn’t even bother much!
He wanted to choose among the best but from the last few years he has been given to choose among the worst. Such a pity! Good doctors are decreasing by numbers day by day. Anyways he can’t do much about this, so just let it be.
After a few days, he saw this student. What is her name? Yes Saanchi. Saanchi Agarwal. She is such a good and serious intern. She does her work with so much passion. After so many years he saw such a doctor like her. He can’t believe that she scored only 60% for her entrance exams.
Perhaps she have realised the value of getting chance in such an honoured hospital. And she continued to prove him right! She was indeed a really good doctor.
She topped the intern exams this time!
And when she was blamed for cheating in the exams, the confidence with which she answered all the questions by Dr Malhotra made his mind blown. Even a good doctor won’t have been able to answer those questions. She was actually more than good. And someone really special.
Even if she did mistakes, if she was in fault she didn’t mind at all and learnt how to rectify it so that she won’t repeat it again! And when she wasn’t at fault, she would still rectify for that but at the same time she won’t take the blame so easily.
She wasn’t only good as a doctor but also a confident girl. It is rare to find a girl like her today. He was proud of her.
(Kaise Mujhe Tum Mil Gayi)
Even his own mom was impressed with her. And she was making full plan to get him married to her. Now this was too much! He admit that Saanchi is not only good as a doctor , but as a human. But she is just an intern and this is not the right time. And anyways he doesn’t carry much interest in all these nonsense.
One day, he saw her in between of the road while dropping his mom to the temple. There were some kids. He felt so bad for the kids. They didn’t had anyone in their life. So he went to give them some money while his mom was praying in the temple. At least this is the best he could have done.
Suddenly he saw a girl. The girl was playing with them. Her earrings, her hair…. Wait a minute! She is really familiar. He looked a bit more. She is…
Kabir: Saanchi?
Saanchi! What is she doing here! Before Kabir could go and ask her.
Girl: (pulling Saanchi’s dress) Didi, Didi, I am very hungry.
Saanchi showed a sweet smile to her. She had a box of sweets in her hand. She fed the kids with her own hands. With this view, even a smile appeared on Kabir’s face.
Kabir: (in his mind) Saanchi is such a good human being!
How she treated them as her own even if she didn’t even know them. It is indeed really rare to find someone rare like Saanchi in this world. Really rare!
(Kismat Pe Aaye Naa Yaakeen)
Okay now his mom is coming back from the temple and he should go and pick her up and if she sees Saanchi here, she will again start her long lecture on how Saanchi is perfect for him and all that.
Two days later,
It was a really hectic day in the hospital. He has so much other things to do. Already two surgeries done and now one more surgery upcoming which will begin soon. Suddenly he found a force on his chest. He looked down and saw Saanchi giving him a tight hug!
What the hell! How can she hug him like this? Don’t she have any shame! And she don’t have any other work!
He tried to get off from her embrace but…
Saanchi: Save me! Save me!
Kabir looked around. Who was she telling him to save from. There isn’t anyone here!
Kabir: What nonsense!
Saanchi: Lizard!
Just then he looked on the wall. It was just a lizard. How can a doctor like her be scared of a lizard! He wonders how she did her Biology lab! To be scared of a small creature like a lizard is such a shame for a doctor!
He immediately got off her!
Kabir: Look its just a lizard! As a doctor you shouldn’t be scared of such a small creature! And yes I don’t have time for all these nonsense. Go back to your duty right now, okay!
He got off her.
(Utar Aayi Jheel Mein)
It was a few days later,
He wanted to hand Saanchi a file so that she can study the case of the cancer patient that is coming for the surgery in two days. After all she is going to help him out so there are some things she need to know.
Suddenly his eyes went towards Saanchi. The door was open. She was dancing with her friends. He never saw Saanchi sooo happy! What’s the matter! There isn’t any result coming out today too!Strange!
(Jaise Chand Utarta Hai Kabhi)
But for some reason he enjoyed seeing her happy. He don’t know the reason but be some really valid reason. Even if she topped the exam she won’t have been so happy. A smile automatically appeared on his face. He was really happy to see her happy. Anyways it’s late now. And he has to be back home soon. And Saanchi is so happy. Let him do one thing. He will email her the documents and WhatsApp her to check her email.
It was night. He lied down on the bed to sleep. It will be a long day tomorrow. But he couldn’t sleep.
Suddenly her face flashed into his minds. Saanchi’s! He remembered how he saved her from falling that day, and also how she fall on him that day, and then her confidence the way she answered to Dr Malhotra, the way she stood up for Veer’s rights! The way she made his mom happy and took care of her, the way she enjoyed with those kids. The way she helped him, the way she hugged him and the way she was happy and celebrating.
Why is he even thinking so much about her? Is he in…. No way! He is too tired that’s why all these nonsense are coming from his mind right! And while trying to forget about Saanchi he dozed off into a deep sleep.
(Haule Haule Dheere Se)
The next week. It was his break time. He was about to go back to his cabin, just then he saw her siting outside the hospital and eyeing towards the rain. And collecting the droplets using her hand.
But her face portrayed sadness. She doesn’t seem to be happy or normal but she seemed depressed. What’s wrong! She was so happy a few days back! He should go and check out!
(Gunguni Dhoop Ki Tarah Se Taranum Mein Tum)
Kabir: What’s wrong Dr. Saanchi you can tell me?
Saanchi was hesistant at first. But later after convincing her a lot she finally opened her mouth and told what the matter was.
It was about her family! Her family was passing through a really tough time. And the alliance that came for her broke. The boy rejected her. And she liked the boy a lot which is why she was so happy but turned out to be a cheat. While consoling her, she hugged him tightly. For some reason he was finding comfort when she hugged him but the tears were really disturbing. The hug was like a watermelon but the tears on her eyes was like a seed.
(Choo Ke Mujhe Guzari Hu Yu)
She wanted to quit all these for a moment and he knew that she has to get out all of these! He doesn’t want this hospital to lose such a talented doctor like her due to all these nonsense stuffs!
The best he could do was to forward his hand for friendship to her. To guide her towards the right path. This is the best he could do as her senior and mentor.
Saanchi: Dr Kabir I didn’t think that you will turn out to be this way.
Kabir: Which way?
Saanchi: A very sweet person. Why do you always hide this sweet personality of yours from others?
Kabir: Professionalism Saanchi.
Saanchi: That is fine. But sometimes you can mix your professionalism with your sweet side. But yes when needed of course you have to be serious. But please don’t hide the sweet side of yours. It won’t overshadow your professionalism anyways.
Kabir: Saanchi?
Saanchi: Please!
For some reason she managed to get him out of his strict personality for a while. He wanted to fire up at the interns and staffs for their smallest of mistake but at the same time he promised Saanchi he would be strict only when needed. He realised he was too strict at times when it was not at all necessary.
He couldn’t be really sweet to them but he tried to be nice at least. Saanchi appreciated his effort. And she assured him to continue it in this way and not to force himself.
Days passed by and he didn’t realise when he got attracted towards her more day by day. Something more than friendship was breezing between them. Perhaps he has started to fall in love with her.
With her innocence, cuteness , selflessness, confidence, courage, determination, beauty, passion, friendliness, trustworthiness and the list just never ends.
He would just lovingly staring at her be it while settling her coat, eating or taking a short nap. She was very valuable and precious. Maybe like a diamond. Even a diamond has less value than her. Why is he even so attracted to her? Is this love? Perhaps!
After a few days
He realised it was indeed love. He was truly in love with her. He just loved it whenever she spoke with him regarding anything. Anything! He was just staring at her lovingly. How lovely she is!
(Dekhu Tumhe Ya Mein Sunu)
Saanchi: Dr.Kabir there is something I need to tell you.
Kabir: Yes Saanchi?
Saanchi: Actually I am not what you think I am.
Kabir: Yes I know.
Saanchi: You know?
Kabir: I know that you are not what I think. You are not the average student who scored 60%. You are the intern who have all those qualities to be one of the best doctors of this hospital. You proved that marks don’t decide your future. I have full trust on you.
Saanchi: Will you still trust me after what I say?
Kabir: I will always trust you and be on your side.
Saanchi seemed very nervous. The sweat pores forming on the side of her cheeks said it all. She closed her eyes as she told the biggest truth of her life!
Saanchi: I am not Saanchi Agarwal!
He wasn’t expecting it.
Kabir: What! You are not Saanchi?
Was it some kind of joke or what!
Saanchi: I am Saanchi, but not who you all are thinking. I am Saanchi , Saanchi Mishra!
Kabir: Why are you living with a fake surname?
He didn’t know what else to ask her. He couldn’t believe what he just heard.
Slowly Saanchi narrated her motive behind her hidden identity. And how Dr Malhotra was responsible for her shattered family and how this hospital idea was by her dad not Dr Malhotra.
Kabir couldn’t believe what he just heard. Was it an excuse by her or what? But Saanchi is a really good person. Why will she do that? He couldn’t even fire or scold her as he just melts for her very easily. He knew there was something he needed to know.
Kabir walked away and investigated the matter. Saanchi was telling the truth. He just got away from the dark he was kept all these years. He was working under a corrupt all these years and obeying all his orders like a robot. How could he have wasted his efforts like that! But this hospital is here today only because of Saanchi’s deceased dad and her family deserves all the credit. Saanchi’s talent convinced him too.
He saw the way , the confidence in which Saanchi declared the biggest truth of her life to the world.He knew it wasn’t easy for her at all, but she did it. He felt like giving her huge round of applause and to give her a bow.
(Tum Ho Sukoon, Tum Ho Junoon)
But instead of that she was getting insults and curses! Cmon this is what she didn’t deserve at all! And some corrupt like Dr Malhotra doesn’t has the right to insult his Saanchi this way!
He walked up straight way, fearlessly hold Saanchi’s hand. He uttered every truth about Dr Malhotra and all his cheap deeds. Regardless of the fact he may lose his experienced job. But what mattered to him more was humanity. He was in disgust while even saying Dr Malhotra’s misdeeds, but he had to do all these for Saanchi. And to get someone their deserved rights.
Dr Malhotra realised his grave mistake and apologised to Saanchi. But Kabir won’t easily forgive Malhotra until and unless he gets Saanchi and her family all the rights they deserved. And finally he did what he wanted! And ultimately he was forgiven. But he couldn’t worship that doctor as a human figure anymore after he came to know what misdeed he did!
He knew that he was in love with Saanchi this time and he couldn’t deny it and his love for her got stronger after her truth came out. This was how strong she was and so much sacrifice she made! She had a really tough journey!
(Kyu Pehle Naa Aayi Tum?)
She came to his house that day. To thank him for being always there for him. And he knew that this was the right and perfect moment. After all it was only the two of them, all alone. It won’t be possible and nice in the hospital.
Kabir: Saanchi, there is something I need to tell you too.
Saanchi with high curiosity stared at Kabir and thinking about what he wants to tell her.
Kabir: Saanchi, I was initially confused. But later I got assured. It took me huge courage to say this now. I am not so courageous like you, but you have to know this soon some day or other.
Kabir comes closer to Saanchi while she takes a step back. He knew he was freaking her out.
Kabir: Saanchi, I am in love with you! Yes Saanchi I love you!
Saanchi was shocked when he confessed his love to her. Finally he told her his feelings. He was feeling so relived. But at the same time he was nervous. What if she rejected him. What if she don’t like him anymore after what he did.
(Kaise Mujhe Tum Mil Gayi)
When she ran away from the spot, without even speaking a word. He realised that what he feared the most happened.
(Kismat Pe Aaye Naa Yaakeen)
Days passed by and she tried to ignore her. Sometimes he felt bad but at times whenever he saw a bright smile on her face for whatever reasons he would feel much better. At least she was happy.
Perhaps he was expecting too much. Only a perfect guy deserves his more than perfect girl like her. Not him.
But he saw a glimpse that day. That day he fall really sick. Too much work plus hectic schedule affected his health badly and he was down with a viral fever. He was forced to take an off from work though he didn’t want to. His mom who herself wasn’t 100% fit took care of him and sat aside him the bed the whole day by using wet towels and placing it on his forehead.
Kabir: Maa, you yourself are unwell, and you are taking care of myself. You should go to your own room and rest. I will manage.
Kusum: Shut Up! I know what to do for my son . And as a mom I can’t live you alone in this state, Golu.
Kabir: Maa…
Kusum: That’s why I want a daughter -in-law and your wife who can take care of you so that I no need to worry and take stress.
He knew he had the best mom. And there had to be someone so that she can peacefully take rest. She was right. Okay now she again brought up of the marriage topic which he wasn’t interested at. The only girl they both liked isn’t even interested in him.
He wanted to call a nurse to take care of himself but his mom was in no mood.
At night, he was in deep sleep due to heavy antibiotics and medicines he had. He was really thirsty as he was about to drink water, someone held him a glass of water. Now his mom is doing too much she should have slept now!
Kabir: Maa, how many times have I told you that…
Before he could complete, He looked up. It was her. Dr Saanchi!
Kabir: Saa….
Saanchi: Dr Kabir you should take rest here is your water.
Kabir drank the glass of water offered by her. He was staring at her shocked. What was she doing here at the middle of the night in his house.
Later he realised that Saanchi came to take care of him. She seemed to be really worried.
Saanchi: Actually Aunty called me and told me that you are unwell that’s why I came here.
His mom also! What was the need to call Saanchi here! Anyways, he was happy with the fact that she still cared for him. The entire night she took care of him. He was really feeling weak due to the medicines he took and she would support him.
It was around 4am and he was sound asleep. When he opened his eyes a bit, he realised she was still awake to see if he needed anything. And since he was asleep she would wait and read a novel by then.
She looked at him, if he was awake. He pretended to be continued to be asleep. Wait a minute she is just coming near to him. Did she realise that he was actually staring at her? Let his eyes be closed. She came and sat beside him on the bed.
She caressed his hair. Suddenly his heart start to beat. She was speaking to him silently.
Saanchi: Dr Kabir, I am sorry. I know I have been ignoring you. It is because I don’t want to lose you. I want you to remain being my mentor. If not who would guide me if I am going through the wrong path? Tell me. The thing is whoever I really love either they will leave me or face a lot of problems.
Tears dropped from her eyes. He felt like waking up, stop all these and wipe her tears but he couldn’t.
Saanchi: I like you. I like you a lot. Maybe I love you, I know you love me a lot. Even I do, but perhaps… no I won’t let you go through problems that I faced in my life. I am sorry.
Saanchi left from there running and she cried for a while. Kabir opened her eyes as he overheard everything.
Kabir: I know you have faced a lot in life Saanchi. Even I have faced a lot. But for that I won’t let you go away from me.
(Mein To Yeh Sochta Tha Ke Aaj Kal)
After 5 days,
When Kabir finally recovered and came to hospital he was still a bit weak, and Saanchi took utmost care of him. Saanchi made his work much easier.
He remembered how he saw a patient recovering faster than usual only because of his fiancé. And her love made him recover. He took the chance and told Saanchi,
Kabir: Dr Saanchi sometimes love can work as a medicine. You are the one who taught me this.
Before Saanchi could say anything, Kabir left from there.
And then that day finally came, when he heard those magical words from Saanchi but in a way which he never expected and yes never wanted to.
He remembered how he found her in a state which he never imagined. He found her injured in a bad state due to an accident. He doesn’t even want to remember about it, but those words will always echo into his ears.
Saanchi: I love you Dr Kabir!
And after that she endorsed into a deep unconsciousness.
(Upar Wale Ko Fursat Nahi)
Thankfully, Dr Veer’s effort made Saanchi recover faster and saved her life. Saanchi told Kabir that how much she loved him but she was afraid. Her biggest fear was to lose him.
She was hugging him so tightly not leaving him. Kabir promised he would always keep her happy.
When she recovered and was fit enough to stand on her own legs, he proposed her.
Kabir: I hope I am not hurrying, but Dr Saanchi. I really love you! Will you marry me? Will you be my soulmate?
Saanchi hold his hand and nodded positively to convey that she was ready to be his in all steps in his life.
He tightly hug her to promise he will not leave her as long as he was alive. He wanted to live this moment forever. It was the best of his life. He finally got the lady whom he equally loved as his mom.
(Phir Bhi Tumhe Bana Ke Woh)
His mom went to her house to bring alliance for him. To ask her hand for him from her family. Which she happily said yes with a lot of shyness on her face agreed. And her family was always supporting her.
Day by day their date to become hitched came closer. It was their engagement. She looked so pretty that day. He still remembered how he made her wear the ring. And so did she. The ring which portrayed their togetherness. He still has that ring on his finger today.
He was eager to be with her as soon as possible. Dr Veer who was also a really good friend of Saanchi played the cupid in their story and helped him all possible ways. Dr Veer is indeed totally different from his dad. Giving him all those weird but effective love tips.
Beginning from making sure he gave Saanchi the same shift as his, to even making him and Saanchi meet in private in her house by climbing through the windows. He never imagined that he had to do so just to meet Saanchi.
Kabir: What nonsense Dr Veer?
Veer: Its not nonsense Dr Kabir now you have fallen in love so you should do all these for you love. It’s not fair for Miss Golgappa.
He weirdly stared at her .
Veer: For you she maybe your Mrs but for me she will always be Miss Golgappa. And I am her friend so who else can know better than me what she likes.
Kabir: Okay fine what else should I do!
This Veer gives him really stupid ideas but even these stupid ideas are useful. At also Veer knows Saanchi so well. After all they are best friends.Love is so weird. He pity on himself thinking what else he would have to go through. But once Saanchi’s smile flashes into his face, he was fine with anything!
Finally it was the d-day. The best day of his life. When he and Saanchi will finally officially be together, and be each other’s soulmate really soon.
He waited for Saanchi to come to the altar. And finally she came. She looked like an angel. The veil behind her head, and the pink lehenga he chose for her suited her. And with not too much of ornaments. It was just perfect and natural. But her face stole the limelight. She looked even more beautiful than a moon. Really. Just perfect.
(Meri Nazar Mein Chadh Gaya)
He was lucky enough to have her in his life. He couldn’t believe that she was going to become his soon. He questioned himself did he really deserve her?
(Rutbe Mein Woh Aur Badh Gaya..)
Luckily, their moms were good enough to give them some time to speak with each other before the wedding. Kabir wanted ask her for one last time if he deserved her.
Kabir: Saanchi, look here no one is forcing you. There is no pressure on you. There is still time. Look listen to me carefully. You can still back off from this.
Saanchi: Kabir I just have one question to you.
Kabir: Sure?
Saanchi: How much do you love me? Just be honest.
Kabir: I don’t have an accurate answer for that but yes my love for you is my truth. It is something I am proud of. I don’t know if I even deserve you, but yes at the same time I know that you deserve someone better, who will love you more than me, and whom you will love more than me too.
Saanchi: So are you trying to say that you don’t want to marry me?
Kabir: No it’s not that I don’t want to. Of course I want to. I love you. But what matters to me is your opinion. And your happiness is more important to me.
Saanchi: You wanted to know if there was someone I loved more?
Kabir: Yes
He was really nervous and his heart was staring to beat too that moment.
Saanchi: There is someone whom I love a lot. He is standing parallel to me asking how much I love him? That person, whom I am getting married to very soon.
Saanchi came closer to Kabir.
Saanchi: No matter what but I love you Kabir. Please be my soulmate. Don’t leave me. You promised me.
Kabir: What are you saying? I really love you. Are you sure you love me?
Saanchi: I am more than sure that I love you.
Kabir hugged her. He wanted to take change and give her a peck on the lips but he knew he had to wait.
They finally got married to each other. They took the seven rounds making seven promises to each other. He made her wear the vermillion on her hairline and the nupital chain on her neck which will very soon be his daily morning routine before work.
Saanchi was now confident of their love and he was more than glad that he got the soulmate he wanted, his Saanchi. She is happy and he is happy too. He is thankful to God who sent Saanchi in his life.
His life changed as soon as she stepped into his house with him. She was the best thing he could asked for.
(Zindagi Sitar Ho Gayi)
She herself was an intelligent and hardworking doctor, and she without any complaining managed between her work and taking care of his mom. No wonder why his mom always wanted him to get married to her. His mom did the perfect analysis.
She will never skip work or her responsibilities. She will fulfil all of them no matter how busy she is. She was someone who could do morning shift and also even take care of his mom overnight whenever she was ill at the same time. She would even do overnight shift if his mom needed her at home for her kitty party or whatsoever.
She never compromised with work or household duties. She would always have a smile on her face all day even though if she would be stressed out.
She was the best intern and best wife and best daughter -in-law and of course the best of best.
And most importantly she was someone with whom he could share every single thing with. Be it about work or whatsoever. Whatever was in his heart. And she would never get bored and will always patiently listen to him and in fact give him solutions which always worked in his favour almost all the time. She wasn’t only his wife but also like his best Friend.
(Rimjhim Malhaar Ho Gayi)
He was really proud of his wife . Dr Saanchi! She was awarded and honoured as the best intern of Savitri Devi college and Hospital. It was such a proud moment when he stood up there and clap for her. He could say that he was the Husband of Dr Saanchi too, confidentially and proudly.
It was a rainy day. They both were walking in the garden near his house. Indulged in a long conversion about the hospital and yes a bit of memories about themselves during their college times . He had the umbrella on his hand. She looked extraordinarily pretty that day in that peach saree .
He didn’t realise how he lovingly stare at her and was lost in her and her beauty. He lost grip of the umbrella he was holding and hence getting them both all drenched.
Saanchi wanted to ask something perhaps why he threw the umbrella like that. He came close to her and started to… Her hands were cold, her cheeks were soft and her open hair had water droplets dripping on her face. He couldn’t believe she was all his. That he got such a unique gem.
(Mujhe Aata Nahi Kismat Pe Apni Yakeen)
The hair locks were disturbing her. He kept it aside. He came close to her. He came closer and closer and gave her a kiss. The kiss he waited for a long time. He lifted her in his arms. She was still so light. He placed her on their bed. It was a beginning of their intimacy as they consummated their marriage. How their souls became one. They became soulmates in true sense.
(Kaise Mujhko Mili Tum..)
Kabir got out of the flashback and smiled as he recalled all the memories he shared related to Saanchi. How she graduated after ending her internship giving him a tight hug to convey their happiness. Well now she was a renowned doctor just like him in the same hospital.
He remembered from day one, her interview and then how he saved her dropping, the moment when she fell on him. The tight hug she suddenly gave
him due of her fear for lizard. And then there was a glimpse of her childishness. Their love confession, first date.
And of course their life after marriage. How they would at times fight over smallest of reason even over food or tv or books.Even when to breathe also they had to fight. He chuckled to himself recalling all those wonderful moments.
At the same time they were each other’s best friend . He would teach her if she had questions regarding her medical studies and she would tickle him to convince him whenever he was angry.
She would be the link between him and his mom if he got upset over his mom for not taking care of her own health . If they both got into a fight, his mom will always support her beloved daughter -in-law. And also how she made his family stronger and his house a more lively place.
Their day began with each other and ended with each other. This was all Kabir and Saanchi all about. Kabir + Saanchi = Kanchi
Suddenly he got an idea. He stopped his car. He smiled and he video call Saanchi. He couldn’t wait to catch a sight of his wife on the phone. Finally she was there.
Kabir: Listen, I love you.
Saanchi: (smiling ) Yes dear, I love you too.
Kabir: Listen there is one more thing I need to tell you.
Saanchi: Yes tell me.
Kabir: We will name our daughter,
Kaanchi? How is it?
Saanchi: Kaanchi! That is such a nice name. Okay done.
Kabir advices his wife who smiled as she carcasses her 7 months baby bump. She was the mother of their unborn child. Their daughter. He was quite confident it would be a baby girl. He knew it wasn’t an easy thing for her to carry their sign of love in her womb. There was tiredness seen on her face. But at the same time her bright smile on her face was always there to assure him that she was fine.
His Mom also came to speak to him.
Saanchi: Mummyji and baby are missing you a lot.
Kabir: I miss you three too. But what to do it was such an emergency case. I miss all of you a lot.
Saanchi smiled.
Kusum: And yes take care of yourself Golu . Now I should go now and Saanchi beta take rest if not my Golu will complain.
Kabir: Maa is right you need to sleep now. Sleep is important for you and the baby. Take care of my princess,okay.
Saanchi: Okay fine. As you say.
Kabir: I love you
Saanchi: I love you too.
As Kabir was about to keep the phone,
Saanchi: Listen, come back soon, okay.
Kabir smiles and keeps the phone while having a one last glimpse of her face. He continues to drive home as he eyes towards the bouquet of roses for his lovely wife and the huge teddy bear for his princess which he brought for them.
He was happy and fortunate. That he got someone like Saanchi to be his true love and soulmate for his entire life. He was indeed thankful to God.
The end.
So finally I managed to write this one shot and post it. I hope you all liked it. Frankly speaking among the three OS I wrote for Savitri Devi College and Hospital, this one is my personal favourite, followed by the first one . I like this one the most among the three cause it was a happier one compared to the first two ???.
It’s not that I don’t like the second one. I liked but the mix up made up by me kinda changed the story of it that’s why. Anyways whatever happened is happened. And I am sure I didn’t repeat this mistake this time.
Well I won’t be posting anything before 25/26 August due to my exams. My exam will end on 25. After that I will write a fan fiction based on Savitri Devi College and Hospital, I just hope I get a good enough story by then and also yet to decide on the pair as I love both the pairs.
And yes I want you be really honest, whoever read all the three one shot
Which of the three one shots of mine you liked the most?
A) Tune Jo Na Kahan Main Woh Sunta Rahan based on Dr Veer’s one sided love story
B) Tum Ko Paa Hi Liya based on Dr Saanchi’s first love
C) Kaise Mujhe Tum Mil Gayi based on Dr Kabir’s soulmate (this one)
By any chance if you didn’t read my previous one shots here are the links:
Dr Veer’s story:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/tune-jo-na-kahan-main-woh-sunta-raha-one-sided-love-story-doctor-os/
Dr Saanchi’s story:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/tum-ko-paa-hi-liya-first-love-doctor-os/
Dr Kabir’s story:
This one
So that I can have a rough idea on what story I should I write so that you all will like it more. And I am so glad to read a lot of kanchi ffs here and also getting a lot of sanveer ffs at the same time these days. All the Writers are doing a great job. I am so sorry I can’t comment on all the updates cause of busy schedule studies and work.
As for the show I don’t know which pair will end up but I just wanna say to both Kaanchi and Sanveer fans that keep calm and watch savitri Devi college and Hospital.
I am absolutely loving Varun, Swarda and Vikram in the show.
For a brief introduction, well my name is Joyee you can also call me Jo, I am a year 2 engineering student and I do a part time job in retailing too. Writing is one of my hobbies and also handicraft and travelling. I love to travel. And I love cartoons a lot ???.
And yes it’s my birthday on 22nd of this month I really wanted to post something that day but my exams?. But yeah don’t forget to wish me on my birthday I will be waiting for ur wishes ?do it through the ff or wall post or whatever i don’t care but I want my wishes ???. I will try my best to see if I can post any stories on my birthday.
48 Comments
Awesome mind blowing and many more I like ur all os thanks for kanchi pair. After exam please continue
Hey ashnita thanks for commenting happy u liked my os I m liking kaanchi pair a lot ?
After exams will write a Ff just hope I get a new story in my mind by then so that I can write a ff on sdch
It’s so good u made me cry nd laugh at same time. This Os includes all emotions of life it’s just so amazing. Really loved it.
Hey QVZRQ33M thanks for commenting happy u liked it a lot and Glad u can find all the emotions connected here ?
Joyee u put kuch effort in writing such a long and beautiful effort this was really a treat so thanku for that and the os was osm mind blowing fantastic spell bound…Nd I liked this one the most…..happy bday in advance ?Though I will be wishing u on 22 nd still it’s just so ….waiting for ur ff nd all the best for ur exams
Finally Os queen ne comment kiya so Glad u liked it as m a big fan of all ur os, even I liked this one from all my os the most ? And yes do wish me on 22nd will be waiting for my wishes ??? and thanks for the exam wishes hehe
OMG…. I am in love with your writing skills…. You should write novels…. You are seriously a superb writer…..you know what I am also medical student…. But to be honest I am also afraid of lizard… Pls after your exam write more….. Want to read more by u…. And you are one of the best writer in TU…. You should submit your os in TU os competition…. Definitely you will win…. You are best… ?
Hey richa thanks for commenting happy u liked my writing skills aww so sweet of u oh wow so many medical students here oh ya sdch is a medical related show ??that’s why ??? haha for me I m not scared but I just freak out when I find one near me sometimes after exams will write ff not os ? N no competitions are a big no for me i did participate once here so much restrictions uff ??? I wanna write in peace without deadlines ???
Jo di I read all ur shots n basically I like sanveer more but u r the writer toh sab kuch chalega
well to be frank ur first two os’s made me cry n especially the second one
i was imagining Dr. Kabir letting sanchi go just bcoz she loved veer !!!!! That gave me goosebumps and forced me to think about the power of love , inspired by u I also wrote an os on ragsan
If u have tym do surely read it ……….coming back to the story , it was wonderful no doubt
but ur second os was way tooooooooo awesome
I basically lyk those stories more which make me cry as I feel lyk I am able to connect with them in a better way .
ur first os was also awesome , It also made me cry but awwwwwwwwwwww my veer I couldn’t see him lyk that
U must be thinking Such an insane girl she is , likes to cry more than to laugh
but truly I feel some kind of special connection woth the writers who mae me cry
enough of my bak bak …..all the best for ur exams ….rock them
bye di n yes it was awesome n i read it as i love u a lottt
n u already knoww the reason right
Hey naymaz thanks for commenting yeah I like kaanchi a bit more than sanveer ? Sanveer is 19 and kaanchi is 20 for me wow cool hey I read ur Ragsan ff wanted to comment but the comment box disappeared so that’s why couldn’t do so it’s okay haha I understand some like sad stories more some like happy stories more totally depends and thanks for the wishes
Btw r u a Bengali? I am a Bengali too!
Hei Ami Bangali Amar Naam paulonika hocche Tumi amaye Polly bole dakte Paro
Tomar ki Naam????
Yaa dear u can’t comment on an os if it’s a month old
Idk but it’s according to TU’s guidelines
Tomaye dekha kore bhalo laglo ?
No words yaar among 3 os’s this one is da best. Second will be the first one- veer. I just luv ur ffs all da best 4 ur exam. Hope to see another ff as soon as u r finished with ur exam ?
Hey ruch thanks for commenting happy u liked it even I feel the same haha and thanks for the wishes will comeback with a ff as soon as my exams end ?
this one is good yaar and advance happy birthday
Hey hemass thanks for commenting happy u liked this os and thanks for the advance wishes ?
Jo bro u nailed it….. It was so beautiful actually each line…. Each emotion was perfectly expressed.
Its not only urs but mine fvt too….. Already I ur huge fan after ur 1st os and this 3rd has increased my fandom for u more……. I love it solo much that I can’t express……. U have an outstanding writing skills and ur way of expressing is something we can not only imagine but can live…. Waiting for some more writings of u…. Till then take care and keep smiling which u gave us with ur os.
Its not bro…… Dear just autocorrect
I was wondering that jo di is female naa
but then i thought u said bro for cheering jo di
like we say na yo bro rocked it , I thought lyk that
Lol to me n my thoughts
Bro? ???? I m sis ? Anyways thanks for commenting haha even I like this one the most followed by the first one I will write a ff once my exam ends haha and autocorrect is autocorrect no one can change it
Seriously yr Iye Jo keypad k upar word ate h ye pakka fasvayenge…. Abi to sis KO bro kra h khi Kuch aur ma hojaye…. Seriously lol
Naymaz ????
Haha ???
Super awesome all ur OS was best but this was the best among all .
Hey divya thanks for commenting happy u liked the os ya even this one is my fav among the ones I wrote
Nice and amazing story yaar.keep it up.god bless you and your family????
Joyce dear u r simply amazing ?? just loved the efforts u made in writing such a long & lovely update??its highly appreciated ?? & yaar, for me this one was the best, then veer’s story followed by sanchi….just luv ur writing skills ???
& all the best for ur exams & & & a very happy birthday to you in advance ???
Hey riya thanks for commenting happy u liked the update even the same for me thanks for the wishes dear ???
Hey anu thanks for commenting happy u liked the story and thanks for the wishes for me and my family really means a lot to me ?
I just lived this one…it’s so beautiful…keep writing
Hey nudia thanks for commenting happy u liked this one will write a ff after my exams ?
Hey jo osm yarr i really have no words in your appriciation.the lines of song u wrote were amazingly perfect.really hands off to u. Your all the 3 os were mind blowing but i cant really decide which one i liked the most because prasing 1 os would decrease the value of other and they r ur three valuable gems of your thoughts treasury. I m too equally fan of kanchi and sanveer that is also a reason . But a bit more of kanchi so u can consider this os was a bit more than the other one . Hey i just thought and found link btwn your 1st & 3rd os try matching both of them you will too find the link veers one sided love for sachi unaware kanchi about his feeling helping both to spend more time by some ideas the symbol of their love kanchi in both os etc r some links the difference is only that in first os was veers point of view and the third os was with kabirs point of view . Happy birthday in advance. Lots of love and blessings from your sis. And you r bro or sis? All the best for your exams & u have to reply. Please reply. You can reply after ur exam but dont forget to reply.
Hey vrushti thanks for commenting happy u liked all the os ya same pinch for me kaanchi a bit more wow u saw the link ?? I thought no one would find it out but someone found it ?And I m sis thanks for the wishes and ya here u go reply ????
Sorry couldn’t reply earlier as was Super busy with exams and stuffs
Fantastic u nailed it finally kanchi?
Hey Neera thanks for commenting happy u liked it yeah kaanchi ??
Another stupendous OS from an excellent writer. Everytime I read ur OS its like I get inside the story.. And Kabir’s caring side is soo adorable. One thing was right that kabir can be nice but can’t be totally sweet ?. It was amazing tow watch a mix of khadoos and sweet side. U know how to make a perfect blend of emotions so realistically. And sorry but I can’t choose my favourite. Each one of them has its one speciality. If I choose one it won’t be justice to the others which is equally fantastic. Don’t know hiw u come up with such amazing ideas but I am absolutely ur biggest fan.. I will remember to wish and hope u have a happy journey.. Can’t wait to have u back again..
Hey Annie thanks for commenting happy u liked the os and dr kabir maybe Khadoos but at the same time he is caring too yeah imagine kabir too sweet I can never ??? for me this one is my fav and will write after exams and love u and ur stories too ???
This one is the best but other also gud u r too gud
Hey niyaa thanks for commenting happy u liked this os this one is my fav among the ones I write too ?
Oooye joyee fantastico i didnt read 2nd one now i m gonna read it..oh my bday girl i will be waiting for party on 22 and yess one thing it was loving doving..the way u conveyed the feelings of kabir by ur words made me go awww and yesss emotional one u r the dearest writer in this tu to me
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I must say the name of ur os r always superbbbb.i m really eagerly waiting to read ur wnd os and now gonna read it..
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Awesome..
Keep it up
My heart is screaming..loved it
Love u
Hey PrettyPreeti thanks for commenting happy u liked it Jaldi par Lena ???and yes I want my wishes on 22 ??? I really wanted to post something that day but my exams uff so much revision that’s why I cannot ??? love u too ??? and ya the name I got inspired from the song in ghajini Kaise Mujhe Tum Mil Gayi one of my fav
seriously this os was definitely awesome one.
My fav os is this os only and second only be veer one side love story.
No words to say it was cool , nice and made me emotional
you are great os writer. i am proud to say i am one of your fan
“ADVANCE HAPPY RETURNS OF A DAY”
HAVE A GREAT BRIGHT FUTURE
Hey sundari thanks for commenting happy u liked this os even this one is my fav and veer’s one is my second fav and so sweet yaar ??? and thanks for the advance wishes ???
Lovely story yaar ???
Hey swetatitli thanks for commenting happy u liked the story ???
Hey Joyee this one is also my fav thankx for sharing with us an amazing beautiful love story on our kanchi. And Happy birth day in advance God bless you keep writing and shareing with us.waiting for your next FF.
Hey anee thanks for commenting happy u liked the story I will write my ff after exams and thanks for the wishes ???
hey jo many many happy returns of the day again wish u a very happy birth day may ur all wishes come true and your majesty ur wish of wishing is fulfilled.may ur career touches sky and also u get excellent marks in exam. I hope I am the first to wish u on ff pn this day and also my name is vrushti due to registration it is changed.
Hey I saw this yesterday but I forgot to reply, and yes thank you sooo much and sooo sorry ? Actually so busy due to exams, would reply to all the comments after exams