Hlo guys ….trisha here with one more OS of kanchi ….
Alia asked for this ….so this is specially for you alia …..sorry for posting it late but what could have I done there were ffs ss and festivals …and I am a bit lazy too ??? ….so here we go with….-
Saachi had passed few months in SDCH both saachi and kabeer fought like hell but at last he always gave her punishments either they become rivals again or fell for each other ….that was a love hate relationship….and for that time he was falling for her ….and saachi she fell for him the first day but never accepted ….
It was morning –
@dr kabeers cabin …
Saachi- sir may I go today around 7 pm …?
Kabeer – is that your wedding ?
Saachi- huh ?…it’s just that sir I have to go home ….my mom called me to look for my marriage …
Kabeer -(in mind – how dare she even think of her marriage )- don’t u think u must focus on ur internship frst
Saachi- yes sir but she just wants me to get engaged in nearly 1 or two year …!
(In mind – shit ! What the hell I am saying if he gets to know I hv to go at Isha’s competition ; he is going to kill me )
Kabeer- no u can’t …!
(In mind – whtever that is I am not letting her go …how can she even get engaged )
Saachi – siir its important…!
Just then Pragya enters …
Pragya – sir can I go today arnd 7 pm as my dad called me …
Saachi- what u were supposed to be going on a bday
Pragya – stupid that was what u needed to say …
Kabeer – so as we all know u both r definitely hiding something …. you both can leave !
Saachi- oh god !!
It was evening both needed to take Leave by some means ….saachi acted having hurt her foot …dr kabeer granted her early leave ….but he wanted to know somewhere… where she was going so he followed her…and at last found trio at a function and announcement for next level candidates for fashion designing was to be made ….
Kabeer -( in mind – what the wuck…I followed her just to be here ….so that was Isha’s truth …but the main thing why I did so…didn’t I trusted her …no I do …then why …god knows )
The day passed all were back at their places …..it was next day ….
Veer isha Pragya saachi were in canteen ….
Veer – miss golgappa would u mind a date wd me ?
Saachi- try washing ur face !!
Veer – hitler ! Fine it’s a dare for you !
Isha – miss golgappa always get dares that too wdout occassions ?
Pragya- abeo maharani she is shoni kudi…!
Saachi- are you guys done with your so called buttering ….and veer I am not going anywhere ,..
Veer – fine I will tell dr kabeer that where were u last night…
Saachi- how u know that…
She gave a deadly glare to Isha and Pragya …they tried to hide their faces and she understood they told that prankster…!
Ishpragya- pls saachi for us pls pls
Veer – yes so as we all know no one can dare to ask anything personal to that hitler…so u hv to ask him the name of his gf or go on a date with me ….
Saachi -what !! Are u guys mad …I won’t like a record rooms duty…ok
Veer. -fine then I…
Saachi- ohk ohk …I will see u all blkmailers….!
Kabeer listened to the whole discussion…( in mind- why I am thinking so much abi this …this is her life she should decide but no she can’t …I love her ….huh stupid kabeer no …she will kick U out…don’t forget if u r mr hitler than she is also ms khdus …but what if she too loves me …)
@kabeers cabin-
Saachi- sir …that…..
Kabeer – I don’t hv extra time !
Saachi – khduus …..! Sir which flowers ur gf likes ?
Kabeer – (she didn’t hv guts s to say straight )- white orchids
Saachi. – ( these r my fav)- are u sure sir ?( why I am feeling uncomfortable knowing abt his gf )
Kabeer – yes
She left his cabin …
Saachi- so dare completed…
Veer-no u didn’t asked straight abt his gf…be ready to go on a date wd me…
Kabeer( from behind)- no I don’t had a gf…
Saying this he left from there…
Veer- why is he behaving like he is ur bf and so possessive ?
Sometime skipped….
This continued for days he was not letting her go wd anyone of the guys…or he would saw her talking wd veer he would get irritated….say possessiveness or obsession…or love….either he would deny saying work load or stay in the middle…she herself decided to talk to him!
It was evening in his cabin….
Saachi- dr kabeer what was that. Going on nowadays …why r u always interfering in my life …neither u love me so why u always behave so weird…I hv my own life …what is ur problem!
Kabeer- I love you
She stood shocked for a minute or two…
Saachi- what ?
Kabeer – yes but for now u r just my student !
Saachi- either be soft hearted or atleast tell me the whole truth…u r so confusing …you told me that u love me it looks like u hv told me u hate me…
She left from there…
It was dark night…she received a call from an unknown no..and she came to know kabeer was somewhere drunk…his moms no is not being picked ….he was constantly saying her name…thts how he got to dial her no….(kabeer had opened her contact screen)
She immediately ran there…drove his car and took him to his home(she knew the address)… to her surprise his mom was not there may be she was gone somewhere …she took him to his room…he was totally drunk and said
Kabeer- saachi why u don’t understand I love you I don’t want to lose you…I lost my dad friends everything…I found a life partner in you don’t leave me pls…i…
Even in the unconscious state his words were…”don’t leave me saachi pls ”
She was puzzled at his This attitude…and discussed wd his mom about all this…and at last came to know that…..he lost his father at a very young age so he was this rude he was afraid of losing people so he was behaving this possessive…he was mentally sick… she decided to confess her love to him and make him that carefree person again
it was next morning…
He woke up with sunrays disturbing his sleep…just to find her sitting near him holding his hands…
Kabeer -” dr saachi u here?”
Saachi- first of all its saachi and secondly I needed to tell u something so couldn’t wait !
Kabeer- desperate to confess ?
Saachi – may be doctor…
Anyways take ur medicines frst…
She turned to take them frm the table but before that she found her hand being forced backwards…and she landed in his arms…
Kabeer-I need something else now !
Saachi- I love you !
Kabeer- are you sure…U hv to manage my anger rudeness unromantic nature and …
Saachi – and love ! Mr khduus I have decided I am not going to leave u so soon…atleast till I die I would be with you…
Kabeer ;putting finger on her lips)- sssh
Both shared an eye lock..
And that was broken by…
Kusum-
“Mohobatt ka naam aj bhi mohobatt hai….
Yeh Na kbhi bdli hai…
Nah kbhi badlegi…”
Both were aparted….
After 6 years…
Saachi was lost in deep thoughts near window…
A voice disturbed her ” saachi some fast…Shivangi is calling both of us outside now pls don’t act like typical khdus …have some fun”
She nodded with. A victory smile on her face…she helped and succeeded in making him come out from grief of his father’s death…
So this was it guys sorry for grammatical mistakes if any…Nd this time no rotten tomatoes just give ur reviews…
36 Comments
Trisha u always write amazing but I don’t know why u always think people will throw something on u and the os amazing but I didn’t got who is Shivani and who was calling kabeer
Thanku sanu…it wasn’t just for amusement dear don’t take it so seriously …and Shivangi was their daughter …and yes kabeer was calling saanchi
Mind blowing amazing fantastic . I was sooooo happy when I found that u have updated this. Ur are fantastic person . Even ur busy u still updated I msooooo happy .
It’s amazing .
And full credit goes only to u I has only given the idea its u,who worked soon had to write it.
It’s fantastic dear. I’m speechless . Ur great writer .
In starting I was angry that u forgot about my idea soo soon but now I’m not. I should have understood that u also have to do ur studies .
Sooooo ooh sooooorrrrrryyyyy. Plzzz forgive me.
U won’t trust me if I say that I always wait for ur update . I always wait u to upload . I feel disappointed when I don’t find ur ff.
Dear ure my favorite writer . I love to read ur ff.
U very beautifully portrayed the thestory
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It’s so amazing Trisha u just nailed it.
Love it.
Thanku dear
So sweet
Thanks a lot anu
Awesome Trisha lovely really u r amazing
Thankyou divya
Nice os trisha?….. You and annie are the best writer…..Love ur writing skills…. A big hug for you… ?
Thanku richa for this …a return hug for u too ??
Awesome os trisha??
U r a great writer dr.I don’t know how to express my gratitude towards u. Well done dr?..keep writing. God bless you..
Thanku for such a sweet and cute comment mayoori
Its very nice. Mind blowing . I love it
Thankyou
Amazing…. Fantastic and heart winning…. U are undoubtedly os queen!
THanku abhilasha
Trisha u r a very amazing writer:-)
Thankq
I am a big fan of your writing skills. Your os just attract me as ants are attracted to the sugar box . loved your is.
Ohh thnku vrushi so such a sweet cmmnt love u sweetie
Superb dear I was awesome .
Glad u liked it neera
Amazing superb mindblowing historc and sorry for late
Thanku so much ashnit
Trisha dear u r simply amazing??the way u play with words, it’s just magical ?? u r a fab writer…lots & lots of hugs and kisses from my side ???
Thanku so much riya for such a cutie cmmnt…return hugs and kisses
Lovely episode yaar ???
Thankq
trishna dear it so super and nice concept utilization of aliya
no words to say becoz its tooooo good and awesome
as usual you nailed it “QUEEN OF OS”
trishna i want different os about kanchi other than doctor profession but not so quick
when you free time means write this os
its amazing yaar..
Thankyou sundari and sure but for now I hv submitted an OS …a short and simple do read that
Your words meant a lot dear and yes I will look upon ur idea
Trisha Fab yaar
Thanku so much anee u ok r a very good writer
Great story