Hey guys that’s trisha with another Kanchi OS…and I am discontinuing unspoken feelings now there will just be cravings and Kanchi forever ….this os is a little emotional and may be ending can make up throw rotten tomatoes on me ….I am in for that too ??…
Aunthors request ; I already apologise for whatever will happen in this OS…!
Let’s start ….
KABEERs POV ;
“How much time left ?” I asked …
They replied “just 15 minutes sir “…
“Ohk no problem “…. I agreed ….
I was looking around me …at a distance I saw a couple sitting hands in hands with love in their eyes ….that was new ? Really new ? No …but yes may be after so long …this just remind me of her ….my love…my life …my wife ….mrs saachi kapoor…she taught me how to act kindly how to behave a little sweetly with my students …she taught me to get out of my rudeness and look at my normal side …!!
Actually that was not too straight …she was confusing too much confusing at start ….yet she managed to make a special …a very special place in my heart…
I still remember the very first day she bumped into me and already started accusing me instead of accepting her fault …we started with hatred …yes hatred for each other after all she was the first one to speak in front of me … to speak in favour of interns…
We fought every day every time …I never had a word “love” in my heart…but yes with her entry in my life I learned that “hatred” well …yet that was not some sort of evil…we just fought that’s it …that too with love in it…
I knew that later but she always loved me …from the very first day it was just that she preferred her career more…that’s why she never admitted this …
The first time when I felt I had something more than frnds wd her was …when veer tried to flirt with her…I always got irritated …even couldn’t let her go wd that prankster …unknowingly I was always afraid of losing her…
And that time I still remembered how the squad made us confess our love for each other …!
FLASHBACK :
Unknown by saachi veer send his friend to dr kabeer cabin …his name was karan…
Karan- Gm dr kabeer
Kabeer- Gm
Karan- I wanted to meet dr saachi I guess she is ur assistant !
Kabeer- yes but why I hope u know these r working hrs
Karan- oh sorry I forgot to tell u I am her fiance…her mother sent me here to meet her …!
Anger boiled inside dr kabeer ….
Kabeer- oh she’s busy in some conference u can come later !!
Karan – but I thought she told me tht she is free in these hours …
Kabeer( almost yelled)- I told u Na she is busy now leave !!
Saachi entering …..
(She got to know the whole plan from veer )
Karan- oh here u r saachi….u know na I was missing u jaan !!
Sayjng this he tuned to hug her …and kabeer turned more furious..!
Saachi stepped backwards preventing hug !
Kabeer- jaan ?
Karan – yes jaan sweetheart darling !!
His anger reached the peaks he just wanted to have punches on him !
Saachi (whispered to Karan)- don’t overreact or be ready to die !
Kabeer couldn’t control his anger anymore….he just slapped him hard for his words …..
Kabeer-“oh sorry that was some mosquito on ur cheeks ”
And yes don’t u dare call her again …she is my girlfriend …now leave !
Karan – what !
Saachi- (her mouth turned o)
Kabeer- jaan pls close ur mouth !!
Saachi- aann ?
Karan left as he had guessed the heat of the moment otherwise he would have been dead !
Saachi- what was that dr khduus ?
Kabeer-I don’t know
Saachi – what ! Then who knows …I am not ur gf then what was all that !
Kabeer- my wish ! I don’t think I need to tell u!
Saachi- fine I am calling him back u will apologise…
She turned to go …he holds her hand and forced her close to him with a jerk…
Kabeer(slowly) ….he pinned her to the wall…-” I don’t seem the need to apologise”…
“I don’t think I should apologise for confessing whom I love ”
Saying this she placed her lips on his giving a peck….he was shocked my her sudden gesture….she turned all red…this time they leaned into each other and both had a lip lock…
After few hrs….
Veer- congrats dr Kabeer
Kabeer- for what ?
Veer- for getting a gf btw I didn’t knew u r this jealous !
Kabeer- record room is calling u for next one week !
Veer- omg no pls noooo sir !!
Kabeer- leave !!
Saachi entering and veer leaving…
Veer- I am sure u both r going to have a super khduus baby….
Both coughed hard on this !
FLASHBACK END…
Kabeers POV…
A phone call took my focus…
“Yes I am coming wd in 20 minutes”…
This was just the start of our love story…she completed her internship….it was the time near to our mrrg…I didn’t knew what happened to her she started behaving rudely ignoring me…unknowingly she wanted me to hate her…but as there’s a saying
“once u start loving someone it’s impossible to stop”…
And at last she gave in….she always said “if something ever happened to her I shouldn’t cry instead I would remember her and smile…”….Nd I always pouted on her this dialogue….!
That was almost 1 and a half years after our marriage…I got to know she had oral cancer…thts why she was behaving this rude for sometime back…and that too in her last stage…i always regret if I had known this earlier I could have saved her….it was not that she told me…instead she was taking care of kanchi and suddenly felt unconscious…we operated did everything but couldn’t save her…at frst time I was feeling bad even after being a dr but for her wish ….I continued as a doctor…even now whenever I think of moments spent wd her a wide smile takes place on my lips and tears in my eyes…
Tears started to appear in my eyes…
Nd a voice shook me…”sir it’s over”….
“Ohk can I go in “…I asked.
“Yes “…the peon replied…
I turned just to find a little angel running towards me…my sweetheart…our daughter “kanchi”…I picked her in my arms and turned towards the car…
Kanchi- papa why so serious hv some fun mr akdu…chlo give me my chocolate fast…!
“Ohk my majesty there is ur chocolate…”…I said …..she was exactly her shadow…with my attitude….always reminded me of saachi….and now I had a wide smile thinking abt her as she always wanted me to remember her without tears…
We reached home…she ran and hugged her garndma….
I just admired their bond…
A voice took my attention “kya hua mr hitler kha tha na she will never make u feel my absence “…
I turned to find saachi in beautiful white saree…looking wd lovely eyes towards me…!
I replied…”yes but I still miss you”…
Mom interuppted…”kabeer ;beta who r u talking to ?”…
I replied “mom vo s…. nothing maa “….
I turned again to find no one there and smiled like an idiot…who always fell in love thinking abt her…!
so I had completed this one…pls pls drop a cmmnt if u guys like this…and if u don’t like them flying chappals…rotten tomatoes….are welcomed…??
76 Comments
Arrre Yarr Trisha I was correcting my mistake. It got typed heart in place of hurt. U will never hurt me.
Oh ok
Really Trisha it was lovely?? a little sad yes but ur talent to change any situation is just amazing ?
Thanku ruwani thts so sweet of u
Trish.. I surely need to crown ur the Empress of OS now. Each time u have such a different concept and u never fail to impress us readers. Woow, amazing fabulous and all good praises there could be. It was really emotional and fantastic. Loved it.? and I miss the new ff but I know its hard to manage so many so i will not get angry..❤❤
Thanku annie for such a beautiful cmmnt….your words meant a lot dear u r an osm writer so it’s my pleasure being appreciated by a writer like u
It was a very emotional story dear.After reading the story my eyes filled up with tears.????.lovely story yaar ???
Thanku sweta
The last part was ????
Yup ?
This was just soooooo touching, it will definately not make me throw tomatoes at you but hug you if i ever meet you for writng such an awwsum story
Thanku so much dear …and yeah sure
why u accept flying chappls and rotten tomatoes. Trishu you were also shared with us lots of amazing Os and ff. I includes this one inthose. your writing is always amazing yaar.
Thanku anee
Sorry Its expect nor accept
Oh no worries anee that was just a pov btw u too are a fab writer