Hlo guys this is trisha here…I have added both 5 th and 6 th part here of wedding chaos –
So let’s start ….
Saachi was sleeping peacefully …
A loud voice disturbed her ; “aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa”
She shouted gasping from her deep sleep “eeeeeee….shuuutttt uuuppppp”
She woke up with a jerk just to see Isha Pragya around her …
Both laughed looking at her …she was not able to understand what was going around her …!!
Saachi- what was this guys ?
Isha – actually Saachi I had listened if bride don’t wake up on time during her wedding than. Her blackheads look more dark than…her hairs ….
Saachi- what ? R u serious !! Omg …
She ran towards mirror leaving her blanket rough…
Saachi- Isha u could have told me before look here I ma looking like a messy tomato…
Pragya – hahahaha abeo don’t overreact its just aunty asked us to wake u up after all only we know how to wake a Kumbhkaran …
Saachi- huh ! ?
Isha – by the way saachi , I don’t understand how would jiju would make u get up ?
Pragya – haha what a joke Isha …instead he won’t let her sleep I guess (both laughed )
Saachi- shut up guys …and lemme get ready …
Isha – really btw there is someone completely red !! ?
Saachi- are you guys going ; or I should shout ?
Pragya – baby doll calm down we r leaving !!
Just then she recieves a message on her ph…
Chat started …
Kabeer- someone looks adorable while sleeping ?
Saachi- I am ? sure…Isha and Pragya are going to die on my hands !!!
Kabeer – uuumuuuaahhh
Saachi- chiiiii ! Shaadi hui nhi lakshan pehle agye (u r not mrrd but signs r already there)
Kabeer – atleast stop blushing on chat !
Saachi- how do u know I am blushing ….(she was actually blushing heavily )
Kabeer – I am there beside u !
Saachi- what ! Where r u tell me fast r u mad how can u be here !!
Kabeer- bad Joke ! I can’t sacrifice my sleep for a messy tomato or a sleeping angel ..!
Saachi- is this compliment or …?..!!
Kabeer – ur mom must be calling u go get ready !?
Saachi- whtever ?!
So few hrs skipped like this ….it was mehandi time ….hall was beautifully decorated but there was someone else who was looking more adorable than all the preparations…that was none other than our bride saachi…
Mehandi was going on with full songs music ?….everything was just perfect …..her mehandi was started …..and some more hrs skipped by that time….and then…..kabeer had come to her house for some rituals that were left and …
Both were starting at each other that saachi fell unconscious ….kabeer shouted “saachi” and ran to her ….he holded her in time but she was unconscious …she was made sit in bed ….she was examined after all it was found that her mehandi did her allergy but bcz of some oil the effect was less ….that caused her to fall unconscious …kabeer made her take some meds but she needed to take off her mehandi by that time ………now she was conscious …
Saachi- no i am
Not going to do this kabeer!
Jaya- beta I know u can’t take out this that too a day before ur wedding…
Pragya- they r right saachi….
She had to took off …her mehandi….
Pragya- abeo look colour kept on and that too so dark u r lucky saachi….
Kabeer – now happy ?
Isha – yes but who gave u that mehandi?
Pragya – I got that from chaccha..
Chacha- ria gave me this and said this is abhimantrit…so I out that here…
Kabeer – r u serious ? U can put anything depending on anyone no ! And that Ria I will see her !!
So finally the day all were waiting for …arrived !
Kabeers POV ;
I was so nervous that time …I could see all preparations beautiful decorations everywhere ….that time I was not dr kabeer I was bride groom sitting in the mandap and waiting for my “to be wife” and she was teasing me ….not directly just indirectly I mean couldn’t she come early….but soon my wait was over …a bride arrived with her face covered…sat beside me and as usual as a romantic person I holded her hands away from eyes of guests….but I found something fishy…I could feel her …that feeling that touch was not of saachi…still whoever was she I didn’t wanted to make her a topic of laugher…so I took her to room making an excuse only to find that was riya…that day she got a tight slap from me and soon my saachi was back she was there arnd me just unconscious ….atlast we married happily ……
It was our first night after mrrg…
Authors pov-
She was in a slim red saree in front of the window ….he softly holded her from the waist drew her closer and kissed on her neck …he could feel her breaths…her heart beats fastened…
background played….
Tere sang yaar a …..
kuch rang bhaara…
He turned her towards him…the deep silence prevailed…his lips felt hers …both shared a passionate kiss…and at last broke when felt shortage of air…
He lifted her in his arms…made her lay on the bed…and one after other removed her earings necklace mangtika and atlast filled the space of her necklace with his kiss…that night the moon witnessed the union of the most beautiful couple …!
After four years….in dr malhotras cabin….
Shubhangi – daadu u must punish ur son !
Vansh-yes and don’t forgot to punish ur younger son !
Anand- haha now tell me what they both did !
Shubhangi- dadu he never spends time with me ?huh
Vansh- and he never leaves me always my behind…
Anand-ohooo actually bchon this is really. A big prblm for me too…kabeer never had time and veer he never stops pranks…
Saachi and Isha entered …-
Saachi-absolutely right papa we both hv the same prblm…
Anand calls Kabir and veer …
Anand – kabeer I am not ur father that doesn’t mean I can’t punish u as a father got it and u veer learn something u r a father now …
Veer – dad these two are also not less than some teasers…!!
I know both must have got u into their cuteness but believe me dad …this Vansh blkmails me either got him chocolates else he will go to dr kabeer …
Kabeer – haha thts really not fair Vansh …and shubhangi from next time I will pay attention I promise !!
So this was the end guys …pls pls drop a cmmnt if u like this guys specially silent readers. !! Love u all
Regards yogita
47 Comments
Amazing
Thankq
Yaar its too too awesome and the end was amazing I really enjoyed it thank u for that can u elaborate in ff ….
Thanks a lot prema and yes sure
Wowww. This was seriously the best ss ever loved it ??? kanchi scenes are the best and trisha seriously you are an amazing writer ??
Thankyou maira I am glad u liked it
Wonderful amazing ending to the story an awesome update loved the kids dialogue and awesome update
Thankq ??
Very nice story.thank you for a such a beautiful story
Thanks a lot anushree..I am glad u liked it
Nice episode as always I’m impressed by ur talent ?
Thankq
amazing mindblowing dil garden garden kar diya trisha u r amaz end is superab
Thankyou niyaa
Superb dear loved it. u r a fabulous writer? . This ss is bestest .loved each and every line .
Thankq neera for such beautiful words
Awesome
Thankq ashnita
Thanks trisha for the update and as always it was lovely
Thanku dear
Superror ? fabulous u r awesome writer Trisha and update ff soon .
Thanks a lot divy and sure
Awesome episode. What a story yaar. Loved it a lot ???
Thankyou sweta glad u liked it
Sorry for commenting late Trisha but this is just awesome.
It’s absolutely fine dear and thankyou so much
Sooo cute:-)
Thankq
Amazing Trisha.
Thankq anee
Omg Trisha dear..u just nailed it….luved it to the core of my heart….& the ending, just spellbinding…. daadu taking class of his sons….so hilarious ???? & btw trisha i hv a doubt, where is pragya?? U didn’t mention anything abt her?
Thanks a lot riya….ur words meant a lot …sweetie …and Pragya is also there I didn’t described few incidents as talking btw the chrcters so there must be something left …
like usual u the shot was fab request pls post the epi fast eagerly waiting
Thankyou and sure Shreya
Amazing story trisha loved the bonding of the kids
Thanks a lot amnaa
trishna no words to say
you keep on rocking it
i am speechless
you “QUEEN Of Os”
its so awesome..i want so many from u
a big teddy hug
Thanku so much sundari….ur words mean so much to me
Trishu first of all love uh too much for this mind blowing ss……. U made me fall in love with this…….. It is ???????? love this from bottom of my heart…… And that last part… Wowww!!!
Awwww thankyou so much for such a beautiful cmmnt abhilasha …I loved ur writings too sweetie
Just fabulous.????I loved it.???
Keep writing dear.
Thanku sanyukta and see dear
Sure*
Awesome u are the best writer
Thanks a lot alia
That was so cute… And veer’s genes were passed down the baby… And Anand as a grandfather role.. And love how Kabir recognized Riya only by touch.. That was super sweet.. And totally loved this SS and love ur ff.. Huge congrats on successfully completing an SS..?
Thankyou so much annie…we missed you a lot ?