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August 5th
In Trivandram
Shivay and Om are wake up early morning and goes to find out Anika ‘s home. Mallika
was help them for find out the route to
Anika ‘s home. After one and half hours of
searching shivkara are find out Anika ‘s
home. After that they are goes back to
their hotel room . After breakfast Shivkara
are goes to Airport for bring elder oberios
ie, Dadi, Shinky, Tejvi .
In Alapuzha
In yesterday after visiting the whole Alapuzha Aniri, Soumya, Priyanga and
Rudra are stays in Hotel Green Land in
Alapuzha. Early morning they all are goes to Trissur for visiting Guruvayoor Sreekrishna
temple. Later they are go back to Kochi for
Bring Kaniz ,Rajveer and Bhavya. They all
are comes to kochi at morning ‘S flight .They
will reach at 11am.Kaniz comes from
Mumbai and Rajvya are comes from Delhi.
In Mumbai Airport
Kaniz was comes to Airport for going to
Kerala. She is very disappointed. She was trying to calls Neha,Sumitha and Ahsana
since last three days. But anyone didn’t
respond to her calls and didn’t give replies
to her messages.
Kaniz pov
Why Neha, Sumitha and Ahsana are did not
respond to my calls and messages. I know they are busy with studies and works. But
they will saw my misscalls and messages after coming to Home.
Then why they are didn’t call me back and didn’t reply my messages.
. I’m going to Kerala for meeting Anika,
Neha, Sumitha and Ahsana and spent
some times together .If I can’t able to meet Neha, Sumi, Ahsu then I can’t able to enjoy in these two days in Kerala. I hope I can
able to contact them after goes to Kerala.
Now it’s 8 am. My flight time is 8.30 am. I have to wait half hour too for my flight.
kaniz was sitting in the waiting area .That
time .She saw Rahul (he is Neha ‘s husband, imagine character )(Kaniz is Neha ‘s friend. Kaniz have a friendship with
Rahul)
K”Hello Rahul… How are you? ”
R”Hi Kaniz. I’m fine. You are going to Kerala
right ”
K”yes. How you know about it ”
R”I know about it from your friend ”
K”You are knows about my journey to
Kerala from Neha!!! ”
R”Yes. She says to me that You (kaniz) are coming to kochi on August 5th.So she
takes 5 days leave and goes to kochi on August 4th for meeting you and Ahsana , sumitha are join with her ”
K”That means Neha,Sumi and Ahsu are knows about my arrival to Kerala. And they
are deliberately not responding to my calls
and messages.
How can they know about my arrival to Kerala? May be Anika informs them. I will
find out about it ”
R”They are did not respond to your calls and messages ?”
K”I was trying to calls them from last three
days. But they are did not call me back. May be they all are trying this for surprising
me ”
R”That means I was broke their surprise
!!OMG If Neha knows about it then she will
kill me ”
K”Don’t fear about it Rahul. I will manage
.They are try to surprise me he na. I too
wants to surprise them. Do you help me for that? ”
R”If you help me from Neha ‘s punishment,
then I will help you ”
K”Sure ,I will manage ”
(Kaniz was talks to Rahul about something but Conversation is muted )
…………………………………………
In Trivandram
Elder oberios are reached to Trivandram at 10 am. Shivkara are takes them and goes
to Their hotel room. After take rest they all are goes to Anika ‘s home for seeing Anika
and fixing Shivika ‘s marriage. Now expect Gouri, Rudra and Priyanga all
oberios are knows that Shivay ‘s lady love ‘s
name is Anika.
Same time in Kochi
Kaniz was arrived to Airport at 11 am. Kaniz goes to Aniri and Rudra and Priyanga ‘s side.
Kaniz “How are you Anika? Are you happy
now for meeting your bestie after a long years ”
A”Iam fine dear. Yes dear. I’m very happy for
meeting my bestie Revu after a long years.
It’s was You played an important role in our reunion. Thank you so much dear. If you are not help Revu then I didn’t meet her . Love
you so much bestie for coming to my life. ”
K”No need of thanks dear. We are friends he na. I’m very happy for you. I know how
much you are miss Gouri. It was God who
send me to you.My duties is to help you for
meeting your bestie. And my duty was completed. But I wants a return help from you”
A”what is it dear? If I can able to do then I
will surely help you”
K”It was me who help you for meeting your bestie. So you will be help me for meeting
my besties Neha,Sumi&Ahsu . I was trying
to calls them from last three days. But they didn’t respond to my calls. I came here for meeting you and them. Do you help me for
finding them. Neha is from Mumbai but
working in Trivandram. Ahsana and she is living in there. Sumitha is from Kottayam but studying in Bangalore. I wants to meet
them. If I can able to meet Neha or Ahsana
then I can able to meet others. You also living in Trivandrum he na. Do you help me for finding them? ”
A”why not. Sure dear. I will help you for
finding your besties. I will promise you .Tomorrow I was go back to Trivandrum. You also join with me. After goes there I will help you for finding your besties ”
K”Pinky promise ”
A”Pinky promise ”
(please note :Kaniz wants to know how Neha, Sumitha and Ahsana are knows about her arrival to Kerala. So kaniz was
deliberately asks Anika ‘s help for finding her besties. We are says if we anyone try to say lie their eyes says truth. So while
talking to Anika, kaniz notices Anika ‘S Eye
movement and find out that Neha, Sumitha and Ahsana are knows about her arrival to Kerala from Anika)
G”Kaniz….u, Om and Bade bhayya are not
with us on Friendship Day. So we are decided to celebrate Friendship Day after you all are join with us . And Om and Bade
bhayya are join with us at Evening. So we all
are celebrating this friendship day at night . We can enjoy this day together, OK ”
K”Ok ”
A”And Kanfi this is my sister Soumya ”
K”Hi chutki. Anika call you like that right . If you have no problem then, I too call you
like that .I don’t have any sister. While Anika talks to me about your and Anika ‘s sisterly bond. I’m sad for not have a sister ”
A”Hey Kanfi Don’t become emotional dear. You are not only my friend. You are more than like my sister. So Soumya is your
sister also. You can call her as Chutki. She will like it he na chutki? ”
S”Ya Di. Kanfi Di I know you. Anika Di is always talks about you to me. It’s my pleasure Di for become your sister. You can call me as Chutki. I love it Di. And Kanfi Di
don’t feels you don’t have any sister.Iam always your younger sister. And I don’t like to see tears in my sisters eyes. So don’t cry Di. Smile ☺ please… ”
Kaniz was smiles after listening Soumya ‘s
reply
S”Thats my Di ”
K”You are lucky Anika for getting a sister like Soumya. She is very nice girl ”
S”kanfi Di I am your sister also. May be we
are not real sisters by birth. But we are connected through heart ♥ Di ”
K”Iam very lucky for getting a sister like Soumya, Love you ????? so much dear ”
S”Love you ????? too Di ”
K”And Rudy and Pringu why you both are didn’t says anything. How was Kerala? Do
you both like Kerala? ”
P”we are hear a lot about the beauty of Kerala. But we are get chance to enjoying the beauty of the God’s Own country now
.Its was awesome Di. I really love it’s
beauty. And we are came here for not only meeting Anika Di. ”
K”what is another reason for coming to
Kerala ?”
R”Kaniz Di we are came here for finding my bhabi also”
K”Bhabi!!your bhabi is Gouri he na? I can
understand anything, what you mean by? ”
R”Di. I’m not mean to Gouri bhabi. I have one more bhayya too .We are came here for meeting Shivay bhayya ‘s would be ”
(Please note :I before mentions that Gouri
didn’t says Shivay name in front of Anika. Gouri calls Shivay as bade bhayya. When Rudra says to Kaniz about Shivay .Anika
notice that Gouri ‘s bade bhayya ‘s name is
Shivay) (I early says that Kaniz have a friendship with Shivay, Om, Rudra, Priyanga also. So Kaniz also knows about Shivay ‘s
decision of leading a bachelor life .Like Gouri, Kaniz calls Shivay as bade bhayya )
K”What bade bhayya ‘s would be!! That means bade bhayya agree for his marriage.
That’s was good news”
G”And Kaniz it’s was not a arranged marriage. It’s was Love marriage ”
K”Love marriage!!! Means bade bhayya was falling in love with a girl. I can’t believe
this, is it true? ”
R”Ya Kaniz Di. Finally our bhayya get his ishqbaazi. It’s was long story. I will tell
about it to you ”
Rudra narrates to Kaniz about shivay bhayya saw a girl at Mumbai. He was falling in love with
her at first sight. Shivay bhayya was follow her and find out that she is an malayalee from airport details. And he decided to find out her. We are decided to came to Kerala
for meeting Anika Di and finding my would be bhabi . The next day we are coming to kochi for meeting Anika Di. Shivay bhayya
and O are goes to Trivandrum for finding
my would be bhabi. ”
G”Om calls me and says that they are find about Bhabi. They will join with us at
evening after fixing bade bhayya ‘s marriage”
K”Iam happy for bade bhayya. Finally he was agree for his marriage. And that too
love marriage. I too wants to saw that girl
who changed our bhayya ”
G&R&P”we too very excited for meeting her ,She will comes to our family very soon ”
While they are talking about Shivay ‘s love ,Rajveer and Bhavya are comes to Kochi from Delhi and Rajvya are goes to them
B”Hello Guys …. I feel that a serious discussion was happening here ”
Rud”Hi Bhavya… We are talking to Kaniz Di
about Shivay bhayya ‘s love. We all are very
excited for seeing her ”
B”Gouri Di informs to me about it .We too very excited for seeing her. He na Veer
(Bhavya calls Rajveer as Veer)
Raj”Ya Gouri Di we are very excited for seeing her, When they will come? ”
G”Today bade bhayya, Om and Dadi, Maa
and Papa, choti maa and choti Papa are
comes to Kerala for fixing Bade bhayya ‘s marriage. After that Bade bhayya and Om are join with us. We all knows about more
details about bhabi after they are comes.
We are waiting for them ”
G”Anika …,this is Bhvya,I know don’t need to introduce Bhavya to you. But she is not look like her childhood. The fat Bhavya is
become Slim beauty Now ”
B”Di ….In childhood You didn’t eat anything, I was eat your food also. So I was become
fat girl but while growing up you took my
food also. So I am become Slim ”
G”Bhavya…..”
B”Di I was just joking ”
B”Anika Di why you are not says Anything ”
A”You are talking about yours family matter(About Shivay ‘s love) he na. That’s why I didn’t says anything ”
R”Di..you too an part of our family .You are
are not Only Gouri bhabi ‘s best friend ,you are most important part of our babhi ‘s life. So you also our family he na. ”
A”Thank you so much guys for considering
me as a part of yours family. ”
R”Not only you and your sister also part of our family ”
All are “what!! ”
While Rudra says about Soumya also an part of their family .All are looking at him
confusingly. Rudra understand their
confusion about it. The truth is Rudra was falling in love with Soumya. But he don’t wants to reveal about it now. For clearing
their confusion Rudra says to them
R”I means that In these three days we all are close to Anika Di and Soumya. If Anika
Di is an part of our family then, Soumya
also an part of our family he na ”
All are says correct. But Gouri and Priyanga
are understand what Rudra means to says
Soumya also an part of their family. After some times they all are goes to Hotel White pearl, it’s was the same hotel Neha and
gang are books rooms for celebrating Kaniz
‘s birthday. Gouri and gang books 4 rooms. One for Anika and Gouri,Kaniz,one for Bhavya,Soumya and Priyanga, and one for
Rajveer and Rudra, and one for Shivay and
Om. After that all are goes to their respective rooms for taking rest. That time
G”Rudy I wants to talk to you. ”
Now Expect Rudra ,Priyanga and Gouri all
are goes to their respective rooms.
R”bhabi ..what you wants to talk to me ”
G”Rudy I notice you from the day you meet
Soumya. I saws your expression towards
Soumya. I feels that you are love her. While you says Soumya also an part of our family ,I was confirmed about it. If you really love
her then propose her at night. Tomorrow we
all are go back to Mumbai and Anika and Soumya are go back to Trivandrum. After today you didn’t get any chance for
revealing your love towards soumya. So you
will propose her OK ”
Saying this Gouri goes to her room.
P”Bhabi is right bhayya, you will propose
Soumya at night. You didn’t get any chance
after today ”
But Rudra did not says anything
P”Rudy bhayya why you are thinking? ”
R”I will reveal about my love to Soumya at
night.But I’m not thinking about it. You know na Pringu. In these days we both are very close to Anika Di and Soumya. They
both are really very nice people’s. After I
reveals my love to Soumya she will comes to our family. I wants Anika Di also comes to our family as our bhabi. If Shivay bhayya
not falling in love then, I will suggest
Anika Di for Shivay bhayya ”
P”I too like Anika Di a lot. If Anika Di is coming to our family as our bhabi then it’s
our luck. If we have one more brother. Then
we can suggest Anika Di for our bhayya. But we don’t have any other brother. We are not lucky for getting her as our bhabi ”
After saying about it Rudra and Priyanga are goes to their room.
Continue………….
There are one or two parts are left for
completing this os. I wants to complete it before Sumi going to Bangalore. I hope I can able to complete it before her leave.
Friends if you all like my os then comment
on kanfi ‘s birthday special Ishqbaaz os. I was waiting for your all’s response
Written by
Ahsana ?
19 Comments
Stop all this nonsense. I know that you all are happy that I have fractured my hand and all. I know that you are kanfi’s friend. This message is for all kanfi friends like IMU, shrinjal, candy, etc etc. Let me also tell you a good news that I have not reformed. I created a new account and also started chatting with others nicely just so that you all dont start the drama again and ban my account like you had banned my earlier account. My brother Arjun informed me that you people are planning to ban this account also. So I am revealing that I dont care what you do. I wont leave you people alone if u delete my account. Dont think I reformed. I can do anything for my account and ffs. I can even create another account like my earlier account hellokitty and cause problem. Anyways, I am writing my new nagin ff. It will be coming soon. Hope you guys love it.
Hey what you are saying. I can’t understand what you mean by.
Like srsly….
How u are able to do these cheap tactics again n again….
Frstly i really dont knw who u are n neithr m intrsted in knowing…
Just to promote ur ffs how can u stoop so low….
Get a life man…..
Spreading negtvty evrywhere is what reflects u as a prson…..
Be smart enough n be bold enough……just cut the crap yr…
Be a sensible human….
And candy, I dont understand why u would want to delete my new account. And dont lecture me. Cuz I know how low level you are. You are not less than me. You made account jaggu and exposed your own friend rufina name every time. Then you are lying to all that its not your account. Stop this drama. I know everything. And what about the deal you made with my brother Arjun about pranking rufina with jaggu account? He told me everything. And my nagin ff is coming soon. So please read and comment. Hope you love it. This time Im adding more twists and turns in naagin ff. But……. Please only write positive comments in my ff. Or else it will get spoilt
I got one thing in my mind if tht ff is not gd and we don’t like it then also we would have to comment positively? so I thought if it isn’t gd I’ll give some negative comments hope u don’t mind it at all coz it’ll improve ur ff na
how dare u say anything abt candy di? The Jaggu who “exposed” Rufina wasn’t Candy di and for ur kind information Jaggu the one whom u r saying exposed Rufina actually thought none knws Rufina’s name and thus she just told her name and not exposed..secondly candy di had deleted her Jaggu acc on which I had posted many things and this other Jaggu acc is totally diff u can see I have posted nothing so better u keep urself quiet without knwing anything.
Stop interfering in others matters manya. Anyways, you are a BANDAR. I know people in TU call you that. You deserve that name. I hate people like you who put their nose in between others matters
Excuse me.. we all know that you and your so called brother “arjun” is fake.. we all know it from hundreds of years.. n no one named arjun, your brother really exists in TU..so it’s just u plotting against us..n what made u think that we r trying to delete your account? Do let me know
Excuse me, stop calling me and my brother fake. We really do exist. We are from rich bedi family. You will become unconscious once you see our bungalow. And im not plotting against you. But I got to know about your planning from my secret informer friend in TU. She is a very close friend of yours. And do like my new nagin ff which is coming soon. And…….. Please dont send rubbish things in my new account wall. It will ruin my reputation. I have a good reputation as Arni. Also dont send things related to our enmity in activity. It will ruin my reputation
Oh my god!! Please tell me the name of your secret informer..pls..i beg u Siddhi.. ??..huh! U say we will say such things to u? If you expect then go to hell!! Bcoz we all know that you and your brother ARE FAKE..and talking about money..there is no use of money if u a educated person and I don’t even think u go to school..do u go?? Pls showoff karna band karo ..tum jaise duffor longo ki Kami hai TU pe jo tumne aake puri kardi. N how dare u call her bandar?? Only her close friends can call here this n ppl like u have no right even to peep in our account..n if u r really Siddhi then log in to your account and tell me that it’s u!!
It is lovely dear….
Thanks dear. I glad you like it. I will update next part soon
It was really NYC os. ……ahsana chechi ivide comment onnum ff related allalo……….siddhi enthokeyane parayunathe…..
Love you so much bestie for your support. Siddhine patti njan parayam. Ivide vechalla. Njan next part post cheyam
Ahshuuuuu….
It was ammmazingggggg
Fabulouss really loved it….
U are putting sooo much effrts in this….
Thnk uu sooo much…i knw it isnt allowed bt still???
Loveee uuuu bhht sara
Thank you so much bestie ? for your encouragement and support. Love you so much dear. I’m wrote this os only for you .
N forget to write..
Neha is married???
I’ll dfintly tell her thiz??
Rahul is an imaginary character only. I enquired to sumi about is Neha married or not. She says that Neha is not married. The character of Rahul was very important for this os, that’s why I used Rahul on my os. I hope Neha is not feel bad for that.
Lovely episode Di.
Who is sidhi,why she posted here comments here? Its not related to this os