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Karan’s Naina-part 3
Nirmala: beta, u must know something about her.. she must have said u something..
Karan: no mom.. she never mentioned about where she was going.. she said, she has no connection from this place.. and ab tak..
Meghna: what? What ab tak?
Karan: bhabi, ab tak maybe she got married to a good boy.. who is successful in his life.. not like me.. nalayak one.. always rude I am.. kabhi uske liye kuch nhi kiya maine..
Meghna: karan.. don’t say all this.. jitna I know naina, she will not marry.. coz I saw love for u in her eyes..
Karan: bhabi, u know? If u knew, then would have never blamed her.. usse toh shayed mujhse behtar koi na jaan paye..
Meghna: u r right karan.. tumhare alawa aur koi, naina ko jan hi nhi skti.. tumhara pyar uske liye, uske age kisika bhi pyar nhi.. mera bhi nhi..
Karan: love? I don’t know about it bhabi.. just I know, from the time she has left, I only have one wish, that is maybe someday she comes back.. just one hope, that is I will see her angelic face adored by the most prettiest as well as precious smile.. somehow, I miss her dramas, her teasing me.. baat baat pe, ajeeb ajeeb naam de dena.. and the way she took care of me.. mere liye chinta karna uski.. uski ankho mei mere liye fikr, I miss all those things.. I don’t know, if I will ever meet her in this life.. and even if I will meet her, maybe I ll find her with her husband..
Kunal: bhai, itni acchi description, naina ki.. I understood, u r in love bro.. pyaar karta hai tu usse..
Karan: maybe.. but what’s its use? Its been 8 months.. I don’t know where she is, what is she doing? Nothing..
Kunal: pehle bol, karta hai tu usse love?
Karan thought..
Meghna: say karan..
Nirmala: beta, say..
Khyati: say yes..
Nk: karan, ha bolo..
All turned towards him.. nk smiled..
Dadaji: now u got dad’s permission, say yes now..
Karan was in dilemma..
Karan: I don’t know.. ajeeb si feeling hai bass.. I want to see her, but cant face her.. I want her antics, but cant enjoy them..
Kunal: ohho, say one thing.. suppose, now u found out that naina is not married to anyone, and still u r her husband.. what will u do?
Karan: I ll bring her back..
Kunal: she wont come back.. never..
Karan: ayegi..
Kunal: naah.. kabhi nahi..
Karan got hypered..
Karan: arre aise kaise nhi ayegi.. bataunga usse, that I really love her.. she is my life.. I miss her.. uski drama, uski care, I miss the whole naina.. wo sirf karan ki naina hai.. and am sure, she also loves me.. bhai u say anything.. huh..
Silence prevailed for a few seconds.. and karan realised what he said.. he looked towards kunal and found him smiling..
Karan: bhai..
Kunal: congrats bhai.. dil khus kar diya tune..
Karan smiled..
Karan: like really? I am in love.. and that to with naina badtameez..
Meghna: karan..
Nirmala: karan, don’t call my bahu badtameez..
Karan: sorry, but u don’t know our meeting.. and I love calling her naina badtameez, and she.. loves calling me chaate wala akdu..
Nk: what?
Karan: yes..
Kunal: u r like teenage lovers..
Meghna: yes..
All laughed.. but again karan became upset..
Khyati: what happened bhai?
Karan: hain kaha wo? Where is she?
Meghna became upset..
Meghna: ma, cheeku.. kaha hogi.. she never mentioned anything..
Karan: bhabi, I need some time..
Saying this he went to his room.. karan closed the door.. he sat on his chair and closed his eyes..
Naina: karan..
He shot open his eyes..
Karan: Naina.. where are u?
He searched
Naina: offo karan, what is this? U cant even find your best friend?
Karan: but where are you?
Naina: I am here..
He searched the whole room but didn’t find her.. sadly he sat down on his chair..
Naina: ho gaya na mujhse pyar? Nhi reh sakte na mujhse durr?
Karan: haan naina.. happy? Cant live without you.. please come back naina.. I fulfilled my promise.. please come back.. I miss u..
No reply..
Karan: naina.. naina..
No reply..
Karan: day dreaming.. but where is she?
Thinking and thinking he slept on his chair..
Naina: are u happy?
Karan: yes.. thank u naina, for u I achieved my dream.. opened this music academy and am ahead with my career.. thank u..
Naina: offo, kaise ajeeb insan ho tum.. dost bhi bolte ho, and thanks bhi.. not fair..
Karan: but this was needed.. accha say me one thing.. don’t you have any dreams? Like see u are an iit topper.. but what about your dreams..
Naina: sach batao?
Karan: yes..
Naina: actually, u know, I never wanted to do mba.. u know I loved engineering.. so did iit.. but mba, naah.. instead I want to work.. yes.. u know my dream city is bangalore.. and I want to work at microsoft, and play with softwares.. I love them.. also kabhi kabhi, I can write poems.. I love writing.. but I guess, nhi pure honge..
Karan: arre, zaroor honge.. I ll help u..
Naina: really?
Karan: yepp.. now start nautanki..
Naina: aww.. thank u karan..
Both smiled..
Naina: then am going..
Karan: where?
Naina: bangalore..
Karan: now only?
Naina: yes.. its urgent.. bye.. take care..
Karan: but naina.. naina..
And he saw naina going away..
Karan shot open his eyes..
Karan: NAINAAAA…..
He was panting., then he smiled.. it was a dream and a flashback..
Karan: stupid I am.. its bangalore.. wohoo.. bangalore am coming..
At Bangalore
It was a normal day.. naina went to office, MICROSOFT.. as usual, she was upset with her past.. in her cabin, she took out a picture..
Naina: I miss you.. how are u? I guess, u r fine by now.. and maybe married off to some pretty and nice girl, who never irritates u, never is behind you.. but kya karu, tumhare akdu pan ka effect bohot accha tha.. I don’t know why, but I liked to spend time with u, loved to talk to u.. everyone said that u r ill.. if u were really ill, then why I couldn’t see it? I only noticed your care for all, love for all, talent, sab logo se zyada, aur meri tarah drama king.. I never ever saw the illness, I just saw the great human behind the illness cover.. why karan? Why I miss u so much? Why I remember our times spent together? Accha, tell me, did u found out the culprit? I know u have, coz its been 8 months.. parr, kabhi tumhe meri yaad nahi ayi? Bolo na karan..
She started crying.. after sometime she stopped crying..
Naina: what happened to me? Why I want karan to remember me.. why I have the hope that karan will come in search of me.. why? Do I l…. no.. no.. I cant.. how can I think about it? He considers me his friend.. best friend.. I don’t want to make our relation a complicated one.. I don’t love him..
A few seconds silence..
Naina: or I do.. damn.. I love him? Really.. but why? I know he doea not love me, then why? God why life is so complicated.. pyaar hua toh uss insan se jo mujhe apni biwi manta hi nahi.. no no no.. I cant love him.. I just cant.. I need a break..
She rushed out of her cabin with her belongings, went to his boss..
Naina: sir, I am nt well.. I need to go back and please grant me 2 days holiday.. thank u sir..
She left and went back home..
After 2 hours, a flight from jaipur landed at the bangalore airport.. karan got down.. took his luggage.. and hired a cab..
Karan: microsoft office..
After a half an hour journey, karan reached the office.. he got down and went into the reception..
Karan: hii..
Receptionist: hello sir.. how may I help u?
Karan: well I am in search of naina.. naina chauhan..
Receptionist: let me check sir..
She had gone through her register..
Receptionist: sorry sir.. no one named naina chauhan..
Karan: okay.. anyone named naina solanki?
Receptionist: ohh naina di..
Karan: u know her?
Receptionist: yeah, I know her and about her past also.. she suffered a lot..
Karan: well today she came?
Receptionist: di, came but she left for home 2.5hrs ago..
Karan: what? Left? But why? Was she okay?
Receptionist: sorry sir, but who are u?
Karan: am sorry, am karan, kar…
Receptionist: karan singh chauhan?
Karan: yeah.. how u know?
Receptionist: naina, naina di.. she told.. well in this office if anyone is close to naina di then its me..
Karan: ohh, I c.. but why she left?
Receptionist: little I know is that, she said she is nt feeling well and seeked 2 days leave also.. seeing her eyes, I felt she was crying in her cabin.. often she comes, cries in the cabin.. never speaks to anyone.. sometimes talks with me.. and does her work and goes back home.. no joy, fun in her life..
Karan got hurt..
Karan: well did she tell u anything before leaving today?
Receptionist: no.. but she was murmuring something, that how can I love him..
Karan: him? Who him? Is she married?
Receptionist: no no.. she is still your wife.. and him, it maybe u sir..
Karan got a bit happy..
Karan: aa, can u give me her address?
Receptionist: aaa.. well.. di said not to give address to anyone from your family..
Karan got sad..
Receptionist: but I will give u, as di remains sad.. and if u both meet and sort out things, maybe she will become happy.. I feel only u can understand her.. so I ll give u.. wait sir..
Karan got delighted.. the lady took out a card..
Receptionist: this is naina di’s card.. this is her no. And this is her address..
Karan: thank u so much miss..
Receptionist: priya..
Karan: miss priya..
Receptionist: welcome sir.. all the best..
Karan: its karan jeeju, and thanks..
He left, took a cab and went to naina’s house.. he stood before the door, and rang the bell..
Naina was in her room..
Naina( thought): who can be at this hour? Mumma will come in the evening..
Karan rang the bell again..
Naina hurried down the steps..
Naina: coming..
Naina came and opened the door.. and froze seeing the person standing..
Naina: karan..
And she stepped back.. karan took steps towards her..
Naina: what are u doing here? Haan? Why are u here?
Karan: naina relax.. I just..
Naina: u just what? What karan?
Karan: I came here to take u back..
Naina: why? Shaadi toh ho gayi hogi tumhari.. mujhpe haq kyn jata rahe ho? Go from here.. and yes, don’t tell anyone, that am in bangalore..
Karan: naina, please I am here to take u back to jaipur..
Naina: no karan., for me my swabhimaan comes first.. well did u find out the culprit?
Karan: yes and ur doubt was correct.. it was masima..
Naina: great.. and how are u? Got fine na?
Karan: hmm, only coz of u..
Naina: then yeh toh happy time for u chauhans..
Karan: sorry?
Naina: yes, u r well, masima’s caught, u got married once again, and tumhe mujh jaise badtameez se bhi chutkara mil gaya.. ab koi tumhe taang nhi karega..
Karan: like really?
Naina: haan.. dekho, u came from jaipur, mumma says mehman ko bina kuch khilaye nhi bhejte, u sit.. am bringing tea..
Karan: oohhh.. now am guest?
Naina: yes..
Naina started leaving for the kitchen.. karan rushed to her and held her hands, turned her towards him..
Karan: are u happy? Kaisi ho tum?
Naina didn’t say anything.. she kept looking down..
Karan: look into my eyes naina..
Naina didn’t look..
Karan: naina..
Naina slowly lifted her head and peeped into karan’s eyes.. her eyes started becoming moist.. slowly tears occupied the eyes, and started flowing..
Karan: naina.. are u happy?
Naina didn’t say, only looked at him with flowing tears.. as if the eyes were giving his answers..
Karan: u know what? Tum, naina badtameez nhi.. u r, naina idiot.. how can u pre assume things haan?
Naina: matlab..
And she sobbed..
Karan: naina.. ( he wiped her tears and embraced her.. naina put her head on his chest) naina yaar.. am not married.. how can I marry someone when am married to you.. do u find me this much akdu?
Naina: no..
Karan: like really.. u sounded so cute.. and u said right.. koi nhi hai mujhe taang karne k liye.. but kya karu, mujhe na apni life mei wo taang, that noise, mujhe wo sab wapas chahiye.. main na apni best frnd, naina chauhan ka dramas- miss karta hoon.. u know I miss the every moment spent with her.. uski smile bhi.. u know, how precious her smile is.. I dint have a heart yaar, but her smile, uff, her smile created a heart and captured it, kisiki smile ko jagah hi nhi deti.. ab, agar kisiki smile ko jagah nhi deti, to kisi se shaadi karke kya faida? And u know, sirf usiki awaz gunjti hain meri kaan o mei.. I always said her, how much u speak.. yaar but now, jab she stopped talking, I feel like asking her, why u stopped talking? Talk more, but bad luck no-one is there..
Naina: aisa kyn?
Karan: secret hain..
Naina: what?
And broke the hug..
Naina: secret? And you..
And she started laughing..
Naina: ohh god karan.. u r so funny.. like girls u started keeping secrets..
And she was laughing.. karan enjoyed her laughter.. those memories became alive in his thoughts..
Karan: wahh..
Naina: what?
Karan: this smile, laughter suits my naina.. not gloominess and sadness.. u look pretty..
Naina composed herself..
Naina: toh batao, aisa kyn?
Karan: kaisa kyn?
Naina: arre aisa kyn?
Karan: arre baba, kaisa kyn?
Naina: offo karan..
Karan: naina..
Naina: main ro dungi,,
Karan: no no no.. pls not again..
Naina: then say..
Karan: phew.. I think, I have to say it now..
Naina: what?
Karan: well, I.. I..
Naina: kya I I laga rakha hai?
Karan(closed his eyes): I love you..
Naina: what?
Karan: yes naina.. I don’t know how, when.. but I fell in love with u madly.. today, I want to say, legally u r my wife, but today I accept u as my wife from my heart.. naina I love.. pls comeback with me.. I will die without u..
Naina: karan..
And she kept her hands over karan’s lips.. karan kissed them back.. naina blushed..
Karan: naina, ur answer..
Naina: I..
Karan: say it without any fear naina.. u r my naina.. KARAN’S NAINA..
Naina: I love you too.. but..
Karan: but??
Naina: I cant come back..
Karan: why naina? Everyone is waiting for u naina.. u know, bhabi has not eaten anything, since she got know about your innocence.. ma, she is waiting for u.. she is so much guilty that she is waiting for u at door, without having anything.. and papa.. he said, let naina bahu come, I ll seek forgiveness, holding her feets.. dadaji, that person is sitting thirsty and hungry only for u naina.. when I was coming, they said, please bring our naina back, without her, we are incomplete.. if then also u will not come..
Naina: but..
Sharda: beta, u should go back.,
Sharda came in..
Naina: mumma..
Karan: sharda mom..
And took her blessings..
Sharda: yes beta.. u must go..
Naina: mumma, u only taught us to live life with swabhimaan..
Sharda: yes cheeku, but there is difference between swabhimaan and abhimaan.. when u left the house that time it was swabhimaan, I was with u.. but now, they are guilty.. then why the ego to come in between.. beta learn to judge between swabhimaan and abhimaan.. and afterall wo log tumhare apne hain.. u must go back.. swabhimaan is also sometimes to forgive.. beta.. go back..
Karan: naina, even I will never forgive them for not trusting u.. but again, they are our own na..
Sharda: karan, maf karne se dil bohot bada hota hain, aur wo log toh tumhare ma papa hain, unke liye man mei kadwahat mat rakho.. jao, apni biwi ko leke jao..
Naina smiled at karan..
Karan: to madam, are u coming?
Naina: ji..
And karan hugged naina.. he kissed her forehead..
Karan: karan’s naina..
Naina: naina’s karan..
Both in unison: I love u..
Sorry, I was late again.. but I had to complete it in this part only, so it took a little long.. hope u enjoyed my os.. and about my ff.. well I think I will end it.. and will start writing os.. coz they are more efficient.. I said I think, so nothing’s sure.. hehe.. loads of love guys.. pls let me know, about ur views about this one..???❤️??
13 Comments
Wow really nice one Titli. The ending was great. So unique way the story was. I loved it so much…
Thank u ayonija.. means a lot..
Wowwwwww.It was awesome.If you are busy then it is really better to write an os.I fully support you.
Thank u.. thank u so much for supporting the idea of os..
Wow lovely…… I liked it… It was really amazing…..
Thank u so much..
Titili pls don’t stop writing I loved every single part of it
Well i really respect your emotions, but u knw am a bit busy.. next month i ll come up with another os.. so till then am sorry.. and thanks for supporting.??
I love it plz write some more about it
Well am sorry, am busy these days.. but i ll come up with some new story soon.. thank u for loving it..
Ur welcome and don’t be sorry it’s ur such a good writer
Means a lot.. compliment from u guys really means a lot.. thank u so much.. well i ll be back on july.. this month am a bit busy..
The myriad plethora of emotions and beautiful feelings presented through this episode have surely captivated my thoughts. A wonderful masterpiece enriched with exotic wordplay and mortal emotions. The unexpressed feelings and suppressed thoughts of many months finally found a way to release through this episode of yours. A great work of art which presented the charming karan and the ever-beautiful naina in the best possible avatar. Confessions had never as enrapturing as they were here. And this is supremely true, an extraordinary composition about the best people on earth..