Hey guys, am really sorry for being late.. I knw its quite long.. actually have been a bit lazy.. not feeling like to write.. Also am running out of ideas for my ff.. so wrote this os.. once again sorry for the delay.. pls ignore the mistakes.. here is the next part of my os..
Link to the previous part: Part 1
Karan’s Naina-part 2
Flashback continues..
Naina and karan went back home.. meghna took care of her sister.. and was also worried about who tried to harm them.. naina in her state also took care of karan, karan was mesmerized with naina’s soft corner.. he would all day stare at his wife, when she was around..
Days passed smoothly.. karan-naina’s bond started to become more strong with each passing second, and meghnal were happy about it.. but one person, i.e. Sandhya was never happy with this bonding, she was planning something evil..
And one fine day, meghna, naina’s bond broke.. it happened so, that, kunal was going to leave for office.. he was getting ready..
Meghna:so, mr. kunal, ready?
Kunal: yeah, my wallet and watch?
Meghna: table dekho..
Kunal: oohh sorry..
Meghna came and backhugged kunal..
Kunal: what’s the matter wifey?? Aj bada pyar aa raha hai??
Meghna: kunal..
Kunal: hmm..
Meghna: aaj jaldi aa jao na pls..
Kunal: kyn..
Meghna: I am telling so..
Meghna: thank u.. and pecked his cheeks..
Kunal left for office.. on the way, kunal saw his brakes failed.. and he was not able to think anything, the car was not in his control.. and it hit a truck..
Meghna was leaving for office.. suddenly she got a call.. the name kunal flashed..
Meghna picked up the call..
Meghna: haa kunal..
Man: ji, am not kunal.. wo yeh phn yaha padi hui mili.. jis insan ka hai unka accident hua hai, xyz chowk pe.. ap jaldi aa jaiye..
Meghna felt her everything got over.. she n out took her car and went to the spot..
After few hours, at hospital
Police:well it seems like, it was an attempt to murder.. brakes were failed, and jisne bhi yeh kiya hai, bohot bariki se kiya hai.. knowledge hai uski..
Meghna was shocked..
Meghna: yaha toh sirf mera aur cheeku ka hi engineering tha.. matlab cheeku..
Naina: di, what are u saying?
Meghna: no no, am wrong.. I don’t believe.. someone else it will be..
Sandhya: well, we have cctv at our garage, maybe we can get some idea..
Police: yeah.. pls..
Police, meghna, naina, sandhya, nk, karan, nirmala, dadaji, sharda all were there.. the footage was played.. and there they saw naina doing something with the car..
Meghna: what? Cheeku..
Naina: di.. no.. its false.. I didn’t do anything.. yes in the footage its me.. but its 2days back I came here to check jeeju’s car, masima asked me to..
Meghna: bass cheeku, cant u see the date on the footage? Its today.. do u think me fool? Why u did this cheeku?
Naina: di, I never thought of this.. pls trust me di.. ma, pls trust me..
Nirmala jerked naina’s hands.. karan’s heart pained..
Naina: dadaji.. atleast u think na, that this recording is false?
Dadaji: beta, I want to think, but this video.. it is not letting me..
Naina: masima, say na.. that u sent me that day..
Sandhya: me.. naina.. why will I send u? See, we don’t let our bahus do such works.. u did this intentionally, so that ur sister’s happinesses are ruined.. this footage shows it.. u don’t want ur sister leads a happy life, as u could never get karan’s love.. now after this, not only karan, but also the family will hate u naina.. why u did this?
Karan: masima.. pls.. naina, u are the only one person, who always stood beside me, in my happy times, tough times.. tumne mujhe karan se pyar karna sikhaya naina.. it was you, who trusted my talent, motivated me.. and I know that naina, maybe which nobody else knows.. and the girl, who does this much for a friend, I think she can give life for her loved ones, but can never ever think harm them.. naina, I trust u.. bhabi, u r an engineer.. u know videos can be faked also..trust naina bhabi..
Meghna: stop karan.. its good to see, that u and naina bonded up.. great haan.. actually now I understand.. it was plan of u both.. u couldn’t see kunal getting praised by papa.. and naina couldn’t see me happy.. toh jaan se hi marne chale the.. so that, after kunal dies, papa will focus on u.. praise u.. right karan.l u know what.. tum jaisi bhai behen hone se accha hai, koi bhai behen na ho..
Naina: di..
Karan: bhabi..
Nirmala: meghna
Meghna: maa, see ur son is in icu, because of this two..
Nirmala: no meghna, only naina.. karan can never do this..
Meghna: but maa, taking her side proves, he is with her..
Naina: di, aap karan ko kyn blame karr rhi ho? Apko lagta hai, that we can do this?? Swear on me di..
Meghna: nhi lagta tha, par video dkh k lagta hai..
Sharda: gudiya, what is this?
Meghna: mumma, aap bhi iski hi side le rhi ho?
Sharda: beta, this is not about taking sides, but about right and wrong.. and gudiya u r wrong this time.. just think, when kunal gets fine, and if he gets to know this, then he will be hurt..
Meghna: mumma, am there for kunal..
Naina: di, how are u talking with mumma?
Meghna: shut up naina.. u can be so good with ones who want bad for u, but not me..
Naina: di, do u really think I will ever want bad for u, jeeju, this family???
Karan: bhabi, please believe me, she is not at fault.. someone is framing her..
Meghna: and how u know?
Karan: coz, ur sister can never do this.. I know my wife very well..
Meghna: great, do one thing, then u also leave this house with her..
Naina: di.. I ll leave.. but karan will stay here..
Karan: no naina.. today bhabi said that I must leave..
Nirmala: no karan.. u r not at fault, u will not leave.. naina will leave.. tum nhi jaoge karan.. meri kasam hai tumhe..
Karan: ma..
Nirmala: no.. u ll nt say anything..
Karan: fine.. if u all want this I will not leave, but remember, I ll love to remain alone whole life.. no one from this house will come to my room.. I disown myself from this family..
Saying this he ran upstairs.. naina felt nothing for herself, but for karan, she started feeling, pain.. she started worrying about karan..
Naina: karan..
She ran behind him..
In nairan’s room..
Karan: u saw naina.. nobody trusts me.. nobody trusted u.. how can I leave with the people who don’t trust u?
Naina: karan, proofs are against me.. how will anyone trust me.. its quite obvious..
Karan: yeah, proofs are against u.. but then also I trust u.. and am the biggest proof.. they don’t trust me..
Naina: karan, am glad, that atleast here, my friend trusts me.. I am happy karan.. now I know am not alone.. my mumma and my best friend, chinta wala karan is with me..
Karan: u really think we are best friends?
Naina: why? Don’t u?
Karan: no, I mean.. aa.. u r more than…
Sharda came..
Sharda: cheeku packing..
Naina: mumma u wait.. I ll do and come..
Naina started packing..
Naina: karan, I need ur help..
Karan: bolo naina..
Naina: I want u to find out who is the actual person behind jeeju’s accident.. well I soubt one person.. don’t freak out listening the name pls.. its masima..
Karan: I trust u.. I ll find out and then will bring u back..
Naina: wo.. actually..
Karan: what?
Naina: I guess.. I.. I wont ever come back.. me and mumma are going far away from here.. don’t try to search for me.. u ll find it difficult.. this is our last talk karan.. we wont meet after this.. actually I don’t want to remain as a culprit, so I told u to find the real one.. and yeah karan, take care of yourself.. take the medicines, bhaiyu prescribed.. any prblm call bhaiyu.. u ll be fine within few days.. pls.. be fine for me.. and then..
Karan: then?
Naina(voice choked): find.. find some good girl and get married.. don’t find a girl like me.. jo bohot zyada bolti hai.. apni pasand ki ladki se shaadi karna..
Karan was disheartened..
Karan: accha.. meri life ki decisions tum logi? By the way.. marry some good boy.. jo successful ho.. meri tarah nalayak nhi..
Naina: haan, wo toh karungi hi..
Karan: really??
Naina: haan..
Karan: so, give me back this mangalsutra and wipe off the sindoor before leaving..
Karan pur forward his hands, holding a hanky, to wipe off the sindoor..
Naina: karan.. I will wipe it off.. abhi mitaungi toh, ma ko bura lagega..
Karan: hmm..
A few minutes silence..
Naina: packing done..
Karan: khush ho na?
Naina: thoda haan.. zyada na..
Karan: hmm..
Naina: mumma, must be waiting.. bye karan.. take care..
Karan: bye.. dhyan rakhna.. call when u get down..
Naina: I said na, no more connection from this place.. bye..
Karan: hmm..
Karan turned around.. tears rolling down his cheeks.. he wanted to stop her.. but couldn’t.. he didn’t knew what this feeling was.. at that point, he knew his naina left him..
Flashback ends..
Sharda was crying thinking all this..
Present day, at jaipur..
Karan: mom, dad, bhai, bhabi, dadaji, masima..
Karan shouted while entering the house with a man.. all came down.. sandhya was shocked to see the man..
Meghna: what happened karan? What is all this?
Sandhya: yeah.. why u brought strangers to home? He needed money.. wait..
She was about to take out money..
Karan: masima.. relax.. bhabi.. u alleged naina of doing bhai’s accident right? Now this person, vikas, will tell u the truth.. so vikas.. say everything clearly..
Vikas: ji.. mam.. actually, I was made to fail the break.. someone made me fail the break..
Sandhya started slowly moving back..
Meghna: who?
Vikas: she..
And pointed towards sandhya.. sandhya gets shocked..
Karan: u must be kidding right? Masima don’t get tensed.. why are u sweating?
Sandhya was nervous.. silence prevailed in her voice..
Karan: say it masima.. why are u sweating?
Karan literally shouted.. everyone was shocked.. nobody saw this side of karan..
Nirmala: karan.. calm down..
Karan: mom, today all of u will remain quiet.. so masima.. why are u sweating? Please tell everyone.. okay fine, when u have pledged to remain silent, then I have also promised someone to expose the one who planned my brother’s accident, and framed my wife in a false case.. mom, dad, that day, u didn’t took naina’s side.. aplogo ka toh firbhi thik hai.. but bhabi.. u, being naina’s sister didn’t trust her.. this is the truth.. behind all this was masima.. yes, I don’t know why, but she planned bhai’s murder, and framed naina in it.. am I right masima??? Now if u kindly explain us the reason behind it..
Sandhya was silent..
Karan: I didn’t hear u Mrs. Sandhya Singhania.. will u please? Else I have another way.. let me call police.. this evidence is enough..
He took out his phone..
Sandhya: wait.. telling.. I didn’t want u to ever get fine.. and naina was spoiling my game plan.. she started to make u come out of the room.. u gained confidence.. started to participate.. it was me, who infected u with the allergy, and also doomed your confidence.. so I planned kunal’s accident and put the blame on naina..
All were shocked..
Nirmala: sandhya..
Karan clapped..
Karan: and u all didn’t trust naina.. jate jate she told, she was not responsible, someone is framing her.. u all didn’t bother about naina.. no one trusted her, and for that I will never forgive any person of this house.. naina, my wife, my life, stayed away from me because of u all.. u know, if am all fine now, then that’s coz of her.. yes ma.. it was her efforts.. and u all doubted her intentions..
Meghna: sorry karan.. am really sorry..
Karan: bhabi, ur sorry wont bring her back na..
Meghna: what do u mean? Cheeku is fine right? Karan speak up..
Karan: I don’t know bhabi..
Meghna: what do u mean by don’t know?
Kunal: yaar, u must know something..
Karan: no bhai.. nobody knows where is naina and sharda ma..
Meghna: what? I thought atleast u will know.. and so, I never enquired about them.. kunal where is ma and cheeku?
Karan: wait.. inspector..
Inspector comes in..
Karan: hope u recorded whatever she confessed.. I guess this will be enough.. pls arrest her..
Sandhya: karan.. forgive me pls.. I ll go away, but will never harm ur family..
Nobody paid any heed.. the inspector took away sandhya..
Meghna: now what? My fault it is.. my sister and mother.. where are they?
She started crying..
Kunal: ssshhh.. meghna..
Nirmala: karan.. hum sab gunehgar tum dono ka.. tumhe pata hoga, naina kaha hai.. maybe sometimes she said.. yaar karo..
Guys.. am sorry.. I ll need another part to finish it off.. hope u enjoyed this part.. thank u..
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Love it ? ❤️
Pls update fast
Thank u so much..
Very nice. U write it so lovely. The flashback was indeed nice. The good thing is that Sandhya has been exposed. I was waiting for ur update. OUTSTANDING…. Post ASAP. LOADS OF LOVE- AYONIJA
Am ur culprit.. sorry once again dear.. next one will be up soon.. just i need to frame the story.. sorry for being lazy.. actually was a bit tensed for my engg results.. so didnt write.. but i ll post next one soon.. thank u so much for loving it..
Oh my god! Titli this was amazing yaar! I’m waiting for the next part! Thank god! Karan found out that Masima was behind all this ! And that’s great! Just loved this Os!! Hope Karan finds out Naina’s address!
Yes dear.. he will.. have patience.. thank u fr ur support..
I am just so shocked now. The series of events unfolding before me have indeed left me in a state of numbness and utter nothing-ness. This feeling I feel right now is surely not something I can describe in words. Its something well beyond it…
The growing bond between naina and karan which was for once loved by meghna and kunal became the sole reason for hope in this dark story. Sandhya’s nature of never accepting karan’s wellbeing and deciding to taje every step to ruin it is just so cringy. Am really finding it difficult to find the right words to curse her right now..
Kunal’s accident here and the subsequent series of actions has truly robbed me of my very act of breathing. The family’s joint decision to not trust naina based on a video clip they just saw and deciding to disown her was so very painful. Meghna losing trust on her beloved sister and then accusing her of offences she could never ever think of commiting is truly enraging.
Felt really good to see karan standing up for someone with all his zeal and determination. It surely feels beautiful to see a ray of hope when all you have around you in clouds of despair. The amount of trust karan has on naina and tye way he defended her was truly amazing. Well, the greatly touching scene between karan and naina in the bedroom and their emotional conversation made my heart go all numb for a while. Their separation and act of telling each other to find a life-partner with their eves all watery and a look of (fake) happiness on their faces has indeed pained my heart. The amount of admiration I have for them is surely unfathomable..
Sandhya’s rxposition preceded by karan’s relentless efforts to know the truth to prove his wife innocent and the way in which he revealed every single doit of the complete truth is surely praiseworthy. Sandhya’s acceptance and her deed of deciding to reveal all that she has done to harm this family and her reasons behind it have done their job pretty well. The family has disowned her now and is feeling guilty of distrusting naina. Nonetheless, its surely going to take a lot of efforts for the chauhans to repent for their mistakes and search the one they all had forgotten for her supposed misdeeds. A heinous act as theirs surely deserves great amounts of hatred and curses. Deciding to look for naina and bring her back after all of that this house has given her?
This surely needs a great deal of reoentance and a firm mind of positivity……
As karan always said – My wife was always correct. It was you who disbelieved her..
*deciding to take every step
*the way he defended her
*their eyes all watery
*Sandhya’s exposition preceded by
*great deal of repentance and a firm mind
Turned out to be a long one. Apologies for that…
Nevertheless, am glad to be able to make myself clear up there. This episode has surely crossed all boundaries which makes it extremely difficult to praise it using mere words. Its all so exemplary and wondrous. Presently, looking forward to the incessant efforts of the chauhans to bring back naina. Its surely going to take a huge amount of determination and a focussed mind.
Awaiting an amazing conclusion to this beauteous tale about a heavenly couple. A couple which knows nothing but love, a couple who trust eachother even in times of utter despair, a couple who acceot every nuabce of each other, a couple who is in love with every aspect of the other, a couple who cares for the other even when the person is completely broken, a couple which is beyond all mortal beings. A couple which is surely heavenly..
*accept every nuance
Ya an interesting os post asap
Link: https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=Pl40RZ25swg
Karan sees naina every where.. samridh’s iv.. pyar ka ehsas??❤️
Awesome chapter… Seriously loved it… I literally have no words for this… Eagerly waiting for the next chapter
Update soon.I enjoyed it alot that’s why first I said to update soon sorry for that.i just loved each and every line.Karans emotions etc.Loved it.
Thank u everyone.. sorry for being late..❤️ Loads of love❤️
Super story. .Titli .. loved it a lot… Ur indeed a great writer… Ur way writing was awesome…
Update next part asap…
Thank u so much devihaa.. it means a lot..?
wow…. my favorite dialog is
“my wife, my life, stayed away from me because of u all.. ,”
nice concept
Long time ehhh.. how are u??
And thank u tons.. well, that dialogue is my fav too,,?
fine dear…. thanx for asking…… still exam season…. 🙁
Hi titli..superb episode..really waiting for next episode with excitement..nairan rocks..really love them verymuch..post soon
Awww.. thank u dear..
Hello,even l am also sry for being late… Being late to read this…. Very nice l loved it… Keep writing
Aww.. thank u so much..