I hope this time all the silent readers too comment… as its the last one?
manish shouted Kartikkk….pagal ho gye ho kya. kartik turned with joy…..papa. manish: kya bola tumne ek baar dubara bolna….kitne saalo se yeh sun ne ke liye mere kaan taras rhe the. kartik: papa..i love you papa and i m really sorry. Kartik went near him. Manish slapped him but slowly?. Kartik: Haww mr. Goenka lagta hai bullet aapke dil ki jagah aapke brain mei lag gyi hai. Manish: kyun bhai? Kartik: you are beating me without any reason? manish: (in anger) accha ji then why were you cutting your hand. Kartik: that toh i was remembering my college memories? when i used to take part in dramas mujhe kya pata aap WELCOME movie ke RDX ki tarah jaag jaaoge aur kahoge ABHI HUM ZINDA HAI??. Manish: accha ji!! Kardi na mendak waali harkat? kartik: Haww now u also….how did u know?? Jasoosi and all han. Manish: no no not at all iheard it when uh guys were enjoying your local date…mendak and sherni?waah! Rab ne bana di jodi…and kuch dekha bhi? . Kartik: Haww what did you see…kahi koi aisi waisi harkatt karte hue toh nhi dekh liya na. Manish: bilkul sahi….aisi waisi harkatt hi kar rhe the..lekin maine apni umar ka lihaaz kar liya or i had to go to ganga to take a holy bath…ek tip dun…yeh sab aisi waisi harkatt thoda chupke kara karo..kisi din maa ne dekh liya na toh lene ke dene padd jaayenge. kartik: rehne do…apki umar aur aapki baatein match nhi karti. manish: accha ji aisi konsi umarr ho gyi hai meri….i m just sweet 16. Kartik: daro bhagwaan se!! Upar wala bhi aapse umar mei do(2) ya teen (3) din hi bada hoga. Manish: Haww ruk tujhe abhi batata hun. kartik: Hahahahahahaha Manish: ayee!! Why are u laughing like Ravan Kartik: because u cannot get up from the bed then how will you teach me a lesson? aww!! So sad helpless Mr. Goenka shall i call the bodyguards… they will teach me lesson on your behalf and waise bhi we r Goenka’s we should not do our work ourselves when we have bodyguards. manish: accha ji baap se pange…he took out the pillow from his back and throwed towards kartik which went towards suhasini dadi and unke sar par jaage laga. dadi: Manish!! What is all this. manish: maa dekho see ur kittu is troubling me and winked towards kartik. kartik: dadi do you think your kittu can do all this?? dadi: no not at all….zaroor is manish ne hi kuch kara hogamy kituu is so innocent. Manish: maa i m injured atleast now take my side Kirti: ghayal sher hi toh sabse strong hota hai….and my papa is the strongest who had been fighting since so long…..first with someone’s hatred whom he loved the most and then with the death manish: gave him a hug. Kirti do you know we all were so tensed for you and these doctors…kitna dara diya tha humme. kartik: hupp!! I was not scared at all…..i knew this guy wont leave us so easily. Naira: accha ji!! You were only the one who cried the most. kartik: oh!! That i was remembering my breakup with my first gf……kyun dadi! naira: Haww!! Kartikkk kartik: laughed Dadi patted him on his head. He went towards manish and hugged him: mai sach mei ghabra gaya tha…if anything would have happened to you i would never be able to forgive myself..i m sorry. Tears rolled down manish’s eyes. Manish: bas kar ab rulaayega ka kya pagle! I m not going to go anywhere before seeing my grandchild’s face. Doctor arrived then. kartik: when can we take him back home doctor. Doctor: you just do some formalities and you can take him back home. Dadi: chalo sab manish ke grehparvesh ki taiyyari bhi karni hai. Manish: maa mai koi dulhan thodi hun jo mera greh parvesh karoge ya aapne mera bhi naam manish goenka se MANISHI goenka rakhne ka soch liya hai. Dadi: Manish chup karo!! lagta hai sachi bullet is ke dimaag mei lag gyi hai. kartik and dadi gave each other a high five.
WELCOME OF MANISH IN GOENKA VILLA
Akhil after doing all the formalities. Doctor,now can we take him home. Doc: yes but you have to take care of certain things….no mental pressure on him, no office load and no sudden moments and oily food strictly not allowed. Manish: doctor oily food is already prohibited in goenka villa and rest tho you can see i m so fit just look at my biceps and triceps?. Akhil: bhaisahab the best joke of the day. Manish: was it a joke?? I thought i was serious. All started laughing. Manish with the support of akhil and naksh reached goenka house. The whole house was just looking awesome with floral decoration. Dadi, surekha and suwarna came up with aarti thaalis. Dadi asked suwarna to do his tilak. Suwarna did the tilak when manish screemed maa see there a very big cockroach everyone started looking here and there. In the meanwhile manish kissed suwarna on her cheeks. Suwarna: Haww!! Manish ji. Naira saw that and covered her mouth and started laughing. Akhil: there is no cockroach bhaisahab. Manish: it might had ran away then accha leave everything where is kartik and humare changu mangu. and kartik arrived dressed like a small boy with a guitar in his hand. A tune started playing. Kartik brought manish in the centre and flowers were showered on him. Kartik started singing…papa kehte hai bada naam karega beta humara aisa kaam karega…..in an enthusiastic manner. He went and hugged manish and said welcome back papa and in befote manish could say anything luv and kush came running shouting tauji aa gye tauji aagye and jumped on him to hug him. As luv and kush jumped manish lost his balanced and stumbled as he didn’t have so much of strength and kartik came stood like a support to him. Manish hold him. Akhil: luv!! Kush!! What’s this….you know tauji is not well then why did u jumped. Luv & kush!! Sorry tauji we became too much excited too see u after long time. We r extremely sorry. Manish: its ok baccho…nothing happened and akhilesh whats this! You r scolding luv & kish in front of me…..i m not gonna spare u for this. Luv kush!! Yipee!! Papa ko tauji ne daanta papa ko daant padi… akhil: unke kaan kheechte hue accha ji!! Tumhe abhi batata hun. Luv kush ran and hide behind manish. Manish hugged them…i missed uh guys?. We missed uh too tauji. Yeh rishta kya kehlata hai theme song played and they all hugged each other and swing in the flow of music.
Thanks a tonn guys for ur million dollar support throughout all the 8 chapters. Hope i will come up with a new one soon….if you wanna give any suggestions for the chappy then plss do so. Thanks once again- muskan
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Wow extremely Superb chapter.
Nice ending.
Loved each and every dialogues in hindi specially.
Funny nokjhoks .
Thank u so much Muskaan.
Awsm yll… Ur dialogues are always amazing… Gonna miss this ff… But u didn’t reveal the real cause of kartik’s hatred… The reason for his mother’s death… Anyways awsm epi…
Amazing part
Wonderful ending
Waiting for ur new ff
Nice
I loved the ending!
Hey I read all chapters today only…marvellous performance (y) can u write a sequel?
THanks dear and whats a sequel??
Season 2
Ok for sure!! And thankz for the idea dear