kartik and manish reunion part-6

sorry guys the TU was not publishing the articled due to lot of hindi lines so i have to edit and it took time…i m extremely sorry for the delayEveryone is waiting outside ICU. 10 hours have been passed. Suwarna was standing outside the ICU and continuously peeping through the window. Naira saw her. Naira to suwarna: aap baith jaiye aap 10 hours se khadi hai na hi apne kuch khaya peeya hai. Suwarna: ek baar unhe hosh aa jaaye…mai baithungi bhi aur khaana bhi khaa lungi lekin tumne aur kartik ne bhi toh kuch nhi khaya na…jao tum bhi kuch khaalo aur kartik ko bhi khilado. Naira goes to kartik. Kartik was sittting very tensed. Naira: kya hua mendak….Mr. goenka ki chinta ho rhi hai….tum toh keh rhe the woh tumhe pareshan karei bina tumhara peecha nhi chodenge. Kartik: han meri sherni…mujhe poora bharosa hai….aur yeh thodi der mei prove bhi ho jaayega…but mujhe bahut guilty feeling ho rhi hai. Naira: kyun mere mendakk Kartik: mr. Goenka ne yeh sab meri jaan bachane ke liye kiya….unhone mere liye apni jaan khatre mei daal di….kash maine unki baat sun li hoti toh shayad aaj unki yeh halat nhi hoti. Naira: Hashh!! Isi bahane tumhe yeh mehsoos toh hua ki woh humesha se tumhara bhala chahte hai kartik! Woh tumhare papa hai…woh tumse bahut pyaar karte hai…itna pyaar ki tumhare liye unhone apni jaan ki bhi parvah nhi kari. Kartik: shayad tum sahi keh rhi ho naira. Naira: chalo ab maindak jaldi se kuch khaalo…warna mr. Goenka ke hosh mei aane ke baad tum mei energy hi nhi hogi….aur tum unhe pareshan nhi kar paoge. Kartik: accha ji…pehle tumhe toh pareshan karlun…..he starts ticking her. Naira puts her head on kartiks shoulder. Kartik: i hope woh jaldi se theek ho jaayenge. Naira: me too. *15 hours have passed*. Doctor comes after the checkup. Akhil: kya hua doctor…..woh theek to ho jaayenge na. Doctor: abhi bhi woh critical hai…i said jab tak unhe hosh nhi aata kuch nhi kaha jaa skta…but agar ab agle 6-7 ghante mei unhe hosh nhi aaya woh comma mei bhi jaa skte hai. Everyone shocked. Dadi cries. Akhil goes and consoles her. Kartik: Doctor can i meet him once please….i just wanna see him . Doctor: sorry no family members are allowed inside Untill the patient is critical. Kartik: doctor please try to understand its really very important. Doctor: i m sorry but i really cant help in this matter: kartik to naira: i need to do something naira…..i need to go to him. Naira: kartik i have an idea….she whispers…. papa ke room ki wondow ke paas se ek pipe connected hai…ab tum mendak toh ho chad jao uske upar aur chale jao apne mr. Goenka ke paas mai yahan sab samhal lungi. Kartik: yeh hui na sherni waali baat. Kartik hiding from everyone goes to the backside of hospital. HE saw the pipe and started climbing. At one moment his hand slipped but his strong determination to meet his father didn’t let him step back. He reached the window but as he tried to open it he realised that the window can be only opened from inside. Kartik: oh god!!! all the efforts went in vain…what to do now. Then he saw naira opening the window. He was dumbstruck. Naira: kya hua mendak tum aise kyun dekh rhe ho. Kartik: how did you came inside…doctor didn’t allowed me. Naira: yes mendak when doctor and nurse both were not there i came inside Kartik: oh buddhi ki maata yeh idea tum mujhe nhi de skti thi….mai Spiderman ki tarah pipe se chad kar aya…..mai gir jaata ya mujhe kuch ho jata toh. Naira: toh yeh sherni hai na…apne mendak ko bachane ke liye aur agar tum bhi simply andar aa jate toh kahani mei thrill kahan se aata. Kartik: accha ji…tumhe thrill ki soojh rhi hai aur yahan mr. Goenka critical hai. Naira: sorry baba even i didn’t thougjt it would be possible to come inside but then i saw that the lock of the window is inside and thought that you won’t be able to come inside then and thats why i had to come inside Kartik: accha ji..now common i need to talk to mr. Goenka you go back if anyone sees us there will be a issue. Naira: but papa is fainted how will he listen to you and how will you talk to him. kartik: this time kartik and mr. Goenka wont talk….is baar baap aur beta baat karenge…and i know we r connected by hearts my voice will reach him. Naira: arrey buddhu heart mei hi toh goli lagi hai..connection toot gya hua toh. Kartik: the connection which didn’t lost from past so many years will break now that too just because of a small bullet no naira…mr. Goenka won’t let it happen. We were always seperated because the reason was always him or me…but mr. Goenka wont bear if any third (bullet) one comes and break this connection. Naira: i m so hapoy kartik… i hope yoyr each and every emotion delivers to his heart?. Kartik: thanks naira…now you leave.

So guys what do you think will Manish get back in conscious? Will kartik be able to save manish?? Will kartik and manish reunite soon??…..Do Comment….plss tell if any improvements