Kaun Hai Woh Qaatil – AvNeil Horror SS – Chapter 17 (PRE-FINALE)

17. Disastrous death

Suryaprakash – “What are you thinking now?”

Alice – “I just wondered how could you perform Yagna in this heavy storm. The rain doesn’t seem to end.”

Suryaprakash – “Don’t worry about anything, Alice. Things will come its original place on time, despite the calamities.”

Alice thinks, “I am worried that you might get the hold of gandhak.”

Suryaprakash – “What is the recipe for your makeup?”

Alice (stumbled) – “Why? What are you going to do with that?”

Suryaprakash – “It’s none of your business, wifey.”

Alice – “I won’t give this to a rascal like you.”

Suryaprakash stares at her and threw a fire torch at her that hurt her legs and palm. She shouts.

Suryaprakash – “If you keep doing the same, I’ll burn your palm.”

Alice doesn’t reply him. He keeps the fire torch near her leg. She shouts badly.

Alice – “Please leave me…”

She cries.

Suryaprakash – “Then, give the makeup.”

Alice reveals the makeup recipe to him.

Suryaprakash smirks.

*****

Next day,

Udayveer and Nandini are in the burnt palace of Pataliputra since their house was thrown away due to the storm. Almost many people are in the palace since flood didn’t reach the palace.

Udayveer – “Day after tomorrow is a special day that comes after 120 years. The day when Neil and Avni betrayed us, joining with Swastika. The day when, gandhak appears in Agni. Definitely, Neil must have planned to acquire the gandhak as it is his lifetime dream.”

Nandini – “But, we need to know how Neil remember his past birth? Also, to acquire gandhak, Avni’s support is needed. But, how is that possible if both hate each other?”

Udayveer – “That is not our problem, Nandini. We need to give them pain first, then the death.”

Nandini – “Even these people are against Neil.”

*****

Avni – “Decision is still yours, Neil. If you want to continue our broken relationship, I have no issues.”

Neil holds Avni’s folded palms and rest his head on it and cries.

Avni also gets emotional.

Neil – “If I am okay with it, will our relationship mend again?”

Avni – “Definitely Neil.”

Neil  hugged Avni tightly and Avni reciprocated the same.

Neil – “We run to some other place and live there peacefully.”

Avni – “Yeah, no one would disturb us.”

Neil – “I want you be with me twice – Now and forever.”

Avni – “I love you, Neil.”

Neil and Avni smiled.

Next morning,

Neil wakes up with a thud that even wakes up Avni as well.

Avni – “Neil, are you okay?”

Neil – I got a bad dream. Someone who looks like me is shoving yours and my head from our body.”

Avni – “You mean, your humshakal (doppleganger) has murdered us.”

Neil – “…..in my dream.”

Avni – “I got some images of snakes in my dreams. But they didn’t harm me or you.”

Neil and Avni looked outside through the window. The rain has not stopped yet and the whole village is surrounded by water. Even it doesn’t look like a morning.

Neil – “Avni, the rain won’t stop it seems.”

Avni feels some headache.

Neil – “Are you okay, Avni?”

Avni – “Yeah, Neil. Some headache.”

Neil – “Okay, come on. I’ll massage your temples. You’ll feel comfortable.”

Neil massaged her temples. He felt something entering from her head to his head through his hands. He too feels some pain in his temples.

Slowly the pain increases.

Neil shouts in pain. Avni holds her head tightly.

Slowly the previous birth incidents displayed in their head and they remembered the births. They  have gone unconscious.

After a few hours, a thunder brought them to a conscious state. They wake up.

Neil – “Did you remember the same what I remember?”

Avni nods.

Avni – “Why should we remember all these?”

Neil – “Because the day is coming after 120 years. That is today. Violet moon, blood sun and red atmosphere….”

Avni – “Neil, how is that possible? It is raining like hell. How to conduct the Yagna and what about the arrows?”

Neil – “Oh Sh*t! The arrows are stolen because they are really powerful. Those three arrows have the potential to gain the gandhak.”

Avni – “Who could be that? I am sure definitely he is not a well wisher. Maybe the one who killed us. But who is he?”

Neil – “There is no time for discussing all this. We have gained powers as well due to our previous birth. We must search the arrows for Naaglok.”

Avni – “Neil, is it necessary to find the arrows or gandhak? We are not Naag or Naagin anymore.”

Neil – “Did you forget my promise to my parents? It is my responsibility. If I really need not to find the arrows, why should we remember all this?”

Avni – “Yeah, your words make sense. But, where? In this situation….”

Neil – “Let us go, Avni.”

Avni – “Neil… Why can’t you understand? We try to locate the arrows first. Then we can plan and go. We shouldn’t be this careless, Neil.”

Avni’s words forced Neil to stay there itself. Poor Neil and Avni don’t know what are the conspiracies and plotting going against them at present.

Someone knocked the door. Avni and Neil are surprised.

*****

Suryaprakash comes to a temple with his priest. With the help of his powers, he blow the water away from the temple and created a bubble surrounding the temple so that rain drops wouldn’t fall inside the temple.

The priest and his disciples are busy in the setting up the ritual.

Suryaprakash sought blessings from Lord Shiva.

A priest comes to him.

Priest – “Lord! Can you please bring the arrows? It’s time now.”

Suryaprakash – “Okay.”

Saying this, he goes to Naag Haveli to get the three arrows. But to his shock, the arrows are present at the place where he kept. He searched everywhere, but in vain. To his shock, Alice has escaped from his captive.

Suryaprakash called his men.

Suryaprakash – “Where is Alice?”

The guard was also shocked to see Alice missing.

The guard  defended, “There is only one way to go from here and I am guarding it. Alice didn’t come outside, Lord. She must be inside only.”

Suryaprakash – “She is not inside. She fooled you and escaped from here.”

Suryaprakash slapped him.

Suryaprakash – “Now she has taken the arrows with her.”

[FB: After revealing the ingredients, Alice has neutralized the rope’s powers through which she was tied. She acted as if she was tied. When Surya goes outside and confirmed no one’s presence, she escaped by hypnotizing the guard] 

*****

Neil opens the door and sees Alice standing there with arrows.

Neil – “You!”

Alice pushed Neil and entered inside.

Alice – “Here are the arrows, Avni and Neil. You need to aim this to…”

Avni – “Just now, we remembered our previous birth, Alice.”

Alice – “That’s great. Okay for now, I’ll keep it safe with me…”

Avni – “Meet my cousin, Neil.”

Alice – “I am Neil’s cousin…”

Neil and Avni laugh. They told her the truth in brief. Before Alice could react, the roof of the house flies away with a  sound.

The rain enters inside.

Suddenly Nandini and Udayveer jumped into the house through the roof. They both have a sword.

Everyone except Uday are shocked to see Nandini.

Udayveer – “She is alive, but Neil won’t be alive.”

Udayveer gives one sword to Neil.

Udayveer – “You’re going to get your punishment, Neil.”

Neil – “Uday, listen here. I…”

Udayveer’s moves the sword to chop his head, but Neil kneels down to escape.

Udayveer – “Action speaks more than words. You deserve the death, Neil.”

They both get into the dangerous fight. While Nandini stares at Avni. Avni decides to save Neil and she too take one sword (she had sword already)  and defends Neil and she injures Udayveer. It fuelled Udayveer and he even injured Avni.

Neil was angered by the same and injures Udayveer vigorously. Udayveer leaves the hold of sword.

Unnoticed, Alice jumps into the water.

Nandini comes to Udayveer and defended him.

Nandini – “Alice told me that you (look at Avni) has killed my family. Its okay. But, why did you kill Udayveer’s parents?”

Saying this, Nandini slashes Avni and Neil’s legs with the sword.

Udayveer – “Not only my parents, all the civilians are died.”

Nandini – “We knew that you mixed the makeup in the flood water and those who swam and drunk the water by intention or with no intention died.”

Neil and Avni are screaming in pain as Nandini bruised their legs.  Nandini stabbed Neil stomach with a knife. Neil shouts.

Alice swam and found the roof floating on the water.

Alice thinks, “I am not letting you fight anymore. Otherwise, Surya uses this as a strength and may kill you again. I need all your help to kill him. So, I have to stop the fight.”

Alice used her power and make the roof sit on the house itself.

Now, the room was totally dim (since the clouds are dark). No one could see anyone inside the room.  The conversation was also stopped.

Alice entered inside slowly and removed all the swords from them silently without anyone’s notice and put in the water. After seeing Neil’s wound, she decide to bring medicine for that. She come sout.

Since her leg slipped, she fall into the water with a sound.

Suddenly, two stabbing (with a sword) sound is heard, but no one shouts.

Udayveer shivers and his hands search for Nandini.

“Ahhhhhhhhhhhh….”

Nandini shouts from the bottom of the throat. Udayveer was startled. He could not see anything in the dim light. He moved here and there. A hand comes to punch his face and he hold the hand tightly and he take the guy outside the house to see his face.

It was Neil. He smirked devilishly.

Udayveer cannot control his anger and beat him black and blue. Neil tried to defend, but  Udayveer’s wrath didn’t let that. Blood oozes out from his mouth.

Udayveer – “If something happens to Nandini, I’ll be your killer in each and every birth.”

Neil – “I shoved her legs… Then, I cut her head. What will you do?”

Before Udayveer could react, Neil takes the chance and hold the control of him. He pushed Udayveer into the water, Neil bends Uday’s throat and neck bones first.

Then, with his thigh, he kicks his back and breaks the spinal cord.

Udayveer leaves his last breathe in water.

Neil comes out of the water and entered inside. He blows the roof up and break the four sided walls.

The rain water falls on him. He looked at the floor.

Three dead bodies are lying on the floor.

One is Neil. He is stabbed in his forehead so that he won’t shout.

Second is Avni. She  was also murdered in the same way.

Third id Nandini. Her right leg and her head were chopped off.

Seeing this, he smirked.

He becomes Suryaprakash.

Alice sees everything and shouts.

Suryaprakash – “Sweetheart….”

Alice – “You killed everyone. Almost everyone…”

Suryaprakash – “Yeah, I killed the whole kingdom. I am the one who mixed the poison in the water.”

Alice – “But, I won’t let you achieve this time, Surya.”

Alice takes the arrows from her back.

She breaks all the arrows by bending it and threw it in the river within 5 seconds.

Alice smirked.

Suryaprakash shouted, “No….”

*****

PRESENT

Angel – “Alice spoiled Surya’s plan by this act. Surya becomes crazy and almost lost himself. Using this chance, Alice killed him with the help of thunders.  Then, she herself committed suicide.”

It has been five hours since Neil and Avni are hearing the truth from angel. The truth has horrified them a lot.

Neil – “Did Uday and Nandini get any punishment for not fulfilling the promise?”

Angel – “Yes, they were cursed by me that they should not live as husband and wife until they complete the revenge. Only one time, there is a leisure. That leisure is also used for their revenge. They were also cursed that they won’t born as humans and suffer physically by their external changes. So, they were born as Demi Jinn and monster and presently, they are Daavansh and Daivik.”

Avni – “Only if they kill us, they could become normal.”

Angel – “No, Neil got his punishment when Uday stabbed him. Avni is not at fault. But the main enemy is Suryaprakash. Only if they kill him, it would be cancelled.

Neil – “We got answers for almost everything except Suryaprakash’s intention. But, what is the mystery of Manyata aunty? She died six years after our death, but she had faked her death.”

Angel – “Manyata is Alice’s next birth.”

Avni – “Manyata aunty is Alice? Nayantara is not Alice but her mother is Alice. Wait, Manyata aunty asked a wish from you. You gave her. What did you expect from her in return?”

Angel – “I asked one of her daughters to sacrifice her human needs and become a permanent Naagin. Manyata denied. So, she suffered a lot.”

Angel – “Manyata thought everything had ended with Surya’s death. She decided to start a new life in the new birth. After 200 years, she was born in the earth. But, she never knew that everything would start once again. She loved Keshav sincerely and even escaped from Naaglok. But, Suryaprakash’s reincarnation ‘SANJEEV’ caught her up at the right place.”

Flashback – 1984

(Few minutes after Nayantara’s death)

Yuvraj’s lookalike turns into his original form

He goes to the unconscious Manyata and made her wake up.

Manyata – “Sanjeev!”

Sanjeev – “Yeah, sweetheart. I’m here for you.”

Manyata pushed him aside. 

Manyata – “Don’t you dare!”

Sanjeev was an obsessive lover of Manyata during teenage. Sanjeev was planning to keep Manyata under his control so he put this obsession drama  for her but Manyata falls for a Keshav, a human being and disowned her Naaglok for her soulmate.

Sanjeev has remembered everything when he was at teenage.

Sanjeev knew Manyata is not an important one in his life or his mission but Manyata knew something that Samrat never knew. He came to know this with the help of Angel. To get the information from Manyata, he is doing the drama. Plus, he had the revenge to satisfy with Manyata.

Remembering all this, he raised his hand to slap Sanjeev. But Manyata pushed him aside and runs.

She looks at her husband Keshav in a dead condition and her daughter was raped by Sanjeev.

Manyata – “Why did you do all this? What is your problem?”

Manyata knelt down and cries. Sanjeev comes near him and circled her waist. Manyata defended by kicking his manhood. 

She took a flower vase and attacked him with that. But Samrat turned into a Ichhadari Naag and controlled Manyata. 

He locked Manyata at the basement by drugging her so that she won’t shout.

He brings Neil’s dead body from the burnt area (Neil’s body wont burn since since he is resistive towards fire.) and he buried it under the basement of the cottage. 

Then, Sanjeev shape-shift into Manyata and complains police against Neil that Neil had killed  Keshav, Ananya, Mayank, Tara and raped Nayantara. Since eye witnesses are against Neil, everyone thought Neil would be the culprit. Since the police could not find Neil, they closed the case.

After closing the case, Sanjeev tortured Manyata to tell him the secret that she only had known. Manyata refused.  Manyata get into Sanjeev’s nerves

He tortured Manyata for five years. But Manyata remained adamant to not reval that. Manyata know the secret but she never knew the effects or consequences of the secret. But, it has to do something against Sanjeev. 

Then, he decided to hatch up a new plan. That is, To make Manyata remember the previous birth. Sanjeev thought that, for her love, she would reveal the truth.

But it has actually back fired. Manyata not only came to know her past birth but also what is the effect of the secret. She came to know that the secret result in the ultimate destruction of Sanjeev so she write the secret in code words in her diary and hide it under the mud. 

Many days passed, Manyata didn’t utter the secret even after mnay tortures. Manyata just threatened him that he would mercilessly. She shouts it constantly.

Finally he killed her mercilessly by burning her alive.

FB ends.

Avni – “It means Manyata aunty didn’t reborn.”

Angel – “No. Her sins are nullified by her death itself. Even she reborn again, she has nothing to do with your story.”

Avni – “Thankyou for your help. What about the secret code?”

Angel – “I can’t reveal that. Tomorrow is a special day. The day that is coming after 120 years. That is gandhak. You must secure that this time and also complete your revenge.”

Neil – “We need to team up with Roshni, Aman and Nayntara as well against Sanjeev.”

Neil and Avni looked at each other.

To be continued…

Author’s note:
Hello readers, I hope you all enjoyed the Chapter. Almost all the mysteries are cleared for you. The only pending thing is, Sanjeev’s confession and reason and Sanjeev’s punishment.

Next Chapter is the final Chapter of the story. Most likely to be released on the Weekends. It is likely to be the longest chapter ever.