The episode starts with Srishty noticing BG crying from behind, she wonders, ” Why is Dadu crying??” she calls for BG, ” Dadu??” Bg is shocked and hides Bulbul’s photo under a nearby cushion. Srishty approaches Bg, ” Will you flood the whole Ganga river, what happened?? Why are you crying soo much??” Bg lies, ” YOU need glasses like me!! I’m not crying!!” Srishty says, ” Along with being a card game cheater, you’re also a BIG LIAR!!” BG shouts, ” I’m not a Cheater or LIAR!!” Srishty says, ” Fine, you won’t tell me the truth then I will find it out myself!!” Srishty grabs the pic under the cushion, Bg screams ” Srishty!! Give me my pic back!!” Srishty is curious to know, ” Now milk and water will be separated!!” she turns the photo over getting shocked to know it is BULBUL’s pic.
In Luthra Mansion
Rishabh opens his wardrobe wondering what he should wear, A FB is shown, Rishabh asks Preeta out of curiosity, ” What is your favourite colour Preeta Ji??” Preeta shyly replies ” Rishabh Ji, my fav colour is WHITE” FB ends. Rishabh selects the WHITE BLAZER and goes to change. Rishabh comes out of his restroom thinking deeply to himself, ” Why am I wearing Preeta Ji’s favourite colour?? I think day and night only of Preeta Ji, even after knowing I’m married to Sherlyn and she is married to Karan, DO I STILL HAVE FEELINGS FOR…” Rishabh stops and convinces himself, ” NO RISHABH!! She is Karan’s wife and will never be yours, I have to convince Karan to give Preeta Ji the full rights as DIL of this family and wife of Karan, I must speak with Karan today itself!!” Rishabh is about to go meet Karan but is stopped by Kareena, ” Where are you going in such tension Rishabh??” Rishabh says, ” I was gping to meet Karan in his room” Kareena informs him, ” Karan had to leave early for cricket training” Rishabh gets shocked, ” What?? This can’t be possible, Karan has never left without seeing me!!” Kareena tries to calm him down, ” Come on Rishabh, it must have been something very Important!!” Rishabh exclaims, ” What is all this happening bua? Karan is getting harder to handle day by day, From childhood Karan always had these small emotional problems but he was never like THIS!!” Kareena reassures him, ” Don’t worry Rishabh soon everything will become right, you know that your Bua ia never wrong right?? Rishabh nods agreeingly, ” Then trust me that our Karan’s happiness will return soon!!” Rishabh hugs Kareena saying, ” Thank you Bua, I don’t know what we would do without you!!” Kareena hugs him back thinking, ” Yes Rishabh, happiness will return in our Karan’s life when I bring MAYRAA into his life!!” Kareena insists him, ” Come Rishabh and join us for breakfast'” Rishabh declines, ” No Bua, you guys enjoy your breakfast and I have lots of business deals to crack!!” Kareena now orders him, ” Rishabh, if you don’t eat well, how will you work well?? You must join us for breakfasr!!” Rishabh grudgingly agrees.
MYRAA is serving food to everyone, Kareena praises her, ” Everyone today’s food is specially made by Myra!!” Rishabh recalls his fight with Sherlyn and asks Kareena, “Bua where is Sherlyn??” Kareena teases him, ” WHY?? Can’t you live a few hours without Sherlyn??” Rishabh tries to speak, “Actually bua last night…” Kareena doesn’t let him speak, ” So you don’t get enough with time with Sherlyn at night??” Luthra dadi laughs saying, ” Kareena don’t tease my Rishabh.” Kareena calls for Rakhi ” Look Bhabhi, The same Rishabh who was rethinking to marry Sherlyn is now only thinking of Sherlyn!!” Rakhi comes saying, ” I’m proud that at least my Rishabh remembers his values and has concern for his wife, some people (Karan) here forgot all my teachings, EVERYTHING!!” Rakhi tries to leave but she is stopped by Myraa, ” Auntie, please eat something!!” Rakhi politely refuses, ” I’m not hungry but thank you for asking” and leaves. Rishabh takes the plate from MAYRAA’s hand and goes after Rakhi.
Srishty realises, ” This is that girl who was hugging PRAGYA di in the other photo right??” BG breaks down and starts crying again, ” This is not just any girl next to Pragya, but Pragya’s sister, your and Preeta’s sister !!” Srishty doesn’t believe her, ” Tell me this is not true, She must be Pragya di’s old friend right??” Bg sobs ” She was my Bulbul, she is your second older sister after Pragya!!” Srishty exclaims, “Bulbul?? why didn’t you tell me earlier??” Bg says, ” I wanted you to remain happy!!” Srishty excitedly asks, ” Where is she?? I want to meet my Bulbul di, I will ask her why she didn’t meet her younger sisters for so long!!” BG cries even more, ” Its not possible, she left us 4 yrs ago!!” Srishty is taken back by BG’s words. To be continued…
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This update is wonderful. If you are writing the story from your imagination, then you won’t be stuck with all the useless dragging going on the serial. I suggest you to make your plot and add your fav scenes from the serial in it. I’m really glad that your ff is on rishta. Hoping to read your next part soon. Your writing skills are excellent.
I feel honoured hearing you say I have great writing skills Shelly, Thank you very much SHelly!! And yes!! The ff is coming from my imagination but I will include little of the ongoing track in the original one to keep the story going. I’m glad that you’re one of the fans of RishTa, not Preeran!! Keep reading and commenting!!
though rishab has feelings for preeta I liked how he is controlling his emotions as he knows what’s wrong n right.oh it’s kareena who is the main problem creater. when all rishab realize it?oh its shocking that shrishti didn’t know that she has a sister called bulbul.poor beeji is crying
Jasmine Rahul!! That’s just the way Rishabh is!! FOR a little spoiler, at the start, Karan and Preeta will be together as a couple, but eventually will be Rishabh and Preeta, and if you remember, Srishti never had the knowledge of Bulbul but only of Pragya!! I hope you continue reading and commenting!! Because this gives me the reason to keep writing as a writer!!
Jasmine Rahul!! That’s just the way Rishabh is!! FOR a little spoiler, at the start, Karan and Preeta will be together as a couple, but eventually will be Rishabh and Preeta, and if you remember, Srishti never had the knowledge of Bulbul but only of Pragya!! I hope you continue reading and commenting!! Because this gives me the reason to keep writing as a writer!!!
I feel honoured hearing you say I have great writing skills Shelly, Thank you very much SHelly!! And yes!! The ff is coming from my imagination but I will include little of the ongoing track in the original one to keep the story going. I’m glad that you’re one of the fans of RishTa, not Preeran!! Keep reading and commenting!!!!
who is the first person in your banner?can’t see the banner properly.please put it in chapter also
That is Bulbu, I was her photo before she jumped off from the cliff and died.
Hey Steeva,
Like Shelly, I would also say, great imagination, it’s a great progress from first episode.
I don’t know how to really give suggestions, since you already have good imagination,
But yeah certainly, since your ff is based on PREETA and KUNDALI BHAGYA, I remember in the beginning when Preeta got heart ballons from a seller who told it will reach her life partner, one fled to Karan, the second to Rishabh.
So maybe according to Kundali, let Preeta be first with Karan, since I really hate Karan from the last few days, you can continue that Karan accepts Preeta and they have a happy married life, while Rishabh is glad that Preeta is happy. After some time, Karan reveals all to be his plan and divorces Preeta when she finds herself PREGNANT with his child. And Karan marries someone else.
While on the other side Sherlyn dumps her child with Rishabh without letting him know it is not his child cheats him and takes off his property and leaves.
So the whole family forces Preeta to be together, for the sake of 2 children, Rishabh who is always in love with Preeta agrees but waits for her answer, she accepts thinking ofthe well-being of her child, but after marriage, when Preeta ffalls for Rishabh and is abt to confess her feelings, KARAN returns demanding for Preeta and his child to return to him, where the BHAGYA OF KUNDALI comes into play.
It is just a wild imagination of mine to give you ideas, you think about it, but take your story only where you want it go
HALLO Aleyamma!! Sorry I couldn’t reply earlier because of writing the next episode!! I am a very slow writer and take my own time before publishing something, but I noticed that your ffs are reaching 30 episodes already and your fans just want more and more!! So I have to speed up as well because I’m loving the appreciation I’m getting doing this ff!! How do you read my mind so well?? The Preeta pregnant with Karan and Rishabh accepts her and all is my IDEA!! You’re already 100 steps of this ff!! Just before Preeta unites with that Karan, I will make sure Karan is returned all the ‘happiness’ he has given her!! That too in Interest!!
Actually even I’m a slow writer,
And I did not read your mind, I just thought it will be a fine suggestion for you, but seems you already have great ideas in you,
So you don’t really need any help from me!!!
Have a great progress ahead
You are not a SLOW WRITER ALEYAMMA!! You post like 2 episodes a day or something!! You’ve even started your second ff on YJHJK!! I’ve done like 1 episode each week!! And no one even likes it!! I pretty much do it for self-satisfaction. Anyways, good luck doing 2 FFS!! You found yourself lots of work and have almost finished this ff which is doing immensely well.
Thank you Aleyamma for your encouraging words!! But neither am I Jealous because like you know, I have this problem of approaching the opponent wrongly!! I just realised that my comment was sounding Jealous and quite sarcastic? ? ? ? But in reality, I’m truly VERY HAPPY FOR YOU!! And I’m not Disappointed!! as I even said earlier that I do this FF for Self-Satisfaction, not for fans!! But I just added that And I have taken a quick look at Noornainny’s ff on Twinj, she has got one comment in her newest! She even said she was disappointed with gaining fewer fans and viewers in the PAST!! Also, her grammar is not great compared to yours!! And she might just get views because the show she chose was such a big success already, which is TASHAN EH ISHQ!! What your doing is something very different and risky, KKB!! one of the worst shows out there, but you have transformed it to a completely new thing in just 30 writings!! I don’t intend to offend Noornainny, but yeah!! You’re simply just the BEST ALEYAMMA in my eyes!! (Even if you don’t admit it!!) I learn from you each time. And YES I will continue MINE NO MATTER WHAT!! I will keep going and going.. My Journey has only just begun with my first ff!! Please Don’t think I’m so immature that I will get ANGRY like this!! coz I’m really not like this!! And the only reason why I wanted Kiara’s name changed AGAIN name ‘Rakhi’ was that, there was a girl, ‘Rakhi’, she gave me so much pain I can never forget!! ? ?… Well, it’s not imp anymore, Keep writing and KEEP SMILING!! Imagine if Akitus made a FF!! What do you think????
Jealous huh!!!
Just kidding!!! Don’t get angry for that!!!
Actually in real life I’m a very slow person, but maybe for story writing I’m kindda fast because my mind keeps moving around with crazy stuff!!!
And good to see that you have noticed my other ff too, well for that, I owe all the credits to Mira106, I wasn’t even watching the show, but got so amazed by her ff, that i started watching and even started a ff on it too.
One more thing, you shouldn’t get disappointed with not getting likes and comments, in the beginning, the 1st episode I made, I hade 1 like and 2 dislikes, while in some episdes I had more dislikes than likes then slowly my ff got a little more appreciated, and even the likes rose up for earlier episodes.
It is true that even my heart leaps seeing the number of likes and dislikes, but I never stop writing all cause of that, even the comments never affect me. Because I write, coz I LOVE WRITING, and I’ve heard that writers always have to wait patiently for their efforts to bear fruits.
And don’t think my ff is a great sucess, I think the highest no of likes i’ve received would be around 15, but if you see Morusya, Luthfa and Noornainny’s ff, they have managed to captivate their readers such that their likes have gone above 30. But however, I’m happy with whatever I receive.
And you too should not get disappointed and keep writing.
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Bravo, your idea is useful