Hellooo…………everyone I am new here first let me introduce myself I am Namita Gaurakar…..i am studying in 10th (ICSE syllabus!), I am from Mysore, Karnataka. I think this is enough. So guys I just thought of writing an ff so choose some of the characters which rocked the daily soap and now the daily soaps are showing them negative or creating problems in their life which we are not able to see kind off!!!!!! Or even the daily soap might have ended……….
I know I took most of your time here only so let us start the story but one request before that please tell me honestly if you like it and if you do not like it also in the comments section………i would be happy to know…..and one more thing please give your intro to me in your comments I am new here so you can also tell me if you are writing any ff’s I would be glad to know them……so lets start……..here we go………
So let me start with a quote…………
The best and the most beautiful things are not to be seen it is to be felt with heart one such thing is LOVE and this ff is based all on that and there might be few twists and turns to prove there love……i know I am taking too much of your time please forgive me for sure now is the start……….
It was a perfect lazy day, the crispy blue sky with the sun on it with a bright full face to disturb everyone on such a morning where everyone would love to fall asleep for some more time, but this bright full face trying to wake us up on such a beautiful morning……….
The Blue Bells (Mansion name………)
It was a huge extra-fluffy bed, with millions of pillows and a huge down feather comforter. Wait we can see two slim figures sleeping in between the millions of pillows. One of them woke up we can only see the smile on her face when she sits up, she turns towards the other figure and says “wake up………” She shouted, “Before I finish my daily work…………” the slimy figure did thumbs up and went still more underneath the body coverer and then the first one moved her hand to the attached cupboard next to her bed and searched for something, and took out something, waittttttt……it was a dairy, she went to the window nearby and pushed the glass lid aside, sat on the lining and she started her writing……
Dairy,
Good morning, my dear dairy I know I woke you up early so, to compensate listen to my lines now!
The pearly rays of the sun played on my eye lids and woke me up to a fine lazy morning….it took me only a few steps towards the window pane to see and feel the difference….. The air smelled earthy and the dry and drooping plants were now boasting of their new found youth it was coming of the age; but yes in reverse order…..
Adjoining the plants were their new neighbours, slick, curly, twirling bougainvillea and weeds. They almost looked up to the tall trees, wishing to grow as tall someday. They gyrated with the smooth wind. Letting their Leafs dance to its tune like Cinderella with her prince charming…..
So, today would be a hectic day I hope……you already know why because I will have to take this stupid to shopping and you know she would try all the dresses there and would not buy even one……next is my favourite part we would go for a walk in the park and you know what I am going to carry you there……so I will continue next in the park with the fresh air…..
And she closed her dairy and went to bed and pulled the cover over the slim figure on the bed but to her astonishment she only found pillows sleeping there on the luxurious blue bed……..she turned around to see where the other one went but wait she stepped on something………
She hit her forehead saying “how can you forget your sister is a prank master….” she saw down to see a thin wire under her leg, “what next?
Should I take my leg out……i think I have to….” and she moved her leg out of that wire. She waited for few seconds for the outcome but to her astonishment nothing happened to her, she let out a sigh of relief just then something hit right on her face she shouted “Ishaani…………..” and she groaned at it and moved her hand across her face to remove the thing which stuck to her face, she held out a plate from her face and removed the chocolate cake which was stuck to her face, now we can see a smile at the end of her lips, next her glittering eyes are shown then she shouts “Badmaash……I am coming for you……….” and she runs out of the blue coloured room.
She comes to the corridor and hears someone giggling, she slowly moves and hides behind a pillar nearby and waits for the figure Ishaani to come out………the slimy figure comes out,”where did she go after coming….” she slightly slaps herself and turns find another figure staring her with so much anger she suddenly held her ears and started doing sit-ups saying “Sorry 1, sorry 2, sorry 3, sorry 4, sorry 6….” suddenly she received a tight slap on her shoulder, and the figure made her get up and before she could speak anything……..
Ishaani said with enthusiasm “come let’s get ready Kushi……….” Kushi shot back “I did not forgive you yet!….” But you stopped me from that sit up’s so….” “So……..I just stopped you because you missed 5 in it…..” “I am sorry……..please….” “No….not this time…….” “Please….last times forgive me…..” “This was your sentence last time…..”
Ishaani ran from there and Kushi behind her……”I will catch you…..” “Never…………..” Kushi was about to catch her but Ishaani ran again……..Ishaani now came to an end and was stuck….Kushi “I told you……” Ishaani gulped down her saliva and an idea stuck her mind……..Ishaani took the vase which was next to her……….Kushi “No……..Ishaani please…….” Ishaani “Then move away…….” Kushi “Come on yaar for such a small fight you are going to throw that last thing which Ishita brought for us……” Ishaani suddenly kept it down and made her face sad with the entire smile on her face fading away………”I miss her so much……” Kushi “Me too………” and went and hugged her and slightly rubbed her face across Ishaani’s face……..
Ishaani “haa yaar……wait….” and pushed Kushi away and touched her face……”You………….” Kushi ran from there telling “what meee………?” Ishaani ran behind her after saying “Rubbed all the cake on your face to my face……….” both ran around all corridors and at last Ishaani caught Kushi and both laughed and hugged each other for some time and went to get ready for the shopping…………
Precap: shopping and introduction of other characters
So, how was the episode guys, hope so it was better than worst………and DO NOT FORGET TO GIVE YOUR INTRODUCTION TO ME………….so good night for now and see you tomorrow………….and do not forget to comment guys………….
36 Comments
Good start.please continue. Waiting for ur next episode. I am Akshaya same 10 th std writing my board exams. I am writing I am Alive because of u with ishra and arshi and ishra story of my life.
If was very nice……and good to see all the superb duperb charcters in one ff…… all the best for your ff and I am Sharon shrivatsav and I write the journey together ff……???
Nice episode and I am Ayushi from hassan, karnataka so we both belong to same place…karnataka….. and all the best for this ff…???
Hiii! Namitha call I call you namii (if you prefer)….. and the episode was great…..and introduce all the characters soon….and ishaani is so naughty……and what happened to ishita…..and myself Neha from Delhi…..
welcome here dude
Awesome. plzz continue. I am varsha.And from Mumbai. I write an ff yeh hai #yaariyan #aashiqui for ishra ishveer and Manan.
I am in 10th but cbse
hi
u r studying 10th. i am sorry to say this but it is the time to concentrate on your studies not serials
bindu
Bindu di………thanks for ur concern but I am not watching serials as TV is baned in my home…..but I was writing my own story and felt of posting it here……sorry if u felt bad….???
just chill studies ke sath sath bhi hum ye kar sakte he wats a big deal
Hi guys even I want to know for what shakthi didnot attend the wedding of radhikas bro. Pls tell me whether arjun was present there. If it is yes why not shakthi. Pls tell me that you are all trending for matsh 2 or not
Even i don’t know TK KAVIPARIYA and there might be some tension going on between them so he did not attend….hope everything gets well….
Its good keep on writing……:-).hi this is Shreya completed 1st pu ( 11 tha std) heading towards 2nd pu and I m from Hubli ……. I liked your writing … if I m not your exams are near rgt .AL the best dear….. 🙂
A very good start indeed. I am Neethu I write the ff Love is the way!
Its really nice. And i must say, you hav good english skills. Pls tell me dear who were ardika????
Iam pinky. Elder than you so studying 12th.
at the same time read well for exams. If time permits read my ff too.
Its name is ” ISHQ LOVE KAADHAL…..”
Pinky ardika is from manmarziyaan which was airing on star-plus but stopped and the lead was arjun and radika so ardika…..
Nice episode namita.l am from Kerala.me also in 10 std but cbse.
Hi guys i am hanya from hyderabad . Actually i am posting a comment for the first time .And namita i loved your intro of the characters . I felt that i was reading a poem written by a great poet. It’s awesome. Plz continue.
Its Nice dr ……….Good start…………..I love all these pairs soooooooooo much……………..Hy Namitha,I am Reshma from Kerala. I am a first year degree student. I think now its exam times for u……So All The Best dr………..
Hi namita. I am Pooja from tamilnadu.I am going to finish 12 th std and at present writing public exams. Loved ur intro and also u have good command over English. Keep rocking.
Hi namitha how r u . I felt very happy that sakthi loves radz . But what is their pblm why they both are not in touch. I need this clarification and I hope everything is well btwn shadika. All fans pls try to contact shakthi in a facebookand ask him the reason for not attending the wedlock of radz bro. Pls inform me tomorrow. I am restless. Namitha pls u also make an attempt
Hi Namita it’s really a good start. 10th standard is really important turn in our life. So concentrate on writing your ff after the board exams, if they are not too far. All d best for your exams as well as your ff. Don’t mind its just a suggestion. By the way I write “Diwana dil” ff. My name is “abhi”
It’s really. Nice dear,,,,,awesome reading like a English novel,,,,and I am shruti,,,,finished 11std and going to 12th,,,,
Hi Namita, this is radhika. I liked your ff. I’m writting ‘MATSH forever’ ff.
Wish i u all the best for your exams…
I would like if you read my ff also n comment… ???
Can u plz provide link for ur ff…
Hi, I am jothi from Chennai. You can call me JO. Currently I am working in an MNC. I didn’t watch those stupid serials, but I love ff. You writing skill was awesome. You define the room very excellent, sun rise extra ordinary. Keep it up. And also All the best for ur exams.Waiting for ur next episode sis…..
U r too good Namita at ur age…English literature knowledge was too cool…itz lyk a poetry…keep going
M Rosie n wrote on mmz…new dimension ff…
Best of luck for ur future
Thank you each and everyone who did comment and sorry I am replying to everyone in one come to itself as I have to prepare for my boards and do not have time….but I will reply to everyone in the next episode and to this comments also there will be reply in next episode….and thanks again for the comments guys……
Hi Namita dear…I am Driti, i am studying in class 12 …when i am free i read ff and I love arshi very much..Even i have my board exam sorry if i don’t reply next onwards…I am saying you all these just too make you feel happy and tell you that don’t feel lonely because even i stay in Mysore…study well and concentrate on your exams sweet heart,once your exam is over you are free till june keep writing till the…don’t feel i am scolding you, its just my care and concern for you sweet heart..
If you feel to talk to me, anytime you can contact me through Whats app..I’ll give you my number 8277047528…
good ff namitha .continue it.
Hey namitha ….. grt FF
ALL D BEST 4 xams
I am in 12th … i am also having xams..
Sorry 4 d late cmnt
Hii namita…first of all sorry for late comment…and your intro is nice..and let me introduce myself…I am niharika.you can call me neha…I am writing my 12th board exam..therefore I am not able to comment daily….so please pardon me..but I assure you whenever I get time I will read your ff…so best of luck for your ff and for exams too..and 1 more thing…l am from Delhi….
hey your ff is too good…. please tell me that naughty girl was my ishani na??? actually I’m bit confused
Hi namitha dr . Really u r doing a great job. I wish u a gud luck for ur exams
good starting
Good start namita!? loved it!?
And let me introduce my self too I’m also a class 10 student( CBSE ) from Hyderabad 🙂
All the best for your exams namita??
Do well?