Hlo guys trisha here ! I am back with another OS “khamoshiyan”
Thankyou so much guys for all the support nd love u people are giving me . I just hope this should continue for days months years nd forever ?
Nd a warm welcome to ashnita ,Jessica and khamoshi !
U guys did a great start it would be pleasure to read ur stories , wish u all the best ?.
********KHAMOSHIYAN******
“Hey Kabeer glad you came at her wedding ” some random friend said !
“Yeah” he replied trying to face the opposite side hiding his moist eyes.
He stepped ahead casually…. it wasn’t that “casual” instead that was like keeping rocks on ur heart ; throwing ur feelings in a pit and then moving forward like u don’t care at all !
Trying to escape the situation ;
Kabeer- hey krish !
Krish – bhai I told I na I will come nd see !
Kabeer- I just came for congratulating her !
Krish- bhai I don’t know till when u both will be like this !
Kabeer- its of no use anyways lemme go !
He stepped upwards nd saw Isha on the way ; asked her about her room nd she did as asked ! Wow this seems so formal right her wedding ; his arrival ; the name plate “Saachi weds veer” and he was going to congratulate her ; so the answer ; both of them knew that ; the silence that prevailed always said everything they couldn’t tell !
Kabeers POV ;
I Don’t know what should I had done at tht time ; I should have cried my heart out or acted like I am Happy but I couldn’t so at last it got neutral ; I was like that whatever was happening didn’t affected me ; I knew well I loved her she too loved me ; then this wedding ? Of course it’s been 4 years that worst day of our lives ; after that she had to agree upon her mother’s wish ! How could have I ? At that time I just said myself “Kabeer pls don’t stop just congratulate her nd leave from here asap ; no one was ever meant to be with u ”
I stepped ; just a row nd 5 more steps nd I will be outside her room ….!
And in few more seconds I reached there ; I could listen the laughing giggling voice of her makeup artists ; but something was missing that day ; at that moment out of all the giggling sounds her laughter ! Yes ! Tht was the thing I missed at that moment ; there was a lot of hustle bustle outside but only my heart knew; only I suffered the silence between both of us in the past 4 years ; then what Kabeer everything could be sorted right ? No ! That wasn’t that easy …. how could we forgot what happened before few years then Black day of our life.
Before I could think much a girl asked me ” bhaiya u here this is brides room ”
I replied calmly “yes I wanted to meet her ; can I get few moments pls ”
She was a bit naughty nd little so she acted thinking for a while nd asked ” but who r u ; her groom ?”
I wished I should ! But I had to say “no just her mentor ”
“Oh that dr kabeer; oops nothing u can go I will call the makeup girls outside ”
In next few seconds she did as she said ; nd I stepped inwards the room !
Krish did some fun nd closed the door from outside nd placed “do not disturb” symbol ; I got to know this later even Isha prgya were involved in this !
I stepped forward ; step one ; step two and that irritating silence again prevailed ; tht silence screamed so loud I couldn’t stop myself from thinking abt the things happened ! About the day which made us go to two whole different paths from a common tract !
But hey ! Wait a second I could see an angelic figure standing in front of me facing opposite side ; towards the mirror ! She was in a dark mehroon lehanga nd golden mix blouse with heavy jewellery sets ; a perfect bridal look nd of course the darkest colours of mehandi; but that wasn’t for me ; she was going to be of someone but that someone was not me ; I wanted to say a lot abt her but again my lips wore a zip on them nd silence won once again ! I …. I just hate this silence and love at the same time ; that khamoshiyan between us said everything that we couldn’t say from last four years …; no one would believe I wanted to hug her instantly ; adorn her with kisses with my love leaving all the hatred behind but all I could do was just spit out her beautiful name ….”s..sa….saaachi”
I could see my moist eyes nd her tears in the mirror !
Saachis POV;
Why Kabeer why ? My every bit my every tear was asking this from you at that instant ! You lied cheated you broke my trust ! Everyone told me to listen to you once to clear the misunderstandings but what was left to clear between us when I saw u myself with…. yuk…. I want to hate you once again with all my might thinking about that incident but what are these hormones these genes this stupid equation of brain I never leave behind to fall in love with you all the way again ! I was torn into pieces …. a million pieces tht day….! And what you did just kept breaking my trust again and again … I got broken the every second when u saw me doing rituals for someone else …and you stood still Kabeer ; I never thought this from you ; nd what now ? You came here again to broke my promise ! It would be lacking to gain the efforts again to reach to the mandap nd trust me if u r here to solve the matter then I am sorry u could have done that four years ago not now. !
She thought nd Tears fall from her eyes …. still she was a strong soul nd that’s why gyhered all the courage she had nd said “tum yhan ”
She turned towards him !
Kabeer-(with moist eyes) I …. I wanted to ….con…congrats.
Saachi- wow ur …ur highness ( a tear dropped off her eyes) …my…my pleasure !
I was mad who was expecting much from u ; u must be happy right ..! (She was gasping) very happy !
BG played –
”
Khamoshiyan aawaaz hain
Tum sun’ne to aao kabhi
Chhukar tumhe khill jaayengi
Ghar inko bulaao kabhi
Beqarar hain baat karne ko
Kehne do inko zaraa..
Khamoshiyan.. teri meri khamoshiyan
Khamoshiyan.. lipti hui khamoshiyan
Kya uss gali mein kabhi tera jaana hua
Jahaan se zamaane ko guzre zamaana hua
Mera samay toh wahin pe hai thehra hua
Bataaun tumhe kya mere sath kya kya hua
Khamoshiyan ek saaz hai
Tum dhun koi laao zaraa
Khamoshiyan alfaaz hain
Kabhi aa gunguna le zara
Beqarar hain baat karne ko
Kehne do inko zaraa.. haa..
Khamoshiyan.. teri meri khamoshiyan
Khamoshiyan.. lipti hui khamoshiyan ”
Kabeer- I never knew u thought this abt me !
Saachi-bcz..bcz ….this is the only truth. !
He couldn’t control his feelings anymore ….he holded her from her shoulders with his tight pair of hands nd jerked little towards himself…!
Kabeer (in a frustrating nd Loud noice)- this is just ….just a fke lie! U ….U will never know how much difficult it was for me to see u putting haldi of some others name applying mehandi for someone else !
Saachi- oh yeah like I was much happy doing all these right ! U know what u r a cheater u broke my trust !
Kabeer- whtever now go nd complete the nuptial rounds right. !
Listening to this she placed a tight slap on his left cheek …. whose sound almost shivered the whole room !
His eyes were closed for a moment nd immediately landed him in the flashback !
FLASHBACK
All the interns were on a Shimla trip where they all enjoyed four days nd fifth day was for their own ! Kanchi were a couple by then ; a newly made couple so both of them went out for some sight seeing Nd remaining students went according to their wish . That was Saturday evening !
Kanchi in car !
Kabeer- I hope you aren’t hungry !
Saachi- yes no I never eat I got charged right !
Kabeer- tell straight on my face u r hungry !
Saachi- u know what kabeer who idiot will not be hungry after a constant drive of five hours !
Kabeer- fine sweet heart !
They stopped at some dhaba.
Kabeer- ok schi u order.
Saachi- yes (to waiter) ahm…. one full plate blah blah blah nd she ordered a lots like this !
Saachi- and kabeer now u order !
Kabeer- what ? All this was just for you !
Saachi- of course I had ordered less looking at the weather !
Kabeer – god koi uthalo mujhe !
Both were done at the dhaba…Nd left for the residence…that was of veers dadi ; all students stood there but at that time just Kanchi reached there all were outside at some cinema !
Saachi was in the kitchen and kabeer came from behind holded her from her waist tightly jerked towards him.
Saachi- Kabeer leave me !
Kabeer- sssh not so soon…!
Saachi- we are on a grp trip anyone can see us.
Kabeer- I don’t care neither I am afraid to tell that u r mine !
He kissed on her neck nd then on her cheeks ….he leaned onto her to kiss her…
Saachi(shouted)- Isha !
He quickly left her while she laughed hard nd he couldn’t help just stood there admiring her.
The day passed. It was night nd she woke up to take some water nd observed kabeer’s door a little open ; till then interns had come nd slept as per given rooms while kabeer was slept alone. She looked through the door nd saw a man wearing kabeers shirt nd the watch same as him sleeping with Riya his face was unidentificable. She took that as Kabeer nd couldn’t control her tears nd stood awake the whole night …the next day she went to him when he was at the top floor to get the answers…they had a big fight which was seen by Isha Pragya veer krish. And atlast when she was not ready to listen to any explanation he decided not to give any either ! If she didn’t trust him then let this be like this only. She too wasn’t ready to listen to any of the things or how could she be after she had seen that with her own eyes !
That was the black day of their life after that their lives took a complex u turn. Both of them never talked abt this matter again just let the silence make all the noise . Both of them went silent nd more concentrated towards the work ignoring each other nd increasing misunderstanding
late night sleep
long duration of crying
thinking abt the PAST nd remembering each other at every point of their lives ; the time passed ! And with the each passing day the force on saanchi increased for her mrrg ; what could she had done except agreeing to her mother’s wish…
FLASHBACK END !
Saachi- how can u even think I can marry someone else (angrily)?
Kabeer- like you thought urself that I was with riya.
Saachi- swear on me tht she wasn’t there.
Kabeer-yes she was there but with her bf that lives in Shimla too nd I was in some other room that day ; nd u could have trusted me once Saachi !
Tears well up in her eyes nd she said “if….if I will say…so…sorry now then…then will you…you acce(pt) ” before she could complete he jerked her towards him from her waist nd pressed his lips against her ; they shared an intense lip lock for next ten minutes nd parted when felt short of breath…
Kabeer- I love you from the very first day till my last breath will you marry me ?
(He said in one go)
Saachi- yes
She immediately hugged him tightly nd whispered in his ears “I love u too Kabeer”
Scene shifted to the hall near mandap;
Jaya- it’s been 30 minutes where is Saachi Isha pragya ?
Veer comes from behind.
Jaya-(shocked) nd veer why r u in ordinary clothes nd Sachi ?
Veer- don’t worry aunty ji she will be here soon .
Pandit ji – where is bride bring her; muhurt is going on …!
Just then Kabeer comes downstairs with Saachi in his arms …he had picked her in a bridal style. Both were looking breathtaking with each other
He stepped down the stairs nd both the 7 sacred nuptial rounds nd filled her hairline with vermilion !
“Mangalam Bhagwan Vishnuh, Mangalam Garunadhwajah।
Mangalam Pundari Kakshah, Mangalaya Tano Harih॥”
Veer- wow anyways now atleast we will be able to see ur fights again.
Kanchi gave him a glare.
Veer(murmuring)- ekdusre se naraj the to jabardsti meri shadi kra rhe the; ab shaadi hogyi to punishments shuru. !
(When they both were against each other then were doing my mrrg for free nd now if they are one my punishments will start veer beta)
The end
Omg my hands have left their energy nd eyes are abt to shut (sleep Not death) ???!
Pls pls drop a comment if u have some pity on me. ?hehe just kidding I was tired its just that !
Nd “SORRY FOR MAKING KANCHI CRY BABIES HERE ”
Silent readers keep commenting !
Regards
Trisha
46 Comments
Sweetie…you left me spellbound after reading this….it was too good to be praised…the way you had written and depicted their feelings were the best….OMG I am speechless…..girl you slayed it …there is nothing to say in front of Your mind blowing OS…..lots of kisses and hugs to you…….in fact a big teddy bear hug….please write another OS soon love you loads and loads ????
Omg omg thankyou so much tania tht really is an honour you can’t imagine I had a big smile on my face while reading your comment
U made my day sweetie nd sure
Luv uh too return kisses nd hugs
it was gr8 an sad and emotoinal start lovrly TRISHA
Thankyou kanchi
Omg Trisha…. it’s such an amazing os. You are an amazing writer
Thankyou so much lahari ?
Trisha u know what…….. ur so gr8. Each nd every time I read something written by u m surprised……. u always leave me in a complete awe…….. how come u get such amazing nd mind blowing ideas dear………..
This one was just soooooooooooo goooooooood u know me speechless
What to say u always do nd u did it today tooooooo u nailed it again dear
Awesome suprb mind blowing amazing ravishing fantastic super duper hit…….bas
???I guess from tmmrw I hv to search some words on net to praise u
????????lots of luvv dear keep it up.
Omg omg img Thankyou so so so much dear I am on the ninth cloud while reading your comment sweetie ; in fact I am in love wd ur comments u always left me with a wide smile
Love uh loads sweetie
Wowwwww trisha it was amazing. U always been my inspiration. A special thank u for mentioning my name in ur post.. it’s happened with me for the first time. Amazed with your track.
Keep posting. Would love to read more from u
Aww thankyou so much khamoshi I am so happy u liked it sweetie …. sure ?
U know trisha kya h best tumme tum her baat ko her feeling ko completely express krti ho full emotion k sath aisa lagta h jaise tum hi ye character ji rhi ho hats off to u mindblowing trisha thanks for one more amaz os …keeep it up nd post moreeeeee os nd ff….
Aewww Thankyou so much niyaa for your words that really r an honour I am so glad u liked it sweetie ….. hehe nd sure
Sachhi me yaar kudrat ka krishma he tumhara ye os!!! Kisi mahan shayar ki khoobsoorat shayari he tumhara ye os!!!! Kya karoon yaar dil he ke manta hi nahi! Har dam tumhari tareef karne ke liya betab hoo jata hai!!! Aap ho hi itne laajwab ke apke har os pe hamara dil aa jata hai!!! Never want to compare u with any great writters because u r not like them but greater than them….aab tum hi batao ki aur kya kahen kyoki hamare pass to apki tareef mein lafz hi nahi bache hai…..!
Awwwwwwwwww Thankyou so so much vrushti omg u seriously made my day yr I mean I woke up nd first saw the comments thts so sweet of u nd ur poem jhaakkaas
Luv uh loads
Hey trishu that wasnt a poem!!! Actually I didnt thought that it would seem like a poem!!! It was the appriciation which I felt from my heart…
awesome superb mindblowing ravishing lovely historic unlimited package khidki tod sweetie luv u so so so so much
Awwww thankyou so much ashnita
Luv uh too dear
Amazing….. Words will be less in oxford dictionary too in ur praise even google baba would be tired to give me words to appreciate you… You are an incredible writer!! Love uh!!
Omg that’s so seeet of u abhilasha thanku so much for the appreciation sweetie
Luv uh too
Epic and Fantastic ! I want you to start another ff like kaanchi forever … Ok? Update soon
Thankyou neha nd sweetie if u had read ; I have already started one named “Beintehaa”
But that’s a OS I guess ?
Its amazing dear . U have some magic. U never ever disappointed us. Its fabulous . It awesome .
Trisha I have no words to praise u. I just wanna say its amazing.
I loved their kissing part a lot it was showing how much they missed each other
I too agree wd u alia nd Thankyou so much sweetie for ur honoured words they made my day
Luv uh
It was awesome episode sis.
Luv u dear??.
Pls keep writing these types of Os.
This was fabulous.
Thankyou Priyanshi nd sure sweetie
Luv uh too
Trisha……..one of the best os I’ve read till date…… regarding trust part, I just hv one thing to say…. Love is weakest when there is more doubt than trust, but love is strongest when we learn to trust inspite of doubts…………
coming to the os, if sanchi could hv trusted kabir at that moment, they won’t hv to face such emotional turmoil for 4 long years…….anyways, aalz well that ends well………finally kanchi r back together..yippeee……….. luv u a lot my cutie pie………
Thankyou so much riya nd I agree wd u sweetie
Luv uh too chocopie
??????? Arre waah yaar kya bath hai!!! (Don’t mind my Hindi, that’s all I know in Hindi to praise someone ???) it’s sooo amazing dear. Sooo emmotional!! I was in tears while reading. It really touched my heart ???
Aww of course sweetie never mind ; in fact Thankyou so much for this inna glad u liked it
Wowwwww really really awesome too good…
Thankyou prema
Awesome one
Thanku
Speechless, you’ve proved again that you are the best!!
Thankyou palak that really means a lot
It was amazing loved their confession
Thnku amnaa
Sorry for the late comment dear coming to the os it was amazing dear Trishu lovely
Thts ok nd to thanku
Trishu Trishu Trishu you are the best writer dear. wonderfull……………………………… amazing……………….mindblowing…………..Fantastic……………Superbbb…..ans so on…Luv you dear for such an amazing Stories…………..and soo sorry for late comment.
Thankyou so much anee I am so happy u liked it
Trisha it was sooo good excellent dear
Thanku Jessica glad u like it
Amazing trishuuu u jzt nailed it it was ssoooo soooo amzing keep writting dear
Thanku so much sanjana tha ku